Douluo Dalu: Heaven Rewards Diligence, Tang San Is Broken by the Grind

If he had transmigrated into Battle Through the Heavens, I might say he was suppressing his level to solidify his foundation. If he were to transmigrate into a perfect world, I would say he was holding back his level to break through to the ultimate realm. But since he transmigrated to Douluo Continent, I'd only call him a complete idiot for suppressing his level.

NT, your Soul Power is unstable. You're already in Douluo Continent, why would you care about unstable Soul Power? In the later stages, just use the Sea God's Light and everything will be fine.

I find it disgusting to see the protagonist always using the same wood-chopping knife. His martial spirit is supposed to be a bow, yet he insists on practicing with a knife. Why not just write his martial spirit as a knife?

He tried to show off but ended up disgusted instead. A woodcutter's knife!!! Did the author think the male protagonist looked like a master when he held a woodcutter's knife, or that he was cool and powerful? I didn't sense any mastery or pretentiousness from him. From your novel, the male protagonist just seems a bit dim-witted and not very bright. A sophisticated, authoritative style isn't suitable for children; it seems your writing style isn't quite up to par.

Having read up to Chapter Six, and suddenly they introduced Observation Haki... You might as well have written it as Intuition or Mind's Eye; those wouldn't feel out of place. You've turned "Heaven Rewards Diligence" into "My Thoughts"... What's the point of adding spirit rings then? Just go straight to cultivation, refining essence into qi, refining qi into spirit.

①: In the early stages, there was no direct conflict of interest between him and the petty scoundrel, but he was somewhat targeted by the petty scoundrel (after all, he still had his father, Tang Ritian, watching over him). ②The training in the Grand Arena in the early stages was a bit too flamboyant!

Seeing the mention of joining Tianshui Academy makes me not want to watch anymore. What happened to your initial belief? You've forgotten it! It's hilarious. You pretended not to want to join before, but you just wanted to join Tianshui. Just as hypocritical as Tang San.

Just by looking at the title, you can tell how addictive this book is; it's mass-produced by the studio...

There are too many toxic spots, and many of them are extremely toxic. I want to complain, but I don't know where to begin.

He's stuck in a low-level fantasy world, his stuff was stolen, and he can't even utter a sound. He's a bottom-tier character, what right does he have? His soul power is weak, he hasn't thought about his martial soul development, and he's still dreaming of that damn immortal herb from the first game. He insists on locking himself in, with such a tiny, insignificant worldview.