The Lord of the World, Starting from Tao Tong

I don't know if the author has an outline. At present, the world level of the main world does not seem to be very high. In the cultivation system, the highest level should be around the golden elixir to Nascent Soul. In prehistoric times, it should not reach immortality. If the protagonist enters the cultivation of immortality in the middle of the world and walks on the line of prehistoric times, then he should be the boss of the main world. Should he step out of the main world next or how to write? Moreover, Honghuang's status is not low. Whether you want to write about self-detachment or control of rules, the protagonist cannot be inferior to the existence in his own world. Have the authors considered the original rules of the main world? I hope the author has his own thoughts and considerations now, otherwise he will become a eunuch if he finds that the writing is crooked and difficult to undo.

It's a very good novel. Can you please stop checking the word count and send me an invitation? It has a general plot. Everyone is surprised, you are not good at it, you have wasted several chapters.

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The protagonist supports countless thousands of people in his small world, but as a result, he has to hire people through dental clinics for home life. Are all the people in my little world a master? Why do you work so hard to support tens of thousands or millions of people?

The subject matter is obviously very good, but I don't know why the results are so bad. Write less nonsense. It's boring to read too many words and inks. Even the free ones can't stand it anymore. The freshness of the subject matter is what keeps me reading.

I don't understand how such a good subject could be written like this

Since the growth of the set world has nothing to do with the level of the world owner, what is the purpose of opening up the world and spending endless resources to cultivate the world? All kinds of good luck rush to the protagonist and fill the small world, just to show off in front of others? Weaknesses and shortcomings are also a resource for showing off? Is it an unknown pleasure to keep suppressing the protagonist's level?

Either be stubborn to the end, or be reckless to the end. As a result, the protagonist is not rash when he should be rash, and not stoic when he should be. Since you are starting to take the path of the academy, you should be reckless to the end and be extremely talented. Some of them are here to invest. After all, how expensive can primary resources be? If you give it to an obvious talent, a little reward later can be higher than the initial investment. You already said that this academy is in the top three, and if you want to compete for the first place, it is normal for an obvious genius to take a gamble. Or just stay the course, be a lone wolf, and open other lines. The main character turned out to be the most unlikable approach. Don't show it when you should show it, and the waves will fly when you shouldn't show it

I have never seen a son question his father: "Actually, I am very surprised, how did you become my father?"

In the first chapter of the game, poison was released, what age is this? In the end, it was relying on goldfinger to make a comeback, which was nothing. Can't a new author wake up normally? He has to do it in a flashy way.

I can't understand, I don't practice, I don't farm, I don't manage, I don't know what I'm doing, I have a headache

A creative novel, but the author likes Che Zhuluan's talk too much and the word count seriously affects the rhythm and mood of reading 😒

The setting of this book is just okay. It was originally above the basic level, but with the addition of a bunch of constantly changing settings. Extra pressure on the protagonist's level. Being scolded is no longer considered a complaint.

The theme is okay, but there are a lot of bugs. If you are the master of the world with one man as an army, why form a team? Obviously, we are all new at the beginning of the school year, so why are we taking the joint entrance examination for the three colleges? Shouldn't the exam be taken again at the end of a semester? Is this because they are afraid that the children of those big families will not have room to perform? Obviously the powerful only need to help the weak to get luck feedback, but in the end, basic knowledge can be blocked.

Can't appreciate the art of the older generation of artists

The subject matter is good, but the author's writing style is not good, the settings are thrown away one by one, and there is no foreshadowing. The role of college/university in the book is symbolic. The protagonist goes straight to college with an elementary school IQ/cognition. Without a basic impression of the world, he starts to act cool. I can't even understand the pretense. The protagonist is from time travel, and his IQ is actually lower than that of Indians. The author also said that he is engaged in foreign trade, which is so funny that you can't tell at all. Does the author know what the role of school is? The emergence of colleges and universities has meant that the monopoly of aristocratic families has been broken, but in this book it is not so much that the school is the strongest, but rather that colleges and universities are subordinate/affiliated schools of aristocratic families, cultivating talents/employees for them. I advise you not to substitute your mind/reality when reading this book. It is better to set the time of this book in the Spring and Autumn and Warring States/Three Kingdoms period, or substitute it into the national system of the Middle East and the Arab region, covered with modern clothes.

Weird world view, there are buses, taxis, computers, and movable type printing, right? Then why are the books in the library borrowed for a long time? The school will not print more common sense books. Compared with the training resources, paper books are not even scum. There are so many civilian students, so no one complains about the lack of books in the library. If the professional ones are monopolized, it will be almost the same. Is this school still one of the top three? Also, I would like to ask if there are smart phones and the Internet in this world, and if there is a small technological world - is it all about cultivation?

The subject matter is a good one, but the protagonist really has no brains. From the moment he entered the middle school, he kept talking about the number of water words, suppressing the protagonist's IQ. Even from a normal person's perspective, he can figure things out. The protagonist is as if he has no brain.

Dude, I came across your book by accident. The subject matter is very interesting, but I have read about a few chapters. The protagonist is a time traveler with a golden finger. After ten chapters, I did not understand the structural level of the world, and the role of the golden finger. The most important thing is that the main plot here is very scattered, unclear and unconcise, and it feels like it is in the clouds. My humble opinion.

I came here as a drug addict, and now that I have read Chapter 70, I have some thoughts to share. Personally, I found this book tiring to read in the early stages, and most people who read the comments felt the same way. Just write this kind of book yourself and don't impose too many world views. Once the spirit is transferred to the world power, and the next time the world power is transferred to the card, you write this because the golden finger can save the card before opening the world. You can just write the boundary power without mentioning the spirit later. Apart from the water word count, it looks like a headache. There is also a traitor in the human race, a class. If such a world existed, there would definitely be classes, but the so-called aristocratic family's monopoly on knowledge would definitely be impossible. Why? Because there is only one big world in your world, and it has a world master. The world behind you developed based on the big world. As a world leader, why should I help the human race develop? Just to find helpers, so that the human race can be the protagonist. I'm working hard at the front, and you are poaching behind, why don't I kill you? If you really want to tolerate aristocratic families doing this, why not do it with your own descendants? Where do the free resources like here in school come from? It can't be from a noble family, right? It means that aristocratic families train their descendants to take part in their own family, and the majority come from schools. I can't stand this kind of thing anyway. There is also clan rape. If we talk about aliens infiltrating and transforming children with the ability to open a world to achieve the goal of becoming a world master, then this big world is so bad that even people who enter it don't even know how bad it is, and they still resist seven. If it was a voluntary surrender, I can't think of anyone who would do such a thing in a life-and-death situation. Maybe the oppressed civilian world leaders will do it? Manual funny... There is no need to describe in detail what I am not good at. It's the internal affairs of the small world. In reality, there are so many things that elites cannot handle. You, the author, must not be able to handle them either. Let's just briefly explain them. You can't be proficient in everything. If you were proficient, you wouldn't be able to read this book. The more you write, the more flaws readers will have in mind for you. Just keep track of how many people you have reproduced in terms of your population. You have to have a wedding, then commit suicide, and then cancel it. Don't know what to express. If you want to read and write, you need to popularize education. It is not enough to go to a private school and then talk about a lot of your own ideas. This is really unnecessary. Just take it all in one go. It can be seen that the author is really trying hard to write a good book, but what everyone wants to read about a book with this kind of setting is farming in a small world, and then going out to be wild after growing up. In the end, it was agreed that Honghuang was about 70 chapters, but there was no content about junior school. I thought you wanted to skip it, but you wrote twenty or thirty chapters just to foreshadow your personal treachery. The description of the intermediate school is just a few days of school and a competition. The chapter where you fight in the ring is not as busy as the passer-by president's intrigues. It was really lonely watching it. I wrote several chapters over and over again on how to write a small world and advance to a medium world. Learn about it once in the front and again in class later. Don't write down your world view repeatedly, everyone can understand it. Why don't you read the comments? Why do everyone say they are tired of reading this? Finally, I wish the author will get better and better as he writes.

So far, it's okay. The three views are very upright and the setting is good. Although there are some routines, it's still acceptable. There is no obvious plot to reduce intelligence. The story about the farmer and the snake in the first few chapters, emmm, may make many people think that the author is abusing the author. The following is the suggestion part: Setting aspect: It's time to introduce the worldview of the main world. After all, the protagonist currently has no survival crisis and pressure to enter school. It's time to read and understand the situation. Whether the human world is about the weak and the strong, or is it a family that dominates the sky with one hand, or is it ruled by a certain class, or is it a democratic society ruled by law like reality. Who are the enemies of the human world? Are those orcs originally from prisoners of war, mutations, etc. In terms of plot: Prehistoric novels are basically inseparable from the catastrophe of heaven and earth. If you don't write about the gods and journey to the west in the small world, try to hint in the text in advance, or change the title to avoid being criticized. Plots in the real world should not be limited to show-offs and arena matches. You can write about national wars, world collisions, objective disasters, exploration and pioneering, etc. If you really don't know what to write about, you can try to write about bottom-up changes (if it is not the last kind of society mentioned above). Anyway, there is an ascending channel. As long as the resources are sufficient and the protagonist is strong enough, coupled with the author's operation, it will definitely not fail. If you don't want to write about changes, but you still want to write about the internal struggles of mankind, you can try to write about the struggles between the academic school (universal education, only for the broad cultivation of talents), the aristocratic school (elite education, and the elite must be used by me) and the capitulation school (no longer a human being, what's wrong with joining a foreign race). Of course, factions can and should be more than that. Characters: Try to establish the main supporting roles. Of course, the plot has just begun, so this aspect is not a big problem. The most important thing is to make it clear which one of single, many, and nothing this book is. Above. (This is just a family opinion, come on)

The rule of the small world is maintained by the author's forcible intelligence, the supporting characters are attracted by the author's forcible intelligence, and the powerful and powerful man is helped by the author's forcible intelligence. Apart from the attack by intelligence, I really can't imagine how this world will collapse if there is a little more reasonable planning. It's full of flaws for me to see

If you have any weird cards or small world routes, you can write them down here.

I can't watch it. Damn, the fighting force is too strong. After the protagonist opened up the world, he entered the Elite Realm. Now I've watched half of it. It's a large small world. The protagonist is still in the Elite Realm. The people in the small world are legendary and demi-gods. The protagonist is still in the Elite Realm. It's too toxic. I personally don't recommend anyone to spend money to watch it.

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