My Mahayana Ancestor

It's well-written, but the protagonist feels like an urban dragon king, someone anyone can step on. Some of the characters are a bit brainless.

Author, is it possible to write a book without getting so emotional? While there are comedic elements and a lot of exclamation marks are understandable, as the ancients said, too much of a good thing can be bad. These exclamation marks are almost enough to form a "Ten Thousand Swords Return to One" pattern; just looking at them is exhausting.

One thing is really baffling: why does it feel like you're talking to a child when you, the patriarch, are chatting with your grand-disciple? And why do people who have cultivated to the Foundation Establishment stage seem to have some intellectual issues?

The book is worth reading. However, I have a few questions. First, the protagonist, with his Mahayana stage cultivation and magical abilities, can't even teach the most basic Qi gathering and Foundation Establishment stages, having to hire someone from another sect to teach him without any compensation.

Chapter 1 is so damn long-winded! 😒

300 Years seems too short; it should be changed to 3000.

If this is truly your first time writing a book, then you must either be talented or have a background in the humanities. You can tell from the first chapter that it's very detailed; the main character's background is roughly established in just half a chapter. Born into an ordinary family, she is sentimental, filial, and has achieved some success through hard work.

The plot of this light novel is so bad it's giving me a headache; the attempts at showing off are awful; and the dialogue is stiff.

If it's a deity, then what kind of shadowy figure would be pretending to be a deity?

Well written, keep up the good work! I've saved it.