Pirates: the Winged Dragon of the Beast Pirates

The protagonist's character is not good, and he sighs a lot of helplessness. He can obviously be very strong, and he is actually very strong, but he treats himself as an ordinary person, and now he lives like a waste. And the pirates still want to be reasonable

I saw a lot of comments in the comment section saying that the protagonist was cowardly, so I read this book with the thought that if I don't do some research, I have no right to speak. After reading Chapter 4, the problem is basically determined. If the author wants to write a Kizaru-like protagonist, he must understand that Kizaru is not a coward, on the contrary, he is very proud. What he said like "terrible" is essentially a yin and yang to the enemy. Of course, the protagonist can also say that. The protagonist can say that he is weak or cowardly before, during, or after the battle, but he can't mutter to himself in his heart, that means he is really cowardly. Just like what I said in my heart after attacking Moria in the second picture, I really can't win at all. No one can say that they are cowards after watching this. Cowardly people are not welcome anywhere Let's just say that even Navy Superboy Kirby dares to punch with the belief of victory, and Momonosuke dares to bite a green bull. You, the protagonist, can't be inferior to Superboy Kirby and General Momonosuke.

I don't know how it looks now

I'm surprised that you insist on making such an outrageous configuration. If you can't grasp it and press it later, your standing strength will collapse.

How can this coward protagonist be the king? Although the king is very sexy, this protagonist is really unworthy.

You said he was a loser? He practiced involution again, but every time someone called him to take action, it felt like the protagonist was just a knife. No one was wielding it, it was just a dead thing. Character determines success or failure. Can such a character awaken the overlord? Really outrageous

He evolved from a very cowardly and timid person to an ordinary person. But it still doesn't work. The protagonist still can't stand up. It's even better to let the original Rickby be the protagonist The charm of the protagonist is really too low. I should say that I can't see any bright spots in the protagonist. Does anyone know what bright spots are in the protagonist? The biggest characteristic that I see is lustful. When I see Yamato, I always emphasize how good-looking Yamato is. Well, although Yamato is indeed beautiful, there is no need to let the protagonist emphasize it all the time. This will only make the protagonist look low Oh, I can only say that the Winged Divine Dragon is crying. The Winged Divine Dragon on the protagonist is like the Winged Divine Dragon that is tightly locked by the iron chain of the Binding Tomb in GX Although the protagonist has no highlights, the ability of the Winged Divine Dragon fruit is very well written! It is the biggest highlight of this book, but it is a pity that this fruit was not fully utilized. The majestic golden phoenix was just written in such a depressing tone that it felt like death was not far away!

He was blowing some really awesome flames, but he couldn't burn anyone to death at all.

The character of the protagonist is really poisonous. He is not like Kizaru who says he is scary but blasts his enemies with contempt, nor is he like Kaido who is domineering and unparalleled from beginning to end. He acted like a complete hypocrite. He had all kinds of negative thoughts in the past, saying that he didn't want to fight, but in the end he still killed him, and also said that the opponent was too weak. Words and deeds are inconsistent and extremely poisonous

The character of the protagonist is really disgusting. It's a pity that a very good subject has such a protagonist.

I'm thinking that your protagonist has no charm at all. He doesn't look like a protagonist. He is a typical Asashi male protagonist in Japanese comics. It makes a tough guy like me feel sick.

The protagonist's careless and indecisive character also has a domineering character? Really poisonous

In Chapter 19, he awakened his overlord color haki because he was afraid of death in battle. This is a bit outrageous. But it doesn't matter if you don't bring in the original settings. As long as the poison resistance is high, you can survive it.

In Chapter 19, the character design collapses. I have endured all the stupidity in the previous chapter. Chapter 19 really reveals that the character's IQ is the author's IQ.

When you write a fanfic, the most basic thing is to understand the comics clearly. The important content in the pages is just spoken. I only read the beginning. A flying winged dragon with a 30-year-old mind who has been trained by Teacher Kai for three years. Moria can't dodge the shadow horn gun sticking out from the ground? What are you doing?

There are no problems in other aspects, only the character of the protagonist is problematic. The first point is very cowardly, and the mentality described every time is painful to watch; the second point is that I naturally don't want Kaido to be injured, so I interfere in the battle between Kaido and Kozuki Oden, use Momonosuke to threaten Kozuki Oden, and then awaken the overlord color when I bear Kozuki Oden's overlord color...

Is it a Yamato single heroine? If so, don't write about the ambiguous plot with other women (Hancock and Runti). If not, why don't we let the protagonist act coy and pretentious? What's wrong with being a pirate and having a harem with a king? And it's not like you can't beat Yamato. Don't act like a clown and try to please both sides, but end up offending both sides.

Author, don't listen to that domestic RMB guy, he will make you cool. Just write according to your own ideas and don't poison him.

It's too dramatic, it's Teacher Zhangkoukai's and Teacher Shunkoukai's.

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Just like the title, exactly the same

Races like Yamato will have a longer lifespan, right? What should the male protagonist do?