True Lord, Please Calm Down.

I've read so many novels and haven't posted anything yet. I really can't stand this book. It's just a pity that this book is above the standard from the early stage to the beginning of the North-South war. Including the setting, writing, and plot, in my mind, it is possible to become a god. After the unification war, it suddenly changed. Straight down, the hole dug in the early stage is indeed buried, but it is better not to be buried. The survival of human beings in the entire world depends on the sacrifices of people who have been dead for thousands of years. There must be an inexplicable growing world. It gives people the feeling that the author also feels that the villain is too strong and gives the protagonist I was embarrassed to cheat, so I just sent a ball flying from the sky..., And then the villain including Xian Dynasty died inexplicably in half a chapter after the author laid the groundwork for most of the book. I read Loneliness after looking forward to that book. The whole later part of the book is just like the map is getting bigger and bigger, and the pattern is getting bigger and bigger. The younger I am, the more I cultivate myself, the more I end up playing office politics in the fairy world. In a circle, I go back to the old routine of saving the whole world, and then saving all mankind. In the end, it basically has no effect, and I am completely reduced to a bunch of supporting characters of tool people. The inexplicable love line is incomprehensible. There are conflicts, there are foreshadowings, but in the end it ends in an anticlimax. I saw the Nine Transformations Tribulation technique in the early stage, and I was expecting it. But in the end, I practiced a ball. Yes, it was a ball. It had everything. I was extremely disappointed. Also, the broken sword with a pole is called a horse, and the one in front of the spear is called a dagger at most! The author seems to want to tell the readers that I don't want you to think about the plot. After all, we really didn't expect it. The protagonist of Three Worlds Tribulation watched the whole drama and made no contribution to the plot. It is much better than us readers. We don't have to look at the text to think... After that, I felt a bit more status. I continued to watch the drama. I saw that everyone was almost dead on the horse. The protagonist was still on the way. Author, if you don't want to write about it, I feel sorry for the ending. I am also frustrated that I have been following the update for so long.

When this novel came out from the Earth Immortal, I felt like I was going to collapse. The protagonist in the author's novel started from the army, and the emphasis is on using more troops to suppress everything. The fantasy version of the philosophers has also been written, but once the Earth Immortal came out, no one can suppress it, so some of your early arguments are useless. Strategy, geography, and the army are useless to him. The Earth Immortal raised it too high. Before the wasteland was opened, he was in a county. All the various schools of thought about the land appeared one by one. After you opened up the wasteland, the whole country was established. Humanity started to appear in the whole country within a few chapters. Then Jiuyou, Tianting, and the emperor Liu Changan who founded the dynasty did not feel like an emperor like a peerless ranger. In the early stage, he was brave and resourceful. In the later stage, he relied on cultivation to suppress people. Strategy, terrain, and army. I feel that it is useless. The layout of some of the various schools of thought is also useless. I feel that the author is a little anxious.

Why is this book called "True Lord Please Calm Down Your Anger" If you don't practice Shintoism or immortality, I think it should be called "Xiao Bing Cultivation of Immortality"

After Chapter 400, it became boring. Even if there is still level suppression, after all, there are limits and shackles for strength across realms.

Good guy, I only opened the map at chapter 480. You are rushing to write two thousand chapters.

Ordering a book for the first time

Wasn't the Infinite Wheel-turning Buddha killed by Taishang Qingwei Daojun and Taixu Yinyang Daojun? Why did he come out again?

At first glance, it looks like Taijun, please calm down.

I've always wanted to read a novel about a military monk. I've been looking for it for a long time. The author's writing is good. He'll add more and more details.

Modified from "Fire Wind Starts a Prairie Fire" What is life? Have you ever felt sad? Birth, old age, sickness and death. However, the life of a soldier is different. I joined the army at the age of fifteen and returned only at the age of eighty. Victory, there is an endless war waiting for you. If you lose the battle, the family members of the deceased will curse you and you will be punished by military law. If you are lucky enough to survive at the age of eighty, when you see the younger generation killing enemies on the battlefield, but you are powerless, it will be more painful than death. The life of a soldier is so helpless and absurd. A spectacular death ending can be regarded as the best ending.

This book does not describe the essence of military art. It is only superficial, which is tasteless and a pity to abandon. First of all, the protagonist is very much like a lone wolf. He only cares about his own cultivation. In the early stage, he can do anything at the first level of cultivation. Then the Four Elephant Military Formation is open and public. It really makes people laugh. Doesn't this make the enemy? No detail? The protagonist is really brainless and pretends to be smart Secondly, the protagonist does not interfere in the training of troops. The way of military should be that soldiers are the courage of the general and the heart of the general. The two sides work together. The protagonist only allows the two teams to be honest. He keeps training and doesn't care about anything. The military formation needs a core leader. If the protagonist is not involved at all, then he is not the core. Anyone can join Thirdly, those who follow the military path all practice through war and military training. , This book is very strange. It does not conform to the essence of military art at all. Looking for immortality and respecting personal growth are not the mentality that military strategists can continue to practice There are many chapters that have not been read yet All in all, this book should not insult the art of war. It is not refreshing at all. It does not highlight the characteristics of the art of war, nor is it exciting like a refreshing article. It seems like reading a novel about cultivating immortals under the guise of the art of war. It is just a completely different article.

If the protagonist doesn't cheat, the Ganjun, who is nominally the leader of the nine armies, has no special characteristics, but is actually the most rubbish in the army...

Before the Jin Dynasty, it can be said to be a sacred book. The military stuff is very good, including body training, temple calculations, and military formations. It is very interesting. Moreover, the author is particularly good at writing about people. The different personalities of the characters, the conflicts between various positions, the battles of wits and courage between people, intrigues and exchanges of interests are all written brilliantly. However, the author's pace was too fast, and he suddenly revealed the truth in one breath, which directly caused the suspenseful atmosphere buried by various small foreshadowings to become boring. It felt like he stuffed the whole burger into his mouth at once, and not only couldn't he swallow it. , I still can't taste it... In the Jin Dynasty chapter, the author wanted to catch up with the plot, but also wanted to build the general trend, wanted to write about the war and the art of war, and also wanted to write about the secrets of the immortals. Moreover, there are so many enemies appearing all at once, and the protagonist's army is unable to defeat the Earth Immortal. He is just focusing on his own cultivation, and the secrets of the military formation have not been improved much. Now, don't call him a general or marshal, just call him the captain of the patrol ship. It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. I hope the author can clarify his thinking in the future. I really wrote it in a bit of a hurry. It would only look good if the combat effectiveness of the army's formation is reflected. How can it be said that the strength of a world's troops can rival a true immortal? If the protagonist is still running around putting out fires by himself, it would be better to read other fairy tales.

Soldier! Defeat the bandits in the school formation, slay the demons and evil spirits, and protect the family and the territory! If you don't live to be a hundred years old, you will die without regrets! If you don't live to be a hundred years old, you will die without regrets! Strong wind! Strong wind! Strong wind!

Every time I talk about treasure ships, I always bring this one

In fact, the most uncomfortable thing for me in the whole book is the attribute of the martial arts practiced by the protagonist. If you say that you are practicing the Yin attribute martial arts by yourself and wandering around outside, it doesn't matter if you are not a military monk. However, you have positioned yourself as someone who can improve your strength by relying on the army. Even if you say that the Yin attribute evil spirit is a kind of evil spirit, it will not affect anything if you practice it. But don't ordinary military strategists rely on the huge energy and blood evil energy of the army? But no matter what, the blood and evil energy of this army cannot be combined with the Yin attribute. First of all, it is very conflicting, because no matter how the army is transformed, it has more Yang attributes, which is very inconsistent with the Yin attribute. Therefore, I think the setting of the Yin attribute evil energy method is very redundant. I don't know why the author is doing it. Because I like the special effects of ice skills or because it feels particularly cool, or because of some other reasons, I just put this skill setting into it. Anyway, I personally feel that it seems very alienating, so I haven't finished watching it, and I don't know what happened next.

Come back and take a look at the old books. After all, the new books have started to go through the classic stage of anticlimactic start and tail end.

Many people say that the author is suppressing the protagonist's strength. What do you think? I think it's because there are too many refining gods. After all, it was said from the beginning that there are almost no monks above the Qi Transformation God in the world, and the Qi Transformation God is the strongest. It feels like the Qi Transformation God is very powerful, but in the end, there are completely more Qi Transformation Gods than dogs. In addition, the plot is tight, many events happened during the period, and the protagonist is still spinning between two or three souls, which gives people a feeling of being suppressing the protagonist. I think this is okay. Although a lot of things have happened, it has only been two years since the protagonist traveled back to the present. He has already condensed three evil wheels, which are comparable to the gathering of three flowers. After that, as long as he condenses the thieves-devouring evil wheels, he should be able to compete with the Qi Transformation God. The monks and monsters who have practiced Qi Transformation God have all practiced for tens or hundreds of years. In comparison, it seems much faster.

Thoughts after reading Some suggestions for reading "True Lord Please Calm Down" This book is the most recommended one among the Qidian books I read this year. The chapter titles are all neatly aligned, and it is very difficult to keep writing; The content of the book begins with the entry of Bing Xiu into the world, and the protagonist Wang Xuan travels through the novel There is a golden finger "Tiandao Deduction Board" and the setting of the character's reputation The content of the book describes the struggle between individuals and social groups, with grand scene settings and meticulous details The protagonist Bing Xiu enters the world, depicting the three souls and seven souls Cultivation methods Various formations, magic weapons, and battles with ghosts and monsters There is also a rich history, such as Zhou, Chu, Wei, etc. The current Yan Dynasty and the Pingnan Jin Dynasty are reminiscent of the liberation of the country across the Yangtze River by the Republic, and the current Taiwan Strait relations; A few suggestions: 1. The author's power settings in both directions of individuals and groups are not well coordinated and have no focus. Reading them all feels off-putting, and the climax always feels suppressed The primary and secondary development of individual power and group power are not coordinated; the reader does not know whether individual force or group formation is the key; or war information, troop formations, topography, etc. For example, the power of Wangyu's "Mortal" is dominated by individuals; the climax is foreshadowed by personal heroism; For example, Lao Zhu's "Zichuan" is dominated by group power; the climax is based on the victory of aristocratic families, races, etc. This book wants to succeed in both individual strength and group strategy (large and small), but the connection of force values ​​is not smooth. 2. The setting of Goldfinger is not concise enough The author's scene setting and description are unstable and the missing content is inconsistent. Sometimes there is a lack of money, sometimes there is a lack of methods, sometimes there is a lack of time accumulation, etc. The whole article expresses the importance of "Dharma", showing the incompleteness, faults, etc. Of the Dharma everywhere; "Earth" is occasionally described, but not much. But there is basically not much description of wealth and lovers. Although the author tried hard to make "companion" occupy a prominent position in this book, the effect was not obvious. Whether it is the protagonist's companion, or Liu Shun, Zhang Heng, Xiao Zhongmou, Tu Su Ziming, representatives of the three religions and nine schools, the royal family, the genius of the family, etc.; If there is no drama, there is no attack on the reader's heart. There is one point, for example, the death of Xiao Zhongmou's younger brother Xiao Jili, etc. If the author chooses individual situations under the strategy of aristocratic families, there can be more such scenes. In short, it serves the author's topic outline. Not to mention wealth, the protagonist has no quantification of gold and silver; the cultivation resources are well described, but a little far-fetched. Moreover, there is a very important point: the social and economic power of this book is insufficiently quantified. For example, Yong'an, which costs three to four hundred thousand, can support so many troops, and there are so many monsters and ghosts around it. Looking back, Goldfinger emphasizes the importance of "law" and uses the protagonist's reputation to speed up the deduction and urge the protagonist to strive for fame. However, objectively speaking, for example, everyone knows that advanced mathematics is powerful and the three laws are awesome, and how many people can master it with concentration and proficiency. Moreover, without the method of teaching, it is difficult to achieve great success. Finally, there is Mei Chaofeng who is also the Nine-yin White Bone Claw. I personally think that the golden finger that goes away can be used as a reference. 1. Concise 2. The main outline of the book is more consistent with the golden finger. For example, get rid of the setting of Wei He's realm-breaking bead in "Martial Saint of Ten Directions". Or, some golden fingers are good luck, etc. In short, cheats fit well with the theme outline. 3. "Seven Emotions and Six Desires" and other "Seven Emotions and Six Desires" and other pleasures of reading are not grasped well Real life is fast-paced and high-pressure, and readers expect to find pleasures that are not available in real life, such as waking up to take over the world, lying drunk on the lap of a beautiful woman; Here are a few for reference; For example, in the newspaper "Dafeng Watchmen", Xu Qian's detailed descriptions of listening to music; having a double break with various partners, the physical advantages of martial arts, etc., Which are more enjoyable for male readers; r>Another example is the various popular ways of pretending to be a pig to eat the fifth child, living in a pretentious manner, etc. 4. The ghost kingdom of the netherworld, the setting of "Nine Heavens and Nine Nethers" of the Heavenly Court, the setting of "Zhou, Chu, Wei, Yan" of the Cave Heaven and the Great Thousand World; and the setting of the level of force has a strong sense of fragmentation The author of this book stated earlier that before Master Wang's public opinion, the highest force was the Earth Immortal; the ultimate goal was the Southern Jin Dynasty and the unification of the country. Here the rhythm control is relaxed and OK, but later on the feeling of fragmentation starts to become stronger. Personally, I think the main reason is that the goals and maximum force set earlier were suddenly increased too much. Although the rules and regulations were used to constrain it later, there was still a strong sense of fragmentation. It feels like a pity here. The content in the front of this book is very well grasped. The scenes are similar to Jin Yong's "Dragon" or "The Condor Trilogy", with a strong overall sense. Again, does the author focus on individual or collective force value? It feels like the author wanted both, but failed to coordinate them well. For example, it emphasizes that "one person can form an array", sometimes it repeatedly emphasizes the collective formation; Sometimes it emphasizes the individual strength of earth immortals, true demons, true immortals, etc., And so on. It's a lie, it's not right.

It's a pity that this book is gone. I was in a hurry to start a new book, but now it has crashed again.

The author is already 🐑. Please wait for a few days until the author recovers. Please be considerate of the author

The early stage was pretty good, but then in the mid-term, it felt like a change of people, and the assembly line operation started 1. The unification of the human race paved the way for so much in the early stage, and then it ended very blandly 2. In the mid-term, it began to focus on the realm, with more than 200 chapters in one realm. It was said to be accumulation, but I didn't see much improvement in the effect after accumulation. The only thing that can be done is that the protagonist can be a clone, and everyone else is the real body, which is beyond the imagination of a weak mind.

Is that you? Wang Xuan

From what I can see with the limited exemption, the layout planning in the front and middle is actually pretty good. Although the development in the middle and later stages is weird, it is still acceptable. In the later stage, it is inevitable that the writing will collapse without an outline. To summarize, if you spend money to watch the end, your mind may be filled with questions: What kind of Goba stuff am I watching? But since it's a limited exemption, you can't ask for too much.

Wang·Aristocratic Young Master Attractor·Lunzi·Xuan

This one has the feeling of Wang Xuan. I will arrange the main character's weapons at some point. It is best to use a three-pointed two-edged knife🤭🤭🤭

Song of resentment under the moon Baofeng gilded hairpin, jade eyebrows locked in frown. How lingering tears are in my heart for no reason. The frosty moon shines in front of the court, I am sleepless at night with my pen in hand, and there is a beautiful song, hoping that we can reunite. "The world says that I am in love with Chang'an, but in fact I only love someone in Chang'an. Who is leaning alone on the Mingyue Tower, who is melancholy on the pipa, don't ask after farewell, infinite things can be said..." The soloist is Chen Xianyu, a contemporary Qingyi Pavilion, and the song "Sorrow under the Moon" played at this time is also the song from that year. I don't know how long it took, but Chen Xianyu had finished his solo dance. He was leaning half-body on the railing, looking towards the north, his eyes were red, and he was silent for a long time. He was still holding a clay doll in his hand. "Is Sister Xianyu here? This is Shou Qing!" There was a knock on the door, "Yes, yes." Chen Xianyu quickly wiped away the faint tears on his cheeks with his sleeve collar, hid the clay doll in his sleeve, quickly ran to the door, welcomed Guo Shouqing in, brought it in front of the couch, and began to prepare the tea set. "Sister came suddenly, and I was unprepared. If I don't greet you well, please bear with me." Chen Xianyu said with a smile, "There, there, this visit was originally my impromptu decision, but it was a bit abrupt. For the trip to Northern Xinjiang, I intend to go with General Wang, so that we can take care of each other. I heard that sister Xianyu was ordered by the sect to stay in the capital and not stay away. I don't know what to explain. I need my sister to convey something." Guo Shouqing joked. "Sister, you..." Chen Xianyu suddenly ended his words, his face turned red, and he was speechless for a while. Seeing this, Guo Shouqing grabbed Chen Xianyu's jade hand, pulled it, and the two of them sat on the couch together. "You and I are sons and daughters of the world. Love between a man and a woman is an ethical principle, so there is no need to be coy. What's more, General Wang is not an ordinary soldier in the army, but a great hero for the country and the people." Guo Shouqing said "Sister, I understand what you mean. Sister, do you know why I am called Xianyu? You must know that I was an orphan and wandered all over the world since I was a child. I was fortunate enough to meet a master who taught me his skills. He has taught me so far. Knowing that I have no name and no surname, he said that he will guard the abyss and retreat to Xianyu. It means that once I step into The rivers and lakes are like facing an abyss. Only by keeping true to one's heart can one be as carefree as a fish and change as he wishes. I wanted to go with him on the trip to Northern Xinjiang, but the master has encountered a disaster. I don't want to leave at this time." Chen Xianyu said "Yes, come into my lovesickness door and know that my lovesickness is painful. I only wish that our hearts are similar. Why is it that the world is crazy and there are many unsatisfactory things in the world?" Guo Shouqing sighed "Okay, let's not talk about this. Today is the Lantern Festival. Let's enjoy the wind and the moon. Sister, you said that there has been only one moon in the sky since ancient times. Just like we are unique existences in the world, but the ending of us and the bright moon is to turn into dust in the world, so we don't know how we will... The bright moon has become an eternal existence between heaven and earth, just because in the long wait, the moon has been shining in our hearts, forever! Forever! So who is the expectation in the heart? "Chen Xianyu said" "Okay, when did Sister Xianyu become a master of Buddhism? There are Zen ideas in every word and every word, which really impressed my sister." Guo Shouqing said in surprise, "There is no such thing, it's just based on feelings, it's just a family opinion." Chen Xianyu couldn't stand Guo Shouqing's stunned look, and hurriedly got up, poured the boiled tea into the prepared tea set, and brought it to Guo Shouqing. Guo Shouqing took the tea and drank it all. At the same time, a ray of moonlight was shining in front of Chen Xianyu, and Chen Xianyu, who noticed this moment, suddenly turned around and looked around, walked slowly to the railing, clasped his hands together, and murmured in a low voice, "The word resentment, the tune is a circle, the story of the world, maybe parting, I only think of Jun'an, I only think of Jun'an..."

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The author turned me over! After all, he is the third most popular fan, so he can just reply "Oh".

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