After Becoming a God, I Became What Players Call a Dog Planner

Is the author Nasita gone?

Irene of Thousand Swords Irene and the clone

Double Carp

Saint Hilda

Sophia

Olina's buttocks

Ollie

Martina

In the overcrowded virtual arena, dense crowds cheered for the final of [War]. The circular arena was filled with flames of war, and the smoke dispersed between the two teams of opponents. There are only two people left in one team, a female shield guard and a male archer, with an evil ghost holding a knife on the chest, which symbolizes Tu Fu; but there are three people in the other team, a male spearman, a male magician, and a male archer, with a flaming lion carved on the chest, which symbolizes the Fire Lion Team. Lin Zhixue - the female shield guard exhaled a breath and glanced at the shooter behind her. She is 24 years old and has served in Tufu for six years. According to her original age, she should have retired long ago, but she couldn't bear to give up. Behind her, the little brother and the three teammates who had just been defeated entered this cruel industry with dreams in mind. She has won many honors - [The Most Reliable Shield of the Flame of War], [Third Place in the Single Player Points Competition of the Flame of War], and [The Person Who Always Appears in Key Positions]. Even if she loses this game, it doesn't matter. No one will blame her because she is too old among this group of people. Holding 5% of Tufu's shares, she can still live a good life even if she retires, but who can carry the weight after she is gone? The other members of the Tufu team had little experience in competitions and their performance on the spot was unstable because of their nervousness. At the beginning, Tu Fu had a dominant position in [War], but Lin Zhixue's mood fluctuated, and she glanced at the man on the coaching bench of the Fire Lion Team. That man's job-hopping took away Tufu's spear and the tactics the team had painstakingly studied. As a result, the Tufu team has been stuck in the quarterfinals for the next three years, and the Internet joked that the Tufu finals were the quarterfinals. She must win this battle and inject the final dignity into Tufu's back again. "It's time to get ready." Lin Zhixue turned around and greeted her team members with a smile before they could react. The shield in his hand suddenly dehydrated and he threw it at the Fire Lion Lancer, and the battle was about to break out. Commentary stage—— "Now we see that the Tufu team is in a desperate situation. After a short silence, [Lin Zhixue] takes action. He launches his flying shield and knocks away the fire lion vanguard [Gusu Yanyu], but [Gusu Yanyu] reacts very quickly and removes the knockback effect of the flying shield without moving like a mountain. He immediately rescues the fire lion wizard [Autumn Wind Blowing Leaves]. It seems that this wave of offensive is in vain. Wait! She The target was Fire Lion Archer [Thorn Forest], throwing?! What did I see? Lin Zhixue's secretly learned throwing skill was thrown into Tu Fu's half, but [Thorn Forest] reacted quickly with aerial shots and moonlight arrows to push back [Lin Zhixue]'s subsequent pursuit. "This offensive is very unwise! [Lin Zhixue]'s greedy and rash advance] not only reduced his own health, but also made his weapons go away. Now Kema... Wait! What did we see! The [Thorn Forest] in the air was penetrated! It's the charged arrow of Tufu Archer [Don't Eat Candy]! [Don't Eat Candy]'s charged arrow The arrow successfully rescued [Lin Zhixue] and the Fire Lion team lost its continuous output member! But [Autumn Wind Blowing Leaves] immediately locked onto him! [No Sugar]'s movement ability was restricted, and the next continuous fireball will be the arrival of death." "But things are not that simple! Zhanhuo [the person who always appears in key positions]! She stood up again! The small buckler in the skill shield switching backpack was switched out, and it perfectly blocked a series of fireballs. It can be said that..." The commentator's voice was still Before it fell, everyone in the audience saw Lin Zhixue half-kneeling in front of [Don't Eat Sugar] with a spear stuck in his back, and [Don't Eat Sugar] was bleeding from the corner of his mouth His voice was a little weak: "Captain... You must win at all..." "Director! Play back what just happened!" The two commentators were confused about what just happened. The director played back, and Lin Zhixue, who had blocked all the fireballs, gasped, but a cold light flashed across her cheek. Lin Zhixue's heart seemed to have been pinched hard. How could she forget that what [Gusu Yanyu] is best at is not fighting - but projectiles and double-gun bursts! A shooting ability comparable to that of a shooter! Subconsciously, Lin Zhixue turned around and used support to [Don't Eat Candy]. She successfully moved her body into the path of the spear, and the spear pierced Lin Zhixue's back hard. The legendary equipment was like ceramic at that moment and could not stop the spear from penetrating. A gunman appeared behind [Don't Eat Sugar], and a smile appeared on his lips. Then he silently lifted [Don't Eat Sugar]'s body on the tip of the gun and then turned the gun body to return [Don't Eat Sugar]'s health to zero. "Sister Lin, you can't give anyone hope. Because your own hope doesn't exist." [Gusu Yanyu] looked at Lin Zhixue who was half-kneeling in front of him and spoke. His feelings for the person in front of him were complicated. She brought her poor self into a shining stage, but she also tightly restrained her famous self. Even if he just wants to go out and interact with some fans, he will be reprimanded. Why should you reprimand him for something you and I agree on! He is here to make more money and enjoy better life! Why should she stand in his way! Looking at the dbuff in Lin Zhixue's status bar [continuous bleeding], he grinned: "Sister Lin, let me give you a hope~ We won't attack together~ Let's see if you can defeat us in the limited time." As he said this, he backed away with a spear, and he wanted to play a cruel trick on the self-righteous "Captain Lin". [Lin Zhixue] gasped and stood up, turning around to face the [Autumn Wind Blowing Leaves] not far away. After activating the charge skill, she doesn't have much health left. The only option is to resolve the battle as quickly as possible - or leave the scene in despair. There was a ringing in her ears, painful but... Bearable. [Autumn Breeze Leaves] has no objection to [Gusu Yanyu]'s approach. It is also an honor for him to defeat the old god and ascend to the throne. Fireballs, wind blades, and corrosion techniques blasted towards [Lin Zhixue] one after another. [Lin Zhixue] used a small buckler to block them one by one, but her health was constantly being reduced. Under the effect of the charge, the distance between them continued to shorten, and just a few steps away, [Autumn Breeze Leaves] released a long-prepared retreat halo. "Move. - Move!" Lin Zhixue began to feel dizzy, but just when he was about to come into contact with the halo. Lin Zhixue miraculously crouched down and penetrated from the lower side of the halo. [Autumn Breeze Leaves] Before he had time to react, he was knocked away by a shield, followed by combos that couldn't land.                                                                                                                                                                                                   of Wen's team-mates being knocked away continuously, our hearts start beating in our hearts as we just thought that we can't avoid the halo. Gritting his teeth, the Fire Lion could not lose this game no matter what. So the spear in his hand was slightly charged and then suddenly thrown out. A throw of the universe, as long as [Lin Zhixue] is hit by this shot, he will definitely die! Lin Zhixue was constantly firing floating combos in the shadow of [Autumn Wind Blowing Leaves] in the air, but in her heart, she grabbed [Autumn Wind Blowing Leaves] tightly and turned around to throw. Puff——The sound of something piercing the flesh was heard. [Autumn Breeze Leaves]'s body was carried away by the spear like a rag. Lin Zhixue suddenly felt a burst of anger. She never expected that [Gusu Yanyu], who left Tufu, would have reached such a state. He had completely lost his heart as a strong man. "Sister Lin, you should give up. You have already used the charge just now, and the flying shield's CD is ridiculously long. What other long-range attack methods do you have, and your current bleeding condition. I'm afraid you will die before you get close to me." [Gusu Mist Rain]'s tone was full of pride, "And even if you have other ways to get close to me, can you, a bad shield guard, catch up with me?" [Gusu Mist Rain] controlled the character to turn around and run away. As long as he wins, he doesn't mind whether he wins fair or not. [Lin Zhixue] looked at [Gusu Yanyu] running away in the distance, exhaling a breath of turbid air from the corner of her mouth, and she felt like something was flowing out of her nose. Turn your arm to move your wrist. She also had a long-range attack method that [Gusu Yanyu] didn't know about, but she wasn't sure if it could hit the opponent. She gritted her teeth and pulled out the spear on her back, her wrist was trembling - it was an old injury of hers, and she was not even sure whether she could hit it as she had never thrown a spear before. "God, if you really exist. Please let me shoot more accurately." Lin Zhixue prayed for the first time, turning her wrist. Take a deep breath – cast. A tearing sensation and dizziness filled [Lin Zhixue's] brain. She was half-kneeling on the ground, her eyes fixed on the person who was running away. The fast-moving [Gusu Yanyu] felt something approaching him and turned his head slightly. An extremely familiar thing kept magnifying in his eyes, and then he was violently brought to the ground. Before his health returned to zero, he recognized that the spear was his weapon. After a brief silence on the field, the field broke into cheers, "Let us congratulate Tu Fu! Congratulations on winning the championship..." Before the commentator could announce the result, Lin Zhixue on the stage was hit hard on the ground. There was a panic at the scene. Team Tufu finally won the championship again after three years, six semi-annual competitions, and three finals after reconstruction. But the ceremony was over before it even began because that man would never appear on the field again. The next day, Tu Fu's official WeChat account released information. Lin Zhixue retired due to health reasons and was unable to attend the championship award ceremony. Many years later, some players still remember that one person took back the glory that belonged to him three years ago on that day.

The plot written at the beginning when the player arrives is really rubbish. The previous plots were very good. However, once the player arrives, there is a gap and the excitement is moving. All of these need to be foreshadowed by the plot. However, as soon as you enter the game, there is such a plot. The reader does not even understand the world or the characters in it. How can it move people? I really can't understand it. The most important thing is that there is no foreshadowing. It really means that the player directly conflicts with the NPC as soon as he enters the game.

I have never quite understood this kind of text that summons players to save the world. The only difference between players and aboriginals is unlimited resurrection and upgrades. I feel that aboriginals are no different from players if they have them. Summoning players is unnecessary and meaningless.

Let me tell you something, I hope the author will not delete the comment. It was a bit exciting to watch at first, but then it was a bit uncomfortable. The protagonist never considered the feelings of his own people and directly arranged for players to fight with his own people. Players thought it was a game, but the aborigines did not. Even if the aborigines you wrote about could be resurrected, the aboriginals themselves still have friends and relatives who don't know. Meaningless death in battle will only make the aboriginals have unwarranted panic, and the enemies will be resurrected and will lower their morale. The despair during this period is really unimaginable. I also know that I wrote it like this for the sake of the plot, but it really dissuaded me.

I specially rewarded it to speak for myself. I don't understand what the operation at the beginning is. Does the author dislike the fact that he has so many readers? You are the God King, not a petty thief. You have to let the knights and players kill each other and waste more divine power to resurrect the knights, right? This thing is nothing else, but in terms of logic, the protagonist is here. The residents dare not say anything, but you can guarantee that they are not hostile to the players in their hearts? A group of monsters and monsters are killing the knights who are protecting themselves and they don't care? And how can the players at the first level defeat those knights? You didn't handle the previous settings well. Players don't need divine power to resurrect? There is no penalty for death?

I didn't understand the necessity of the initial conflict You didn't see any problem with the bishop either Then, this is your way of stopping the sacrifice? Is this why others believe in your divine power?

There was a divine revelation at the start of the server to tell the hero that the brave was coming, but the two sides ended up fighting! Just speechless

The level of the lv5 author is just different, the story is so touching If we change the previous battle with NPCs, which is a very vicious player who wants to persuade players to quit, the performance of this book will be much better. If I hadn't been bored, I would have been persuaded to leave.

Why did all the good stuff go to Shuangli? Are players stupid enough to be exploited by her? I don't believe that she is the only one who wants to enrich the food, and aren't there two brothers in that kind of place? Why don't you give me a task to invent new varieties?

After looking at it, to be honest, it is a bit unreasonable for players to be resurrected infinitely, and it is also a bit of a punishment! For example, 10% experience will be lost if you die, and the more times you resurrect, the longer it will take. Otherwise, it would be meaningless to watch, as you would just bump into this thing, and that thing again and again! There's no difficulty at all

It is much easier to resurrect the indigenous people indefinitely than to summon the players What is the use of the players' trouble-making personality?

Creating conflicts is a waste of divine power. If the faith generated by hundreds of thousands of residents is enough, then the god king of this world is really cheap. The aborigines did not shield themselves from the pain and did not know the truth. Hate is not so easy to resolve.

The most a player can do is to be called a warrior, but he is not worthy of the title of warrior.

What do you mean, author, you need to understand that what you are writing is a game novel, and it is a game after all. You need to clearly explain levels, skills, and so on. I only saw players using sword skills, but I didn't even see their names. There is also a player panel, which needs to be shown to readers. The purpose of levels is to give readers specific data on how their strength increases. You just talk about level growth, but I don't even know how many levels he has advanced. Also, you directly put the player against the NPC at the beginning. The plot is too long... I couldn't watch half of it because I was too confused about the strength level of the natives and the blur of the player data. If these are all solved, it will definitely be a good book, but I will withdraw it first...

Because of the protagonist, the indigenous people here will not really die because of the players for the time being. The players and the aborigines are now in a relationship of testing and understanding each other, and no one will really die. As for why players are summoned to save the world instead of letting the aborigines save the world, it can only be said that summoning players is simply to have more combat power. If the aborigines will not die because of the players, it will have no impact. Moreover, players and aborigines have completely different ideas and different levels of education

When I first read it, I wanted to ask if the players in the author's works are always nonsensical. Is it too stereotyped? The normal group of players should be diverse. Do you want to write it like a comedy by making all the players nonsensical? This doesn't seem to fit in with the serious background of gods fighting against all living beings.

Chapter 17: The moment the protagonist shows up easily, the book ends

Those stupid netizens always feel weird when they are dating aboriginal people, and the reason why they are dating is because of poor information. It's a very normal thing here, basically everyone can do it, but very few people do it over there. And basically every novel like this will be written. So every time I see this I usually give up.

There's nothing great about summoning players, except that they can be upgraded and infinitely resurrected. It's better to modify it and let the aborigines become players. After summoning the player, the protagonist's strength becomes smaller and the player is less obedient.

It seems that many people are disgusted with the first few chapters. Let me tell you my opinion. If your position is not right, don't use it to bully me. After all, everyone has their own love and cannot force it. The senior aboriginal people know that this is a test for them when the God King returns (I think). In fact, it is also one of the protagonist's intentions. It allows both parties to have a certain understanding of each other without fighting or acquaintance. The advantage is that it can accelerate the integration, and there will be no life-or-death hatred with the protagonist in charge. The author's positioning of the protagonist should be like Zhongli, as a character who takes care of everything, and has a position of an old father who "I can take care of everything". He will not care about the stumbling, but will never let danger happen. This is destined to limit the scope of the protagonist's activities to a circle. The protagonist will not tell the people all the answers explicitly. If you want to know, you have to explore it yourself. The player appears as a brave man to solve the difficulty of this problem, but the player is uncontrollable to a certain extent. Then through some events, the player can have feelings and let the aborigines understand what kind of existence the player is. The best way is to have a fight. [The one who knows you best is your enemy] After understanding, it is cooperation. How to cooperate? The protagonist has given (release a task) Why do the aborigines believe in the players who have beaten them to death before? At 1 o'clock, there is no irreconcilable conflict between the two parties. The task of saving Anna is the trigger. Players have to complete the task, and the aboriginal people have to maintain the continuity of the elves through a sacrifice that they do not want. At 2 o'clock, the aboriginal leaders knew that the player was summoned by the returning God King. They regarded this as a test from the God. The two sides fought so fiercely purely because they knew that no one would die and they did not want the God to think that they were worthless and abandon them. Why do the indigenous people still have so much trust in the protagonist who is the God King after thousands of years? Because that is the only hope in despair. Since we have the ability to make players immortal, why not just use aborigines? The fundamental reason is that it is easier to write and increase the sense of substitution, right? And those who have played Genshin Impact must have wanted to see the process of the Demon God War, right? Then if the player is given a great degree of freedom and uses the player's knowledge, would you want to change the ending of the Dust King's death? The plot is co-written by players and aborigines. Don't you hope to change the ending of Thirteen Heroes? It's a bit too much and a bit off topic Although my explanation is a bit far-fetched, it's still somewhat reasonable, right? As for why this method must be used, it is just like answering a question. There are so many ideas for solving the problem, and you always have to use one, either that or this, so why can't it be this?

That author is great, I set up my character as a person who has closed himself off in reality, unwilling to contact anyone, unwilling to tell his thoughts to others, but to those NPCs, even if they don't respond, he will slowly tell them his emotions, and he doesn't expect them to respond. He just needs a listener. You can set the reason for closing yourself, the author, you can set it at will. I will add a relationship set in the real world. He has a pair of cousins, a cousin, a pair of cousins, a cousin, and a half-brother. He lives with his mother. He has been a bullied person since he was a child. In school, he was teased by his classmates, framed, and provoked by other classmates to be good with him. I have had two good teachers in my life, one in elementary school and one in junior high school. In high school, there were a few bullies in his class who basically repeated the grade. Once, his desk was moved to the front of the podium for those bullies. He moved the desk back and those few people still said bad things about him. Fortunately, it was just right. The bell rang, but after the get out of class, they A few people gathered around, and one of them removed the doorknob of the back door, and started knocking on his desk while talking, making several dents in his desk. Finally, he couldn't help but fight back, and was pushed to the ground without weight in the crowd, but he still didn't give up his resistance. However, several classmates in the class not only didn't come to help, but even came over and kicked him a few times. There was so much movement along the way that it directly attracted the class teacher, and he escaped from the siege of everyone. No matter how painful it was, he didn't shed a single tear because he knew tears were useless. Although there were some scratches on his face, at least no one would trouble him after this time, because he couldn't hold down five or six people, and he was a person who refused to admit defeat. He transferred to elementary schools twice. In a private elementary school in Shanghai, it was his first day from kindergarten to elementary school. As a result, when the middle-aged teacher introduced himself, he used colored pencils to write abc on an English copy. He was taken out and scolded, and then transferred directly to the next class. No matter how hard the wall is, it will eventually be penetrated, and those trapped inside will always see that ray of light coming in. (Hey, how should I put it, most of it is my own experience. Now that I think about it, it's nothing. It's just that I couldn't swallow it in one breath at the beginning. Why do honest people always get bullied?)

I've seen the progress and it's almost halfway through. Two versions of the server have been launched, and there are only 1,000 people in total. Why should the whole network pay attention to it? I want to know how many people can be included in this article by the end?