There's an Immortal Abode Inside Me
我体内有仙府
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- Xianxia
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- Fantasy Cultivation
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A bright yellow scroll, a few strokes of cinnabar, only a handful of words, yet each one weighs a thousand catties. Do you know that once you pass through these city gates, you'll be a flower trapped in a cage? In the bronze mirror, a beautiful young woman gazes out, her brows like distant hills, lips touched with red, fingers painted with vermilion. Her beauty puts the jeweled hairpins in her dressing case to shame. Her bright eyes, clear as autumn water, hold misty towers in their depths. Alon
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You still haven't learned from the mistakes of the previous book. Your main focus is on the farming genre, but you write the protagonist in such a rushed way that it feels like he's being chased by a dog. If you want to read novels with a dog chasing you, you can read mission-based novels instead of farming ones.
Flirting with a cow occasionally is considered playful and mischievous, but constant flirting is simply morally reprehensible.
Having over 30,000 spirit stones at the Qi Refining stage makes spirit stones seem worthless. How are you going to write about Foundation Establishment and Core Formation stages? The spirit stone system is going to collapse. I really like novels with this kind of premise, but so far I haven't found one that's well-written.
Sigh, the premise is good, but the author has many problems with the settings. The idea that consuming mana directly leads to a demotion is ridiculous. If a Golden Core cultivator fights someone, wouldn't they all fall back to Qi Refining? Also, spirit stones are too cheap, which fails to highlight the importance of cultivation resources. 😅
The protagonist suffers from paranoia. Thinking about it carefully, possessing such a supreme treasure as time-flowing space is something no one in the entire cultivation world could create. Only top-tier figures in the Immortal Realm who control time and space could create it. Even in the Immortal Realm, such a treasure would drive people into a frenzy of killing.
The scope is truly low. If the protagonist focused solely on cultivation, attained the Great Luo Dao, and transcended the timeline, he could have any woman in the myriad realms. Even collecting all four beauties from different eras wouldn't be a problem. Look at what the protagonist is doing now—entangled with a widow and her daughter in the village every day. He's utterly hopeless. A complete waste of space.
Perhaps the author should reconsider the description of the blue ox, and avoid making it so explicit and seductive. Although I can roughly guess that the green ox that has transformed into human form might be the female lead, it's still an ox for now. Your description gives me the feeling of sending cute messages to an ox, which is a bit of a challenge to my worldview.
This protagonist is pretty amazing; his IQ is probably around middle school level. The most amazing thing is that I've seen him seduce ghosts and snakes, and he's flirting with a cow. This guy is supposed to be in human form, yet he's having an affair with a cow.
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I can't accept that a heifer is always gazing at the protagonist with affection, nor can I accept that the protagonist's tone and attitude towards the heifer are the same as his wife's.