My Rune Technology

I also can't figure it out. It's a bit far-fetched for a woman who has sacrificed so much for her boyfriend to cheat on her boyfriend.

Let's complain 1. If you want to write about spiritual recovery and it is the only thing promoted by the protagonist, then don't write about things happening beyond the control of the protagonist. 2. If you want to start the cultivation era in the early stage, you should increase the protagonist's strength and hide the protagonist well. 3. At present, there is very little scientific and technological content (because we want to start the era of cultivation?). 4. The protagonist's crisis awareness is so poor that it always makes me feel that sooner or later the protagonist will be sliced ​​up by the state for study or recruitment. 5. If the protagonist's secret is exposed, won't it be a disaster later? (For example, if the existence of the "system" is known to outsiders) ps: I hope it can be more rigorous, grasp both directions, and not always test the book on the edge of collapse.

The plot is too unreasonable. The protagonist's IQ is negative, right? There was a big snake problem. Normal people know to change the second location. If it can't be changed, it's okay to add a small hollow earth bag? Keep forgetting the third chicken? Leave a question waiting to be discovered? Is this how a normal person thinks? Can the plot be less blunt?

Just have fewer typos, less emotional dramas and bloody rescues. In just over 30 pictures, you've already lost half of the interaction with the heroine. Nowadays, readers don't like to read these. The technology and runes are quite good.

I thought it was quite innovative, but I really couldn't figure it out. The ex-girlfriend sacrificed so much for the protagonist, even having two abortions, but in the end she fell in love with the protagonist. Are you sure you didn't force her into a woman? Later, the male protagonist returned to his hometown due to a broken heart, and within two days he immediately fell in love. Are you sure that the male protagonist is affectionate and not a scumbag? These two poisonous points of the author can really dissuade most readers, which is a pity for the creativity of this book.

I saw my ex-girlfriend, and then I saw that the heroine in the character was Peng, and I didn't want to read it. The point of view is that Peng Rong was the protagonist's first girlfriend. The protagonist's parents died, the protagonist's personality changed drastically, he became extreme, and then they broke up. I couldn't stand the protagonist's personality changed drastically, and he became extreme and dark, so breaking up is normal. I'm talking about what the second girlfriend did, when the protagonist became so unbearable, so extreme and dark, and she asked the protagonist to be her boyfriend, and the protagonist hurt her, and she ran to a corner to cry alone. How long did it take for her to help the protagonist's personality become normal? Such a girl gave up so much for the protagonist in school, and how much she gave up for the protagonist after graduation. She changed the character of the protagonist and then cheated. Even if a scumbag met such a guy, he could become a scumbag. He is still powerful. Without his parents, his personality has changed drastically, and he has extreme quirks. He still has a girl by his side for six years. Hey, if there is such a girl, I can irresponsibly tell you that she is everything to me and will not let her be harmed in the slightest. As for the first girlfriend who encountered an accident, her personality changed drastically. However, it is normal for you to break up with her. This is adding insult to injury. You know that something happened and you cannot comfort her. How can you do this? The heroine is still the first.

Boss, I've read Chapter 14 and I really can't stand it anymore. I haven't seen you studying a few chapters of Rune. Most of them are about women. I wonder if you're doing it to pave the way? Let's just write about women. Anyway, my head hurt after reading it, and I won't say anything else. The originality is very good, but I can't see the end of it. Let's get together and relax!

What the author writes happens to be the type I like, aura + technology. Come on, don't be a eunuch

The arrangement is unreasonable And you need to give them shares to build a factory Wherever the protagonist goes, there are mutated creatures You will know who it is after you investigate. Too underestimated. Of state agencies.

Continuing to write about rune technology, I read it for this point, and I believe everyone else does too. If I don't continue to write about rune technology, I have no choice but to...!