Pokémon Descend: Exploring the World with Pokémon Dark Rising

Many people say that the part where the protagonist self-destructs is toxic, but they haven't pointed out exactly what makes it toxic. My personal opinion is that the author had the protagonist reveal his secret to his mother the first time she appeared, without properly building up the character of the mother beforehand. From the reader's perspective, the emotional connection was lacking.

I came from the comments section of Chiji. I took a look, and there aren't many watchable ones right now, especially anything a little peaceful. I don't like fighting and killing. What was supposed to be a cute and heartwarming Pokémon game has been given a dark art style, and they call it "realism." What real-world game or anime has an audience under 20? The author's update schedule is making me uneasy. I'll let it sit for a while, and hopefully it won't die out. 🌹

The previous chapter described the protagonist as not in a hurry to fall in love, but the next chapter establishes a boyfriend-girlfriend relationship... Just to make the protagonist find a girlfriend, they forced a woman into the story, and there was no interaction or ambiguity between them, which felt very strange. Actually, it would be fine without a female lead.

The protagonist is so weak; his elf level isn't even as high as Xiao Yuan's, and he has amazing candies but doesn't use them, giving them all to others instead. He's incredibly toxic.

The later battles were barely shown, which is really bad. And with such a huge power-up, the protagonist is still so weak; and the parents won't let the protagonist travel anymore. This involves neither travel nor combat; then reading this Elven text is truly pointless.

That's too verbose. Make the details more balanced. Transmigrating and getting a cheat ability is a common trope, so I wrote two chapters about it. Then there's this whole world-building stuff, the protagonist's changing mindset, what they did in their past lives, and so on. And then there's this forced explanation of why they got the cheat ability.

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I'm not watching anymore, bye! The beginning was okay, but after he revealed his cheat abilities, he just kept using his resources to help others level up. Doesn't he understand that your own strength is the only true measure of success? I'm dropping this.

Telling his mom about his cheat ability would be so insidious it would poison me.

There's a question: why do some people always think starter Pokémon are so precious? You see, in both the games and anime, starter Pokémon are heavily trained by the League and are also abundant in the wild. They're not precious or rare, their strength is usually average, and they're mainly very suitable for beginners. Furthermore, in the anime and games, different regions offer different starter Pokémon, but overall, they're all suitable for beginners and don't necessarily have to be precious.