Douluo Dalu: Heaven Rewards Diligence, Tang San Is Broken by the Grind

Generally speaking, there are two main points. The first one is too big. The proficiency system is proficiency. You will gain something if you work hard and it is inevitable. This is already a big problem. Secondly, if you are writing a Douluo fanfic, you must not forget your roots. The main theme of Douluo is martial arts and fighting souls. You don't care if he is a fantasy sewer or how he treats Tang San. But the main theme cannot be lost. If it is lost, what is it?

Not bad, I saw it after the Soul Master Competition. The protagonist is very powerful and has an above-average IQ. At first, he was not a womanizer and had no female protagonist. However, later he joined the all-female Tianshui Academy, the sisters of the Tianshui team, and then Duguyan, Ye Lingling... And then the people around him had various plug-ins to upgrade and take the divine exam. It felt a bit boring later on, it was all about upgrading the people around me, and the protagonist didn't make much of an appearance.

I kind of hate Xiao Wu, she keeps pestering her, and the male protagonist can't refuse. She's a bit weird. I don't really like that Yue'er in Tianshui Academy. I feel like she's just tea, and she likes to pretend to be innocent.

There are too many flaws. The author has never read Douluo Continent and started writing nonsense. Qian Renxue's first thought after seeing Tang San's Clear Sky Hammer spirit was to conquer Tang San and conquer the Clear Sky Sect by the way.

I've read a lot of fan fiction, but this novel gave me a bit of a nauseous feeling. It's just a minor problem if you hang too much. If you want to torture Tang San, you don't have any grudge against him. From the beginning to the end, Tang Hao got into a fight with Er Ming in the Star Dou Forest and implicated the protagonist once. Then the next time we meet, I will directly kill Tang Hao and train Tang San's mother to become a weapon spirit. Tang San himself had his hands and feet chopped off, and Xiao Wu was thrown back into the forest without further follow-up. The emotional description is even more confusing.

By Chapter 81, it has changed beyond recognition. I suggest you don't read it. They are all in Douluo, but don't use the soul bone to practice weapons. The soul ring is also gone. You might as well not have this Douluo in the beginning.

Lost the martial soul element

You have lost your soul ring, and you are writing about Chicken Feather Douluo.

In the later stage, the Holy Mother suddenly started to appear. Bibi Dong was also a pathetic person and had to save her at every turn. She was going to destroy the world. No matter how many reasons there were, it was not worth saving.

Shen Nong died of poisoning. The golden finger is a good rhythm and connection problem.