Starting a Cultivation Family by Farming and Taking a Wife

I'm just testing the waters before it's free for a limited time. I doubt this book will have any female readers. The protagonist doesn't give a dowry when he gets married; instead, the woman pays the bride price. Female readers are probably already wary. The biggest flaw in this book is probably the price system. Authors who aren't good at math often make this mistake.

This book really got me hooked around chapter 100. What kind of character is the protagonist? The Qingyun Sect protects him, providing a quiet place to farm, and they've given him plenty of free stuff, haven't they? He complains about being tricked into buying a house with zero down payment, but he's unwilling to accept free prime land.

Demanding a dowry instead of a betrothal gift when getting married—a true Indian tale of spiritual cultivation. Pah!

Whoever marries the protagonist is incredibly unlucky.

Lin Yi cultivating two hundred acres of spirit fields for the Qingyun Sect in exchange for the method of cultivating spirit seeds was, in my opinion, a stroke of genius. No family in Wangyue County had ever obtained such a method before, indicating that it was extremely labor-intensive and demanding, requiring exceptional talent from the younger generation.

The protagonist is a vampire cultivator; she marries into the family as a concubine, brings a dowry, works every day, even her mother-in-law has to work, and eats the lowest grade of spiritual rice—she's practically a slave.

After reading 44 chapters, everything is good except the author is too presumptuous, wanting to do everything himself. Brewing wine by growing his own grain, making clothes by growing his own cotton—where would he find that much time? The yield simply wouldn't be enough. He'd obviously have to buy materials; there's no way he could grow them himself 🙂. You could argue that what you grow yourself is of the highest quality, but most raw materials still need to be purchased, processed, and sold.

I won't go into the monetary system; it's just a lighthearted story. But what kind of operation is it to merge several of your fathers-in-law's families into the Lin family? The members of these families have all become members of the Lin clan? Do you have some misunderstanding about the word "clan"? Do you understand what family is? After reading over a hundred chapters of a family-themed novel, you're pulling this stunt? More than two hundred people with no blood relation formed a family?

The power balance became somewhat unbalanced after entering Heavenly Fire Valley. A Qi Refining cultivator should be easily able to contend with a Golden Core cultivator, shouldn't they be easily crushed by a Golden Core cultivator? Suddenly, a whole bunch of Foundation Establishment cultivators are subdued! The author should probably stick to a farming/development style. The power system is completely inadequate.

It's like playing house with kids, nothing special. A difficult childbirth requiring a C-section, and the mysterious reward is a free purchase! Your childbirth is truly unique, like cultivating immortality!