Li's Taoist Clan

Come on, continue to practice family cultivation. You are the first person in the entire network to cultivate immortality in your family.

Come on, I hope you don't think like the first two books. There is a completed novel in front of you, Green Lotus Peak. If you write like that, your grades will not be bad.

Shui Mo, you have opened a new book again 🤫

I feel that after finishing Shui Mo Qing Lian, the writing of Ten Thousand Beasts is okay, but the few books here are not good. Shui Mo, just settle down, don't write in a hurry, show your level of writing the first half of Qing Lian, and it will definitely be another hit.

Don't be in a hurry to start a new book this time. Make a good idea first, and then read more ancient novels and classics to improve your writing skills. After writing so many books, my writing is still not good enough.

It is indeed a bit of a running story, and I hope to improve the quality of the article.

Eating Nima's breakfast means a good morning all day long and a good morning breakfast.

What I see you write is the work of a mortal. You are cautious and cautious, walking on thin ice to develop in the world of immortality. The mortal stream, the mortal stream, of course develops from the lowest level, and the lowest level is the highlight. If I wrote it later and just skipped over the highlights, I would definitely not get everyone's approval. Let me tell you something you don't like to hear. Later, you felt that the writing in Fairyland was smooth and flowing, but in fact it was completely uninteresting. The popularity is actually the popularity accumulated in the past, and everyone has the enthusiasm to read the book to the end. (Many authors have a problem. After writing a book that becomes popular, they forget the original intention of writing the book. They think that they have written very well according to their original idea setting, and then continue writing in this routine without new setting, which has no soul. One word of advice, listen less to the editor. I have never seen an editor write a book that becomes popular.) I actually like what you wrote at the beginning, and I think highly of you. Looking forward to the new book. Come on!

I suggest the author read more books. His vocabulary is too small and he is too tired of aesthetics.

Author, are you sure you wrote The Top of Qinglian? This one of yours is too far away from the top of Qinglian. The whole first-rate story has no central idea. The theme of Qinglian Summit is to drive the family and develop and strengthen the family. The intermediate links are very exciting. What the hell are you writing?

I haven't read any of Qinglian's new books since she finished her work, and I feel like it's a waste of time to comment on them. He has no idea what his readers want to read.

I feel that if this book is released at the end of the month, there is a high probability that this book will be cut off again. Apart from the magic talents written in each chapter, there is nothing else. Qinglian has evil cultivation, physical cultivation, sword cultivation, etc., And the monks' spiritual roots have no skills in each school. The whole book is just one magic. The key is that each Qi training method has these kinds of skills. From what I see, it is far worse than Qinglian.

Guess when this will be cut?

You can learn from "Nine Transformations of the True Spirit", "Supreme Immortal Road", "Evergreen on the Road", "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality", and your own Qinglian!

The Peak of Qinglian is a model work for the family to cultivate immortality! Almost no one writes better than you! After that, the anecdote began, a retarded article! The title of the novel is also not very good at all!

This is the author

You have a place on the list of twelve heavenly kings of authors of Qidian's poisonous novels 🙂

Is it so difficult to just change the soup but not the medicine and just rest on our laurels? I've cut a few copies, but you still don't understand.

Keep writing. Family novels. Only what you write can I read

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After getting my grades, I forgot where I came from. Qinglian's grades were not good at first. She kept insisting on writing. After getting the grades, she didn't like it anymore. In fact, in traditional fairy tales, people have to have a lot of words to read them.

Let's start a new book, it's been a long time coming.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

Did he run away completely, or did he change his vest and start a book?

I hope you come back strong with your new work! Come on!

In fact, the best part of Qinglian Peak is actually before ascending to the spiritual world. The business methods of the spiritual world and the fairy world are similar. It feels like fried rice. The group portraits are definitely brilliant, but they are just a taste. I understand the author's difficulties. Writing group portraits is easy to be criticized and the number of words is easy to go off topic. The focus is shifted. This degree is difficult to grasp. But if you look at the group portraits of the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, they are very good. In addition to the gap in writing style, it must be written to death. Many times in Qinglian, a certain family character is written to death, and the nostalgia is for two or three chapters at most to cheer people up. It can be done this way, but it cannot always be this routine. The emotions after writing the death are not delicate at all, and the machinations are not prominent enough. These are the advantages of the Xuanjian Immortal Clan leading in the break. I think the author can think about it carefully, not to mention plagiarism and reference. At least it can be seen that the author's shortcomings are in the group portrait, emotion, and writing style. Weaknesses in Machiavellian calculations At the same time, amplify one's own advantages. For example, in the early stage of mortal flow, the hardships of the bottom people can be interspersed in the early stage to amplify one's own advantages.

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Nowadays, the mortal stream starts weakly and is tiring, but the genius stream backed by a big family is more attractive.

Should the author close the book? If you write again, you can open a new account without waiting or searching. If anyone really finds it, please reply! ! !