This Japanese Story Is Not Too Cold

After reading Chapter 86, I don't plan to read any more. I looked at the comments posted by other readers in the book review section, and found that some parts are quite similar to mine. This book really makes me feel inexplicably irritated while reading it, and I just want to fast forward to watch the plot progress. I thought about it and the problem may be the lack of details or the lack of main idea. The lack of details includes the lack of details of daily life and the flat labeling of characters. Although I know that the background of this book is Japan, I could not feel the customs of Japan at all during the reading process. The Japan described by the author is more like a prefecture-level city in inland China. Even if the characters use Japanese yen and take the Shinkansen, it still feels like they are using RMB and taking the high-speed train. The characterization gave me the feeling that the author first listed a number of attributes in a notebook, then selected a few of them and put them together, and a new supporting actress was born. We need a "sister with thick lines", a good sister is here, we need a "capable senior", a good senior is here, we need a "sick and weak classmate", and a good classmate is here. After tearing off these universal labels, does any of the many female partners have a real personality? I didn't see it. Even the female doctor villain who was solved in the 80th chapter, I didn't feel anything about it. She was just a stereotyped female madman. Maybe this is the second dimension. As for the lack of theme, I think this is another source of irritability for me. The plots in the book do not highlight the characteristics of the characters, nor introduce more background settings. They just constantly elevate the protagonist's personality, making readers doubt the value of these plots. When I read that the protagonist felt that he was satisfied reading alone, I thought he would lower his sense of existence and solve problems in an unobtrusive way. It seems that he is a wise general. Then he went to fight in a group. Well, this is also a way to solve trouble. It seems that the protagonist is a reckless man. Then the protagonist begins to reason and investigate. Well, maybe the author wants to design a protagonist who is both wise and courageous. After so much investigation and reasoning, he will definitely be able to solve the supernatural incident without any blood in the end. Then the protagonist violently beats the resentful spirit, and the incident is resolved. Okay, I get it. If you advance, you can ride a thousand horses, but if you retreat, you can strategize. The author just wanted to write such an invincible protagonist. Moreover, this protagonist is not only invincible in strength, but also invincible in mentality. There is no need to grow at all, so it is very easy to write. The question is, does a protagonist who does not need to grow have descriptive value? Is there any conflict at all in a story with such a protagonist? Is there any contradiction at all? When reading such a story, you can't feel the advancement of the plot, nor the crisis and confrontation, nor even the family affection and friendship. You just watch a protagonist who is lonely and unparalleled... That's why you feel irritated, because you actually already know that the daily plots of investigation and reasoning you read will not produce value in the end. Anyway, I gave up the book. I seem to be sorry that I didn't see the paid chapter. Consider this carefully written review a reward.

The early morning sunlight shines through the curtains on the two figures, one large and one small, hugging each other on the bed. In the kitchen, a cold-looking man wearing an apron was holding a spatula to scoop up the fried eggs in the pan and put them on the dinner plate. "Bang... Bang..." With the sound of "beep——", Beichuanji put the freshly baked toast, placed the cut small persimmons on the plate, and walked to the dining table with the plate and put it away. Turn off the natural gas stove, pour the hot milk boiled in the pot into three glasses, and place them next to the dinner plate. After doing this, Beichuanji hung the apron he took off on the wall, opened the door and walked into the bedroom. Breathing quietly, Kitagawa Temple looked gently at the mother and daughter sleeping on the bed, walked over gently, leaned down, and stared at Kitagawa Mirai. Five seconds passed... Ten seconds passed... There was only a slight sound of breathing in the bedroom. Twenty seconds... Thirty seconds... Suddenly, the rhythmic breathing began to become disordered. Kitagawa Mirai opened his eyes angrily, his big watery eyes revealing dissatisfaction. "Why didn't I wake you up?" Beichuan Temple asked expressionlessly. Beichuan Mirai nodded grandly. "Since you're awake, it's up to you to decide whether to get up or not." Mirai Kitagawa pouted and was about to speak: "Huh?!!" Kitagawa Temple straightened up: "Okay, it's time to get up? The milk will be cold after a while." Mirai Kitagawa touched his lips and giggled. After a while, he gently pushed the little man next to him, and Kitagawa Mirai leaned down and kissed him on the face: "Xiangli, it's time to get up, we have to go to school today." ......... Put the prepared omelet, rapeseed, and steak into the lunch box one by one, put the rice in it, and cover it. Kitagawa Temple looked up at the fragrant pears that were almost finished at the table: "Pear, vegetables." "Ugh... I know dad." Kitagawa Fragrant Pear put the small persimmon into his mouth with a sad face. ………… Kitagawa Temple drove Kitagawa Kaori to school and handed it to Takihara Nanako: "I'll leave the pear to you." "Don't worry, leave it to me, Brother Temple." Kitagawa Kaori raised her excited red little head Face: "Aunt Nanako!" Takihara Nanako took Kitagawa Kaori's little hand and walked to the classroom: "I have to call the teacher." ......... "Tera-kun, are you going to daddy today?" Kitagawa Mirai blinked his big eyes and tilted his head and asked. Kitagawa Temple nodded, then shook his head: "Go to the airport to pick up Eri first, and then go to Kamiya's house." After arriving at the parking lot of the airport, the phone rang after a while. Kitagawa Mirai picked up the phone and looked at "Eri" on it and chuckled. "Hello? Brother Temple!" "It's me..." "Ah, future sister-in-law. Where is Brother Temple?" "Next door." "Oh..." The voice on the other end of the phone was a bit noisy, "I'm almost at the exit, where are you?" Kitagawa Temple answered the phone: "It's in the parking lot, come over by yourself." After a while, Kitagawa Eri rushed over with her suitcase. Beichuan Temple looked down at the suitcase that had fallen on the ground, and then looked at his sister who was holding him in his arms. He raised his hand and was stunned. "You are so old, you don't know how to be ladylike." "Hey, hey, hey..." ......... After receiving Kitagawa Eri, Kitagawa Mirai and Kitagawa Eri sat in the back row, chatting about the interesting things Kitagawa Eri encountered abroad. Beichuan Temple listened quietly, occasionally interjecting a question. The chatting time passed quickly, and in a blink of an eye, we arrived at Kamiya's house, and Kitagawaji honked the horn. Chihiro Kamiya pulled Haru Kamiya and ran out. Mirai Kitagawa opened the car door and complained: "Mom, how come you are so grown up and still act like a child." Then Chihiro Kamiya flicked her in the head. Kamiyaji got into the passenger seat, closed the door and fastened his seat belt, looked at Kitagawaji, and nodded. Beichuan Temple also nodded. Kamiyaji leaned on the back of his chair and looked forward. Beichuanji started the car. ………… "You are here." Kitagawa Rin opened the door and smiled at Kamiya Chihiro. On the shoe cabinet, a little puppet is waving with its round little hands, and a light golden word bubble is hung on its head, which is dotted with the word "Welcome". "Poi-chan!" Kamiya Chihiro picked up Nishikujo Poi-chan and rubbed her face against her. Poi-po struggled and jumped into Kitagawa Mirai's arms. "Well..." Chihiro Kamiya looked unhappy, like a child who had his favorite toy taken away. "Ahem," Kamiyaji coughed, "Chihiro, change your shoes quickly and help, there isn't much time." "Ji——!" Kamiyaji ignored her. ………… At two o'clock in the afternoon, the sun began to shift westward. Eri Kitagawa stretched and said, "Finally the decoration is finished." Eri Kitagawa frowned when he saw it and said nothing. Eri Kitagawa shuddered. Kitagawa Rin looked at the clock on the wall: "Tera, it's almost time to pick up Kori." "Okay, Mom." ......... "Aunt Nanako, are you going to my grandma's house today too?" Kitagawa Kori raised her little face and asked Takihara Nanako, who was standing beside her waiting for her father. Takihara Nanako touched Xiangli's little head: "I told you to call the teacher... Not only aunties are going, but many aunties are going today." Kitagawa Xiangli blinked her eyes, not expecting who Aunt Nanako was talking about. ………… In Beichuanji's car, Xiangli asked enthusiastically: "Dad, Aunt Nanako just said that many aunts are coming today, why?" Beichuanji glanced at the person in the rearview mirror who was not Takihara Nanako had the nerve to secretly stick out her tongue: "Because today is a special day." Kitagawa Xiangli asked doubtfully: "What is a special day?" "You will know when you get home." Kitagawa Temple gave up. ………… The sound of the car stalling came into the room, and Xiangli's crisp and cheerful laughter made everyone in the room ready. "Pop--" "Pap-pap--" "Pap--" The sound similar to firecrackers startled Xiangli, and the little guy hugged his father's neck tightly. Colored films and colored satin fell one after another, and Kitagawa Xiangli could clearly see the people in the room. "Grandma Rin, Grandma Chihiro, Grandpa, Aunt Eri, Aunt Pity, Aunt Hitomi, Aunt Ai, Aunt Saki, Aunt Mio, and Aunt Salted Egg Blossom..." Kitagawa Kaori greeted them one by one with a happy smile, and the name Nakajima Mihana made Nakajima Mihana look embarrassed. People in the room laughed. Beichuanji carried Xiangli to the decorated living room. Colorful ribbons were hung on the ceiling. TVs and sofas were placed against the wall. There were three or four tables put together in the middle of the living room, and there were all kinds of tempting delicacies. The big cake in the middle attracted all the attention of Xiangli: "It's so beautiful~" Eri Kitagawa smiled and urged to light the candles, and then turned off the lights. Nishikujo pitifully put the birthday crown she had cut out bit by bit on Xiangli's head, with the words "Make a wish quickly" on her head. Kitagawa Xiangli obediently closed her eyes: "I hope my dearest family members will be happy and joyful every day." Then he blew out all the candles with a "huh-" breath. "Happy birthday! Xiangli~" ...... {"NickName":"Emperor Abandoned Heavenly Way","UserId":314571720}

"Buzzing——" The mobile phone placed on the stool cushion vibrated twice, which did not affect the person sitting in front of the drawing board who was concentrating on painting. If someone sees the paintings on the drawing paper, they will definitely be confused. This seems to be in a classroom in a dilapidated old school. The classroom is full of traces that seem to have been burned by fire, and there are metal bars left by burnt desks everywhere. Under a certain window, a broken puppet held a barbed and ferocious sledgehammer and smashed it into a pool of black water, causing splashes of liquid to fly away. This is a pencil drawing. The artist's skills are good and the picture looks very real. However, the whole picture is a little dark and the content of the picture is confusing. But the owner of the painting slowly stopped writing, carefully looked at the layout of the painting, closed his eyes, opened them again, and nodded with satisfaction. The owner of the painting took off the painting paper, slowly put it in the photo frame, and put it in his backpack. Then he yawned and stretched, soothing his sore waist after sitting all morning. The beautiful figure stretches and draws an alluring curve. Picked up the phone, with a faint smile on his face, and lay on the sofa. No, maybe the word "paralysis" is better. At this time, the female painter is like a salted fish, completely unable to recognize the appearance of the young woman who was full of literary and artistic colors a minute ago. Click to unlock the phone screen, there are three unread messages. Mr. Chiba: Eri, is your work good? It's too late for the exhibition review! Rin's mother: Eri, Xiangli's birthday is coming soon, please remember to arrange a time to come back. Brother Si: Xiangli's birthday is in half a month. Book your flight tickets in advance and let me know when you will come back. "Well, it's Xiangli's birthday again? Time flies so fast..." Kitagawa Eri put down her phone and closed her eyes as she recalled her cute little niece. About a week after celebrating Kitagawa Kori's birthday last year, Kitagawa Eri left and returned here to continue her studies. Since the death of his father Kenichi, Brother Temple has always had a gloomy look. When did he start to change? Kitagawa Eri can't remember. I only remember that during the New Year of the third year of junior high school, Brother Si unexpectedly gave her lucky money, and her life slowly changed. She was interested in painting when she was in junior high school. Kitagawa Eri's brother Kitagawaji found a rising star in the painting world at that time —— Chiba Hotaru to be her instructor. Although at first it was strange where Brother Temple could get so much money to hire Teacher Chiba Hotaru to give her guidance, Eri felt warm in her heart. Brother Si has always loved me. Later, Brother Si actually found someone! It is a cute, beautiful, pure and generous girl named Mirai Kamiya. She is also her current sister-in-law. The number of members in the family began to increase. Poor sister, the little puppet just painted, is the first extra member of the family, Nishikujo is pitiful. Later, my future sister-in-law came over from time to time. Finally, Sister Mihua came. Oh my God! Nakajima is a flower! National Queen! Idol! There are also Sisters Nagase and Makie who Brother Temple secretly hid from me and brought home at some time. Later, after I graduated from junior high school, I found out that Brother Si was doing such a dangerous job - a spiritual master! Brother Temple is omnipotent! "Brother Temple is the best in the world!" Kitagawa Eri waved her hand subconsciously. "Pa tah..." The phone flew out with the force of the habitual swing of the arm. Kitagawa Eri opened her eyes. Blink, blink. Why is it so dark? He stood up gropingly, picked up his phone, and looked at the time on it... Huh? Is the phone broken? I remember it was only three o'clock in the afternoon? Why is it seven o'clock in the evening? ? With the help of the lighting function of the mobile phone, Kitagawa Eri turned on the light switch. The room lit up. "Ah... I fell asleep?" The dazed Kitagawa Eri looked at the darkened sky outside, and finally realized the fact that she was lying on the sofa and fell asleep. "Gu, Gu——" Touching his belly, Kitagawa Eri opened the refrigerator and took out a cup of yogurt and a cup of pudding. "Order takeout!" There are meat and vegetables in the refrigerator, which were bought by Nakajima Mihana who came to see her not long ago. It is said to be a request from Beichuan Temple. But Kitagawa Eri didn't move at all. It's not because I can't cook. I just don't want to do it. Yes, I just simply don't want to do it. After closing the refrigerator door, Kitagawa Eri took her mobile phone, which had not broken its screen even after being thrown out, and began to choose her favorite dinner. "Buzz——" Four unread messages. 16:07 Mr. Chiba: Eri? If you see it, just reply! 17:13 Mr. Chiba: Eri? Asleep? Teacher Chiba: [Call not answered] 19:22 Teacher Chiba: Eri, the deadline is half an hour away. Aren't you going to participate in this art exhibition? Kitagawa Eri: Participate! Join! I'll send the scan of the painting right now! Kitagawa Eri hurriedly ran into the studio, opened her backpack and took out the photo frame, skillfully took the painting from it and put it into the scanner. As the scan was uploaded, the painting was finally sent to Chiba Hotaru with fifteen minutes left. Mr. Chiba: ... Kitagawa Eri: [Picture/Hey hehe] Putting down the mouse, Kitagawa Eri walked back to the living room with a sigh of relief, picked up the pudding on the table and ate it. Hmm... Huh? You seem to have forgotten something? Kitagawa Eri thought while biting her spoon. What the hell... ………… Half a month passed quickly. Nothing major happened in the middle. I was lucky enough to catch the last train for the art exhibition review and passed it smoothly. Kitagawa Eri held the noodle bucket and a fork, picking up the instant noodles and stuffing them into her mouth. It's one o'clock in the morning. Kitagawa Eri was about to take a plane after finishing this bucket of instant noodles. Originally, I booked a flight at nine o'clock the day before yesterday, but the alarm clock I set was too close to the alarm time every morning, so Kitagawa Eri, who was lying on the bed, pressed it. I slept until I woke up at noon and realized, The plane had taken off! Then I was taught a lesson by Beichuanji on the phone. In order not to miss the delayed flight again, Kitagawa Eri specially booked a flight in the early morning. It can't be too late if I don't sleep, right? Kitagawa Eri thought so. When I arrived at the airport, I sat in the waiting room and played with my mobile phone for half an hour. As I expected, I heard the announcement of the flight check-in. Kitagawa Eri sat comfortably in her seat, preparing to have a good sleep. Putting his backpack on his stomach to prevent him from catching cold, Kitagawa Eri leaned back on the chair and closed his eyes. Isn't that right? Why is the bag so flat? Kitagawa Eri opened her backpack... "Where did Xiangli's gift go?" It was a gift box containing a bear plush toy. Kitagawa Eri rummaged through her backpack again. No. Take off your luggage and open it. No. Kitagawa Eri sat down dejectedly, thinking carefully about whether she had lost it. Suddenly he slapped his thigh. "It's broken! I put it on the living room table!" Kitagawa Eri slumped on her seat. Anyway, I can't go back and get it now, so I'll get another one. Then he closed his eyes and fell asleep. ………… Kitagawa Eri was gently pushed awake by the flight attendant. "This passenger, the plane has landed. Thank you for taking this ride." Kitagawa Eri took her luggage and called Kitagawa Temple. "Hello? Brother Temple!" "It's me..." Mirai Kitagawa's voice came from the other end of the phone. "Ah, future sister-in-law. Where is Brother Temple?" "It's next to it." "Oh," Kitagawa Eri pulled the suitcase and saw the exit gate from a distance, "I'm almost at the exit, where are you?" "In the parking lot, come over by yourself." Kitagawa Temple's voice came from the other end of the phone. …… Kitagawa Eri pulled her suitcase to the parking lot and spotted Kitagawa Temple and Kitagawa Mirai standing next to the Kitagawa family's car from a distance. He grabbed his suitcase and ran over quickly, throwing himself into Beichuan Temple's arms. Then, I was hit hard on the head. "You're so old, you don't know how to be ladylike." "Hey, hey..." Kitagawa Eri touched her head and giggled.

PS: I heard that some people can't get enough of it———— ………… The living room was filled with laughter. Xiangli was held in her arms by her father, and she cut the cake with a plastic knife. Chihiro Kamiya was holding the first cut piece of cake, taking out a small mouthful of cake with cream on a small spoon, and fed it to Xiangli's mouth with a smile. Kitagawa Xiangli cut the big cake with a serious face, opened her mouth and bit down on the spoon, but her evil-hearted grandma took the opportunity to take it back, and the cream was dotted on her nose. "Hahahaha..." "Grandma Qianxun, bad." Kitagawa Xiangli pouted her mouth and protested dissatisfied. ………… Everyone took the divided cakes and each person scooped out a small spoonful and fed it to the little birthday girl. Xiangli welcomes all comers, with cream all over his face. Nishikujo climbed onto Xiao Xiangli's shoulder, stood up unsteadily, wiped the foreign matter on the baby's face with a napkin, and waved the word bubble "Don't move Xiangli, Cream" on his head. ………… Eri Kitagawa and Miuka Nakajima were sitting on the sofa, chatting with each other about the interesting things they encountered. The two sisters Chiba Hotaru and Chiba Cura came over with plates. Kitagawa Eri stood up to say hello, gave up her seat to the Chiba sisters, and went to find her friends from middle school and high school. ………… Takihara Nanako is now an elementary school teacher, Eri has also started her painting career, Sakurai Saki, Otomo Ai and Sakura Mio have also found jobs they like. The five of them are still teasing each other about whether they are looking for someone as they did when they were children. Asamiya Hitomi unexpectedly ran to be an intern reporter, and was secretly standing in the corner alone, telling Asamiya Eisei and Kamishu Makie about the hardships of running around. ………… Kitagawaji handed the fragrant pear to Kitagawa Rin who was about to hold his granddaughter, and went to find Kamiyaji with two wine glasses. Kamiyaji was also alone at this time. When he saw Kitagawaji approaching, he nodded. Kitagawaji also nodded and handed one of the cups to Kamiyaji. The two clinked glasses and sat together in silence. After a while, Kamiyaji stood up and took a piece of cake, looked at Kitagawa Temple, and turned his head. Kitagawaji nodded and led Kamiyaji to the shrine of Kitagawa Kenichi. ………… Happy time always passes quickly. Soon it was time for Xiangli to go to bed. A good routine prompted Kitagawa Xiangli to yawn slightly, clenched her fists and rubbed her eyes. Everyone saw that it was almost time, and after persuading Xiangli to go to bed, they all asked to leave. Kitagawaji took the car keys and prepared to send Kamiyaji and Kamiya Chihiro home. Kamiyaji looked at the car keys, then at the wine glass, and finally at Kitagawa Temple. Beichuan Temple tightened the key and nodded. ………… The speed of the car was neither fast nor slow, and there was no sign that the driver had been drunk. Chihiro Kamiya, who was sitting in the back row, fell asleep leaning on Haru Kamiya, muttering "Poor Kawaii-chan" and "Kori, come to grandma's house". ………… Sending his father-in-law and mother-in-law home, Beichuanji drove back to Beichuan's house to pick up Mirai and Xiangli back to their new house. Kitabian Mirai heard the sound of the car and went out to pick him up: "Xiangli has fallen asleep. Mom said that she should let Xiangli sleep here today. She hasn't held Xiangli in her arms for a long time." Beichuanji nodded: "Then let's all sleep here. Get up early and go home tomorrow." He walked in the door. The living room has been tidied up, and furniture such as the TV and sofa have been put back into place. Kitagawaji stared expressionlessly at Kitagawa Eri, who was sleeping soundly on the sofa, then looked back at the mother-in-law and daughter-in-law who had already entered the kitchen, and reached out to grab Eri's cheek. "It hurts, it hurts, it hurts!" Eri, who was sleeping soundly, screamed in pain. When she opened her eyes and saw that it was Kitagawaji who was holding her, she shrank back to the sofa timidly: "Brother Tai, what are you doing?" Beichuanji said nothing and pointed to the kitchen expressionlessly. Hearing the noise, Kitagawa Rin said funny: "Eri has been on a plane all morning today, let her rest. Eri, you should go to sleep too." "Long live Rin's mother." Eri Kitagawa happily ran back to the bedroom. ………… Mirai Beichuan was lying in the arms of Beichuanji, with the sleeping Xiangli behind him. Kitagawaji grabbed the little hand drawing circles on his chest, stood up and gently carried Xiangli to Kitagawa Rin's room. After returning, he turned around, locked the door with his backhand, and looked at Beichuan Mirai. Mirai suddenly had a bad premonition and slowly shrank back: "Tera, what do you want to do?" "Don't you want to do it?" Beichuan Temple slowly stepped forward and pressed Mirai Kitagawa on the bed. Mirai nudged Beichuanji to struggle. "Yes, but now..." "Don't you want to?" Beichuan Temple asked again. "Well..." Mirai Kitagawa hugged the person's neck resignedly, "I want to." ………… Kitagawa Rin drank coffee and remotely instructed a motivated junior through email. Suddenly stopped typing on the keyboard and listened carefully. "It's great to be young~" Shaking his head in amusement, he was thinking about when he would have a lovely grandson. ………… {"NickName":"Emperor Abandoned Heavenly Way","UserId":314571720}

It's funny to say that I came into contact with this book not because of the author's fame, nor because of Qidian. Com, but just because of an accidental opportunity. I was in my second year of high school and I was so bored that I bought another MP4 player. Then I forgot to ask customer service to help me download some novels. I regretted it a bit. I was afraid that I would find nothing when I bought it. When the goods arrived, I opened it with an uneasy feeling. There were only a few books in it. It wasn't too much, but it was enough to read one. The small square grid showed a faint light, 11,000 pages. I didn't even know the title of the book at the time. I read it all the way. Unfortunately, the chapters in the MP4 were incomplete and interrupted. At that time, I only saw the parents who went to save the future on Okinawa. When I was reading the novel, I also made up my mind that I wanted to be a tough boy like Kitagawaji. I would handle things steadily, not anxious, and be good for my family, unlike the sea of ​​people. Ups and downs, drifting with the flow, in the boring daily life of school, the fun this book brought to me will always be impressed in my heart. During that busy time, there were hard studies, strict management of the school, and my act of secretly reading novels on MP4 seems like just yesterday, just like what the school radio said every afternoon, time flies, time flies by, happy time is always short-lived, classmates, we will see you next time, now I have I have graduated from my alma mater, and I have been re-enrolling for a year since I was a freshman this year. I have grown up a lot by playing around and stumbling around. When I was a teenager, I would think about everything for three minutes. Later, after my MP4 player broke down one after another, I forgot about the boy who said I wanted to be a boy with a personality like Kitagawa-kun. Now I want to pick it up again. Although it is impossible for me to become like Kitagawa-san, I will take it one step at a time. The young people in Wuling are struggling with their heads, and there are countless red silk songs. If you want to buy sweet-scented osmanthus wine, it will not be like a youth wandering. My former classmates have also separated, and my best friend has also left for Zhuhai. The people around me have changed one after another, and there is a huge sea of ​​people. I am really lucky that I have met you here, Beichuan Temple. If there is no banquet in the world of separation in high school, then I can say now that we meet again everywhere in life. My current mood is really indescribable, hi? Long time no see, maybe I want to give you a bear hug. At that time, I really thought that I would never read this novel again. In other words, I only saw one of this novel back then, just a fragment. Let me introduce it again. I am 19 years old this year, Kitagawa-san and Kamiya-san. It's nice to meet you. Maybe our last encounter was not that pleasant. It might have been full of a little unpleasantness, or it might have been hasty. A little while ago, we didn't say goodbye when we separated, but it doesn't matter that we met again. When I saw the last chapter, I really wanted to make up a long, long paragraph, but unfortunately I could only enter 150 words in it. Happy wedding, yes, happy wedding, you are married. The story about you is over, but mine is not, so now I want to invite you to see how I slowly become a person like you. The regret of that year has come to an end today, January 17, 2024. Happy ending, grand wedding. I wish you a happy wedding. When I remembered that my sister was called "Tennisan" in the first chapter of the story, I immediately searched for major websites non-stop, and finally found you at the starting point. I immediately downloaded and registered an account to attend your wedding. It shouldn't be too late now. Tera-kun, Kamiya-san, haha, and Xiaopoi, Sister Ma Gong, the future is very long, we still have the chance to meet, there are many words to say, but let's stop here, the world is very big, we will see you in the future 😜

Unfortunately, I waited for the aerobics program as always, hoping that the next backflip would be more handsome. In the opening scene of an outing to fight monsters, I managed to do a backflip and land perfectly! But he was completely ignored by Beichuan. Poi Po catches up with Beichuan Demon King and grabs his ear and says: "Didn't you see that I succeeded in the backflip! Praise me!" The Demon King glanced at Po Po Chuan and jumped to the ground again, "Oh, that's great." Poi Po Po's self-confidence was severely hit and suggested that the Demon King be humanely destroyed.

Salted fish turned over: "emmmmm" Kitagawa Eri kicked off the quilt on her body and muttered vaguely, "Brother Temple... Is invincible in the world." He didn't know what he was dreaming about. Then turned over.

"Ah... It's so hot... I really want to stay lazily in the countryside, lying on the tatami, listening to the warm summer wind blowing the wind chimes, and then eating a piece of watermelon that has just been frozen in cold water..." Yusaku Hojo thought lazily, well, since the Kitagawa family brought him back from the orphanage, his name has become Yusaku Kitagawa. Actually, Kitagawa Yusaku didn't know why he sighed like this. Maybe he didn't want to look too different, or maybe he was just moaning for no reason? I don't know. Yusaku didn't want to try to figure out what Yusaku-kun was thinking about last minute. After all, it's too troublesome to think about anything... Slow down, slow down~ Yusaku worked hard to mobilize the muscles in his thighs and waist, letting them help him slowly change from a paralyzed posture to sitting cross-legged. He looked out the window, where the picture began to slightly distort due to the heat, and began to think. Are you too salty? Am I infected by my little aunt? Thinking about how his aunt and her group of friends were like a cult all day long, shouting something like "Brother Temple is the best in the world" and "Brother Temple is invincible in the world" whenever his father was mentioned, Kitagawa Yusaku had the urge to cover his face. I don't want to be that salty egg at all! Kitagawa Yusaku thought sincerely. No, it has nothing to do with rattan or anything like that! Yusaku tried to redirect his thoughts and start thinking about other things. Speaking of which, why did Yuna-sama ask me to call her sister? It was clear that Xiangli called her baby mom... Is there any difference?

Except for the protagonist, are all the female supporting characters in the book? The others are either financial backers or passers-by or villains. Are there no other outstanding men in this world? It feels like a wolf has entered the sheepfold. To be honest, such a refreshing article is a bit disgusting. 🤫 This book has a single female protagonist and so many female supporting characters. It can be seen that the female supporting characters also have a crush on the male protagonist. Are they just treating the female supporting characters as tools? In fact, the characters of the protagonists in many novels are very weird and twisted 😅 and they don't feel like normal people, and the sense of substitution is a bit poor. Beichuan Goshenkai reminds me of rice circle culture, it looks like some kind of cult organization. .

I really couldn't stand the chapters after it was released. Before it was released, the protagonist gave me the impression that "no more nonsense, just go up and punch me." Then the chapters after it was released were about how this person died, and how that person died. Look at this note, and look at that note. The plot is slow, the content is bland, and the images are inconsistent, making it uncomfortable to watch. I write this just to mark it so that I won't see this book again next time.

I have read more than 100 chapters, and I feel pretty good, but there is one small problem. When I read it, I felt like I was not reading a novel, but the whole process of a horror puzzle game. I killed monsters and dropped notes. There are related paper records in different rooms. There are also records about the ritual process and certain traditions, as well as rosters. Let's not mention the notes for the time being. Other things They are generally kept in a centralized manner, and these records are especially like those in horror games that complete the world view. The origin of so-and-so's name, so-and-so's legend, so-and-so's sacrificial process, the kind written specifically for outsiders to see. Just go to site B and find a longer, more played full-process horror game video and you'll know how I feel. It's very funny.

Personally, I feel that if the protagonist of the Happiness Sect wants to be completely dismantled, he needs help from the top (through Liangzi's network?) Because this Happiness Sect involves illegal drugs (drugs), and official intervention is definitely needed in this regard.

I quite like it. I feel like it's a novel that has a good beginning, but I feel like there are a little too many female characters, too many to be normal, and there's this sense of dissonance. So far it feels very interesting and pretty to watch, but it does have some minor flaws, but they are all acceptable. In view of the supernatural works I have seen before, they are all good in the early stage but collapse in the later stage. I think this kind of supernatural thing is still relatively difficult to write. Please give your best, the author ^0^~

When I read Chapter 52, except for the male protagonist, all the men who appear in this book are villains, and there are no women. I don't know what the author was thinking 😥

It's rare to see a good book recommended on the home page. The combination of supernatural and light novels is quite interesting. The scary parts are terrifying, and the interesting and relaxing parts are not too boring. It feels like a monster at the time, and the heroine is well portrayed! Although there may not necessarily be such a person in reality, according to the two-dimensional/light novel, such a character is not surprising. I hope the male and female protagonists can be together! It seems that the protagonist has become a bit invincible recently, resulting in a much less scary atmosphere. However, I believe that the author can handle the balance here, and to be honest, I will only feel a pity if it ends unfinished. I will still follow the author's next film!

Alas, I have finished reading it in the past two days. It seems that it will take a while. I am giving you two monthly passes. I hope the quality of the novels will continue to be maintained.

Finished spreading flowers! ! ! Thank you for your hard work, author! This is also the first book that I read and finished at the starting point. To be honest, I didn't expect it to end so suddenly and so early 😜 It is indeed a work that makes people smile without knowing it. Compared with all kinds of popular fast food It's a cool novel. Occasionally, there can be a work with a male protagonist who is not arrogant, a female protagonist with a decent IQ, and a supporting character with a brilliant personality. It is "just the right amount of fun", especially if it is a contemporary Japanese theme that is relatively niche in general. I feel like I am reading it with my heart. I feel happy and warm~ I really like this style of light heart-warming + light sweetness, and I thank the author for the meticulous craftsmanship and just the right sense of proportion in the article. It is no exaggeration to say that Mirai Kamiya is one of the heroines I most want to marry in the online novels I have read during this period~ Although I don't know how to join the book club, I want to continue to follow the author's future works~ Finally, I want to say that Nishikujo is the best in the world! !

Very well written, a light novel that feels like a light novel

The author and our radio have met, and it turns out that he is a Chinese time traveler with facial paralysis and an almighty Japanese high school student, and he can also be upright. This kind of protagonist is really great. It's just that the protagonist's personality is a bit straight (whispering), maybe it's a professional habit? It is recommended to make the fighting scenes full and add the second line (as expected, you still have to shout the name of the skill loudly to get the fire)

When I saw this work before, except for the beginning of Kamishiro Village, I felt that it was nothing special, but now I see Xiangli here. She was very distressed. Wearing a red and white cotton-padded jacket, she was carrying the promised woman on her back, searching in vain under the house for the person and life she was waiting for. But when I read it, what touched me the most was Chapter 378, when Karri Kamishiro read the letter written to her by Inagaki Shizu. Seeing that scene, I couldn't help but want to cry that day. Their attitude towards life, their friendship, their experiences, and my envy for them, I can't express in words. Finally, I just want to say to the author that the ending is really good, warm and wonderful.

Chao found that there were many books on the bookshelf that were finished before they were read.

To be honest, the author's writing is really good, and the style of this book is exactly the same as the title! Come on!

This is my first time to subscribe to an online novel. Just to say a few words, I feel that this book needs to be read over a period of time, otherwise reading a hundred chapters in a row will feel a bit boring. . But when I watch it again after a few hours, the attractive feeling will appear again, so it's still okay. . .

Let me tell you what I think of this novel. Novels in the ghost story genre are a niche genre. But there are indeed some readers who like it, such as Ghost Blows Out the Lamp and Tomb Raider Notes, which are relatively famous. However, although I know these two novels, they are not very popular for me personally. After all, everyone has their own preferences. I prefer Hell Apartment and the author. Generally, the cool thing about system novels is that the protagonist can quickly upgrade through the system. Although this novel is a system novel, the main story has basically nothing to do with the system novel. The system is more like a means for the protagonist to upgrade, rather than the focus. The main focus of the novel is on reasoning and the character creation of the protagonist, a straight man, which is a different approach, but I have to say that it is indeed very attractive. The last book that I remember so clearly about The Straight Man was the Legend of Masters and Katu written by Fang Xiang. It makes readers constantly curious about when the protagonist will be single. Of course, reasoning is also a very important part. I saw the shadow of Japanese horror games in the previous stories, and I have to say that this novel is very attractive to a certain group of horror novel readers.

Half black but not black, half white but not white, the work is a good one, but I just can't accept this kind of mixture of reality and fantasy. The part of relaxed love and tears is perfect. The serious part is completely realized by repeatedly emphasizing the description. The 16-year-old setting further makes the sense of disobedience break through the limit. I chased the villain from the next book. There is no unnecessary emphasis. I am clear about my position. I am calmer inside and the style is more elite. The description is better than this book.

I only have one feeling after reading Chapter 150. Everyone likes to write diaries.

That... Mei Dou's new book is 404, that's it, don't ask, I'm sorry, everyone

Off topic: First of all, I would like to thank {"NickName":"Mo Youchenshuang","UserId":336046840} (Hanpi Xiangnan in the group) and {"NickName":"Ling Hanba","UserId":228906174} (lmz Future in the group) for giving me some inspiration, so I decided to write about it. Then thank you {"NickName":"Mo Youchenshuang","UserId":336046840} (Kirishima Gonan) {"NickName":"Linghanba","UserId":228906174} (Kamidai Mirai) for your friendly appearance. ——，                           ————————————————————     ， When she first debuted, she was hailed as a genius girl appointed by Master Beichuan, a top-notch exorcist. She was also Master Beichuan's biological sister. With her good looks, she attracted countless fans as soon as she debuted. After time, she also proved to people that she can do it with her superb talent and learning ability, not because of her appearance, not because he is Beichuanji's biological sister, but because of her talent and talent. In front of others, she is a talented painter and a beautiful goddess... But behind others. "Ah~ Brother Si~ I'm hungry, help me order a takeaway." After a long while, there was no reply, and a person's voice echoed in the huge house. (Small details, please don't disturb me) "Ah~ I forgot, Brother Si and his future sister-in-law traveled around the world, and now I don't know which country they are in... No, even if Brother Si is here, I don't think he would tolerate my behavior like this... Fortunately, he is not here, forget it~ Just order one by yourself." I ordered a takeout casually, and threw the leftover takeout box on the table from yesterday to the ground. I sat quietly on the table waiting for the takeout to arrive. Waiting quietly alone, I couldn't help but think of Brother Si's kindness. Brother Si is very gentle, but he will not spoil her. Whenever he has any trauma, he is always more anxious than anyone else... Except for sometimes scaring her with a cane or even beating her, apart from this, Brother Si is really a perfect man. As I think about it, my thoughts let go. "I really want to find a man who is as good as Tera-ge, but one who won't scare me with a cane..." Eri has even begun to think about the sweet time with him... In fact, because of Eri's appearance, she has many suitors, but because she has a brother like Tera, her requirements are very high, and no suitor can catch her eye, so she is still single until now. The doorbell interrupted her thoughts... She took the takeout, ignored the takeaway boy's nymphomaniacal gaze, closed the door, and found a boyfriend who was just like Brother Si, even if he was a little bit different. A few months later... Looking at the shy boy in front of her, Eri became slightly interested. In the past few weeks, Eri told Brother Tera and Mirai Kamiya that she wanted to find a boyfriend. Mirai Kamiya said that he must help Eri find a blind date that meets his standards. Kitagawa Temple's original words were: "With your salty looks, I don't think anyone will want you." In the end, Mirai Kamiya really gave her two pieces of information, and the one in front of her was the first candidate. Eri looked at the handsome boy in front of her with interest. She wanted this boy to introduce him first, but he kept blushing and couldn't speak, so she had to introduce herself first. "Hello, my name is Kitagawa Eri, I am a painter, I like to draw..." After Eri finished introducing herself, the boy in front of her raised her head, "I... I... My name is Kirishima Gonan, I am a writer by profession, and I like... Reading comics." Exactly the same as the appearance, the guy in front of me who calls himself Kirishima Gonan is a bit girly even in his introduction. After a period of in-depth understanding and many meetings, Eri felt that this boy was not suitable for her, so she sent Kirishima Gonan a good guy card and became ordinary friends. A few weeks later, the second candidate introduced by the future sister-in-law also met with Eri. Completely different from Kirishima Gonan, the boy in front of him was the first to introduce himself. "My name is Kamishiro Mirai, a professional cartoonist, and I like reading comics..." After the boy Erimi finished his introduction, he also started his own introduction. After many meetings, Eri had a very good impression of this boy, and they quickly established a relationship between boyfriend and girlfriend. Mirai Jindai is a cartoonist, and Eri is a painter. The two often communicate together about their daily work. The relationship has been established for a long time, and Mirai Kamishiro also knows how bad Eri's behavior habits are, but he has always been used to Eri. Eri is also very satisfied with this boyfriend, and even once made her think that he was Brother Temple. During this period, she also discovered an interesting thing. Her first blind date, Kirishima Konan, and Mirai Kamishiro were very good friends. They also cooperated with each other at work. Konan wrote stories and Mirai drew comics. At first, Konan was angry about this matter and refused to help Mirai write stories. Until... He also met his true love-Momona Yoko. After some time, Brother Temple informed Eri that he and her sister-in-law were coming back and asked her to pick them up at 9 o'clock tomorrow morning. Because she has a boyfriend, Eri's room is finally clean, and she finally calms down after being distracted all day long. Beichuan Temple was also shocked when he knew this change, but he still accepted the reality that had become a fact, and promised her not to beat her with a cane or scare her in the future. At 8 o'clock the next day, Eri got up unusually early and took Jindai Mirai to the airport, accompanied by a pair of Kirishima Konan and Momona Yoko. Nine o'clock... Three faces that Eri was very familiar with got off the plane. "Brother Si, welcome home." Tears burst into my eyes... (Follow-up content will be posted in the comment area)

I have some suggestions. Don't let the system speak. Isn't it better to just let it be a cold dead thing? It's not that you can't do it if you have wisdom, but you just feel uncomfortable. A slight change will make you feel comfortable. (It's so embarrassing to have levels like elementary and advanced. It would be more interesting if you give stars⭐️ to the game system) I'm not asking the author to change it. I'm not that shameless. I'm just putting forward my own reading experience. I hope I can learn from it. Don't criticize me😄

I also started to feel arrogant, and I actually dared to reward the author. (Although it's only five yuan ( •̀∀•́ ))