Family Cultivation: Starting the Foundation Building Period

Xuanjian Immortal Clan, go and see what other people write!

The title of this book is really rubbish! There are a lot of this kind of book titles when you search them. They are very homogeneous and have no appeal at all. Please replace them quickly! ! !

Just like this book, this is a flowchart carved out of a mold. Do you think you can still make money from this?

Can't we just give the book a normal title? This kind of name feels like systematic writing, which is unreliable!

The family portrait is better as a group. The writing style should be strengthened. There are many characters in the Qinglian family, but the dialogue is too plain.

Lao Mo has several problems that if not solved, it is estimated that all future web articles will be copied from Qinglian. The first problem is that as the level of the male protagonist increases, the level of people all over the world increases. Mahayana is as numerous as dogs, Taoist ancestors are walking all over the streets, and top-notch weapons are flying all over the sky 😥. In addition, there is no concept of time and distance. , Often thousands, tens of thousands or even hundreds of millions or trillions of miles (years); Buddhism has Sumeru (mountain) hidden in the highest realm of mustard seeds. It is not better to be bigger and longer. Watches seem to be much more expensive than alarm clocks; the writing of fighting skills and monster fighting and upgrading is indeed very exciting, but because it is too long, it is basically the same. It can be controlled appropriately 🤭

Keep up this perfunctory style, order for three hundred, and I don't know if I'll have it for thirty (><)

The Immortal Lord of Ten Thousand Beasts is also rubbish. I haven't made any progress after writing it for so long. Talking to people is as numb as a robot. Fighting is 😆 It's always a set of moves. Just change the name and copy it.

One hundred thousand words will be put on the shelves. How many initial orders do you want? You are crazy about money.

Do you really not want to consider changing your profile? Once I saw it, I no longer had any desire to read the content.

Let me emphasize to everyone, it's not that the author doesn't want to update more, five updates a day, but it is like this during the new book period, two updates a day, and the author has to wait until it is on the shelves before he can update more, five updates a day! Please understand.

The human world written by Qinglian is relatively good, but the various settings of the spiritual world are the beginning of the whole book's failure. The spiritual realm and the enlightenment are as messy and messy. What's even worse are the time fairy weapons and various ripening tools, which are a bit like the current overflow of hormones. Can't you use some heaven and earth spiritual water to speed up the ripening? Also, I frequently receive a bunch of magical and magical artifacts just to make up the word count, and the elixir that lasts ten thousand years is even more nonsense. It can be matured for 500 million years. What more elixir is needed?

Lao Mo is the eunuch who is about to abandon the book. I still hope that Lao Mo will re-write a classic novel about immortality with novel ideas and good looks. There are too few good books about this kind of book. Now they are all about system flow, proficiency and panels. It's disgusting.

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The beginning of Qinglian Summit Spirit World is unbearable! I just want to do the Human World chapter again! If only the Human World chapter was really as good as this! Completely random writing! You don't even have to read the Immortal World chapter to know it's garbage! You can just mention ascending to the spiritual world and end it immediately! Open another book and start directly from the spirit world! There is no such thing as ascension directly in the spiritual world! There are many more realms directly. You can just set the golden elixir at the beginning!

In terms of internal competitiveness within the family, if they want to improve, they have to rely on sects to go public to raise investment and compete. In the end, it is no different from the previous sect's system of cultivating immortals.

I feel that since my family is a cultivator, it's best to have more wives! Fertility

Why don't you write about how a casual cultivator gradually became a family?

This is the fastest scrap book I have ever seen!

🤮Trash, deserves less than three hundred

In fact, you can continue writing without cutting. Everyone has their own style. There is really no need to deliberately change it. And it may not have a better effect. Your style and DNA have already been imprinted Write the content carefully, make local changes, and update 3-4 chapters every day. You want people to join the game. In addition to the old batch, it is crucial to absorb some new traffic. There is no new traffic now. The old people have seen the content that they have revisited in the past. There will definitely be fewer people buying it. Keep accumulating. Come on Update more. Your breaking point is around 300 chapters. Be yourself.

Family Cultivation: I have a Palm Immortal Mansion which is quite nice

Stay calm, I'm still taking care of it, hey

I just finished reading The Top of the Green Lotus a few months ago, and I wanted to advise you not to continue writing The Top of the Green Lotus, because the foundation of a good novel is to start from a very weak place and break out step by step, collect resources, and decipher events one by one. If you write next to Top of the Green Lotus, it will become particularly watery, and whatever you write will be watery. The new book must have a new world line and new troubles and difficulties. Don't rely on the Wang family. If possible, the Wang family is also an enemy. The Immortal Road is a narrow road that cannot accommodate too many people.

Did you copy the Ten Thousand Beasts Immortal Lord? 😰😰

The characteristics of each period are different and we cannot look back.

Lao Mo, it's better not to write this book and concentrate on writing about Ten Thousand Beasts Immortal Lord.

This historical text of the late Ming Dynasty, "Xi Ming Li Huo", writes about Sichuan's resistance to the Qing Dynasty in the Southern Ming Dynasty. The writing is good, the plot logic is online, it does not reduce intelligence, and the details are real. There are no common time-travel routines, and the cheats are not big, but the details of the war are very solid, especially the war planning, army organization and equipment, battle plot, command, formation, and marching details are very real. The plot is roughly divided into two lines, one is to resist the Qing Dynasty, and the other is to deal with various warlords in Nanming and Sichuan. Currently, there are two female protagonists interspersed with the main line. In addition to the plot of war and strategy, there is also a harem. Finally, I wish Guibao Di a great success!

You can watch it. Each has its own way of writing. To make money, you have to cater to public taste. The author has actually improved, and his writing style is better than Qinglian.

Qinglian really can't stop watching