Mortal Cultivation Begins by Planting Gourds

On average, we talk about the protagonist's pretty face once every two chapters. I'm really convinced.

The hook is very big and the layout is a bit low The protagonist, including other original characters, is poorly created by the author and the script. The old routine of writing books, beating the younger brother to bring the boss, beating the boss to bring the uncle 🙂 is so funny.

It took Han Li 91 years to go from pill formation to Nascent Soul, and it took the protagonist 30 years to refine the natal magic weapon. They were still in the early stage of pill formation, and they were also preparing to download a dungeon of Xutian Palace to defy the heavens. The body is bigger than Han Li (one drop of the enhanced version of Towering Fortune Dew lasts 200 years), the spiritual root is better than Han Li (he uses the enhanced version of Tianbu Dan), and even a dog can become a Nascent Soul. The protagonist is a pure waste.

Another one accepts Chen Qiaoqian, a passer-by character in the original work, a product that is difficult to maintain. A group of mortal authors seem to have bowed their heads. They insist on writing and writing, and they insist on writing a sluggish one. Wouldn't it be better to accept something that can help them soar? ? Nangong Wan, Yuan Yao, Zi Ling, Yin Yue, Bing Feng, aren't these Taoist monks who can ascend on their own without having to worry too much? ? Do you want to get mixed up with such a bunch of useless people? Why do you want to help these things in return after you ascended? Do you like poverty alleviation so much?

I can only say that after a few books, it still makes sense. After reading dozens of chapters, forget about the infinite matryoshka dolls. In Chapter 44, when you use the talisman to fight the gift of the gods during the qi training period, you have completely lost the sense of expectation. How can I put it, you have lost the sense of satisfaction after watching the protagonist upgrade. After all, you can defend the qi and rely on the talisman to defend the gods, so there is no panic. . . Your protagonist is so awesome, why don't you just write invincible?

Very speechless, getting more and more poisonous, let alone whether the seven sects have the courage to hunt for the pill. Even if you really have the courage, you will die if you go out. It really makes people look very brainless. Can you learn immortality cultivation spells that can transcend levels and fight in one go? How strong is your understanding?

Forget about Nangong Wandu, Xiang Zhili transformed into a god, which is outrageous. When practicing qi, you make fun of the battle power of a god. You can jump and fly. It's funny to have a mortal on the floor and a mortal on the ceiling.

Alas, just write it well, you have to forcibly make enemies... You have to write about the main character being weak, and some people come to find trouble

Fans completely ignore the setting of the original work. The most outrageous one is that Nangong Wan broke through from the early stage of Dan Formation to the Nascent Soul Stage in two years, and the Cave Sky Rat King in the Fusion Stage was rebuilt not so fast!

Why do common mortals like to have harems? How can they kill decisively when there are too many women? Even Nangong Wan accepted it. After seeing it, he was no longer interested in reading anymore.

You are more powerful than Immortal Ni Wang Lin Jie Dan Qian Qian transformed into a god, practicing Qi Qian Qian transformed into a god...

There were so many female characters, maybe 20 of them, but the protagonists were all around, but they were eunuchs throughout the whole process. Just cut it off. I can send you the knife for free. Anyway, it's useless and it's better to remove the root of the trouble.

The Bloody Forbidden Land will be opened in half a year. The protagonist offended Lu Tianmeng. I just happened to take Senior Brother Lu's Foundation Establishment Pill and advance to the 12th or 3rd level. Come out tomorrow with twenty elixirs. Pay homage to the alchemy master. Then he returned to his clan and built the foundation. After building the foundation, it is better to strike first. Get rid of Lu Tianmeng when he was lured out of the valley

Another person who wants to eat fandom after watching anime, very toxic

I don't know how to put it, but it's always for the sake of advancing the plot to give the protagonist wisdom. There are spiritual beasts that are invisible and can make sneak attacks, but the protagonist doesn't like to come out and fight you openly. There are also more than a dozen top-level monsters plus several talismans and top-quality magic weapons, as well as Tianleizi. To deal with a foundation builder and a spiritual beast, you still need to take off your clothes with Nangong Wan to perform some kind of combined attack on the secretary. I really vomited. He kept saying that he would not accept Nangong Wan, and then came a bloody plot in which the two parties took off their clothes and performed the secret technique of joint attack. They were pretending and standing up, just like the ten young urban dragon kings, and they smelled like dicks.

Nowadays, mortal fan fiction is always written in a few copies of the Bloody Forbidden Land. From the perspective of 16 or 17 years, it has been completely out of ideas, so I can't write more related innovations of my own. For example, the Golden Finger is a high-definition map, which is very good.

Li Li's original score was inexplicable and forced to create conflicts. How could Lu Tianmeng enter the Bloody Forbidden Land and still maintain his strength in the foundation building stage.

Apart from the thing on my crotch, I have nothing to write about.

Dijia: In summary, the hanging is very big. It can be said that it is an enhanced version of Han Li with 6 more gourds, but it cannot surpass Han Li. The protagonist is useless

The author is a cloud, with a lot of mistakes. 1. It is called Liuding Tianjia Talisman, not Tianding Liujia Talisman. 2. You can ascend directly to the peak of the Divine Transformation, no space nodes are needed. 3. If the protagonist has a cave magic weapon, just click on it. Why do you set it up that monks can't enter? How can the protagonist farm if he can't enter? 4. As a writer of novels, you have to pass the basic grammar. There are many grammatical problems. 5. One drop from the small green bottle every 7 days, not eight days.

Fighting is unreasonable. The protagonist jumps over the level and kills someone who has a higher level than you with the best magic weapon. Then the protagonist takes someone else's best magic weapon and jumps over the level to kill him. It's not reasonable at all. Everyone else is trash and can't fight.

What I actually want to say is, what's the point of what you've written so far? No one is reading it. Some people are scolding you after reading it. You're writing over and over again and you're not making any money. You're having intracranial orgasms and obscenity, and a bunch of people are scolding you. What's the point? You're looking for fault, you're lying to yourself, you just want to be happy. You should calm down and think about it.

The idea of ​​having a harem is so serious, even if it's a woman, it seems like you won't let it go. Can't you just accept five or six original works? More than twenty, can you write them down?

Xiang Zhili was killed by the author, how dare you resurrect him? Who knows what kind of quarrel he has with Fatty? The author decisively tells you to hang up 🤐

There is a problem at the beginning. I killed your parents. You are only 6 years old. The evil cult has raised you for 10 years and you have only practiced Qi to the third level. I still keep you working. It is so illogical.

Such a poisonous novel. I don't know where so many monthly tickets come from. The protagonist is so pure that he wants to die. You are still building the Five Spiritual Roots. What are you thinking? And the movement of Goldfinger is so loud that no one may notice it.

Too low-level routine, quite poisonous

Fortunately, I jumped to read it. It would be a big loss if I ordered all of it. What a pitfall. What is written at the end? The dozens of chapters I skipped to read felt like a waste. . . The author couldn't control the plot of the characters, so he was always quarrelsome. Most of the characters who can drive the plot just appeared. . . There is no plot at the end, it is just following Han Li's route in advance.

I take advantage of this precious opportunity to promote books, and wish the author great traffic! Book title: Mortal: Reincarnation Lover Wen Tianren Author: Zi Luling The writing is true and delicate, Taoist friends are welcome to interact

All fellow Taoists are welcome to read!