I Left the Party and Picked Up a Troubled Beauty

Granblue Fantasy has been around for ten years, so you'll have to write for another ten years before we can talk about it. We want to read your books for a lifetime. Without this book, wow, we can't go on! Please, just one more chapter! Your fans will do anything! Zoe is all I can think about now. I think about this country bumpkin all the time. When will Leon go find Zoe?

It's very well written and quite interesting to read. However, the impression left on people before the departure of the group was not very good. If it weren't for the recommendation of a group member, I would have run away as soon as I saw the title of this book. I think the author should consider changing the book title.

This is probably a translation of a Japanese light-colored toilet paper product; it has a strong "useless and gentle" vibe.

Newbie here! The author really likes to suppress combat power. The protagonist, a level 9 character, can wipe out a quarter of the character's mana bar with a single level 6 spell. Later, the female teammates wear bikini armor and provide fanservice to the NPCs. It's a bit self-deprecating. The author especially likes to write idiotic plot points reminiscent of Japanese anime.

After Chapter 242 was released, the story's pacing and the protagonist's intelligence steadily declined. The protagonist's character was initially portrayed as a mature, reliable adult male—a dependable senior with normal values—but later became incapable of handling relationships with teammates, avoiding his own emotional issues, and also avoiding the emotional issues of others.

There are only ten levels in total. You're level nine and you're making a huge fuss over a simple monster fight in the starting village. Unbelievable! 😓

It feels like any enemy of similar strength could easily hold their own against the protagonist's group. The protagonist's group has the protagonist's powerful support, several others of similar strength, and even stronger ones. It's never a one-sided victory; almost every fight is a close contest.

Ever since the ex-girlfriend rejoined the team, the pacing of the plot has felt off. I don't object to the ex-girlfriend returning, after all, it's a harem story, but the way the main character is written feels awkward. It gave me the feeling of trying to patch up the "leaving the team" trope, but the more I tried, the more uncomfortable it became (the premise is that the protagonist is…

It's okay if it's written slowly, as long as the character remains consistent.

The opening was discouraging, too slow, but thankfully I managed to get through it. The later parts were much better. The poor stats were likely due to the slow pace at the start. Keep it up!