Life in Tokyo Starting as a Child Star

It seemed okay before, but the last few dozen chapters have seemed too watery. Originally, there were flaws in the simulation processing in the past, and I thought it would be better if I wrote more. However, the more I read, the more watery it became, and it didn't feel good at all. I don't know what you were doing with all the foreshadowing.

Regarding this article, I had a long discussion with Doubao and he recommended it to me. The main title I gave Doubao was "Tongxinwen", the protagonist should be cute, etc., And then I was persuaded to quit after reading the first 50 chapters. The first is that the aunt was manipulated too seriously by the protagonist, the first is that adults have no authority among children, and the second is that the protagonist is at this age to manipulate the aunt, even if he is a time traveler, it seems very inconsistent. To be honest, when I saw the title "Life in Tokyo Beginning as a Child Actor," I knew that this book would not always be about child actors. But after reading the book review, what surprised me was that the book seemed to be about child actors from beginning to end. But if the author wanted to write like this, he should have written about the cuteness of child actors. But to be honest, I didn't feel a trace of this feeling in the whole text, only the sense of maturity of a little adult, which can even be said to be more authoritative among little masters. You must watch that variety show. You have all seen it. It is the author who records the daily life of the protagonist. In it, he emphasizes several times the cuteness that is different from ordinary cuteness. The author writes about this subject, which is totally unflattering. Those who want to read entertainment industry articles should shorten the child star stage and focus on the youth stage, or simply not In the stage of writing about child stars, if your target audience is the group of people who watch child stars, why is it so easy for us to watch child stars? Child stars are cute, but child stars are not cute. We search for other more high-quality entertainment industry articles, but this description of the author directly dissuades readers like me who came here. It is really uncomfortable and uncomfortable.

Pochi-chan is so cute

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Originally, I was impressed that the writing skills of the new author were so good? The system of "Kidnapped Natsuko" simulates the young literary plot very well. It can be ranked first among the novels I have read this month. When I exited and took a look, I saw that the author was an old author, and he was so gentle!

If you don't understand the plot and arrange the protagonist to dress up as a woman, you will not only please some people's XP, but also make other people hate you. Maybe I belong to that part of the audience that the author gave up. Since you chose to be a girl, then goodbye.

It's still a matter of subject matter. The protagonist's setting is locked in "Zi Yong". This kind of book is destined to have no connection with most well-known movies. At least the protagonists of most movies are adults. Watching the protagonist, a child in his early ten years, wander around in various social situations, it is funny and weird.

The first part was okay, but the middle part became more and more boring. The name clearly started with child stars, but they kept writing about child stars, and the more they wrote, the more outrageous they were. A dozen adults, or martial arts stunt doubles, fought an eight or nine-year-old child, and then they were killed. The main character has such physical ability. Isn't it a good idea to directly participate in competitions and get bonuses? He has been limited to the entertainment industry. Isn't it said that he has obtained various athlete awards and other things before acting? The fame will be higher, right? The main character's physique can be said to be the peak of human beings in the middle stage of writing. He can participate in competitions to get a ranking, and then get some endorsements. This is not as long as acting, and the money is much more. Moreover, even if an eight or nine-year-old child plays the role of a swordsman, even if the performance is really good, not many people want to see it. People actually want to see the kind of dashing warriors like the swordsman Lang Xin. In the middle stage of writing, various auras of lowering intelligence are becoming more and more obvious. .

Is the author a sister? The male channel does not need to give the male protagonist a cute setting (key point) The coolness of the system is wrong. I suggest you watch an anime called (Want to Become a Strong Shadow). In it, the shadow-sama's pretense style is what men like to watch. The way men like to pretend is not to ask others with a face. He said: "Did I just do something awesome?" Instead, he did something awesome and let the people around him understand and imagine it. That is to say, Akito only pretended to be dark, and details determine success or failure. Let's talk about the skill "eyes" obtained in the previous acting. I asked Hosokawa if he was scared. This is already a poisonous point in the eyes of many male readers. Then there is the aunt Kitazumi Ariha, an introvert and a novelist. These are all fine, but it is really inappropriate to be manipulated by an eight-year-old child (Kitasumi Ariha's perspective). After all, it is not polite to be dependent on others and disrupt other people's rhythms. Imagine that you are living a comfortable life with a monthly income of tens of thousands, and suddenly a child appears and asks you to go to bed early and get up early every day to do housework. Can you be happy? No matter how introverted you are, there will be times when you explode As a time traveler, he is experienced, and with system assistance, he can kill 99% of his peers in an instant. Just like the inspiration for this book, I guess it was Fader. Look at Fader's timeline, there are some during his child star period. One or two highlights are enough to move forward. As for skipping a grade at a young age to go to high school, I can only say that it is not necessary. The reason why Tokyo-style novels are good is that the status of high school students is blessed. You are better, skipping a grade and letting elementary school students become high school students is too fragmented. These poisonous points caused the number of comments to drop off a cliff after more than ten chapters. Again, the male protagonist of a male channel does not need to be "cute".

I don't know what to say about the fact that the main character in the finale is 10 years old.

Or is it intentional? What about Legend of the Swordsman? What about the main plot? I just wrote some messy stuff, but I still think the book is too popular and I want to lower its popularity 😅

It's the familiar feeling of stomachache!

1. The protagonist's plug-in simulated life is written into reality by the author 2. This author writes about stock trading. In the early stage, there is an ambiguous relationship between the female character and the protagonist, and in the later ending, it becomes a single female protagonist. If you want to see the harem, you can go directly 3. The subsequent plot is quite interesting

The protagonist has no ability to decide the direction of the story in the Sims. He is simply led through the CG by the system. The most ridiculous thing is that the system pretends to give the protagonist a score at the end, without knowing what the score is based on. There is a problem with the basic settings. I am a bit of a literary person, but the advantage is that my writing style is sophisticated. If you don't mind this system that is trying to seduce others, then you can definitely watch it.

It's greasy and doesn't have any innocence at all. If you just want to watch someone pretend to be slapped in the face, there are many better ones written by Qidian.

Emperor Style—Child Star

This book typically starts high and then goes low. After writing more than 200 chapters, I am still eight years old. Don't you know what aesthetic fatigue is? If you write that the protagonist is twenty years old and you can't write more than 10,000 chapters, do you think the protagonist is Conan?

I read this book on QQ Reading and Qidian. I have subscriptions on both platforms. Together, it is basically fully subscribed. I read it one after another. Until yesterday, I was still dreaming about Kitami Minori's future. I didn't expect it to end suddenly today. I was really disappointed!

I subscribe to the male protagonist wearing female clothes and I really don't want to watch it.

A 1-year-old child wants to act like an 8-year-old child. Should we look at the difference between a 1-year-old child and an 8-year-old child? Fortunately, I changed the main character's height from 140cm to 120cm, otherwise I would have been completely poisoned. I can't bear it anymore. It's been two days and I haven't recovered yet. I'll wait for a few months. I have to consider the reputation of the following chapters and whether to order them. If the writing is good, I will skip these chapters and pretend they don't exist.

So why did you choose to wear women's clothing? It feels really fragmented and affects the perception. This is how you select the audience 😰

The Legend of the Swordsman, which took so long to be filmed, was able to get the response after it was released in just one chapter? Aren't you?

Sure enough, anyone who sticks to Teacher Dachi will be ruined.

It was completely unfinished. I thought the protagonist could grow up and break out of Japan, dominate Asia and then the world with his acting skills, but no, he was just stuck as a top-notch prostitute, and there was no mention of his development in literature or singing. I was really looking forward to the development of the male protagonist in the future, so just wish me a Happy New Year... I couldn't be happier. I originally liked some of the portrayals of acting skills in the article, but then I stopped!

Last year, when the book was about 320 chapters, I felt like it was going to collapse. It's been 26 years. Where is your new book? ? ? ?

Just to make a quick comment, I think it's generally good to watch, but I was very embarrassed by the plot between my aunt and Shibaizumi-chan, especially the "otaku" aunt. There's really no need to disgust readers. Most people have normal moral values, so don't make the characters disgusting. As for Shiaizumi-chan, I personally don't like characters who are too stupid. I feel that the whole movie is just played by the protagonist, and the relationship between them is also very sudden. I believe in love at first sight, but compared to Shion-chan's plot, Chaiizumi's plot is not three-dimensional enough, and there is no complete cause and effect. I always thought it was a single female protagonist, because there are really many plots of Shion-chan. I don't think that Shion-chan can't do it without Shion-chan. I didn't expect that there would be no result in the end. Also, the person who appears in the game will become a reality, and the simulated character will automatically change back to the protagonist... I think this is a poisonous point, because it is illogical, and this is not a fantasy theme. Anyway, it is too boring to watch. I just skip any chapter where such a character appears.

Japanese stories are really good-looking. A tough guy like Kitagawa Temple and several heroines are also good-looking. Write another book about a true harem, a Japanese-style supernatural tough guy fighting style. Of course, it can pay homage to plots such as Sora no Kyoukai. I don't want to read crotch tragedy literature.

Life in Tokyo after being a child star

Many of the books I subscribed to were unfinished or eunuchs. What the hell, I was convinced.

I came across this book again on a recommendation. The setting of this book is based on Fader. If it were written in a realistic style, it would be very interesting. However, it followed Fader's style of beautifying the entertainment industry, which made me always doubt when I read the book. Are there really such good people who can rise to the top in the entertainment industry?