Fellow Taoist, Your Script Is so Beautiful

Why is it that every time the male protagonist encounters a crisis, it is the female protagonist(s) who rely on mechanical magic to get through it😅 Goldfinger often acts as the Riddler and cannot see the key information The gap in realm is almost not reflected The combat power is greatly reduced (probably because of frequent magic spells) The writing is getting more and more clumsy I can only say that you must not read it with your brain 🙂

A paper full of absurd words and a handful of bitter tears. Because it is short, it causes bitter tears; because it is foolish, it makes absurd remarks. A sentence is a drop of blood, a sentence is a drop of blood. When we read this book, we will feel that Su Li is an infatuated person who is not understood by readers. In later generations, there are even two poems "Xijiang Moon" that directly address his impotence. Perhaps this is what Xianyu is worried about. He is worried that his painstaking efforts will not be truly understood by the world, but will only regard him as an infatuated person, or even misinterpret his original intention. Therefore, multiple harems were arranged for him, and each of them ascended. We think on the other hand, this is Xianyu's words that hide the real thing, and it is a story staged with false words. In fact, the book he wrote through tears does not contain any absurd words, but it is a real handful of blood and tears. He is not only infatuated, but what is hidden behind the words is the real flavor of life. It's too short, can it be longer?🐶🐶

Double update, just double update, it's really uncomfortable to give him the theft protection.

How can I put it this way? This book feels like the reincarnation of Jiang Lin. There is basically no difference in the personalities of the two protagonists. They are both Peach Blossom + Asasi. Many settings are the same as the previous book

No, you have to keep it first, it will be gone in a flash...🔨🔨

It could be better, and the setting is interesting. I hope that if the author grows up and his writing skills improve to another four levels, this book can become a hit. It is indeed a high-end game and a low-end game. It often suffers from setting problems. There are also many contradictions in the world view setting. The dialogue and fighting writing are not good enough. I hope the author will work hard to improve. The funny part is really funny, the author could do more in this aspect. The extras are pretty good but they are not updated anymore.

A strange idea suddenly came to my mind. Is it possible that the male protagonist is still unable to ascend after 1,000 years? A group of female protagonists practiced the magic of corpse dismemberment, ascended with the parts of the male protagonist, and then assembled them in the fairy world. Do you think this is possible? 😰😰

The author should reflect on his own writing attitude. The biggest problem for the author is that he writes as he pleases, writing wherever he wants, often just to make up the word count. The author's three works, "I Have a Lot of Resurrection Coins", "Fellow Daoist, Your Script is So Beautiful", and the trumpet "Holy Maiden Please Peace Out" all have this problem. The author is used to constantly adding heroines one by one. Each of the three works has more than ten or even twenty heroines. However, the author does not have the writing power to control so many characters at the same time. As time goes by, the author himself cannot remember them. As a result, many heroines appear once and then die, giving people the feeling of throwing them away after use. I personally think that with the author's writing skills, when writing books in the future, it would be better to only arrange 4-6 heroines, so that everyone can get enough plots and not make people feel like vase. In addition, there is a problem with the IP concept of this work. At the beginning of reading the script, readers feel very novel, but over time, readers will get bored. Because every thing the protagonist does may change someone else's script, readers will be bored to death if they read the script all day long and the protagonist is not bored. So the title actually limits the work itself. As a cool Internet novel, the male protagonist can be weak, but not spineless. In this article, Su Li's image was ruined by the Black Demon Sect battle. He learned the Kaitian Sword but only ran away when encountering an enemy. The author might as well focus on "Saint Please Peace", at least the male protagonist Lin Xun is still strong. But "Saint of Peace" also has its own problems. From Chapter 400 onwards, it is basically a running story. There is a difference between novels and anecdotes. There must be dialogue, analysis, and psychological activities. It is actually quite a pity to see such an IP fall to this stage. I hope that the author will first formulate an overall outline when writing in the future.

Recommended from other book chapters, the book is really good, very interesting to read, and I highly recommend it But for personal reasons, I couldn't stand it until chapter 300 👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻👇🏻 The system appears too little, it feels like it only appears after a few major events, and the system's combat power is a bit small, maybe it's the author's setting. Except for the realm of the male protagonist, everything else has not changed at all from the beginning. He is still the same waste, greedy for money, lustful and weak, and he hugs a woman with a golden script when he sees it. None of the hostile characters that have appeared so far has been solved by the protagonist himself. He has been waiting for someone to save him, and this weakling looks very frustrated. I have read a soft rice article before. The protagonist just finished eating the soft rice. It can be seen that his strength has grown, but this one did not show it at all. We should rely on soft food to make ourselves stronger. We can't rely on soft food all the time. It's 300 chapters and I haven't done anything yet. Then, especially Xia Liuliu, I really can't deal with it. I really see what it is used for. It completely embodies the useless character of the male protagonist. He has no strength and no 🧠 (I know that she disgusts the junior sister, so I really go there by myself at night, without telling the junior sister, just act as a tool). Fortunately, the person is beautiful, and the good person has a golden script. Wait for someone to lead you away. Maybe the author has a plan behind it, but it is really disgusting here. Finally it's the junior sister, I'm convinced, I'm really convinced. Such a good junior sister, let's not pick up the food in the bowl and look at the pot. The requirements should be lower. The junior sister is so good, it's not too much to be a real wife. Now that the junior sister is around, we can stop getting involved with other women. Giving some face to the junior sister is not as good as what Chen Gou does (Chen Gou also knows to separate areas for You Chu and Xiao Yu'er to prevent them from meeting each other) he tui

Hey, all I can say is that book lovers who haven't read it should run away immediately and don't subscribe to it 😭. After subscribing to the Xia Liuliu chapter, I was really disgusted. The whole novel will use women to create new plots. The writing is messy, I like to play awkward, there are a lot of female characters written, most of them are not well written, they are pure disgusting people, run, run, run, I don't want to criticize the author, mainly because I feel unworthy for everyone who subscribed, the writing is useless and I don't know how to get it to be high-quality, don't be deceived, don't be deceived 😭😭😭

Xianyu has opened a new book, 55, to rebuild the glory of the harem, Xianyu is bound to

Open a building

Run quickly, write Xia Liu and start writing more and more💩 It's just nonsense

It feels like opening high and going low is +1, and there are many logical contradictions, book-eating and other phenomena for the subsequent plot. 1. Zhou Qingqing was originally one of the three strongest men of the human race. He can arm-wrestle with the demon prince, and eating books for the subsequent plot has become the middle stage of ascension. 2. In order for the protagonist to behave smoothly and live a difficult life, the IQ of passers-by is forcibly reduced. From the ruined peak to the bullying of the protagonist who has no backing... The master is gone or not. The identity of the Ascended Direct Successor is still there. The passers-by are all "happy and grudges" in the world, so that for some small profits, it is very illogical to set up a mine against an Ascended Realm that cannot be "bullied". 3. I am not good at national war but I like writing, and I forcefully turn my characters into military characters. Logically speaking, according to the patch settings, everyone who ascends will be killed by military formations, and it is impossible to develop into the structure of a sect affiliated with the dynasty. The victory or defeat between the top sects still depends on the high-end combat power However, the soaring and random killing cannot write the national war that the author likes. Leading to soaring to the bad streets 4. Selective settings. Due to the character of the protagonist's master who protects his shortcomings, the demon prince has been murderous several times and has been fine. The Ghost King told the world that the protagonist was his husband, but no one remembered this setting. Returning to the setting that highlights the protagonist's smoothness, eating books + lowers the IQ of the demon prince. Praise the protagonist for knowing how to advance and retreat, so that you have no reason to kill him. However, according to the setting of eating, after killing him desperately, there will be a two-sided war, and you will also suffer mortal revenge. From the perspective of giving priority to nieces in all matters of state, it is impossible to be so reckless. In order to prevent hidden dangers, going to a dead end now is completely a gambler's thinking In comparison, the previous game was to take care of the master who was "seriously injured" to protect himself, which is reasonable when the confidentiality measures are good enough. The re-creation of characters in this work has led to many problems such as overconfidence and inconsistency, which are much more serious than those of Wen Riliang next door. It's really disappointing, please watch out for another one.

Itchy stuff written by a newborn, wasting my day

I've read three hundred chapters. Why is the protagonist still such a loser that he can't even protect his junior sister? ? ? What about the protagonist's growth?

Run! ! From around Chapter 200 when the woman Xia Liuliu appeared, the author started to feed the defense, using this woman to disgust the readers. Xia Liuliu doesn't like the protagonist, and the protagonist also knows that Xia doesn't like him at all. Xia deliberately pretends to be green tea in front of the protagonist. It's okay to pretend to be green tea. The key point is that he also deliberately wants to disgust the junior sister in front of the junior sister. The protagonist has no temper at all? Even enjoyed it. I don't know how the author wrote such a ridiculous plot. If you were a normal man, a woman you didn't like at all tried to stir up feelings between you and your girlfriend in front of you, but you could still smile at this woman. You had no temper at all. You really wanted to be a scumbag. Now you can only feel the protagonist's hypocrisy, double standards, and weakness. It's just watery and unsatisfying. A woman fell in love with the protagonist for no reason. There was no process in between. Forget it. Seeing that Xia Zhen was so disgusted by the author that she abandoned the book.

I saw Chapter 162. The Master, the Holy Mother, hugged and freed a corpse king who was vindictive to society, and gave him a good death... But they just destroyed half of the city, and almost slaughtered all the people in the city. The protagonist group, fought hard to the end, and hugged the enemy backhand, I couldn't stand it anymore. This master's behavior is just as disgusting as the man who confessed to Japan's atomic bomb in Marvel's "Celestial Tribe", bah!

The imagination is good, but the author's writing skills are not. The plot is all driven by the female character. The first part is quite enjoyable, but the second part is too aesthetically tired. I feel that the author is full of rubbish, and it is really embarrassing to insist on blending the jokes.

I'll give you the monthly pass, how about some extra money?

I can't stand it anymore after seeing more than 400 people. Basically, all the events are started by women. One after another, I don't know how to fill the gap. The protagonist is still very weak, his personality is too soft, and there are not many normal female characters. Among them, a few His brain circuit is the weirdest of the weirdest, and some of the plots are too disgusting, such as the scene in Dragon Palace, where he was forced not to read the master's script, and the scene with Xia Liuliu, and the scene where the Ghost Queen said that Su Li was her husband. It's the same as not saying it. If you want to kill the protagonist, you have to Still killing, there is the plot of Copying the Immortal Sword, and the Chenghuang Sisters, they actually think that it is not possible to be the protagonist's concubine, and they don't think about their identity at the time. They are watery, watery, too watery. If they buy a newspaper, they will lose the number of words in the wrong newspaper. This is the reason why I don't want to spend money to read the book. It's too disgusting to start high and low. You never know whether the author will let you spend money to watch the plot and disgusting. Keep reading. I think it's a waste of money. If you don't read it, I feel that the money spent earlier is wasted.

The smell of Xia Liuliu green tea is so strong that it made me vomit.

Oh, I actually quietly became a monthly ticket sponsor. I posted a post, said something, and then went diving again.

This book is completely incomparable to "I Have a Lot of Resurrection Coins"

Blocked this author, every book is like this

The first time I saw Chapter 200, I gave up. I read it again in the past two days, and it was 180. I couldn't stand it any longer. I left the sect three times. In the first mission, I met the fox Mo Yue and I deceived him. It's understandable. In the second mission, I knew that the Holy Son was going to deal with me and I was unprepared. In the third Dynasty, I rushed in all by myself and still had no trump cards. What gave Pigfoot such courage?,,

I accidentally ordered them all. The front was ok, but the back was a mess.

There's no need to read after three hundred chapters, it's outsourced

I haven't watched it yet, but I'd like to ask if the male protagonist is still a eunuch now?

It looks good. I'll give it a thumbs up. I hope there will be more.