Cultivation of Immortality Starts from Qingmei

After reading a hundred and 140 chapters, I still have a system and the five strongest spiritual roots, but I am still a piece of trash. These are nothing. Chapter 140 There are four life-threatening situations, and each time you rely on luck to save a life. Your life is in the hands of others, right? After I finish writing a book, I'm afraid I'll have to be rescued hundreds of times by others and waste my money.

It's a bit toxic in the early stage, but it's pretty good in the later stage.

Accompany Qingmei after birth, and then Qingmei is sent away; a talented girl comes from heaven to fight for poems, and then the talented girl leaves; after winning the imperial examination, she goes to the military camp to molest the princess, and then the princess leaves (one year); a marriage contract comes from heaven, and then all parties react one after another. . . It can be considered a hundred chapters so far. What is the main line? The title of the book is a romance novel about Qingmei, right? If Qingmei is not here, who will you attack? Fifth girl? Anyway, it feels like pure boiled water, especially the part about the military camp princess. It feels like watching ancient Huo Yuhao and Wang Dong.

I wonder if the author has changed. The system development was okay in the beginning, but the system in the later stage is basically gone. Except for the Sharingan, so many messy skills provided by the system are basically useless. The emotional line is really hard to describe. How can the male protagonist be so straight? The weirdest thing is that Zhou Wanfeng and Ao Yin'er are both on the same bus? It's better to listen to the music on the hook. Ao Yin'er has more roles than Zhu Cici. In the early stage, she did the old trick of copying poems that was known to the whole world. After flirting with her, she said that we are just ordinary friends. I am even more lazy to complain about the Dragon Queen. After waiting for such a long time, I found my reincarnation and I am not allowed to be locked in the harem to play? The result? What else can the author's female protagonists do besides being male protagonists licking dogs. If you can't write about the harem, don't write about it. The first blood and the second blood are all drugged. You might as well be a eunuch. I can't see what your outline is. You are being plotted and you will use it. What's the result? From beginning to end, it depends on just one word "mang". Primary school students' strategies include writing about the imperial court, cultivating immortals, Confucianism, and Buddhism. If you don't have the writing power, you'll really have to focus on one.

After reading dozens of chapters, the title of this book is not right. Qingmei is sent away, Tiansheng is also sent away. You are not a love cultivator. There are more supporting characters than the protagonist. There is also a Shura field. It may be better if there is no female protagonist to cultivate immortality. It may be better!

What is the operation of cultivating immortals and writing court documents? Let me tell you.

The beauty list is really the biggest flaw of this novel

After reading Chapter 157, I finally finished the Border Town dungeon, which feels quite strange. It is said to be a practice style, and the introduction also states that practice increases attributes, but it just doesn't produce results and doesn't feel any better. It's like I've been stacking q's for more than ten years and ended up punching cotton. The most representative part is the climb up the steps. The aura and true energy are all blocked, so I can only rely on my own strength. I thought that the attributes that the protagonist has added for more than ten years will come into play, but the result is that he still has to go up with difficulty. The heroine also comes to the rescue during the tribulation, which makes me feel discouraged. After a long period of development, should I fight for my life or fight for my life, let alone be labeled as invincible? Of course I know that the protagonist can fight across levels, but it doesn't feel that good. Fighting against those who can't be beaten, fighting back and forth for a few times and then being defeated, and fighting against those who can't beat, there are also back and forth. What struck me as the most effective was Killing the Two Deacons Together, a short four-line text that was neat, refreshing, and typed at the top. Fast paced, not much to say, I like to spend space on shaping the supporting characters and there are many appearances, interspersing memories and switching perspectives at every turn. Pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is out of the question. Except when he was a child, after joining the WTO, big figures in big organizations regarded him as a thorn in his flesh, and he was targeted early on. Sword repair tag... Hold your fists, Brother Ming

It's hard to imagine that this is the same author as Resurrection Coin

I suggest that the author may still be suitable for the Japanese light genre. For readers of the fairy tale genre, emotions are not a necessity, just a seasoning. You can't put too much salt in the novel, as the main line and plot are needed. For light novels, readers like to eat sweets and speculate in stocks.

Both being and standing are undesirable. In both lives, people dare to act, love, and hate. The character of the protagonist makes the supporting character look more like the protagonist than the protagonist. It's hard to resist.

A question suddenly occurred to me. If a bastard from the Wu Kingdom had no future in the Wu Kingdom, wouldn't he go somewhere else? For example, Qi State? Is Wu Guo guilty of treason or Qi State does not use foreign countries? The book does not make it clear here, but it always emphasizes that there is a difference between concubine and concubine. What happened to the concubine of Wu State always feels strange. Although I hope very much, I estimate that the subsequent plot will not be about the failure of the Wu Kingdom's reform. The protagonist is persecuted and runs to the demon or Qi Kingdom, and then comes back to settle the matter after development. But can change be so simple and successful? It's hard to say. At present, maybe the youngest prince is not dead, and a princess will come to win over the protagonist. It seems that the current emperor also has a princess, and the two phoenixes play with the pearl.

At first, I didn't think he felt embarrassed when he saw the battle started. Don't you, a pair of soldiers, even bring weapons when they go out on these missions? Every one of them was hit with his fist. The protagonist has had cheats since he was a child. He has been exercising since he was a child. As a result, there is no obvious distance between him and her until now. What is the meaning of your plug-in?

You are so awesome. You can write 13 chapters in a row about the memories of a supporting character. You are better than Naruto.

Hurry up and change the part about writing the memorial. Anyone who has read the book for two years will be stunned. You really can't let AI help you change it.

You said that every character you want to write has flesh and blood. This is a character that can be overdone in 200 words. You have to add more drama. Next, will you write "Passenger 1" and continue to "Passenger"♾️

Generated with AI, I thought it was pretty good after reading this before, so I just thought about selling music. Since I don't know anything about music, I could only try it with AI. Because it is generated by AI, the connection between various parts and singing may not be very good... In short, it is not very good, maybe it is just a little bit more listenable. I divided the whole song into five parts, corresponding to the fight between Emperor Wu and the dead dog (Part 1), and the whole process of the protagonist (Xu Ming) fighting the muscle dog (Parts 2-5). Poems are added to the fourth and fifth parts, which is the poem "Butterfly Loves Flower·Reading the Pain of Parting at the End of the World" written by the author in the previous chapter. Note: 1. In the music, only one section of "Butterfly Love Flower·Reading the Pain of Parting at the End of the World" is excerpted, not a complete poem. 2. The order of the four or five parts mentioned in this fan video (music) may be slightly different from the original text (Chapter 46-47). 3. The characters appearing in the video are generated by AI, and their corresponding character images are Zhu Cici from the original text.

I was a little confused when I saw Chapter 105. Qingmei all ran away. I thought I became an official after cultivating immortality? Can you tell me what happens next? I don't dare to order.

I thought it looked good before it was released. I loved watching Shura Field. Good Guys has four female leads and three are offline. I watched Shura Field in Bao Bao. After it was released, it was super cool. Do you want to spend money to watch Memories?

I have read more than a hundred chapters and to be honest I can't stand it anymore. I don't recommend reading this book. There are too many female protagonists. In fact, fantasy novels with multiple female protagonists like this have almost been eliminated. Moreover, this book has so many female protagonists in a short period of time. Alas, I am really speechless. It is useless to give a system. I feel that the description of realms and battles is not as emotional as the scenes. I think all geniuses are women. As long as they are able to practice, they are women. I am really speechless. And don't you kill that witch and keep it for the New Year? How many times have people prepared to kill you? When you caught her, you just refused to kill her because you said you knew the cultivation method. What a fool, why is it the same as the ancient plot? I guess she has been chasing you all the way. I can't stand it. It's okay if the protagonist has never seen a beautiful woman. Then The protagonist has met so many beautiful women and still refuses to kill them. I didn't understand. In fact, the author's writing style is not bad, but it is too focused on multiple female protagonists. It makes people feel irritated and feels that the system is not the same. Each time you add points, it does not show how many points each realm has. If you add thirty plus thirty, the ghost will know how many points you have in each realm at the most basic level. The above represents only my personal opinion,

I went to write a trumpet again, and I'm speechless.

Updated 10 days ago... Oh, still can't do it? How about trying to write again? I wish the author good health

Shen Sheng's plot is too discouraging, so don't have so many supporting roles, okay? Whether these two couples were voluntary or forced, I don't know how many people have been harmed. You have to write them as decent characters. This is really contrary to heaven. The author's three views are a bit problematic And then it is contrary to heaven. The link between the two of them meeting and Qingwan's name was hidden. In what age was it written like this? You are this 👍

The author can add some details to me.

I've read about 30 chapters, but I haven't seen anything interesting. I haven't beaten that goose after practicing for several years. It's still a classic loser style. I'm speechless.

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