Douluo: Innate Half-Rank, But a Mind Sword Cultivator

I don't watch Xiantian Level 9, because you are already at Level 9 and you are not satisfied with it? I don't want to watch the level 3 congenital ones. A mediocre person will never be able to hold his head high! I don't care about half-level Xiantian. You are a Jade Xiaogang. You are a Jade Xiaogang!

After reading it in Q, the account in the Q area was banned and came here to comment. I like the setting very much, and the writing is okay, but there are two big poisonous points. Let me just say, it is up to you whether the author wants to listen to it or not. The first is a small point, which is related to the plot. It is the scene when the Star Dou Forest meets the evil soul master. The protagonist is very deliberately pretentious. This is not to say that pretentiousness is not good, but the foreshadowing before the pretense written by you, the author, is very stiff. Specifically, it is to use repeated accidents to promote the plot. I have already written about an encounter with an evil soul master once, and scored twice. Especially when I specifically explained that there was a Titled Douluo secretly protecting me, but in the end, the Titled Douluo was forcibly banned. I was very speechless, you know. . . The second poisonous point is the poisonous point in the setting. To put it bluntly, the underlying logic of your novel is invincible writing, and the selling point is also invincible writing. In the end, you have to put a shackles on the protagonist, especially when the shackles are very nondescript. The golden finger of the protagonist is his own understanding, not a systematic article. The state he has realized by himself is blocked as soon as the pretense plot is over, and it will be easier to achieve in the future. Brother, his realm is not an experience card given by the system. What is meant by enlightenment can only be used once? Don't you think it's ridiculous when you write this?

Sword Martial Soul, the first soul ring, if you suck a turtle, you can compare with Gangzi's brain circuit.

The writing is okay, but the plot is a mess. It's enough to fight an evil soul master once. You scored twice, and both times you met the evil soul master head-on. Both times, you happened to have two great realms of the main protagonist. These two times, you even reached the realm of swordsmanship. The first time I got the Human Sword Fusion, the second time I got the Sword Soul, but they were all experience cards. The first time I got the Human Sword Fusion, I made a big deal and said I passed it, creating an atmosphere of quickly being able to become one with the Sword. But four or five years later, we have reached the second crisis, and we all got the Sword Soul experience card. The Human Sword Fusion has not yet been completed. I don't know if you haven't achieved the Human Sword Fusion yet. How did you become the sword soul of the Supreme Sword Fusion Level 1? Co-author Weixin is waiting here? 🙂 Then he said, becoming a sword soul will also help the way of swordsmanship. After looking at it later, I will go!!! It only takes a year or two to become an adult and become one with the sword, oh! That's awesome, so fast? 😚 I *you****, you can't even combine the human sword with one! Without! Touch! Arrive!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Interesting. Yu Xiaogang added a poisonous soul ring to the life attribute blue silver grass. The author adds a defensive turtle soul ring to the offensive sword spirit. Could it be that you are Yu Xiaogang and Ben Gang? 😄😄

Is junk writing so popular now? Having half a level every day, can't we just be like ordinary people? Can't we just be human beings?

Dou Yi has so many evil soul masters? What does it mean? The protagonist has to meet him. Isn't it possible that the plot can't follow the original work? It would be better to switch to a wolf thief or a wild soul beast than to encounter an evil soul master every day.

Go to hell with your innate half-level Godly author. What age is it and still waste materials flow? You are born with half a level and can play small tricks, People are born with level 10 and can play big tricks, what's the use of it. This is not about being beaten up by others. Be careful when dreaming

It's a good book if it doesn't write a stallion plot and doesn't involve clichés. Don't die suddenly, author.

There are many poisonous points, even far more than the outstanding points.