I Am Cultivating Immortality in the Lottery of Mortals

The author always finds a lot of reasons to suppress the protagonist. Some people say that he takes out the original work to force it to be rounded off, but can it really be rounded off? Some things barely make sense, but your attitude can be seen by looking at your writing For example, the protagonist you are writing now cannot break through the third level of Qi training even with the last spiritual stone consumed. If you directly write that the accumulation is not enough, I can understand it. For example, the surrounding spiritual energy is thin, but since you added the word bottleneck, even if you added it subconsciously, it shows your attitude When did the third level of Qi training have a bottleneck? This is the root of the alien spirit Also, the opening chapter describes how unimportant the foreign spirit root is, and takes Senior Brother Lu as an example. To be honest, I think Lei is more important than Feng Lai. Whether the foreign spirit root is important or not, I think it depends on whether there are such spiritual roots at the golden elixir level in the big sect? At least there is part of the reason I feel that the author is really suppressing it, and trying his best to let the protagonist deal with mortals in a weak and weak early stage From the beginning, I gave the inner demon great magical powers, and now I see that the protagonist cannot absorb ideas that are not firm enough, so I probably have to suppress them It's not that there is a big problem, but the author's attitude can be seen in all aspects.

They all write fan cheats, but they don't dare to increase the intensity. Smoking them once every 10 years is equivalent to giving out cheats once every 10 years. The purity is too low. Every time I abstract, I have to think about what to give away. Why do I really think the lottery is random? If you can, would you like to draw 10 times in a row to thank you for your patronage? If you make the plug-in more powerful, you can write less about the trivial matters of running around for cultivation and more about eating, drinking and having fun. Transform the world of cultivating immortals into the shape you want, and develop a circle of hundreds of people to practice Qi, build foundations, and compete in chicken-eating competitions. How many people have suffered because of the difficulty of establishing the Foundation Establishment Pill? It would be more interesting to have the ability to sell the Foundation Establishment Pill at a wholesale price. Arrive early and enjoy the transformation early. Arrive late and you will have to find the passage. Then what? Go to the spiritual world and continue to write about the 23 things you did in the human world that were busy for cultivation? There are too many books like this and I'm really tired of it.

What is the use of writing the plot of Qixuanmen? It doesn't help the protagonist at all. It's written purely to complement the original plot. It's boring!

The story about The Eunuch Who Covers the Moon is the most rubbish. The protagonists all went to hide under the moon, but the master still paid the bills. He actually didn't have a partner for a weekend break, and he was still single after such a long time. There are many women in Biyue. It is in line with the interests of the protagonist and the sect to arrange a few foundation-building female cultivators without Taoist companions to serve as cauldrons or concubines for yin and yang intercourse. The sect of the protagonist's physique will definitely go to matchmaking. It's really funny for the protagonist to exchange energy with Nangong and practice eunuch training. The green-haired author really can only write about the green-haired turtle protagonist.

What rubbish! It takes an explosion of divine power to reach 700 kilograms of strength. It is clearly written by Yongsheng that in the realm of divine power, the minimum strength of a thousand kilograms can only reach 700 kilograms when you explode. It's a mess

Are you trying to laugh me to death? It was originally supposed to be a draw every ten years, but it wasn't enough to get the Divine Sword Controlling Thunder Art, but then there was the Tongtian Ru? Is this technique useful? Any treasure would be fine.

It feels okay to just take the little green bottle. . .

It's boring. We obviously lack resources and yet another person doesn't dare to grab the bottle.

It is written about a mortal, but it reads like an eternity. He started to become a powerful person when he started practicing at the age of six. He went directly to the sect to practice with the protagonist's talent. He will definitely focus on cultivating him. Maybe there will be an alchemy monk to accept his disciples. Isn't the family passively taking off? When you reach foundation building or core formation, your family will naturally take off. If you have to do those stupid things when you first start practicing, you might be killed.

Daxin Magic is a great avenue that contains countless skills, trillions of magical powers, and trillions of secret techniques. This avenue can sweep through countless mortal worlds. As a result, the author wrote like this

All I can say is that eternal life will defeat the mortals in their quest to become immortals.

Author, I read four chapters of your article and decided not to read it. Let me tell you the reason. First: There are too many ideological activities and various explanations in your article. I am not belittling you, but your writing ability is not good. Readers will be tired and unhappy when reading it. Second: I like mortals, but I have never seen immortality, so it is difficult for me to understand the techniques you use to achieve immortality and the different realms from mortals. You have to remember that you are a fellow mortal. Even if the lottery from the heavens can increase the upper limit, you still have to integrate into the mortal road. Third: New authors always like to discuss with readers in the comment area, which is generally cool. Three mature suggestions for your reference, although it is a bit late.

We have all reached the realm of gods and humans. If we don't use the immortal weapon refining method, we still use the mortal weapon refining method. If we don't use the good ones, if we use the bad ones, our brains are sick.

Goldfinger's Good-for-nothing Flow is really summed up very insightfully.

I have a rough Taoist mind when practicing qi. How about writing a fantasy about the invincible road? What kind of Tongtianlu and Divine Sword Controlling Thunder Art are useful? You have chosen to draw the Three Thousand Avenues of Eternal Life. Isn't it more useful than these? The Three Thousand Avenues of Eternal Life were drawn without any magic? Mortals are originally a world of cultivating immortals with piles of resources. Immortality is also a big resource hog. The plot can be advanced by finding resources. Leveling up is ridiculous. Have you really watched Mortals and Immortality seriously?

I have read Chapter 82 so far, and I can only say that the author's current plot setting is still immature, and I feel like I can no longer control the plot. Take the Mortal Cultivation of Immortality as an example. I have not read the Immortal World chapter. In terms of the description of the protagonist: Han Li himself has a strong motivation to seek the truth, coupled with his wonderful physique that is passively involved in various major events, and his cautious yet decisive character developed since childhood, together they create a flesh-and-blood Han Tianzun. As for plug-ins: It took two years after I picked up the little green bottle from Qixuanmen to discover the use of the little green bottle. After that, I continued to use the little green bottle to make use of the resource gap to accumulate wealth, kill monsters and upgrade. It can be said to be unpretentious but impressive. Finally, there is the emotional aspect: Nangong Wan's transition from the conflicts and entanglements in the early stage to the elopement for love in the later stage (in fact, I personally feel that Wangyu is the best at writing about emotions), Senior Sister Chen's regret that the first beauty has passed away, and Zi Ling's independence and self-improvement all make people feel lively and lively. Coupled with Wangyu's own settings about the plot background, various forces are constantly in conflict, the Qixuanmen Wild Wolf Gang is fighting, the Yue Kingdom is invaded, the Chaos Star Sea is rebelling, the autumn wind is blowing in the Tianlan Grassland, and the Jin Dynasty is also planning a coup. In short, wherever the protagonist goes, something will happen hahh. These are the places where the original works are excellent or brilliant. Let's talk about this book. It is a fanfic in itself. I just borrowed other people's framework to write my own things. Although there is no trouble of setting the background, there is also a point of view on the degree of character restoration. As far as I'm concerned, the character of the protagonist is unclear. Under the premise of knowing the plot and having cheats, I would still find it interesting even if he says he wants to fight all over the world or even poop all over the world. But now that I can say whether he is reckless or cowardly, I can only say that the character setting is very mediocre. Then the motivation of the protagonist to practice can be for the family, immortality, sex, or even just to show off. However, I can't feel the motivation of the protagonist's current practice. It may also be that the realm has improved too quickly and it feels like it is just for fun. Then for plug-ins, the setting of drawing once every ten years is actually not bad. After all, how much content can you write in a book? You only need to write a few commonly used, well-known, useful and interesting ones. But, author, look at the few plug-ins you have given, the inner demon of immortality, I don't know where one is. There is an Immortal Mansion (the writing is quite bad, the effect is okay, but not powerful), and then there is the Zhu Xian or something like the Divine Sword and Thunder Control Technique. I can only say that your plug-in is neither new nor famous (many people have not seen it now). Even the two are combat plug-ins, and they are a bit repetitive. Personally, I think you can create a resource-based game first. It doesn't mean your fairy mansion. It's positioned like a little green bottle. He can grow wood, while you can grow stone or meat. As long as the setting is not too outrageous, it will not overwhelm the protagonist's strength. The resource type, combat type, and cultivation type are all available, and then you can look for other types to make up for it. I can't write a book, but this setting similar to a game build is actually pretty good. Finally, I want to complain about the plot. The protagonist practices Qi at level 3-4 in the early stage and enters the Qixuanmen to control the situation of the state. The design is a bit interesting. 🐶In the later stage, the strength is like flying, one chapter at a time. Now he can defeat the Nascent Soul in the early stage of forming a pill. It is boring to write like this. In the future plot, there will be no twists and turns except for the protagonist taking the initiative to find trouble and then pushing forward all the way. You shouldn't be able to ascend in Chapter 150.

Those who write about mortals have no brains. They are either afraid of this or that. Hey, no one is afraid of time travel. Isn't this thing 10,000 times more valuable than a broken bottle?

I think it's best not to add things like immortality and perfect levels of horror to the mortal system. The plot of combat power is not rounded out, and I'm sure the author hasn't watched the eternal life. He just randomly searched on Baidu and found that the mortal level is very low. The things in the eternal life are pure and invincible in the mortal system. The awesome settings and descriptions of the first level of magical power can defeat gods. The combat power is too terrifying. Author, you just replace the plug-in with the stuff in Immortal Nili, which is much more inconsistent than this. You start to practice the Three Thousand Avenues, and you want to build the foundation and kill the Nascent Soul. Why don't you use the Supreme Bone, the Dragon Subduing the Underworld, the Mark of the Gods, the Divine Elephant's Prison Suppressing Power, the Popular Tears, and the Star Transformation. You just pull some different fires that are better than these. Comparing the two systems of immortality and mortals, high-dimensional civilization is the same as primitive tribes. This book will have hundreds of chapters to write. In the end, you will have to follow the flow of heaven. The ancestors of chaos mostly play with the secret realm of immortality.

After seeing the latest chapter, I no longer have any interest in reading it. It's not interesting to pick out some garbage in the lottery and keep suppressing the protagonist.

There are only three late Nascent Soul monks in Tiannan, Hehuan Laomo, Poison Cultivator Wei Wuya, and Master Zhiyang. Where did your Biyue Sect come from that peerless woman in the late Nascent Soul stage? ? You haven't read the original work and started making it up, right? Poison

I'll give you a suggestion, just transfer to Zhutian