I Have an Eternal Eye

The fact that the author completes the story in each book is worthy of recognition, unlike some authors who keep opening up new holes and end the story half way through. Secondly, the author's writing style is still good, especially the early stage is very exciting and attractive. Let's talk about the shortcomings. They are basically concentrated in the middle and late stages. The plot seems very complicated, but at first glance it is confusing. After reading it, it is just that. It cannot stand up to scrutiny. Even after reading it, it does not leave much impression. I still remember that the author wrote in the early stage that the protagonist's three-party plan to build the foundation was in the dark moon and the wind was high. It can be said to be the commanding heights of this book, but he failed to maintain it. The plot in the later stages is very complicated and a bit rushed, which is not good. Finally, at the end of several of the author's books, the author intentionally or unintentionally writes about a grand worldview, jumping out of space or even time. I think it is okay to write two books in one book. However, writing like this all the time does not feel fresh and makes the article very boring at the end. I hope that the next book will be more down-to-earth, both at the beginning and at the end. No matter how many characters I want to write, I will strive to have a distinctive personality, so that people can quickly remember and leave an impression. The writing should be popular and humorous. In the chapter comments, readers put themselves into the comments, which shows that the level of characterization is in place. The above is my humble opinion, and I wish the author a prosperous future with his new book and a platinum and golden alliance.

So far, it is fully booked and I have applied for the second time. I am looking at it very carefully. The writing is good, but the word count is not good, the pace is too fast, there is no heroine at the moment, and I feel that it will not focus on emotions in the future, it is not a harem novel. From the first chapter of the book to the present, the timeline spans less than half a year. In addition to practicing hard, the protagonist is grabbing opportunities everywhere. Gold Finger Appraisal Pupils, currently only appraises yellow level one to five. It seems that this level does not belong to this world. It was brought from the earth by the protagonist before his soul traveled. It is unknown how other people classify the items. Cultivation of immortality is still about practicing Qi, building foundation, and golden elixir. The difference is that there are only three levels of Qi training. The protagonist is currently on the second level of Qi training, which should correspond to the second level of Huang level. The third level of Qi training, the third yellow level? The fourth grade yellow level in the early stage of foundation building? It feels very confusing, I hope the author can explain it later. The plot advances too fast, and the names mentioned are all gone. Except for the protagonist, there is no fixed supporting role, and the setting is not clearly explained. It is just that various opportunities emerge one after another. The villains come out to kill one by one. In addition to the Witch Temple, there is also a fourth-level ghost mother. All other weird things in the capital have been robbed by the protagonist. According to this writing, the protagonist has cleared the map of the capital before the heavy fog comes, and when it is almost time to build the foundation, all the people who were transferred before the End of Law Era have returned. If those people don't return to the protagonist's personal combat power, they will be the best in the world, and they will always fight alone. The group portrait essay at the beginning is like a one-man show. There are no big poisonous points. I hope it will not develop into a mindless and cool novel. Stop fighting monsters and grabbing treasures all the time. There are so many treasures that it is too late to absorb them and sort them out, and the warehouse is full. It would be better to write about the current development status of other sects instead of Xuanduguan, Lianhua Sect, and Yanjia Sect. Just mention the name and there will be no further content.

If you feel that the pace is slow and the upgrading is not fast, this book is a non-traditional cultivation text, leaning more towards fantasy. The upgrading process slightly downplays the bunch of fixed routines in the traditional cultivation process, and the realm suppression is not as emphasized in the text. I have read nearly 200 cultivation novels at the beginning alone. I am actually very annoyed that cultivation novels always emphasize the setting of realm suppression. Can't they be more imaginative like fantasy novels? There has been only one setting for more than ten years, and it cannot be changed or something. Isn't the imagination required to write fairy tales worse than that of fantasy? Can't we let our imagination run wild? Readers are also bound by this. In a world where immortals, gods, demons, ghosts, ghosts, and all kinds of alien races are united in a great struggle, it is not the creation itself, but a bunch of ants fighting for survival. The level of being in the Immortal Path is so high, how useful it can be during the fight for crossing, still depends on luck (cheap fingers, cheating) and means (protagonist halo, plot). I hope you won't fall back on the same old path after writing this. You should also be more innovative on the road to cultivation, fellow Taoist!

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Did the author deliberately design these plots to write a story about mortals cultivating immortality by "listening to thunder in silence"?

I think some readers in the comment area of ​​this book are seriously criticizing the author Zhang for cramming the word count, clichéd upgrades and map changes, and a bland plot. That's true, but it's also caused by the huge difference in outlook between the author and the reader. This results in the "energy" of the author and the reader not being able to complement each other. The horse is a horse, and the carriage is a carriage, not a horse-drawn carriage and a horse pulling it. It is not a very appropriate metaphor to say that I can understand the plot of Hu Tianyue breaking away from self-reliance when the Xuanhuang Secret Realm was still there, or unfortunately the author did not have the intention to write this paragraph, and hastily mentioned it in one stroke. Then now speed up and fast forward to "Yuan Mo" sacrificing Xuan Huang and becoming a certain big brother's "little brother"? Actually, I also have some opinions. Regarding the fact that the author Zhang destroyed the "Xuanhuang" organization and the characters in the organization. The "Taotie" organization also had no intention of writing more about it! The pyrotechnic universe of the previous book "True King" was probably also a mustard hit. The extremely cold "Emperor of Heaven" type of power struggle, "high-minded and low-key" is inevitable and the very deep philosophical thinking that Zhang Zhang wants to express cannot be exchanged for the corresponding deep understanding of readers who hope that "incense in the world" will flourish. I also have some things that I really can't understand. Has author Zhang never been married? Why do all the wives of the characters in the novel look like "shadow puppets"? Aren't all of them practicing in a place like the "Moon Palace Pagoda" almost calmly and infatuatedly, and practicing the ancient Buddha of Qingdeng, fearing that they and their husbands will end up "separated from heaven and man", or are they being remembered like by their "husband" Mrs. Li? I became interested in the author's humanistic style and wanted to write a fanfic about "The author's cultivation years were really boring".

Are these two families worth the protagonist's desperate efforts to help? Do these two families have a great debt to your family, or are they passed on to you? If you like to meddle in other people's business, why don't you have time to think about how to find an inheritance? To protect yourself in troubled times, help others everywhere, and be a good person?

The book is very good, but I really don't want to read it. The book is full of suffering, numbness, selfish desire, restraint, etc., But there is no sparkle and happiness of humanity. The style of the whole book is too depressing. No matter how good the writing is, it is impossible to achieve results. I'm not here to find abuse online.

Oh my god, has Foundation Establishment begun to interact with the Netherworld Jellyfish, which has not yet been integrated into the body? Forget about the previous Foundation Establishment mixed with the Nascent Soul War in the chessboard world, the Blue Realm has begun to walk with the God of Transformation, and now it has interacted with the Netherworld Water above the integration stage. Mother, is it logical for you to have such a long span? It's just a matter of a glance that the Nether Jellyfish's ability has fallen to another level and snatched the Youpiao City where you built the foundation. It's missing a whole golden elixir, Nascent Soul, distraction, how many great realms have been combined, and it's still walking with you? Isn't it funny?

The protagonist is the villain. People who are good to the protagonist are all killed by the protagonist. It's really poisonous. I'm halfway through reading 🙂. Every time someone I'm close to is killed, I write a revenge plot. From the beginning to now, I have been seeking revenge, and everyone around me has died 😒. I can only say that the protagonist is a real dog.

I saw more than 500 chapters of abandoned books The writing at the end is terrible, really terrible

This book is not bad. The author's skills are at least within the first 20% of the sequence from the starting point. There is mainly no transition. The author is a little impatient. The recovery of spiritual energy must be slow. At least around 100 to 300 years, the protagonist begins to awaken the golden finger and slowly tries the case, thus discovering the truth. Appearing extraordinary, and slowly verifying the spiritual energy recovery, there are about 150 chapters in the middle. The protagonist slowly improves his strength, surpassing other natives by a long way, and the plot slowly unfolds. Unlike now, it is like the spiritual energy pouring down directly, and cats and dogs can become gods and ghosts.

The more I write, the more messy it becomes. Why don't you upgrade? What the hell? Completely broken, a complete mess. There are so many genius treasures that cannot be used for upgrading. Rubbish. I can't read it. I deal with the Transformation God every day during the foundation building period. How did you write it?

All three books were good in the early stages, then went downhill in the middle stages, and ended up being terrible in the later stages. The weird sense of recovery in the early stages of this book is so well written, and the fighting settings are also very well written. In the middle stage, it starts to suck as soon as it gets involved in the world. A foundation builder starts to mix among a group of big guys~

The book about True Monarch can be completely written as the self-proclaimed God Erlang leads the army to sweep away all monsters and injustices. All the great saints will be frightened when they see it. Finally, it can be completed by writing the legends about True Monarch from all walks of life and the livelihood of people from all walks of life.

It's too bad later on, bro. The foundation building begins to communicate with the gods. The protagonist starts to describe the fight between the gods in the foundation building stage. Mahayana is coming soon, right? How did it happen? Can you write some plots about the current state?

Still the same problem, the writing and settings are not bad, but it's really not exciting. The hook is too big, the information given is too detailed, and the whole story can be identified. The plot after leaving the capital almost always gets what is missing, and the descriptions of the scenes, supporting characters, and strange objects are almost unremarkable. I always feel that the author is too conservative or too stable, and my reading interest is probably at its limit after 200 chapters.

I just saw about a hundred chapters where a young family was arrested and a famous prostitute rescued the child. I didn't want to read it The previous plot was bland and exciting, so I won't go into details. At least I can have the patience to continue reading. But any supporting character who has more personality/charisma than Pig's Feet feels too preoccupied; in addition, I always write plots about the Pig's Feet not being seen/what happened after the Pig's Feet left. Although it is from a God's perspective, the Pig's Feet's IQ and character are a bit mediocre, which really makes me not like it.

Damn it, I heard it, it's the kind of thing that makes a good person pig's feet roar when he sees injustice on the road.

The author really has a special liking for sailing boats. I can just sail this book myself, but the problem is that the boat in this book is too buggy. The cultivation of all the worlds is actually not the foundation. A good boat is really good. The previous cross-border has filled up the suspense of the high-level writing. As a result, the protagonist can sail the boat to various places. After Tianwanjie, the high realm is like a der, without a good boat. The protagonist sails a good boat and becomes a footman to participate in the high realm battle too early. Then the high realm battle does not have any tricks. They are looking for the body to find the body. A group of high realms in the universe are destroyed by the group because the boat cannot be used, and they are directly pulled. After breaking through the high realm, what else do readers expect? It's not interesting for the protagonist to participate in the high-end game. The protagonist is just an eyesore anyway, and the protagonist's own battle is also meaningless. The protagonist has come to the high realm. This battle is similar to that of Xiaokarami Especially the realm of the protagonist. Originally, he is cultivating immortals. The growth of the protagonist in the novel can be seen in close-up and full suspense. Originally, the protagonist's upgrade was really interesting, but with the ship, the realm was completely useless. It was too boring to see the protagonist working hard to upgrade his skills and skills, but in the end, the upgrade on the ship was useful. Don't write about ships. If you really want to write about it, let's write about future technology.

Judging from the previous book, we can see that the author's imagination is very good, the setting is relatively complete, and the villain is not mentally retarded. However, there is an obvious shortcoming, that is, the description of the positive supporting characters and the heroine is very poor. The protagonist's friends, subordinates, and wife are all background and tool people, and their strength is always inferior to that of the male protagonist. The protagonist is always the only one to fight against the villains from various forces. It seems that it is not within the scope of the author's ability to portray one or two powerful male or female protagonists with different personalities who are 50/50 equal to the protagonist.

At present, Chapter 317 has been abandoned. After building the foundation, there is no sense of urgency like before. It was obviously pretty good up to two hundred chapters ago.

What a pity! It was well written before, but now it has completely collapsed. "Chaos of the Power System", hey, another good book has collapsed!

I have read more than a hundred chapters from the beginning. The constant curses and violence in this chapter are really surprising. There are indeed many areas that need improvement in the writing, but if you can't stand it, don't read it. Can you stop cursing all the time to vent your emotions and affect other people?

I also chased her all the way, but this heroine... Is she okay? She came out of the blue. He was still a great monk before, and suddenly he is a little wife? The emotional drama is really crappy.

After reading about 20 chapters, I can only use one word to describe it: the human heart is not as good as a snake swallowing an elephant. The author writes about the ancient spiritual energy recovery drama, awakening an ability that can see through the essence of many things, and then finding family-inherited skills that can be practiced, which can be said to be the beginning of Tianhu. You don't need to go out to look for opportunities, you have already obtained the skills that you can practice, you just need to quietly become stronger. But, what is the protagonist doing? Three days of fishing and two days of drying nets was enough without concentrating on cultivation. I looked around and looked around, but I was still not satisfied and wanted to take advantage of the opportunity to find treasures. I will not talk about it when I encounter ghosts, but also fight with life and death. I accidentally entered the realm and cannot come back. Just asking, wouldn't it be nice if you take the time to improve your strength first? When you become stronger, you can't go hunting for treasures. You have to go wandering around when you have no strength at all. The funniest thing is that before I have even started learning the ancestral skills, I am making bold statements, saying that you will be called retribution, and that you will take care of things that the six gates and officials cannot take care of. Really, you said that if you were the best in the world, you would be brave and courageous. But with your strength, even if you practice family martial arts, you are still just a little Karami. It's a bit ridiculous to say that. The clown. I don't understand the most fundamental thing, so I'm just wandering. To be honest, the author arranged for the protagonist to have ancestral skills at the beginning, which was a complete failure. Without the section on family-heirloom skills, it would be natural for the protagonist to look for opportunities. If there are family-heirloom skills and he does not practice them seriously, but wastes a lot of time looking for opportunities, then it is called lack of planning and waste...

All I can say is that the universe of this book seems a bit small... In the last hundred or two hundred chapters, the universe suddenly seemed to be destroyed, and the protagonist upgraded quickly.

I suffered from the fast pace! The early results were great, but after all the worlds, the pace became faster and faster, the expansion was too fast, and there was no sense of satisfaction.