Daojun: I Have a Monument to Enlightenment

In Chapter 1, Poison Death, the protagonist's three spiritual roots cannot complete the sect's assessment even though they have plug-ins (there is no bottleneck in cultivation/level up once the proficiency is reached), then the others must have heavenly spiritual roots, or even Taoist and divine bodies to pass the assessment?

The dialogue is so robotic and the introduction is so dry, it is hard to believe that this was written by a person who has written over ten million words. A huge fireball the size of a water tank! Hahaha! Does every book have to be written like this?

If you insist on making a fool of yourself, it will not only waste your time, but also wear away the patience of the readers! That "Family Cultivation of Immortality: The Beginning of the Foundation Building Period" is 110,000 words long and still has 5,000 collections. Yours is 110,000 words and only a little over 3,000, as you can imagine! Most of your readers come here for the two main points: family-style ➕traditional fairy tales! As a result, if you write system articles and panel flows, there will be fewer readers! Moreover, if you throw away your family and traditional cultivation, you will throw away most of your fans. What advantages do you have in competing with those on the list who have been writing system articles for a long time? The fans have left, and the experience is not as rich as others. It is just a young virgin entering a brothel! I really don't know what you think! Readers have just come out of Qinglian, and you are still in the foundation building period of writing a new book. It is natural for everyone to take care of you, but in the end, you are anxious and cut the book directly after 50 chapters! Then, if you said you would stop for a month, everyone would look forward to it even more, and then you come up with a book like this! I remember at the beginning, I seemed to have said that I wanted to write a Qinglian trilogy or several parts in the future? In addition, the ending of Qinglian is not perfect, so I believe that there are definitely many book friends who are looking forward to the subsequent family series! There are many people who write traditional family stories about cultivating immortals, but there are only a few people who can finish it or insist on writing it. You are still the one who carries the cauldron, but in the end you even want the cauldron and go to write the system text naked! Disappointed➕Speechless

The author is obviously still immersed in the achievements of Qinglian Peak. The reason why your Qinglian Peak is outstanding is because you wrote the human world chapter well and accumulated a large number of readers. The spiritual world and fairy world that follow are impossible to read. The family stories in the same period are either unfinished or short and weak. They simply do not have the energy to persevere like you, so you have achieved success. But look at the two new books you wrote. They are just following the trend. They are nothing new and have no sense of reading at all.

You're already a eunuch, so why are you still exempt?

This book needs to be scrapped, there is so much bullshit. Several chapters are full of family gossip.

The books written by this guy are all bad, and cutting leeks is its only purpose.

Don't make it difficult for yourself, let yourself go, it is better than building a seven-level pagoda.

I couldn't stand the first one. With three spiritual roots, an adult's thinking and cognition, and a somewhat big golden finger (the author said it himself), even the inner disciples were kicked to the outer gate! This is no longer a waste stream, this is simply mindless.

I came here just for family stories, I just want to see the family flow, as long as it's not a system flow! Even if it's a little watery, as long as the map is big enough and the plot is good enough! The end of Qinglian was too "hurried"! After Daluo Jinxian, all kinds of battleships, demon guards, and immortal armor armies were over before they even came on stage! Especially those dozens of demon guard regiments, only revealed their faces twice, and they were just mentioned in one stroke, which is really a pity! You can write about a beast-controlling family, the establishment of a family by casual cultivators, the son of Daluo Jinxian missing the mortal world, and a bunch of other topics! Where do I need to write a system article? ? Even if you write about the Mortal stream ➕ Sect stream, I can accept it, but you, a family stream author with a collection of 200,000, really can't understand it when you come to write about the system!

Among all the famous writers I have read, this author's writing style is the worst, bar none. All the dialogues, all the descriptions are so stiff, my God, there is no sense of immersion at all.

The biggest bug in this book is that the sect is written in the same way as a family story. The short social interactions between family members are repeatedly written in the sect, which is really annoying. After a while, a bunch of distant relatives appear.

Limiting the exemption of the unfinished ones, the starting point is really speechless.

I was really looking forward to it and wanted to see it first 😵

Congratulations to myself, I didn't read it as soon as it came on the shelves. Successfully avoided the trap! ! ! 😄😄😄😄

Dufa, I have been training for others for more than half a month, but in the end, there is no profit from others. You are taking a task, not a private order. What is the purpose of the sect giving the task? It is also because this woman makes people hate her. The routine is too old,,

After reading Qinglian Zhi Dian, this book was okay at first, but at the end of last night, it was like a robot writing a book. The plots were like matryoshka dolls one after another, without any real feeling. I hope I don't use that kind of writing style again in this book, otherwise the author's reputation will definitely collapse

Hurry up and cut it. If you don't read the system panel article, don't follow the trend. It's easy to miss old readers.

Let's write about family flow. You can be born in a medium-sized family in the mortal world. For example, there is a golden elixir ancestor in the family, and then you can start to break through the foundation building stage. You can be regarded as the backbone of the family. With high qualifications and not too outrageous plug-ins, this theme should be okay.

Don't build the combat power of the novel about cultivating immortals too high at the beginning. You may even start from the mortal world and then come into contact with the world of cultivating immortals. Magic weapons, adventures, spiritual pets, intelligent villains, family stories should reflect the effects of farming development, as well as family and friendship~

The book is softly written, without any heroic spirit. I kept skipping to read it. Now it's free and I can't finish it.

To be honest, you can refer to the Xuanjian Immortal Clan. There is no need to limit it to one or two people. The core of the family is the family, not the people.

In fact, Qinglian is well written, but it ends hastily at the end. You can delete some chapters after Qinglian, and then write about the fairy world. Isn't the fairy world that big? If the underworld is not written, wouldn't there be some powerful enemies? Doesn't the fairy world have an interface? Qinglian has really written well in the previous part, come on!

For a good masterpiece of Qinglian, just write it right in one go. You can write it slowly. You will write it sloppily later. The plot of the new book has not changed much. Reading hundreds of chapters is not enough, and you have to wait. Qinglian can not continue writing the chapters later, and add some plot characters and interfaces to introduce some powerful races. Lao Wang fell in love with a girl named Sa in front of him in the cultivation world and left no descendants. There are so many interfaces in the next edition, will there be only one fairy world?

Two books in a row, and I stopped updating after writing a while, which completely consumed the few old fans Qinglian had accumulated.

Why! Maybe I will never read a novel like The Peak of Green Lotus in this lifetime. I really miss you

I just skipped reading, and there is not much content in this article.

You might as well write about a small family, or you can write about a family leader. You are more suitable to write about these.

Exemption is limited. Don't try to write this for two months.

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