Mortal Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from the Birth of Minerals

What kind of structure are you writing? I already sent it to you if you messed up like this.

6. What kind of garbage is 90% of Qi training? Kill a mortal and fight for a long time. If someone else is hit by a fireball on the first level of Qi training, he will die immediately. Unless he misses, he will be poisoned directly by you.

The ten Foundation-Building Pills in the arena competition cannot be touched by anyone except the Yuan Ying Ancestor. This is fixed. Unlike the Ascension Order, which will squeeze out the quota allocated for the sect competition, the idea of ​​daring to use the Foundation-Building Pills for a Foundation Establishment now is probably out of mind. Who will join the Hidden Moon Sect in the future? The ten Foundation-Building Pills were originally released for fear of too much public resentment. You can send family members to participate with top-quality magic weapons, but once Once the result comes out, you can't move. Whoever touches it will die. This is the rule. Unless it is a grass-roots team, and the protagonist agrees to change, he is mentally ill. This is not your problem alone, it is a problem for all those who come from the Arena to join the sect.

As for this plot, you can decide for yourself. I won't comment on whether it is poisonous or not. Of course, I want to say goodbye

There are too many plots in the Mo family. Is a mortal family necessary?

64, 65 Extremely poisonous, a pig's trotter in the Qi training stage, Nangong Wan in the Qi training stage, seriously injuring Xiang Zhili, I feel like I am not reading a novel about cultivating immortals, but a science fiction novel

As mentioned, as an author, when you write a book, especially a fan fiction, can you think about it? Some readers are human beings, not animals who don't understand anything. Could you please stop being so perfunctory when writing? Why do I say perfunctory? First of all, you have to understand the combat power system in the mortal world. When using a high realm to defeat a low realm, even a small realm will be crushed. Even if you have a great magical power like Han Li, all the magic weapons are the best among the best. When encountering high-end enemies, you can only run in a hurry. That's why he was called Han Paopao. Let me tell you one more thing. With Xiang Zhili's cultivation as a god, a golden elixir that has lost its power, and a Qi refining that has not yet established its foundation, people can blow you to ashes with just a blink of an eye. When Wangyu wrote the novel Mortal, he had already made it clear how to write about the mortal stream. The core point is not to touch monks who are higher than you. You can be patient if you can, but you can't be willing to unleash all your fighting power on him and run away immediately. Do you want this book to be on the shelves and make money while working full time? Or are you just writing for fun and don't want to take it seriously? Even if you just want to be a full-time student, editors may not be able to get by at this level. In other words, there have been fewer authors in the past two years, and those who have some writing skills have gone to live broadcasts or short videos. Otherwise, it would be difficult for you to even sign a contract with your level of cultivation. When you write a story, you have to make it reasonable for the readers. Even if you are writing a composition in junior high school, and it is wild and imaginative, the teacher has to think it is reasonable before he can give you points. If you pile up all these words, it will be really ugly and a mess.

666 It was originally a cool story with a gold finger setting, but you ended up turning it into a tragic story about a sadistic master. How old is it? The original Han Li is not as miserable as your protagonist.

Is the author 2B, in the Qi Refining Stage to provoke Lao Xiang in the Divine Transformation Stage? Abandon the trap, abandon the trap, what the hell are you writing!

Awesome, refining qi and fighting against the old monster who transformed into a god.

I didn't read the novel, but glanced at the catalog. I saw that Xiang Zhili had been severely injured and couldn't stand it anymore.

After looking at the title and introduction of the book, I originally wanted to click in and read it, but then I saw the comments 🙂🙂🙂

No one dares to touch the Foundation Building Pill in this kind of competition It is originally meant to divide the casual cultivators and control the overall situation. This is a golden elixir that will kill any cultivator who wants to take it by force. This is digging into the roots of the entire world of immortality. Most of the immortality sects control breakthrough elixirs just to maintain order. The casual cultivators all over the world discovered that the things they worked so hard for were done at the whim of others. When there is no way to survive, then nothing can be done to break through. At that time, can Jindan and Nascent Soul be able to fight and kill all the casual cultivators in the world? Dare to kill them all? The sect has been wiped out, and there are also strong men among the casual cultivators. The rabbit is dead and the fox is sad (and although most of them are egoistic, the resources of a sect and the righteousness are at stake) they definitely don't mind taking action. And how many of their golden elixirs and Yuanyings can look after their disciples for a lifetime, otherwise no one in their sect can leave the sect alive. Originally, all the casual cultivators were those who licked blood from the edge of a knife. Now that they have the hatred of blocking the way, not many of them dare to fight.

It is recommended that Mo Yuzhu, Mo Fengwu, Mo Caihuan and the four ladies of the Mo family, Gong, Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin, Xiaomei, Chen Qiaoqian, Dong Xuaner, Hong Fu, Nishang Fairy, Zi Ling and her mother Zhou Yuan, Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Yuan Yao, Yan Li, Mrs. Wen, Mu Peiling, Li Huayuan's Taoist companion Jiang Yun, Hong Fen, Wen Qing, Ling Yuling, Mei Ning, Yinyue, Yuan Cha Shengzu, Bing Feng, Bai Yaoyi, Shi Die Fairy were admitted to the harem

The plot is rubbish, the prices are not clear, it is extremely toxic!

Blind Chicken Ba Shui. Don't change the original settings when writing fan fiction. Your prices are three times more expensive than the original book.

Extremely poisonous! ! ! The main character is like a dog, I can't stand it, 886!

Just use Xiang Zhili as the background wall. Why provoke him? So many of my colleagues are like this. This old man is quite nice, and he only looks for space nodes and counter-spirit passages, which are not available in the Blood Forbidden Land. The counter-spirit passages are also one-time openings by monks in the spiritual world.

I don't recommend reading it. It's all poisonous or extremely poisonous. The author is a primary school student. Basically every chapter is extremely poisonous. It has no logic and makes no sense. It's basically just random writing.

A person at the ninth level of Qi refining can't beat a mortal. It's so funny.

I practiced qi and fought against the gods and actually won. Damn my imagination.

As long as you can write, you won't be able to write.

What you wrote is a piece of shit.

Why do you still use the first-person pronoun "self" when talking to yourself? You should use "I"

When I saw the comments, I was afraid that they were all talking about poison. The author is also talented and has great perseverance, but he is still writing awesome things. Find a class as soon as possible!

The author's writing is pretty good, better than most of his fellow mortals. A few poisonous points that everyone mentioned, The first question about Xiang Zhili, the author has done a good job in patching it. The forbidden area was built by people from the upper realm, and it is suppressed. The small transformation god cannot be used at all. The second problem is that it is difficult to defeat ordinary people at the ninth level of Qi training. The patch makes it very clear that the masters of the upper world integrate the physical training methods.

Shennong is dead, extremely poisonous! ! !

Recommended protagonist: The invincible [Nine Heavens Thunder Ancestor: Lei Jiutian], one of the [Three Martial Arts Ancestors] in [Comic: Iron General 2012], has [Thunderbolt Magic]: The external power is divided into mist and blood rain, five thunders, violent thunder roar, diamond and thunder body, thunder and lightning, thunder wrath, thunder and thunder shake the mist, and Lingxia neon lightning dominates the sky. [Thunder and Thunderbolt Magic] is a supreme magical skill created by the "Nine Heavens Thunder Ancestor" who is the number one in the world. Practitioners must constantly absorb the power of thunder and lightning to improve, strengthen and sublimate their own energy and spirit, and develop and enhance their own vitality, potential and potential. Those who have mastered the magical power of thunder and thunder will have endless inner strength, and every move of their hands and feet will shake the heaven, earth, and sky like spring thunder. [Thunder and Thunder Magic] There are eight moves in total created by "Nine Heavens Thunder Ancestor". These moves are very comprehensive, ranging from sound waves, defense, speed, etc. There are moves in almost every area. By practicing the God of Thunder and Thunder function, you can convert the absorbed power of thunder and lightning into your own vitality and potential to strengthen and sublimate your own vitality and potential. You can also use the absorbed power of thunder and lightning to continuously refine, improve, strengthen and sublimate your own spirit! [Vajra Thunder Body] (Defense and Attack): Use various weapons such as swords, guns, swords, halberds, sticks, hammers, axes, and artillery, as well as your own internal strength and absorbed thunder and lightning power, as well as waterfalls, seas, storms and other external natural forces of the universe. It can not only increase defense power, but also cause lightning damage and extremely strong shock damage to enemies that touch its body. This move is a Kung Fu that cultivates both internal and external skills. It is like the "Golden Bell Shield", one of the four great Shaolin magic skills. It can add an extra layer of "thunder and lightning" protective shield on top of the "original" powerful physical body and the protective aura of internal defense gained from body training. [Vajra Thunder Body] is not a force-discharging skill, but uses the powerful physical body from one's own body refining, one's own internal force and the power of thunder and lightning to fuse into one Hunyuan body to become a 'thunder round body', which instantly increases defense and can use defense instead of offense to rebound the opponent's attacks and shock the opponent, making the opponent vulnerable to thunder attacks. The so-called [Thunder Perfect Kung Fu Body] is the integration of [Thunder Power] and [Inner Power] and [Body] [Soul] [Skill] and [Will]. Not only is the [Power of Blessing] amazing, but [any external force] cannot [shake] it, and it can bring out all the martial arts of the practitioner [to the fullest] and [send and receive freely]. At the same time, it can greatly increase the power of the moves. Each move is naturally equipped with the extremely strong [Internal Strength] of [Full Round Ruyi], [Overbearing Pureness], [Strength to Yang], [Indestructible], [Power of Thunder and Lightning] and [Physical Power] of [Hunyuan Ruyi] [Strong as a Mountain]. And it is not made by any techniques such as [Acupoint Sealing and Pulse Control] and [Star Absorbing Technique], [Gong Absorbing Technique], [Mingyu Technique], and [Heavenly Demon Technique] that steal power. [Thunder Roar] (Sound Wave): Sound waves are invisible and have quality, just like the sudden sound of spring thunder, and those who hit it will either die or become crazy. It's like a "lion's roar", but in terms of power, it's more than superior. In close combat, attacking an unprepared enemy with such a sudden roar is very effective. [Blood Rain] (consumption, can be turned into energy later): This move is a move that consumes the enemy's physical strength and can quickly evaporate the target's blood. In addition, during the fight with the enemy, he can change his moves instantly (playing dirty tricks), and he can often win by surprise. When performing this move, you need to be in contact with the target's hands or body. After being hit, the target's blood will quickly evaporate, and eventually it will turn into a mummy and die. . . Very scary to say. [Thunder and Lightning] (Speed): Moves like lightning, as powerful as thunder, combining speed, fierceness, ruthlessness, and absolute perfection. Broken human organs to the point of being invisible! [Five Thunders] (block the enemy + group attack + headshot): Attack the enemy with the power of the earth. The more the besiegers gather together, the more amazing the lethality. You can also use the power of thunder and lightning to form dragnets and lightning chains to trap and kill enemies. When you see the name, everyone will think of "Earth Fire Catching a Prairie Fire", that's right. [Five Thunders] is the "thunder and lightning version" of [Earthfire], but it is more lethal and more versatile than [Earthfire]. [Thunder Fury] (long-range attack, thunder and lightning version of Nine Yang Big and Small Thunderbolts): Send and receive internal power freely, attack the enemy from a distance, and kill people ten feet away! ! This method of launching a move is just like the Nine-Yang Small Thunderbolt and the Nine-Yang Big Thunderbolt in the new Nine-Yang Five Jue of Dragon and Tiger Gate World. [Thunderbolt and Thunder Shocking Fog]: Absorb the thunder from the nine heavens, use its own potential to gather and integrate the infinite power of the universe and nature, and inspire earth-shattering power. "Thunderbolt and Thunder Shock Fog" can absorb the nine-day thunder and lightning for its own use to strengthen its own internal strength, attack power, defense power, speed, and even its own energy and spirit. After completing the absorption, it can directly use the body behind the body to instantly strengthen its own internal force, attack power, defense power, speed, and even its own energy and spirit to carry out domineering and quick attacks. For personal attacks, you can also fuse the absorbed Nine Heavens Thunder and Lightning with your own internal force to turn into a thunderbolt force such as thunderbolt lightning or ball lightning for long-range attacks. You can also use the absorbed Nine Heavens Thunder and Lightning to fuse your own internal force to form a huge thunder god image to manipulate for defense and attack, just like a weakened version of the Taoist spell 'Fa Tian Xiang Di'. The power of the seventh posture is enough to change the celestial phenomena and cause tsunamis and earthquakes in nature. The eighth form [Lingxia Neonba Yunxiao]: "Thunderbolt, Thunder, Shock and Mist" aims to seek from the outside the natural power of the universe, absorb the thunder of the nine heavens, and exert infinite power for oneself, reaching the limit of life. "Lingxia Neonba Yunxiao" does not seek externally, but aims to explore one's ultimate potential. It seeks internally, and the power of the integration of spirit, energy, and spirit is even more powerful than the previous seven moves, surpassing the limit of life. The eighth posture promotes and stimulates the ultimate potential of life and the power of death at the expense of one's own vitality. It combines the three-dimensional power of one's own essence, energy and spirit to explode unlimited potential and power. It is powerful enough to destroy mountains and mountains, move mountains and fill seas, reverse the laws of magnetic fields, destroy everything from the atomic, material and spiritual levels, and destroy the enemy's body and soul into nothingness. The [Fire Fire Divine Art] of [Ancestor Liehuo], one of the Three Martial Arts Ancestors: The ultimate heat of the sun is as pure and long-lasting as the essence of a raging fire. It is not inferior to the Nine Yang Divine Art, Holy Fire Divine Art, and Combined Yang Divine Art in the world of [Comic: New Dragon and Tiger Gate]! [Fire Divine Art] also has powerful defensive capabilities that other fire magic arts do not have. It can even defend against the attack of [Thunderbolt Divine Art] which is known for its aggressive and quick attacks! The moves include [Nine Beasts of the Fiery Sun], [Lihuo War Armor], [Fire Divine Dragon], [Flame Knife], [Fire Sun], [Fire Control Flying], etc. [Earth Fire Hunyuan Jin]: Absorb the Jiuyou Earth Fire (i. E., The Star Earth Fire) to improve and strengthen the essence, energy, and spirit, and can use the Jiuyou Earth Fire to strengthen the internal energy, attack, defense, speed, etc. Of oneself or other creatures. [Tianhuo Hunyuan Jin]: Absorbs the light energy and heat of the sun and other stars to improve and strengthen the spirit, and can use the light energy and heat of the sun to strengthen the internal energy, attack, defense, speed, etc. Of oneself or other creatures. The [Forgetting Art] of [Old Ancestor Wangqing], one of the three martial arts ancestors: [Forgetting Art] includes [Forgetting Art] [Empathy Art] [Exploring Love Art] and [Confused Love Art]. The Four Secrets of Wangqing and the Four Secrets of Wangqing are all spiritual explorations, all of which were self-realized and created by the ancestor Wangqing throughout his life. The First Secret of Forgetting Love·The Secret of Exploring Love - Exploring the heart of a creature is like reading minds. The Second Technique of Forgetting Love and Empathy Technique - Change the thoughts and memories of living creatures and control their bodies with golden needles. The Third Art of Forgetting Love·The Art of Forgetting Love - Seal or delete the memory of a creature so that the creature forgets the past and future. The Fourth Art of Forgetting Love·The Art of Bewildering Love - Confuse people's minds, take advantage of the weakness to attack, and make it difficult for people to distinguish between true and false, just like the virtual world in The Matrix and the infinite Tsukuyomi in Naruto. [Li Jiancheng]'s [Baji Supreme Sword] [Holy Supreme Sword] [Emperor's True Dragon Palm] [Nirvana Return to Heaven Technique: This technique claims to allow the cultivator to pass through the experience of death, reborn, and reach the peak state, just like the legendary phoenix burning itself in flames, clearing away the accumulated injuries with the end of life, and reborn in the world with a better body after the body undergoes huge painful reincarnations. This set of Nirvana Return to Heaven Technique is not actually based on the exercises, but the cultivation of the mind first, so that the cultivator can discover his own weaknesses, enhance his confidence, break through the realm and strengthen the sublime "god". As long as the faith is sufficient, the cultivator's body and internal strength will also be strengthened with the will, which is the so-called "refining the body with the spirit" and "refining the qi with the spirit"] [Shen Speed ​​Path]: [Shen Speed ​​Tenth Level]. [First Heaven: Pre-emptive Strike]: Focus on reaction speed, quick body skills to seize the opportunity, and defeat the enemy with the least amount of force to win. [Second Heaven: Post-strike]: Focus on visual speed, gain insight into the opponent's movement trajectory, accurately capture any subtle changes, hit the target with one hit, and have nowhere to escape. [Third Heaven: Follow Like a Shadow]: Focus on controlling speed, synchronizing closely with the opponent, maintaining the most advantageous position, and attacking quickly. It is specially designed to restrain speed-seeking moves such as [Thunder and Lightning] and [Sunflower Book, Evil-Repelling Sword Technique] in [Thunder and Thunder Magic]. [Fourth Heaven: Galloping Breaking Wind]: Create powerful airflow at high speed, even setting off a freezing whirlwind, and use it with a powerful sword-like body to attack and kill like a bamboo. [Fifth Heaven: Thunder Explosion Instant Kill]: Beyond the speed of sound, the explosive sound pierces the air and blasts the brain, shocking the soul, leaving the opponent confused and willing to be slaughtered. [Sixth Heaven: Hidden Dragon Covers the Sky]: This move was used by Li Jiancheng in Jietiangao. It moved very fast, and came and went quickly, as if it were invisible and flashing. It was impossible to guard against it. Chai Rong almost died from this move that day. [Seventh Heaven: Reincarnation of a Hundred Tribulations]: Accelerate one's own metabolism, repair body defects, any injuries will be healed quickly, and one will be invincible. Therefore, after Li Jiancheng practiced [Nirvana and Return to Heaven] and returned from the hell composed of inner demons and thoughts, when he pulled out the sword that pierced the heart, the wound healed immediately. Only by cutting off the head and cutting off the vitality can Li Jiancheng be truly killed. [Eighth Heaven: Eternal Ages]: Transform into hundreds of clones at super speed, the main thought is synchronized with each clone, the attack is everywhere, far-reaching, and irresistible. [Ninth Level: Reaching the Sky and the Earth]: Climb to the sky in one step, pass through the atmosphere, and the internal force pulls the strange gold and stones from the sky, like meteors swooping down to hit the earth. [Tenth Heaven: The Sky of Chaos]: The vitality bursts at the extreme speed. People are divided into two poles and circle and collide in opposite ways. Yin and Yang complement each other, and the internal force increases continuously. Every blow shoots the black dragon's energy in all directions. The black dragon wiped out everything wherever it passed, destroying everything and causing the world to shake, as if the end of the world was coming. After ten strikes, a hundred miles in radius turned into nothingness and returned to nothingness. This move was an invincible move created by Li Jiancheng to open up territory for the Tang Dynasty and conquer the world. The [Thunder and Lightning Techniques] of [Thunder Gate] in Legend of the Son of Heaven: Three unique moves: thunder and lightning, claws of the gods, double thunder to destroy the soul, thunder to shake the mountain, thunder to blast thousands of miles, lightning to break the sky, thunder sword, thunder and lightning gate---[1] Grid captures the dragon, [2] Electricity slays the evil dragon, [3] Earth and lightning shakes the sky, combined with the movement technique: Lightning Step.

Add a few female protagonists. Han Li has several. You, a time traveler, are impotent. How can you have a sense of substitution?