Creating Pokémon in a World of Spiritual Qi Revival

Overall, the book is good, but I personally have a few points I'm not satisfied with. 1. The subject is incorrect. To be honest, the vast majority of people who clicked in are Pokémon fans looking for Pokémon fanfiction. As the title suggests, the main focus should be Pokémon. We don't mind a little bit of superpowers or spiritual energy resurgence.

Good heavens, it's already over 430 chapters! The plot is unfolding at an absurdly slow pace, with almost no climaxes or highlights. To put it bluntly, nobody seems to care about the protagonist's business acumen or his interactions with the women. Everyone's just here for Pokémon. The previous novel I was following about creating Pokémon was abandoned, so I kept reading. But if the plot continues to be this bland, I'm about to give up.

It's clear the author wanted to write well and in detail, but from the reader's perspective, there's too much focus on everyday family matters and business dealings. The exciting parts feel superficial, and the business interactions are merely a stage for the Pokémon to appear. The overly detailed descriptions actually overshadow the main story. To put it simply, what readers want is "Shocking! Global Sensation! This New Creature is Actually…" not "My Genius Brother's Novel Pet."

Around chapter 258, when the protagonist went to the Meihe Group for cooperation, he had no idea what the main character was afraid of. They were easily tricked into becoming anxious and even thought it was amazing that they could see right through him. He didn't seem to realize how absurd it was that his educational background could "create" an elf. He wasn't without his own trump cards; the more he watched, the more frustrated he became.

I think you know what to do.

It's so boring, I can't read it at all. I don't see any sign that it's an elf story. The male lead is such a coward, he's afraid of everything.

I was quite interested when I first found this book, and I finished reading it in two days. The first hundred or so chapters were quite good, but they've become a bit boring lately. There are a few aspects I'd like to discuss with the author. 1. The protagonist's personality issues Over two hundred chapters have passed, and the protagonist's personality hasn't changed much.

There's a frustrating point to every spiritual energy revival. They've all forgotten that humans are the highest level of life in nature. All other plants and animals are far inferior to humans in terms of life level.

I feel that the modern creation of elves isn't quite right for this genre; it's developed too quickly, and with so many being released one after another, anyone would know there's definitely something wrong with it.

These images were borrowed from other authors, so please take them seriously, dear readers! My previous book almost failed because I didn't understand this, and it wasn't until I had 120,000 words that I finally got a contract, and I only got one recommendation! We kindly ask for your continued support, dear readers!