Dragon Raja: Lu Mingfei Will Not Die in the Shura Field

Lu Xia, Lu Nuo, Lu Shi, Lu Ling, Lu Mayi, I want them all, please deduct 6

Since Chen Wenwen reads Western love novels every day, which are mixed with farewell, admiration, vanity, ⭐, green, giving and receiving nue, her three views are actually becoming less and less normal the more she reads such books. Maybe a good education can hide these things, but we all know that many things cannot be hidden. In short, judging from the background story, I really don't believe that she hasn't read the books written by the Marquis de Sade, such as "The Sin of Love" (The 120 Days of Sodom is a bit extreme and I guess little girls can't stand it), or to be more specific, sadism, which means sadism, is the name of this dear friend. All in all, I plan to write her in a yandere direction. Solicit everyone's opinions. If there are many people who oppose it, I won't write it. If there are many people who agree, I will write it.

Today I confessed to a school girl whose personality is very similar to Su Xiaoqiang. I learned from Teacher Lao Lu's skills and succeeded 🥺🥺🥺

After reading half of the book, I couldn't stand it anymore. The emotional line was a mess, and there was no progress in dozens of chapters. The contradiction between Liu and Su had obviously collapsed. The final explanation was forced to end with no follow-up (if you think the author left a blank to let the readers imagine that I obey you), and then played riddles with Lingda. What's even more outrageous is Xiami. When he first came to the United States, he didn't even cover his buttocks, so he drove people back to the country, calling it "for safety." He waited a few months for school to start before coming back, but he actually went back to the country. I could turn to Chen Wenwen again after writing this. The only reason I can think of is that writing about Chen Wenwen, a person with strong gravity, is in line with the emotional tone of the book within the comfort zone, so I decided to write it back. Therefore, in the whole book, the only one who has made some emotional progress is Chen Wenwen. The emotional tone is also gloomy + painful + depressive + negative energy. Can you really call this "love" if you are reluctant to give out some candy and torture each other in the harem novel? Watching this is really not as good as watching an industrial saccharine love story sprinkled with sugar. Although it is forced and deliberate, at least it will not ruin your mood. Watching the male protagonist and the female protagonist drag each other around for a long time, standing still and talking, torturing each other with great gravity, and still feeling better is a miracle. After watching half of it, I really couldn't stand it anymore and gave up. No matter how big the twist was later, I wouldn't watch it again because the first half can definitely be described as "a complete mess". Recommended by Shennong: Those who like to read sadistic stories can read it. Anyway, I always watch it and I can't help but want to start it again for Lu Mingfei.

I originally wrote a long list about the commonalities between the harem and Dragon Clan fans making up for regrets, about the joint creation between the author and the readers, but it turned out that I didn't save it. Maybe you don't like reading it if it's too long and lengthy, so I'll just analyze it briefly. The first is that this book is an urban romance novel that incorporates fantasy elements. The difference from traditional harem novels is that it is difficult to distinguish the emotional lines of the male protagonist and the female protagonists in terms of time and space. I don't know how many readers are harem party readers, just dragon readers, or both, but we can find that the biggest feature of this book is that the emotional entanglements are complicated and the conflicts are difficult to deal with. Among them, the growth of the prison road and the more or less morbid feelings between the heroines and him (especially Chen and Su) are reflected in the Shura Field, which is essentially impossible to separate. This is determined by the convenient communication and transportation in the modern background. Most of the traditional harem novels have the ideological color of machismo, that is, everything in the world can be taken and carried with them, and it has become an established fact that they can be possessed by strength or cooked rice. But the way of thinking of modern women like Su Xiaoqiang is fundamentally contrary to the development direction of harem literature. Therefore, the prison road must either ask the heroine to compromise, or require the heroine to indulge him. They had all reached out to him, so he didn't want to let go of any of them. Who says he's not a scumbag? He indeed is. Second, regarding the growth of Lao Lu, he was nothing at the beginning. Su Xiaoqiang was once his sun, but later he would also become Liu Miaomiao's man, Chen Wenwen's sea, Xia Mi's guide, Ling's green plum falling from the sky, and Hui Liyi's inspirer (guess). He has a different look in the hearts of every character and every reader. It must be said that the author forced him to feel guilty and weak most of the time. He has never learned to let go, so he refuses to let go of those good intentions. But in fact, this is just one of countless possibilities. We must distinguish what is the original design of the character and what is the creative need. Perhaps with normal thinking, I would have given up on it when I met Su Xiaoqiang, but after all, this is a story written by the author, and I personally am quite tolerant. Third, I have to go to bed early today and update tomorrow. I mainly promised the author today, and I feel like my brain is being drained of all my strength.

It is very embarrassing for the Dragon Clan to open a harem and leave out Nono and take Xia Mi. I'm not saying that Xia Mi cannot be accepted, I am a fellow Lu Xia Party member myself. But since you even snatched your senior brother's woman, and ended up leaving Nono to Caesar, then you are like this, a half-gift girl, and the original official heroine will not accept it (the original Jiangnan is slowly writing Lu Nuo, but you don't write it) In addition, the first 40 chapters of the free chapters are disgusting, but as soon as the paid chapters come, the writing gets better and better, and he is also a godly author after knowing that he is addicted. The front part won't attract people, and no matter how good or sweet the writing is, fewer people will read it. Those who said they were abusing the owner probably didn't see the payment. After paying, they started giving out candy.

The author's understanding of the Shura field and the knife went astray, which caused the novel to go from an excellent beginning to the current direction. The Shura field we are talking about now generally comes from the second dimension, and most of it has a light comedy flavor. If you write in a realistic and heavy direction, it would be cheating, the cheating man would admit his mistake in embarrassment, and the mistress of the first wife would fight. This is neither touching nor sadistic, only sad. The author chose the latter, so what we see in the Shura Field plot that takes up a lot of space is Lu Mingfei talking back and forth, and after that, he continues to recruit new people into the harem, and keeps repeating it. The viewers are not moved or sad, only irritated. As for the knife, taking My Girlfriend from the Future, which the author has read, as an example, do you think the most touching plot in this novel is the Shura Field where Ai Qing and Wenliang Hospital confront each other? Isn't it a one-line plot where He Tianran promised to forgive you, and there is nothing wrong with it, and I look like an adult now? This kind of foreshadowing, the gaze of memories brought about by echoing back and forth, and the regretful relief are probably the most impressive parts. So there is a big conflict between Lu Mingfei's character and the plot framework at the beginning of this novel. The author chose to write this way purely to intensify himself. The more he went off track, the more he wrote, the more unclear he became.

The first time I read a harem story, I felt guilty. I can only say that the author wrote that Su Xiaoqiang and the others were not on the same level. What was supposed to be an evenly matched Shura field turned into a kind of betrayal of Su Xiaoqiang by Lu Mingfei. This is sad. I am not very picky. This is the first time I think a single female protagonist would be better.

Why do they both like Chen Wenwen and Liu Miaomiao 🥵 It can be said that Su is a Muqiang who likes excellent people but not Zhao Menghua. I can accept it. Chen Wenwen's tea tastes like tea. Liu Miaomiao and Zhao Menghua broke Chen Wenwen's shoes behind their backs. It's hard to say what their character is.

The overall tone is too depressing and heavy with negative energy. The positioning of this book should be biased towards light novels. It is so painful and the hatred is deep. A harem novel is not sweet. In the early stage, Liu Miaomiao used Lu Mingfei as Chu Zihang's meal replacement. It was even more abstract and boundless. The portrayal of Chu Zihang It makes people not like it at all, and it even makes people feel that adding this character has no purpose. I have said a lot but can't get to the point. The plot advancement seems to be non-existent. I suggest you learn more about how other fan fiction is handled. The writing is too raw.