Is There No God in the World? My National Master Is a True Immortal!

The first chapters are okay, but the performance in the previous chapters and the following chapters looks very strange. Not even an emperor can find anyone with a bit of cultivation, even if it is a demon. As a result, the protagonist is so light that he is like a ghost. The main point is that the whole county is made into a human race by unknown people. How can this be a fake cultivation of immortality? It's everywhere. If you perform for the emperor twice and become an official, won't everyone in the country be harvested as human beings? This feeling is like watching the protagonist in an urban novel who is all alone. Officials say how powerful the protagonist is, but when the protagonist enters the city, he finds all kinds of immortal cultivators, spiritual masters, and superpowers flying around, which is very strange.

First of all, the author is indeed a newbie. It is his first time signing a contract to write a book, and there are many things he does not understand. For example, when it comes to stuck updates, asking for votes and promotions, etc. If the bosses think there is something wrong, you are welcome to mention it. There is no need to scold, the author is a fun person by nature. You can clearly distinguish between the inside and outside of the book. Secondly, although this book's grades are poor, as long as it doesn't say anything above, I will write it down. It has an outline and a plan, and the goal is one million words. It is purely for accumulating character. But there are always people in the group saying that if the collection is not enough, they will be raised to death? Does it mean you will be cut off if you don't follow up on reading? Then please ask those who are interested to collect and read it hehehe! Finally. . I seem to have been cheated, and I still can't go back. . I have to write all the 50,000-word manuscript! ! Don't work part-time, you will be unlucky. . .

Except for the emperor's role in the first few chapters, there is no trace of it in the next thirty or forty chapters. Why does the title of the book reflect this?

Some immortal cultivators appear and appear in such a big way that even ordinary people say they have seen them. Only the emperor was an atheist before he even met the male protagonist, and did not believe that there were real immortals in the world. Even the emperor himself stayed in the arena for many years. Don't you think it's a bit ridiculous? As if to build momentum for the male protagonist's fame, before the emperor meets the male protagonist, he must have only heard of the charlatan, so that when he meets the male protagonist, he can become his guest.

It can be seen that the author has ideas. But it's a pity that my ability is not good enough, so the writing is weird. To be honest, I always feel baffled when I look at it later, just like this plate of vinegar-wrapped dumplings. It's not that there's anything wrong with the logic, but it always feels like it's a bit abstract to read. It's like countless inexplicable elements forming a barely logical one.

1/Need to list the following text well. One is listing, which is the use of sequence and flashback narration. 2/ As for the world view, you know it yourself, but you don't know it clearly in writing. 3/As for the setting, the setting is good and there is it. If the result cannot be clicked or it is hard, it will be very uncomfortable 4/Now that you have written it, work hard to write it well and settle your emotions. I feel that your mind is very confused, up and down. 5/Don't do something for the sake of a certain scene. This can easily lead to readers being confused, the author having a climax in his head, and the novel being stiffly connected 6/When you are impatient, you need to slow down the most. Don't always try to convince the reader to accept it. This is not a question of acceptance or not. It is about setting 123 incremental stacking instead of 999. 7/Am I nagging, please stop talking. Sigh, I hope you can write well. I know the artistic conception you want to express, but the article cannot express it. Especially when I saw in this chapter that you said it was from the book circle, that you wrote for fun, I felt very uncomfortable.

After reading it for a long time, the interesting beginning and the subsequent plot have no connection at all, and I just ran away to waste. So it is better to cover the beginning in a few strokes, spend 2 chapters to finish it, and then start to waste away directly.

It's a pity that it was aimed at the master of the magic stick, and the result is indeed similar to the novel of Lan Ke Qiyuan, with the weird cultivation of immortality integrated into the middle. It has potential, but it seriously doesn't match the introduction and title of the book. Halfway through, the pace is too fast, it would be better to slow it down a bit

Why don't you write it? I think it's pretty good.

After Lan Ke met the Dragon King, his writing became worse and worse. He no longer had that casual feeling, and his combat power was no longer balanced. Anyway, it's just not handled well and I can't stand it anymore.

Dihua? Dihua has no skills and is just poisonous, so I won't watch it.

This is Qibaoer~ Although he is not my cat, he is the cutest in the world! If you are passing by, you can come to rua~ Please leave some suggestions by the way. Trolls, please go around and open the building alone. Cats can't see this~

? It was popular ten years ago. In terms of setting, I had practiced immortality before coming here. Then how can you coax people with such little means? Still in the court of a country. Unless it is completely out of spirit. And the plot written later. . . As mentioned below. It feels like the author wrote it without thinking about the details of the world view.

The plot is really not good. It was okay in the early stage, but dropped off a cliff in the later stage, and it was a bit too bland with no ups and downs.

Recommended, but almost finished choosing when I got stuck. How much do you want people to come in?

No, what is written behind this? Why do I feel that my writing has gotten worse and worse since I came out of the mountain village? The protagonist is like a different person, and he has hired a ghostwriter?