Haunted Night

The biggest problem is that the opening chapter is too stream-of-conscious, with confusing perspectives and confusion. Secondly, the protagonist does not officially appear until Chapter 8. The preliminary image of the protagonist is not given to readers until the wax figure case is over. This is a bit late and affects the perception. I think it would be better to change the short story at the beginning to the later part of the story. You can also see that the author has started to enter the state in the next few chapters, and the story is on the right track. What I'm writing right now is okay, and things will get better once the story is fully developed.

Multiple heroines or single heroine, let's decide as soon as possible. Before, it was all about ambiguity, and after writing so many female supporting characters, there was only one female protagonist. If you don't say it, you'll want to eat both sides by default.

Is there anyone like me who was pushed in the face by Qidian? 🙂

Is it really impossible to go back to the cat and start a comic book? Or you can just open one at the starting point.

The best thing written so far is Japanese Story, which is not too cold. The common problem in several novels is that the female protagonists are very well written. The result is that they are not accepted for some reason. I deserve to be scolded. Kitagawaji's character can still be ranked in the top ten of all male protagonists in Qidian novels.

What are you doing to make things mysterious? Who can guess what you are thinking? You don't even know how to write cool articles, but you still want to create suspense.

I haven't read it yet, but isn't this the fault of our writing of A Midsummer Night's Dream haha

The category of supernatural suspense is back, and the review has been relaxed, but this one died first.

Your subject matter is too cross-cutting, right?

I really can't stand the fact that the author hasn't written a few words. You guys are like those animals that curl up in enclosures. You mark them fiercely. After you finish reading, just put down the single and more and start speculating.

Novels are not reality. The problem is that there are so many female supporting characters who have a good relationship with the protagonist, and then there is only one female protagonist. Those female partners will only marry and become other people's wives in the end. So if you are a single heroine, please don't be flirtatious with anyone other than the heroine.

I liked the previous one more, but it ended too quickly. I didn't expect this book to go out of fashion so quickly😅

Normally speaking, if a serial murder case occurs in reality, the local government will definitely be furious, especially the extremely vicious dismemberment murder in the book. There will be no shortage of armed police patrolling under curfew, and it will take a long time to find out if a death order is issued.

Open a harem and write more emotional dramas

If it's well written, I'll read it, if it's not well written, I'll run away. A single heroine is sweet, multiple heroines are astringent, and no heroine is fun. Why bother? Go ahead and troll the author who changed his harem to a single heroine.

It feels very similar to the reappearance of winter. Can you learn from it?

Why don't you write it? Don't write about this subject, it's weird. The perspective is also very confusing, and the characters' personalities feel strange. I always feel like I've seen this before. There is a troublemaker in the yellow-haired cat. It's not bad, but I haven't written it anymore. The other books on this website are also good.

Is Shennong here? Why is the first chapter missing? Is it good to read?