I Left the Party and Picked Up a Troubled Beauty

Granblue Fantasy has been ten years, so don't you have to write it for ten years? I want to read your book for the rest of my life. Without this book, wow Darcy, I can't stand it. Please, add another chapter, book friends will do anything I only have Zoe in my heart now, and I think about this village girl kitten every moment. When will Leon go find Zoe I haven't seen Zoe in 7 days Hey, I feel like I'm sick, brother, give me one more chapter, I'm about to die, please, brother, I feel like I'm covered in sackcloth, I feel like I'm shaking all over, I can't breathe, please, brother, just give me one more chapter, just one more chapter, I'll never touch it again, please, brother, really, just one chapter, I swear I'll never touch this thing again, I really can't bear it anymore

It's well written and interesting to watch. However, the impression I gave everyone before quitting the team was not very good. If this book had not been recommended by friends, I would have run away when I saw the title. I think the author could consider changing the title of the book.

It was translated by Nippon Toilet Paper, and it smells like waste material.

Newcomers, run quickly. The author especially likes to suppress the combat power. A level 9 protagonist can cast a level 6 spell with a blue bar to remove a quarter of the target. Later, he also asked female teammates to wear bikini armor to give benefits to NPCs. A little green. I especially like to write about mentally retarded operations in Japanese comic plots

After seeing Chapter 242, the pace of the story and the protagonist's IQ have been declining. The protagonist's setting has changed from a mature and reliable adult male, a reliable senior, and a person with normal views. He has become unable to handle the relationship between teammates and avoids his own emotional problems and other people's emotional problems. The scene where the tree-creating star soul cuts down the tree is even more outrageous. The author directly lowered the protagonist's IQ to the NPC level. It is more like a narrator explaining the current status of the novel's story development stage. It also suppresses the protagonist's combat power. The front foot is completed. A complete set of equipment, no matter how bragging you want, two level 9 enemies on the back foot can fight an 8th level enemy. One main character C and one main character assistant have to hang up there. I read the comments and articles foreshadowing that the ex-girlfriend is going to return to the team, and the main character doesn't even dare to chase her away. It's really no brainer. The system can obviously prompt you with information about the people you meet, but you don't look at it, it doesn't display it, it just forces the protagonist to lose his intelligence. On the surface, he quits the team. In fact, the protagonist abuses the protagonist and has no initiative at all. He is not proactive and responsible emotionally, and just pulls and pulls. It is said to be a western fantasy adventure novel, but it is actually a romance novel on a female channel. There are also some advantages. The description of the world setting is good, but it was taken from gbf. The protagonist's character traits were well described before it was put on the shelves. Unfortunately, it was all rotten after it was put on the shelves.

There are only ten levels in total. If you are at level 9, you will fight the monster Luo Li from the novice village. You will be speechless😓

It feels like any enemy with the same level of combat power can fight the protagonist group back and forth. The protagonist's group has such a strong support as the protagonist, and there are several others with the same level of combat power, and some who are even more powerful. It's not a crushing match every time, it's almost as if they're evenly matched every time. Every time in the plot, the enemy does something first and then the protagonist discovers it and then solves it. Everyone has experience in other worlds. Can't they prevent it first? If there is a problem, it's not enough to just ask the guild to crush it. I really don't understand. And the recent plot of Land of All Souls and City of Thousand Towers didn't feel very good.

Ever since my ex-girlfriend returned to the team, I felt like there was something wrong with the rhythm of the plot. I don't object to my ex-girlfriend returning to the team. After all, this is a harem story, but the writing of the protagonist is too awkward It gives me the feeling that I want to patch up the team withdrawal flow, but the more I fight, the more uncomfortable it becomes (the setting is because the ex-girlfriend left without saying goodbye, so the protagonist devotes himself to the development of the team wholeheartedly and even obsessively) First of all, other female characters in the team are problem children, so the protagonist must control them rationally, but the fact is that the protagonist can no longer control them. A visit to the Shura Field is good, but writing too much will give the protagonist a headache, and the readers will also have a headache Secondly, outside the team, the author wants to write a traditional royal and passionate comic, where the opponent is infinitely strong, and the protagonist can only defeat it with all his strength. But the actual performance is very slow and abrupt, just like the author's own description of the empire. In order to highlight the oppression of the early BOSS, the enemy is given very abrupt and powerful abilities Finally, the root of the problem is the withdrawal flow. The author wants to use this to attract attention and describe the growth of the protagonist by the way, but the description of the protagonist is too awkward In a setting like this for a problem child, the protagonist must be very calm, especially if the enemy is set to be so powerful, then don't make it so awkward For example, the devil's curse, one second just said that it is very harmful, and the next second relies on the devil's curse to show off, ignore it when there is no need for the devil's curse, and say it is strong/dangerous when needed There is also a description of the combat power, often forcing 55 to be opened, often stopping the explanation, and then asking the opponent to zoom in, and finally the protagonist opens it The protagonist must not be awkward. The enemy was originally designed to be powerful and oppressive. It was supposed to be a relaxing harem plot, but the protagonist was still awkward. Originally a rational, tense and exciting adventure plot, it turned out to be awkward when meeting the former adventure team. After the end, the powerful BOSS came out, and the awkwardness before seemed to have turned into a poisonous point.

It doesn't matter if the writing is good or slow, the character should be stable.

I was told to quit at the beginning. It was too slow. Fortunately, I resisted and read in. The writing behind it is very good. The poor data has something to do with the slow pace of the start. Come on.