Abyssal Invasion? as a Demon Cultivator, I Laughed

Nan Mu, the whole article is poisonous. First: The protagonist's character is inconsistent Second: The author's wording has not been polished Third: The problem of three views. The protagonist just received the inheritance, not a real magic cultivator, and is only a skill user. He is not a person who has experienced great sorrow and pain and does not need to understand the inner meaning of the skill. Once you enter the abyss, you feel like you have been taken away from your body. Fourth: The protagonist's intelligence is not as good as that of children with Down syndrome. In the chapter about the rich second generation, it is clear that they can unite their strength and develop rapidly, but they are short-sighted. Even if one person has a set of armor, that's 10 corpses. You won't accept one more body? Or does the causal point belong to you? 11 People are not as efficient as 1 person? Embarrassing, the rich second generation looks more like a normal person than the protagonist I initially thought it was the kind of story that uses abyssal creatures as consumables and can still gain merit.

What nonsense did you give me? Are you sure this is fantasy or magic? Isn't this the fucking weapons master? Who the hell keeps crafting weapons like you're a blacksmith? The writing is neither fish nor fowl, the author, you wrote the protagonist so inconsistently, and what kind of thing did you write? It is fantasy, not fantasy, not an online game, not an online game. There are a lot of flaws in the plot, and when you look at it later, you will realize that it is all a running account.

I'm really convinced that there's a woman in Chapter 5. Without a woman, the plot can't advance, right?

The review of the props is too long and a bit verbose. It does not match the style of this book. It is recommended that it be deleted. It is not necessary.

The front isn't that good, but the back half is pretty good.

The idea is good, but the writing is not good, the logic is not smooth, and it looks awkward.

First, be ruthless and ruthless. If you have already become a demon, don't talk about pitying others. If you are not a demon, you cannot survive. Take care of yourself first. Second, you must be willing to give yourself up. It is said that I am a demon and I have become a demon by abandoning myself. When you have no absolute power to protect yourself, it is not a big deal to give up some things outside yourself in order to survive. Third, you must be able to make use of all available resources. As a demon cultivator, you have to know that whether they are of the same kind or different kind, they are all resources for you on the road of cultivation. Whether they are used to refine treasures, or used to increase mana, or refined into puppet incarnations, they are all useful.

It's obvious that the author can't tell the difference between the words devil, bad seed, egoism, and villain. These terms overlap with each other, but they are not the same thing. As a protagonist, he can be bad, he can be evil, he can cultivate evil, and he can rather teach me to betray the world than teach him. Everyone in the world is responsible for me, but they must have their own set of rules and behavioral logic, and cannot be capricious (I refer to the underlying logic of the protagonist's character and behavior). On the surface, the protagonist cultivates demons, but in fact he is a villain. Even cultivating demons is just to cover up that he is a villain. Because they don't have their own unique personality charm, this kind of person can be a supporting role or a villain, but they cannot be the protagonist. A real demon cultivator can also have his own personality charm, but after reading more than a hundred chapters, the more he reads, the more wrong he becomes. He doesn't find the shining point in Chu Xiu at all, and has nothing to pursue. As a demon cultivator, he is not pure enough, and as a villain, he is not dirty enough. He is indeed egoistic, but he always feels bad and stupid, with insufficient IQ, and too mediocre (barely considered a chaotic evil attribute).

Let's put it this way, the protagonist is more like a necromancer, and his initial professional skills are similar to wind blades. Who is a magic cultivator who can play this? Not all demonic cultivators use blood-burning escape techniques, disintegration of demons, kryptonite life, refining the "Umbrella of All Peoples", swallowing, and absorbing the essence of flesh and blood. The most orthodox method with the least hidden danger is the spirit-swallowing art (the righteous path absorbs spiritual energy, while the demonic cultivator devours spiritual energy). Highlight a person who is fast in cultivation and has strong self-protection ability in the early stage. If he is not fast in cultivating demons, why should he practice P? Just like other professions, slowly upgrade, aren't other professions better? Just for the weapon refining materials in the introduction? Selling dog meat on a sheep's head

Your book is not popular, I have read more than ten chapters. The protagonist can upgrade without damage by picking up corpses and mobs, and use corpses to synthesize powerful equipment. But the author just refuses to do it. He insists on fighting monsters that are beyond the protagonist's ability. While talking about wretched development, he crazily commits suicide, and then forcibly suppresses the protagonist's combat power. The key point is that this is only a dozen chapters.

If you don't have a high IQ, you have to show it off. Once you show off, you will show off. After gaining inheritance, you will become a demon. Once you practice, you will become a real villain. The setting is full of surprises. It is a joy to suppress the strength. The realm does not increase the equipment. Fighting is really embarrassing. You don't need to use long-range skills. Punching to the flesh is really useful. You don't have to be crazy. You don't have to be a demon. The brainless Virgin is here to conquer the demon. Please don't poison the demon next time.

The subject matter is fine, but the writing style is really hard to describe. Then the character of the protagonist must be as dark as possible, murdering his parents and friends. In this way, the readers can be screened and you can like it, so that now there is neither human nor demon. In a word, you forget your justice when you see small gains, and you cherish your life when you seek big things. So stupid

It is extremely poisonous and has extremely crooked views. It calls people who want to fight for the destiny of mankind and have ideals as Holy Mother, and then says that they will definitely die in the abyss. Then whenever there is a person with good intentions, the protagonist will be malicious, as if everyone deserves to die, and they also pretend that they are the truth, and the supporting characters are also a bit brainless.

Is that enough to spice things up?

Why is this book review section so contradictory? Can any book friend explain it to me? I read in the book review section that some people say that the protagonist is selfish, and some say that he is not like a demon cultivator. Which one is right? What is the protagonist like? When I read the introduction, I thought it was a magic cultivator with a relatively high bottom line, so I added a bookshelf to read it, but the comment section got confused for me. ps: Let me share my personal views on those in the comment area who discuss how to practice magic. In fact, I personally think that older readers should not have such thoughts. Because Zhang Wuji is also a demon cultivator (The Great Shift of the Universe) and the leader of the demon sect, he is not yet the protagonist of Wei Guangzheng. So it depends on the protagonist's own will whether to practice magic or not. If you can't control yourself after practicing magic, how is it different from the criticized system that controls the protagonist's flow? It's not that he is also controlled by external objects and has no thoughts of his own. So the magic cultivator should be the background, not the character. For example, in the books listed in the comment section, the characters of the protagonists are not normal people. Even if they practice the light skills, they will go in a direction that is not human. Obviously the magic cultivator in the introduction of this book is the background.

There are magic weapons that no one has ever mastered, magical powers that no one has ever mastered... Then the question is, since no one has mastered it, how did the method of practicing magic weapons and magical powers come about 🤔

As a demon cultivator, you should be a demon cultivator honestly, enjoy the benefits and bear the disadvantages, and don't always try to take advantage of loopholes. Don't be like that, although I am a demon cultivator but I have tens of millions of merits, the first thing I eat is the crab, and the rest I eat are all 💩. The merit system has been broken by them a long time ago. There is a huge loophole in this kind of exploiting behavior. You can get merit by killing zombies in another world. Let's not talk about how the merit comes from. Such a simple loophole, those demon bosses who have lived for thousands of years can't think of it? Something as simple as zombies, or even similar things, can't be made by magic? As long as the subordinates can regularly leave poison in an area, and the boss can harvest it regularly, there is no way to survive without countless merits! Killing itself can never gain merit. It can only gain strength, strength, and survival. Only actions such as protection, inheritance, and salvation can gain merit. The reason why a demon cultivator is a demon cultivator is that if he only plunders lives and uses biological materials to refine weapons, he can only be regarded as a butcher. Only those who make use of the anger, sorrow, fear, fear, hatred, and resentment of sentient beings are considered demons. Simply killing people until they die is killing people.

It's so boring. The protagonist doesn't see any demonic nature at all. He is just like an ordinary self-interested immortal cultivator in the underworld cultivating immortality world. It's so boring. I don't ask the protagonist to be crazy to the extreme, but at least he should have a sense of demonic nature and demonic traits. 😓

This is said to be a magic cultivator. There is no appearance of a demonic cultivator. He practices techniques that will affect even the top bosses. There is no protection at all. Forget it, he still has the top profession and the top talent suitable for this profession. He gets it at level 5. With a lot of good equipment, I can barely beat level 7 mobs, my combat power is mediocre, and my cultivation speed is not as fast as that of someone with S professional talent, A level, or a civilian without good equipment. For the 5 million that can be earned in 2 days, he sold himself and signed a soul contract that is life-threatening to him. It's really funny.

The subject matter and creativity are very good, but unfortunately the character creation is a complete mess. The demon cultivator is not a gangster, who forgets the righteousness for small profits. All but two of the original four people completed the task. In the end, you left two points and one person did not say much, but ended up using them all and still struggling to draw the cake. How many people can sympathize with such a protagonist? It feels like the author's understanding of the demon cultivator has turned into the refined egoism of a nouveau riche mentality, which is quite disgusting.

There are too few monsters and the protagonist upgrades too slowly. I hope that the next chapter will leave the building and the streets will be full of monsters like in Resident Evil. Otherwise, a novel about peerless lawn mowing becomes an upgrade to fight monsters, and it will definitely be criticized. The materials are also a bit wasteful. You can add a disposable magic weapon like a grenade made of flesh and blood. Its function is to hit corrosive equipment and flesh, or turn into a flesh ball to wrap the enemy after hitting it. The equipment introduction can also be less detailed, or be as concise as possible. Your introduction is too long, it's easier to say when it's free. Once it's on the shelves, people will definitely criticize it if it's still like this!

I thought the protagonist was a normal person who just worked as a demon cultivator, or a ruthless person who didn't say many ruthless things. However, the author gave the protagonist a wretched image of a sinister villain, and he also felt good about himself, which made me vomit. It also suppresses the protagonist's level. It is not a debate between the ideals of immortality and good demonism, but the struggle of human beings to survive against the abyss. There is no need to play the tricks of the immortal world. After all, there is no shortage of so-called demonic cultivation resources, and there is no need to worry about eroding sanity. Why do you have to engage in the trick of being a villain like dark literature? Are there any benefits? The author's starting point was wrong at the beginning. He always wrote plots about how evil human nature is, and deliberately pushed the protagonist to be isolated and helpless. It's just weird, and other people can't defeat monsters and level up. I can only add causal points. I don't know what conflicts of interest they have with the protagonist. On the contrary, they can speed up the protagonist's equipment upgrade and improve the safety of fighting monsters. There is also the cliche that girls are all good people, and all men are hypocrites or punks 😒, oh, the ones who are even more cowardly push the girls away. A novel that best explains the true "Although I am a demon cultivator, I am a good person" plot. After all, the others are all about crossing two realms. As long as you use any means, you will be rejected by the right path no matter what. But it's a pity that it was written crookedly by the author.

The problem with shaping the protagonist is really quite big. You have to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, and you have to pretend to be a saint in front of others. The attitude towards both good and bad people is like I am mentally ill and it is best to stay away from me. You have to pretend to be inconspicuous but do not work, and your pseudonym and identity are also very casual, which makes the entire public system seem to be slack. There are other things I can't tell, but the overall atmosphere is very confusing. The world is in ruins, surrounded by foreign enemies, and treacherous people are exposed, but life is actually quite relaxed and happy. A magical sense of urgency and relief coexist. The growth path is the same as my solo upgrade, but I just copy the appearance of the stick and I really don't like it.

There is a problem with the setting of this novel. The protagonist is neither good nor bad. The background setting is that he has two parents and brothers. However, the author writes about a "demon cultivator" who is hesitant, indecisive, and is coerced by justice to fight for others. Do you think this is like a demon? There are also exercises. Author, don't you think that practicing a few zombies and practicing a Ten Thousand Soul Banner is called demonic cultivation, right? Of your three cultivation routes, replace the Ten Thousand Soul Banner with Spreading Beans to Become a Soldier and Refining the Yellow Turban Warrior. Do you think the other two have anything to do with demonic cultivation?       ，，？ Are you crazy or am I crazy? The body-refining method has nothing to do with demons. It is a serious acquired body that is transformed into an innate demon body. Does the first-class body-refining method have anything to do with demons? Did you soak in the blood pool or swallow the creatures to build the foundation? What does a body-refining method that relies solely on self-cultivation have to do with demon cultivation? I don't know how the protagonist has the nerve to call himself a demon cultivator. Since he started practicing, even after eliminating the copy NPCs, he can count the number of people he has killed on two hands. What can he hide on the stage at the beginning? A dozen people combined can't beat you, but you still pretend to be a grandson and pretend to save people. Can't you wait to lick the bag? How can you be a devil? You are a great saint riding on a horse.

Demonic cultivators are demonic cultivators, and villains are villains. The main character is really bad. Kill the first person you meet.

After reading Chapter 40, I really can't stand it anymore. The protagonist has been single-player for so long, and the gap between him and others has only widened so much. In the early stage, it was said that he would awaken a high-level ability, but in the end, after one copy, he was only a few levels higher than the ordinary minions. From the beginning, the combat power was so suppressed that the immortal cultivator was treated like a low-level martial arts fighter. The experience was used to add skills to increase kicking strength. This was the only skill that had been added in a single player for so long.

What kind of rubbish? You need strength but don't have the strength. If you have the chance, don't take it. If you don't have the strength, you have to take it. It's a huge poison.

After reading Chapter 18, the first wave of group fights against monsters was completed, and the poison was already revealed The protagonist formed a team with his teammates and strangers to fight monsters, and then took all the loot that had been agreed upon in advance, including the loot of his teammates. When you write this, you really look like a demon cultivator who just kills people who have resentment towards you. After all, it is normal for demon cultivators to be cruel and maximize their profits. The author chose not to, and came up with a loophole-filled reason for the protagonist to keep the enemy by his side, and continued to deceive the teammate by trying to make a big pie, and then forced it to be reasonable. The author writes this plot as a way to win over and divide. You didn't give anyone any benefits, and you ate all the trophies that were agreed to be distributed to others, and then you said it was so hard for me. You have to be considerate of me and give me all the trophies for the team. The author calls this wooing? As for that stranger, he worked hard and the protagonist swallowed all the loot. Can I still trust you in my heart? Can I not resent you? Are people like this still around, waiting to be stabbed in the back? The author calls this differentiation. This author really treats the readers as fools. Either you can be ruthless and be a real demon cultivator, or you can stick to the bottom line and be a real man who pretends to be a demon cultivator, and you will become a brainless hypocrite.

①The so-called evil way is bad. This is not a big deal, it is necessary for a good novel, but it is too stupid. This kind of stupidity and badness is very disgusting. The supporting characters are also stupid, too facial, and lack the depth of the characters. ② It can be seen that the author wanted to describe an image of a devil who is exquisitely self-interested, unconstrained by the world, and a loner, so he wrote a lot of things that the author thinks are very evil, which makes people feel nauseous after reading it, in a physiological sense. ③There is no logic, just for the sake of self-interest, like a wild beast, pale and boring.

The protagonist in this novel is not a demon cultivator, but a proper villain with an extremely low IQ.