I Use My Supernatural Power to Prove Immortality

There's nothing big about it, but, um, it's very annoying, but the protagonist doesn't know how to use it, and his development is too slow, so it feels a bit deliberately suppressed 🙂

I thought it was wonderful at first, but then I saw that you were sent by your family to guard a manor, but it turned out that the manor didn't have a defensive formation. When you went out, you were just a third-level qigong practitioner, and the manor was always in danger. I didn't understand this. Isn't this the person who was sent to die? To put it bluntly, if he hadn't awakened his magical power, he would have died several times. Moreover, his magical power is very good and he can copy other people's magical powers. I have also read some other family novels. They are not guarded by two or three people together, and you are still not familiar with spiritual rice. An old foundation-building family only cultivates this. Other family novels start from the first level.

Water is too much a magic weapon. There is no need to abandon it as a magic weapon

When I read Chapter 15, what the hell is the distribution of the spoils? I worked hard for several chapters and finally reached the climax. Who gets the spoils? It was obviously the protagonist who saved the life of his younger brother. If the protagonist's younger brother hadn't died, the family would have suffered disaster. Moreover, this younger brother secretly prevented the protagonist from finding opportunities and being plotted. How could the spoils be distributed like this after the war? To save a man's life, the protagonist basically killed the fire fox and the man, but after the war, the fire fox and half of the things were returned to his brother. Is this a licking-dog story? The kind where men lick men

I really hate it. In Chapter 22, the fifth level of Qi refining is only one step away from the sixth level of Qi refining. I also practiced physical training, but my physical strength is only more than 300 kilograms. In reality, there is no extraordinary strength. People with strong strength are more than 300 kilograms. This picture is really too low.

A villa with 9 magical powers and a field for growing hair. First, find a hard job like running errands. Contact all the 20 or so villas in the family. Copy the ones that are easy to copy first and the ones that are difficult to copy at the back. At least 50 magical powers. After a subsequent county wins, find a reason such as everyone's blessing, and search the entire county for at least 200 magical powers. Go to several countries in the sect and look for at least 10,000 magical powers. It's all bugs and the author said he has a framework in mind...

I can only say that this protagonist is a 50-50 God of War. No matter who he fights, he will try his best to win a 50-50 battle. He will always brag about how good the protagonist's spells are. He has both legal and physical skills, and a lot of plug-ins. He arranges traps in advance for sneak attacks, and then random monsters and casual cultivators will try their best to fight. It's very difficult to watch. It hurts to watch. So many mistakes have been made to the dog.

How many chapters has a Qiu Xie skipped, and he still couldn't die and still made trouble for the protagonist? The protagonist just smiled slightly when he saw him, and then continued to be targeted by him. Author, don't you think the protagonist is handsome like this? It's poisonous to people.

After summarizing, the biggest problem with this book is that the golden finger is too wide, which leads to the proliferation of magical powers. It seems like the protagonist is always learning new magical powers. Moreover, each magical power is very complex in design, and usually has three or four effects. You can believe it. To be honest, the author's writing skills are not up to the comprehensive effect of using these magical powers to fit the plot without appearing cluttered. As I write, I find that old magical powers are often left in the warehouse to gather dust without being used much, and then new magical powers come along, and the effect of one magical power is more exaggerated than the other. To put it bluntly, it is a harvest article. It is nothing more than constantly harvesting new magical powers. Back then, I read an article about being able to harvest unlimited opportunities through luck and system guidance. Opportunities of different colors can be harvested. This article reads like that. To put it bluntly, it is a bit like a combination of upgrade flow and treasure hunt flow. It focuses on a feeling of upgrading and a feeling of treasure hunting and harvesting, and this book focuses on the feeling of replicating magical powers and harvesting. If you want to say that the writing is not good, that is not the case. The plot is really good. But if you think about how well written it is, this plug-in is really too big and makes the protagonist seem useless. I can't remember the protagonist at all, because the protagonist has no special qualities and I can't remember it at all.

It would be better for this family to be wiped out. Zhongshan made a mistake and the protagonist made up for it. In the end, there was no punishment, not to mention the reward was so high. What thoughts is the author expressing? Are you an undercover agent of the little devil to engage in ideological propaganda?

The quality was very good before it was released. After it was released, the quality dropped all the way, and then the wits appeared frequently. I was attracted by the fighting scenes before it was released. The battles were prepared one after another, without saying a word. After killing the person, be careful to touch the last touch and lick the bag. I like this style very much. There is no special situation where I speak when I am desperate. Whenever I speak, I am beaten to death. But the fighting after it was released was very mindless. Not only was the fighting very satisfying, but there were also a bunch of idiots standing there who were shocked, and there was also a pile of water. The author did not have time to polish the article in order to update it, so he replaced it with someone else. I hope the author will write the next book.

Author, you have too many personal sermons, which even affect the opening plot and the protagonist's character. And don't design all these casual villains into treasure chests for the sake of writing fight scenes. Writing fight scenes is already thankless. Directly letting the protagonist kill him instantly is the right way. It is refreshing and effortless, and everyone likes to watch it.

I feel that there are a lot of sermons, and there are also many real-life chestnuts in dramas. Your real-life story has been transferred. If you are cultivating immortality, don't preach so much and have more fun, right? If it is too profound and is not suitable for cultivating immortality in leisure, just cultivate it.

I would like to give you a suggestion. If you want to suppress it, don't suppress it. Just limit the frequency of the appearance of magical powers. In a bigger village, 5 magical powers will appear. Don't be too funny. If you add the Pei family next door, there will be 6. What other conspiracy is there? If you pile up the foundation building, you can have infinite suicide attacks. One-tenth of the number is weakening the foundation building, and you are still holding the flag. It is neither fish nor fowl. Shouldn't having magical powers be one of the criteria for mass recruitment? The protagonist is so secretive and disgusting, can't you awaken the magical power Taotie? There are several effects, and you just say one and it's over. Others will also guess other magical effects of your Taotie. Do you need to explain?

Magical powers are unreasonable in the first place, but since they are portraits and dripping blood, the conditions are quite awkward in general, especially the portraits, which are superfluous.

The pig's trotters are like a big injustice. When people eat the golden carp, they don't even smell the pig's trotters. They don't even intend to give a drop of the fire fox's blood to the pig's trotters. When something goes wrong and the pig's trotters help to share the spoils, it becomes too clear between the brothers. Haha, author, just write it!

After reading only a dozen chapters, I feel like the protagonist's contribution to the family far exceeds his own gain. It feels like my family has helped me thousands of times and it feels like my first love to take care of my family. It's so awkward. I wonder if it will still be like this later?

I always look down on Ji Jin, feeling that this novel is too petty. Not cool at all, just like a parent.

Those who can read this book should be the best readers. Reading it is fate. Please leave the title of the book you think is the best. There is a shortage of books. Thank you for your recommendation.

Before it was put on the shelf, it was +, and after it was put on the shelf, I thought I had found a good book, but who knew that it would be ruined after it was put on the shelf. The description of the battle was too complicated and cumbersome. I did not say that the battle scenes should be summarized in a few sentences, but there were too many descriptions, which were too cumbersome. Repeated descriptions, psychological descriptions, forced sensationalism, and it was always shocked, shocked, stunned, confused, and a bunch of useless explanations. It felt like the author had no outline! I don't have to criticize the author. If the book continues like this, sooner or later the book will become obsolete! Let's use the text as much as possible for the plot arrangement, and simplify the battles to reduce the unnecessary. If it weren't for the protagonist's good outlook on life and the writing skills, I really wouldn't be able to stick to it.

I feel like there are too many magical powers. When I play the game and add mods, I only add a few. Adding too many mods will also affect the game experience.

I'm really unhappy. I've read dozens of chapters of this book. It's good to read, but it's also a bit awkward. What makes it interesting is that the author is very good at writing stories. The people in the story are very real. Some are arrogant, but they also assess the situation, and some are dedicated to seeking the truth, and are deeply affectionate, but they also pay attention to propriety. I think the author has really written what people should do and what the characters do is consistent with his character, social status and strength. What makes me feel awkward after boasting so much is that, first of all, this system of foundation building and golden elixir for mortals to cultivate immortality is not very consistent with the supernatural power plug-ins made by the author. For example, the protector general named Wucheng Wang would be more reasonable under the classical system of cultivating immortals under the Yin God, Yang Shen and Yuan Shen systems. There are also plug-ins where the author's name is Shen Tong, but it is actually a horoscope. There are too many and too complicated, making it difficult for readers to remember, and the author will inevitably forget them. Well, that's it

Too much hang-up! Originally, there were very few supernatural powers written about! Later, it happened to everyone! Moreover, the magical power thing becomes more and more abstract the more you open it, the more Wuchengwang looks at it, the more boring it becomes! Very good idea! How could it be like this! What a pity

There is a problem with the rhythm of your plot. Whether it was "lowering people's hearts" before or recruiting disciples later, it was not the right time. If you are successful, you can help the world. Now you are a "poor guy". It is not an exaggeration to say that the family is in trouble. You don't have enough food to practice by yourself, and you have accepted a disciple. . Moreover, finding and accepting disciples are very involved, and they are not something you, Qi Lian Liu, can touch The writing is still there, but the plot arrangement is too poor, and it is a pity to abandon it if it is tasteless.

I feel that the author brought modern webcams and the like to the world of immortality. Looking at the scope of use, the pattern is a bit too big. Afterwards, the power system and knowledge system have changed, and what kind of Tao Fruit the protagonist wants to prove. Does his master want to prove the Data Tao Fruit or the Witness Tao Fruit? The author needs to grasp it

I skipped to chapter one hundred and seventy. Overall, when I first started reading this book, I had high expectations. But I feel that this book is too open-ended and has too many magical powers. It didn't take long for me to encounter a magical power with golden fingers everywhere. And the protagonist's character... How to say? I felt a little aggrieved at the beginning, and just looking at it made me want to scold the author. Maybe after seeing the ancestor Jin Dan around, I started to feel happy, but I don't know why it was a bit awkward. After the protagonist joins the sect and takes Xuan Xuzi as his disciple, he suddenly becomes a little boring. Well, when I read the first few chapters, I felt very excited. After all, the protagonist is really hardworking and self-disciplined. But in the end it did not meet my expectations and I was very disappointed. All in all, this book is the same as "Born to Become a Immortal Seed". It is considered a poisonous weed among fairy seedlings, and it makes some surprises from time to time.

Let me tell you my opinion. I don't hide my shortcomings. The author's writing style is sophisticated, the plot is smooth, and his imagination is wide open. He especially likes the way to obtain supernatural powers. It's a pity that the author has not put much effort into this aspect. It is actually quite amazing to understand other people's lives through portrait copying. Let's talk about some shortcomings. From the division of Qi training, foundation building, and golden elixir, we can see that this article is about cultivating immortality rather than cultivating the Tao. But why is the so-called enlightenment after the realm of divine transformation? It also introduces what elixirs are needed for Yuanying to break through the divine transformation. So what is the significance of practicing Dharma scene in the realm of Yuanying? Incorporating the connotation of cultivating Taoism into the realm of cultivating immortals, and mixing them together randomly will affect the perception.

The front of this book is so poisonous, I feel like a holy mother, it makes me mad

I came across this book while scanning the rankings, but it was like a flood that washed away the Dragon King Temple. I was just sighing that the author's story was well written, but when I looked through the author's works, I found that I had read them before, such as Becoming a Disciple at Sanxingdong in the beginning, and Swallowing a Dragon Ball. It turns out that I have read the old author before. It's pretty good. I'm quite destined.

In the first chapter alone, the overall situation is laid on the head, and the protagonist's mind is quite clear. 😒 It would be fine if he was an aboriginal. It is easy for children to cultivate a sense of belonging, but it is difficult for time travellers... Damn it, that wouldn't make any sense, but at least in my heart I shouldn't be so submissive, and I can't even talk about hating my family. After the kindness of upbringing has been repaid, we should make use of it, and benefits should be exchanged, but it is possible to part ways sooner or later, especially if Goldfinger has the capital. (Maybe I am a profit-seeking person and think this way) I would like to ask if Shen Nong can tell me whether the protagonist is still so harmless in the future.