Why Does My Junior Sister Think Everyone Looks Like an Evil Cultivator?

Chapter 49 The pace is quite slow, and it will be a bit uncomfortable to follow updates. It's quite interesting, the NPC perspective is quite novel. Personally, I don't really like those time-travel games, because most of them always have something like "game server launch" and "player entry" at the end, and then the protagonist feels superior to the players. Traveling through time travel, most people should feel "enjoyed" and then ask for help. I see that there doesn't seem to be any plot to ask for help from the player. This book so far is the only one I have seen in the game where other "players" are not disgusted, and the players are not so smart. Some problems may may arise later in this book. The plot may be repetitive. It can only rely on misunderstandings between the heroine and other NPCs. It is interesting that the heroine has always misunderstood the male protagonist, but the misunderstanding may be revealed very slowly. It is interesting, but it is not so "cool". She did not find that the male protagonist is very powerful and not bad. Maybe it is not fully revealed until the end. Just like the kind of novel where the protagonist thinks he is not powerful and others know that he is powerful, in the end the protagonist may realize how powerful he is. I always wanted to see the protagonist get slapped in the face and realize how powerful he is, but the hero didn't do it. This article may bring up similar feelings.

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Many years later, facing the good and evil factions who came to encircle and suppress the sect, the players who were just having fun, and the junior brothers and sisters who were all spies, Su Ling'er, who has become the executive deputy master of the Guixi Sect, will think of that distant afternoon when the senior brother said that he would refine her into a fairy sword.

Have you ever entered the magic gate? Just scribble, taking it for granted.

The Pure Demon Sect regards human life as nothing but grass and fights endlessly. Woohoo, I'm already crying from fear.

The biggest problem with this book is that most of the players' enthusiasm only lasts a few months, and even the big bosses only have about a year. In one year, they haven't even cultivated a hair in the world of immortality. Su Ling'er was undercover and unknowingly. The senior brothers and sisters who were in seclusion in the sect never came out again.

It turned out to be "No matter how my junior sister thinks, everyone is an evil cultivator", I thought it was "No matter how my junior sister thinks, everyone is an evil cultivator"

The writing style is not particularly elegant, but it can explain things clearly The two lines of NPC and player are laid out in the game, and the real-life profile outside the game is also good The subject matter is interesting At least it is at the food and grass level, why is it not popular

A completely new subject, it is quite interesting to look at the "fourth natural disaster" such as players from the perspective of a "local" At the same time, the novel currently seems to have a lot of uncertain content, as if the author has not thought about how to write it First of all, this novel is to write a group portrait (a From the perspective of a small protagonist group), or dual protagonists but from the perspective of the heroine This is something to be clear about. My personal suggestion is the latter. After all, the author can tell that he is a newcomer, and his writing skills are a bit poor and the former cannot be controlled Secondly, it is the issue of emotional lines. Do the two protagonists have emotional lines directly? I personally feel that it can be added, otherwise the setting of setting the protagonist as a female protagonist would be a little worse, and the plot with many emotional lines can be easily unfolded. For example, the female protagonist becomes the male protagonist's AI desk pet, or the heroine electronically forces the male protagonist to marry. This kind of fun is still very interesting (fog), but this is my personal feeling, and the author needs to make his own choices Thirdly, this type of article recommends lowering the upper limit of force to a certain extent, no However, it is easy to end the story. This is the experience of old bookworms. Cultivation + online games are easy to end. Excessive combat power will make this type of novel extremely difficult to write. There is still a certain underlying conflict between online game novels and high combat power. As the combat power increases, there are too many things to complete. Therefore, it is simply recommended to limit the expansion of combat power to a certain extent, or even marginalize the combat power realm factor of cultivating immortals to a certain extent, and strengthen the label of "online games" The logic of signing (it is best to convert the label from "online games" to "games" and abandon some of the shortcomings of online games) For novels, combat power is not important, the key is the plot, or the completeness of the "story" Everything in the novel serves the plot, and the plot cannot be allowed to serve the setting This is why I suggest having an emotional line, because this way it can be ended easily, so this There is no need for this novel to step into the big pits that may appear in this subject That's all I have summarized so far The rest are just common problems that new authors will encounter, such as poor rhythm and insufficient writing power But it doesn't matter as long as you control the core. Remember that the plot is the most important. The outline and writing rhythm all serve the plot. Only by telling the story well can the story be completed

There is no necessary relationship between talking about water and good-looking. This book is actually more obvious. It seems that there are so many words in one chapter, but the information content of each chapter is actually not much. However, because of the subject matter and plot, it makes people want to continue reading - it does not hinder the fact that the information content is low... It is also commonly known as water, but this water is the same as Guo Degang and Yu Qian talking about cross talk. It can make people fall asleep while listening to it 🙂 Unlike some novels (cross talk), it has high information content and a compact and dense plot (cross talk is hot and restless). I personally don't want the plot to be overdone. If it is too dry, the novel content of 30 million words could have been wasted, so I wrote 3 million words to finish it quickly in the so-called "plot push", which means that I have lost 27 million words of content. Well, after saying so much, there is actually only one problem 😡 There are too few updates! ! ! ! ! ! You know it's easy to write when it's wet, but why don't you write more? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! More! ! ! More updates! ! ! More and more! ! ! ! If others give two updates, you must update four! ! ! ! Keep four updates and strive for six updates! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The author still needs to think more carefully about the implantation of malicious memes. Behaviors such as crying, laughing, and harassing couples cannot hide their malicious intentions even if they are separated by the cognitive filter of the game. That is to say, I just checked the information related to Jiuliumen, otherwise I would not be able to understand why such a ridiculous paragraph appears. The behavior of the protagonist (player) can be weird and misunderstood, but it must be justified from the reader's perspective.

The inner drama of the protagonist is a bit too much, and the beginning is okay. The narration of the junior sister in the middle is nagging over and over again, which is a bit annoying, and the word count is not so good The plot in the middle of the development is basically repeated every once in a while, which is a bit too fussy It's not that you can't use narration to complain, but there is no need to repeat the same things over and over again, and there is no need to repeat the same things Every time you let the junior sister complain in the narration, you can randomly change it and add some jokes, the experience will be better

The Jintian game server was shut down and all the players disappeared. Guixi Sect suddenly became much quieter. Su Ling'er found that her senior brother was missing and her senior brothers and sisters also disappeared. She no longer had to worry about being exposed, but she couldn't be happy. Her heart was empty. They said that they would leave the sect to me after that, and asked me to make it bigger and stronger and create greater glory. Hundreds of years later, Su Ling'er looked at Guixi Sect and thought to herself, brothers and sisters, where have you gone? Ling'er misses you so much.

When is it time to give the little junior sister some player shock? Just write that when the senior brother took him out for training and passed by Qingxu Temple, he directly brushed it.

After reading that there is almost no description of the appearance of the junior sister, this is the first heroine who moved me purely based on her personality. The picture is generated by AI.

I caught up with the latest chapter in one go, and I feel pretty good so far. I especially like the character of this little junior sister. At present, the main conflict in this book should be the conflict between the indigenous people of this world represented by the junior sister and the player group represented by the senior brother. This is a natural and irreconcilable contradiction. As players of the Fourth Natural Disaster, they must have high values ​​​​in other words. In other words, they do not regard the local indigenous people as genuine people, but as pure system NPCs. Especially the swindling NPC Elder Qian who has frequent bugs in their sect has aggravated the players' inherent understanding of NPCs. Therefore, although the junior sister is currently regarded as a group favorite by the players, in essence, they do not regard the junior sister as a real person, but just a tool to complete system tasks. All the unreasonable behaviors that the junior sister does will be regarded as programmed. No one has ever cared about her true joys and sorrows, they just exploit her like a cow and a horse. From the perspective of the junior sister, she was really frightened. What the player group did to her was truly indescribable and incomprehensible. Players fight each other to the death without any scruples, the same and boring sect tasks, the scheming and lifeless sect elders, etc., Each of them is a strong impact on the values ​​​​of a native of the world of cultivating immortals, such as the little junior sister. It is impossible for the player to reach empathy with the junior sister in this situation, and it is impossible for the junior sister to reach reconciliation with the player. If it were an ordinary person, they would have gone crazy in this situation, and may have been directly assimilated by the values ​​​​of the player group, but the author set almost full Taoist heart and will for the little junior sister. This not only planned the development route of the little junior sister's strength, but also solidified her character. Although the junior sister is an undercover agent of the Righteous Dao, given her low talent and low status in the Righteous Dao, what really supports her persistence is the fear and hatred of the Guixi Sect. On the premise of not destroying the character, the conflicts between the junior sister and the player group will only continue to accumulate, until they will inevitably completely explode after a certain climax, and there is no possibility of reconciliation. If one day the junior sister and the local natives learn the nature of the "players", the conflict will only further intensify, because the players live in another reality and do not regard the lives of the players as their lives, and at the same time they do not regard the lives of the NPCs as their lives. If there are really some evil players who are outside the sect system and increase their level through large-scale massacre of local indigenous people, then the entire world's indigenous people may be slaughtered. However, the players' superiority made the local resistance futile. If I were asked to design an ending, I would probably prefer that the junior sister led the natives to find some kind of game loophole, and then ruined the game experience of the players, eventually quitting the game on a large scale and causing the game to be shut down. As for the locals, they actually resisted the invasion of the extraterrestrial demons.

I chased him for 1 million words, and I think he lost at least 300,000 words, and the remaining 300,000 words were branch lines. 🙂

When will it be arranged? The junior sister will travel back to the real world and see the real Lin Qingfeng offline.

This article focuses on the aboriginal righteous undercover player sect. Because of the player's operation, the players are regarded as the demon sect. The article focuses on the cognitive differences between a player playing games and aborigines cultivating immortality. In the end, you became a righteous person and also refined blood pills? The purpose of your article was destroyed by yourself!

The blue-grey sect-protecting formation was flickering under the intensive bombardment of spells from the players' alliance. In the square of Qingxu Sect's main hall, rubble and broken swords were mixed, and the fairy aura that once lingered had long been replaced by the smell of blood and burnt. The remaining disciples, their clothes stained with blood, gathered in front of the crumbling palace. Their eyes, invariably and with the last trace of almost crazy expectation, were fixed on the figure outside the formation - Su Ling'er. She is no longer the simple-dressed, timid-eyed, lowly servant who needs a little mercy from them from time to time. The black battle suit outlines her tall and strong figure, and the sword intent flowing around her body is solid, making the air around her slightly distorted. She didn't even hold a sword, she just stood quietly outside the formation, looking coldly at the mountain gate that she was once so familiar with, but now was wailing in the collapse. Behind her was a dark army of players with fierce auras. Those "foreigners" looked at her back with feverish eyes, as if they were looking up to their gods. "Su Ling'er! Junior Sister Su Ling'er!" A hoarse voice penetrated the explosion of spells. It was the elder who once taught her the basic mental skills. His beard and hair were messy, and his robe was torn in several places. There was a desperate begging in his voice: "Look here! Look at your roots! You are from the Qingxu Sect! The sect raised you and taught you. Could it be that the sect raised you and taught you? Are you going to watch the sect be destroyed today and become the traitor who deceived the master and destroyed the ancestors and was despised by everyone?" Su Ling'er's eyes finally slowly moved over, and those eyes that were once clear and always with a hint of uneasiness were now filled with frozen indifference. Her eyes swept across faces that were familiar or unfamiliar, filled with fear and expectation, and the corners of her mouth seemed to move upward slightly. It was not a smile, but a kind of... Condescending mockery. "Gen?" She repeated softly, her voice was not loud, but it was clearly transmitted into the ears of every Qingxu Sect disciple, with a biting chill. "What you call root is that you regard me as a loser who can be discarded at will, letting me struggle at the bottom, and using that meager, charity-like 'teaching' to maintain your ridiculous sense of superiority?" She paused and turned her eyes to a pale female disciple in the crowd. She was the senior sister who had repeatedly ridiculed her because of her low talent, and even robbed her of her cultivation resources. "And you, Senior Sister Lin. When you took away my spiritual stone and destroyed my medicinal herbs, did you ever think about the 'friendship of the same sect'?" Senior Sister Lin trembled all over and screamed: "Then you can't betray the sect! You... You are clearly a lieutenant from the Demon Sect. Damn it! I have long seen that something is wrong with you! Fellow disciples, look at her current appearance, she is full of evil spirits, and she has fallen into the devil's path!" This accusation is like a stone thrown into the stagnant water, causing the final ripples. Some of the disciples who were still lucky also started clamoring: "Yes! She is an undercover agent!" "Traitor! Devil!" "Kill her! Qingxu Sect has no such disciples!" They tried to use this last "truth" to hit her, at least make her collapse morally, and let the "foreigners" behind her see her "true face". However, Su Ling'er's eyes did not even waver. These hoarse accusations sounded like the buzzing of gnats to her ears. Her gaze went beyond the noisy crowds, across the broken mountains and rivers, and towards the front of the player camp. There, a man in green clothes with a calm expression was standing with his arms folded, looking quietly at this side. He was her senior brother. The moment her eyes came into contact with her senior brother, her frozen face instantly bloomed with an indescribable brilliance, just like spring snow melting. In those eyes, there is unreserved attachment, unforgettable admiration, and absolute loyalty that one is willing to live and die for. The warmth and softness were completely different from her coldness just now. This extreme contrast deeply hurt the hearts of all Qingxu Sect members. They finally understood that the honor and disgrace of the sect and the survival of the orthodoxy, which they regarded as their lives, were already as light as dust in her heart. All her emotions and belongings are tied to one person. "Undercover?" Su Ling'er withdrew her gaze, and when she looked at the people of the Qingxu Sect again, her eyes had returned to coldness, and even added a bit of impatience and contempt. "Whatever you say. The Qingxu Sect to me is just an unsightly stumbling block before embarking on the real path. You are not even qualified to make sword materials." She slowly raised her right hand and pointed it like a sword. In an instant, the spiritual energy between heaven and earth gathered crazily at her fingertips, and a soul-trembling sharpness rose into the sky. Her whole body seemed to have turned into an unsheathed peerless fierce sword, and the sword's intention locked onto the entire Qingxu Sect. "Elder brother has an order," her voice was low, but with unquestionable majesty, like the final judgment, clearly echoing in the depths of every desperate soul, "Qingxu Sect, the remnants of the demonic path, stubbornly resisting, shall be - destroyed." The word "annihilation" is like the sound of a death knell. As if they had been brainwashed, the players began to raise their hands and shout excitedly and enthusiastically at the junior sister Su Linger, "Loyalty!" "Sun" and other unknown slogans. Fear, like an invisible tide, instantly overwhelmed every Qingxu Sect member in the square. The expectations, anger, and accusations on their faces all solidified, then shattered, turning into the most primitive, uncontrollable fear. They looked at the figure who looked like a sword god coming to the world, and at the "strangers" behind her who were gearing up and looking excited, and finally understood completely - the little junior sister they had once been able to despise and bully at will, now had the power of life and death over them, and showed no mercy. The sect-protecting formation let out an overwhelmed cry, and the cracks on the light shield spread like spider webs. Su Ling'er's fingertips were filled with sword energy, and the final command of destruction was about to fall. Desperate cries and screams of collapse exploded in the square, forming a hellish symphony with the thunderous shouts of death erupting from the player camp. And Su Ling'er, standing at the center of the storm, her eyes were cold and firm. Only when her peripheral vision glanced at the figure carrying the sword, could an imperceptible trace of tenderness belonging to the "little junior sister" pass through deep in her eyes. But this gentleness has nothing to do with the downfall of the Qingxu Sect. Just as Su Ling'er's sword was pointing at the Qingxu Sect, with murderous intent filling the sky, a figure rolled out of the collapsed crowd and fell behind the light curtain at the forefront of the sect-protecting formation. His clothes were ragged, his originally handsome face was distorted by extreme fear, and tears were streaming down his face. It was Zhao Qing, the genius brother from the inner sect who she had secretly admired but didn't even bother to look at her. "Su Ling'er! Junior Sister Su! No... Senior Sister Su! Senior Su!" Zhao Qing's voice was so sharp that it changed its tone, and he slapped the light curtain in vain with his hands, as if trying to grasp the last life-saving straw, "It was my fault! I was blind at that time! It was my lard that blinded my heart! You are extremely talented, but I am not worthy of you! Please... Please look at the past... …For the sake of your half-hearted advice in the past, spare my life! I am willing to work as a cow or a horse, as a slave! Please give me a way to survive!" He kowtowed like a pound of garlic, and his forehead hit the cracked light screen, making a dull sound and bleeding. The pride and grace of the past are gone, leaving only the most despicable begging for mercy in the face of death. Su Ling'er's eyes finally fell on him. Her eyes were like those of gods above the nine heavens looking down at the insects struggling in the mud. There was no hatred, no anger, not even a trace of ripples, only pure, bone-deep indifference. She remembered that when she mustered up the courage to present her carefully crafted peace charm, Senior Brother Zhao Qing chuckled and threw it into the stream in front of everyone, with unabashed mockery in his tone: "Junior Sister Su, Practitioners should be brave and diligent, and relying on these mundane things to gain peace of mind is ultimately inferior. Your thoughts should be spent on improving your poor cultivation. " The humiliation and embarrassment at that time made her cry secretly many nights. And now... Su Ling'er didn't even bother to talk nonsense to him. She just frowned slightly, as if something dirty was blocking her way. She did not put down her sword finger, but lightly waved her free left hand in the direction of Zhao Qing casually, as if chasing away flies. A condensed and substantial sword energy came out of the air. It was not an earth-shattering move, but it hit Zhao Qing's chest with great accuracy. "Pfft——" Zhao Qing felt as if he had been hit by a giant hammer. He flew backwards, and the blood spurting from his mouth drew a miserable arc in the air. He fell heavily back into the remaining crowd of Qingxu Sect, with broken tendons and fractures, and collapsed on the ground like a pile of mud. He could only breathe out, not in. I didn't even look at him again, as if I just brushed away an eye-catching stone on the roadside. Her eyes returned to the steady figure in front of the player's camp, and her frozen face instantly melted into an almost obsessed attachment and tenderness. Amidst the loud shouts of death and the desperate sobs of the Qingxu Sect, her voice rang out clearly, with a natural and calm declaring her final destination, but it was like the sharpest ice pick, piercing the hearts of all those who still had any illusions: "Pleading? Confession? It's meaningless. " "My body and mind, my soul, my sword... Have long been marked with the mark of senior brother, and have completely become a shape that only belongs to him." "Qingxu Sect? What are you...?" The moment she finished speaking, she finally swung her sword fingers towards the main hall of Qingxu Sect. "Kill." The final order, concise and cold, played the final elegy for the former master. The sect-protecting formation completely collapsed in response, and the torrent of players, carrying the aura of destruction, drowned out the last resistance and cries.

There are some minor issues with the plot connection in the middle, but the writing and plot are pretty good. But I don't see how the future outline will go like this, either a super god or a eunuch.

Didn't it say at the beginning that the player who established a sect could only move within the sect? So what do they play? Where are the game activities and krypton gold used? How to upgrade the character? Where do all the materials for alchemy and weapon refining come from? Can a game that has no map to explore, not enough NPCs to interact with, and requires krypton gold to survive for more than three days?

Junior sister in primary form and ultimate form

Dragon Boat Festival Health

It is light-hearted and humorous, with endless misunderstandings and coincidences, and a lot of laughs. It is suitable for readers who like to relieve stress easily.

Did anyone tell me that senior brother and junior sister are together?