
There's Something Not Quite Right About Their Love Story
她们的恋爱物语不太对劲
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Watching this movie feels like I felt itchy in my heart as I did when I watched Campus Day.
The author's idol is Dazai Osamu
The male protagonist's resignation at the beginning is a vent after three years. As a projection of the author's desire, the author must have been or is experiencing repressed emotions in life. However, in Osamu Dazai's worldview, repressed life and emotions have two sides. On the one hand, repressed emotions make oneself miserable, but they can also make oneself divine. What are the outstanding memories of Dazai Osamu? He is talented, although he has a timid personality, he is fascinated by women and has an indescribable charm. Many people like to project themselves as Osamu Dazai, because they firmly believe that even if they have a timid personality, as long as I have such talent and temperament, I can still make women fall in love with me. People who like Osamu Dazai must feel that they are similar to Osamu Dazai to some extent, such as his timid character and slight literary talent. They are both inferior and arrogant at the same time. On the one hand, because of their outstanding literary talent, they are naturally more sensitive to emotions and perception of the world. I feel that compared to boys of the same age when they are laughing and playing around, they read more books and think more, but they often feel inferior to themselves. This may be due to family background, sports, appearance, social interaction, etc. On the one hand, they feel that they are smarter than others, but on the other hand, in reality, no one is doing well. Although this so-called smarter than others is just a little cleverer, in fact they are not geniuses, nor can they resist their own human nature and transcend the world, because being caught in the middle becomes a distorted state. This novel is the author's own projection. Chitose is the absolute source of security who tolerates herself without any bottom line. Chitose can have a little temper or have small emotions, but in the end, no matter what the situation, she belongs to herself. Nine Flowers is the position of Bai Yueguang in my mind, the most dazzling flower of the high mountains in everyone's school days. She must be beautiful and kind, and can withstand the most severe challenges on both the physical and mental levels. The miko is a container of desire. Chitose is a pity to throw away tasteless food. It is difficult for an absolutely obedient person to become the object of desire. Jiuka needs to be isolated from desire. She cannot have desire and cannot be the object of desire. Therefore, there needs to be something to hold desire, which is the miko.
Book review (some spoilers, it is recommended to read the post after reading 20 chapters)
[Introduction] The young Fujii tree went to other places to receive higher education and stayed in Tokyo to teach after graduation. He resolutely resigned because he was dissatisfied with his superiors' oppression of his work ability and was burdened by the complicated relationship between teachers and students. However, after the impulse passed, he faced a future in which he could not find a way forward. When he was disheartened, he met Jiukazuki, a girl who had thoughts of committing suicide. This fateful encounter also announced that Fujii's life had entered a completely different journey. [Reason for Recommendation] This new work by the old lv5 author Riqing, the writing power and writing style are still online. The first few chapters show readers the image of a young teacher who was originally full of ambition to devote himself to education but was somewhat depressed under the constant polish of reality. The male protagonist seems to have been smoothed out by time, and he seems to have forgotten his original intention. But as the saying goes, clay figures also have a bloody nature. The superiors' behavior of arbitrarily squeezing teachers' working time and energy and forcibly taking teaching results made the male protagonist no longer silent. A short essay that implemented all aspects and was true was spread to the group chat of teachers and students on campus. He also put down the burden in his heart, resolutely resigned and left Tokyo. Although it is only a few thousand words long, we admire and regret the male protagonist's freedom-advocating personality and lack of talent. The future of the male protagonist originally seemed confused and gloomy because of his resignation, but his subsequent encounters with several girls also changed the direction of the novel's content. Several people who originally had different life paths were intertwined through various reasons, which also made the plot no longer monotonous and the characters became increasingly fleshed-out. As a harem novel, the plot of the Shura field and the party struggle is an indispensable part. Although the "sister" Chitose Yangoi, whom she has known for many years when she was young, shows a majestic and energetic attitude in front of outsiders, when facing her brother, she is naturally close and shy, and the image of the girl next door emerges vividly on the page. However, when dealing with the "love rival from heaven" girl Jiu Huayue, she turns into a jealous little guy who is full of jealousy and cares about the male protagonist's image. The male lead teacher has been teaching for many years. Even though he quit his job as a teacher, he still cherishes the idea of taking care of others and trying to understand others' hearts and help them solve their problems. Jiu Huayue, a girl who wants to commit suicide, has a tsundere attribute and has no favorable impression of the male protagonist in the early stage. However, the sincere male protagonist finally touches the girl's heartstrings with his words and deeds, which greatly changes Jiu Huayue's impression of her. The heroine is tutored one-on-one for seven days by the "ladylike" girl Matsumae Shinharu. Because her mother was the hero's most respected tutor during college, the common topics between the two are increasing day by day. The other party's dignified and elegant attitude also makes the hero relaxed and happy when tutoring and studying. If you ask what kind of story the three girls will collide with the male protagonist in the future, it is better to devote yourself to reading and appreciate the romance of Japanese love. {"TopicId":"804728532092780544","TopicName":"Book Famine Terminator"} {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"}
Book review
There is a saying that this book is better than the previous one. Despite the reason for LSP, it is undeniable that the writing style is more diverse. In the previous book, I found that a routine was repeated many times and I couldn't stand it anymore. Especially the male protagonist kept saying "you care about me" to his sister. The inexplicable repetition made me boring. This book is true and powerful in September.
If you keep xdm's mouth off, you'll start to spoil it, right? It's already a spiritual opium, don't keep running out of stock, okay?
I have opened a new book!!! The writing style is still as good as ever~ As long as the author grasps the plot well, this book will be like a god.
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Chitose in yandere form
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I don't know why the author keeps emphasizing his cigarettes, why he doesn't think that the protagonist is very unique and handsome when written like this?
Since it's a harem, don't hesitate to accept Muzi
It is originally a harem novel. If one of the female characters is not accepted, then don't use too much pen and ink to describe it. I understand that the author wants to establish the characters in the book, but it is obviously too strong. In this case, why not add it? Besides, no matter how well written Pan Yu San Jia is, the age gap is here. As a harem drama, there must at least be a heroine of a similar age, right? Some people say that Muzi was too poisoned when they broke up, but to be honest, the heroine made such a choice precisely because of the influence of the hero. Although it sounds a bit convoluted, that's the reason. And there is no need to think about it. The main influence of Muzi going to the United States is the male protagonist. If Muzi succeeds, she will definitely come back to find the male protagonist. I have said so much, mainly because I didn't join the group, so I wanted to vent in the comment area. Everyone expresses their opinion, this is just my personal opinion, discuss rationally, please don't criticize
The writing is okay, and the male protagonist's character is also good, but I can't stand the constant scenes of smoking. You can try to reduce the smoking scenes.
The three little ones are well written, and each one of them is so cute. But it's really hard to evaluate Muzi. I can only say that I understand her role but don't like it. Now my impression of this protagonist is getting worse and worse. He doesn't look like a scumbag, he doesn't look like a scumbag, he doesn't look like a scumbag, he doesn't look like a pure guy, he even feels so vulgar haha, one operation made me laugh out loud BYD. Run, see you by chance
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The male protagonist graduated from Kyoto University and worked as a teacher in Tokyo, the most prosperous city in Japan, and ended up earning 300,000 yen a month. What is this concept? It is half less than the per capita income of Japanese teachers! The author wanted to portray the melancholy and literary youth of the male protagonist, but what I saw was the kind of deja vu of smoking two cigarettes to pretend to be mature. I haven't seen it on the shelves yet, but it has been poisoned, so I'll give it a try.
The setting of the male protagonist as a musical genius is very unreasonable
If the male protagonist has such musical talent, he will not be able to survive in Tokyo and will he return to his hometown to open a cafe? Okay, even if you have a shadow on music due to the death of your master and never touch music, but then you say that you have an orphanage to support, and you plan to give all your three years of salary as a teacher to the orphanage. If the protagonist is so great, you should go all out to develop in the music industry from the beginning. The money you can earn is countless times higher than that of being a teacher, and you can also help the orphanage in a real sense. Okay, even if the protagonist is naive and doesn't think so much, when the director of the orphanage gets cancer and needs a lot of money for surgery, the protagonist will always wake up at this time and know that he wants to make money, so why waste his time on being a teacher? This can only mean that the protagonist either does not have that deep feelings for the dean (the protagonist's only elder), or he thinks that he can earn more money as a teacher. In other words, the protagonist is actively using his status as a teacher to feed the female students. No matter which one, the protagonist's character is completely destroyed. So I can only say that the author did not think clearly when adding the setting of musical genius. I hope the author can come back to it later.
I can't figure it out, I can't figure out where the future is
I have just seen the protagonist become a teacher and kick out more than 30 people in the performance club I feel really depressed after seeing this, because I don't know how the harem mentioned by the author should be realized The three female characters who have appeared in the harem and are scheduled to enter the harem so far have all been written vividly, at least they can establish the impression of the characters. Come But I personally think that the more impressive the characters in harem novels are, the easier it will be to collapse later One is a simple consensus issue, that is, it is difficult for ordinary people to achieve bigamy in the urban context of modern society. It is difficult to break through this common sense, because the foundation laid by the author himself The tone is a bit serious, and it's not a purely cool novel. If it were a purely refreshing novel, I would be embarrassed, but the problem is that it is not a refreshing novel. The second one is the protagonist. As a teacher, I must be aware of the disadvantages of teacher-student love. To be honest, I can also understand that the three female characters will meet such outstanding people as the protagonist when they are young girls. The resulting spring heart is ignorant, but for the protagonist to cross the taboo between teachers and students, he not only has to overcome the pressure of public opinion, but also overcomes his own moral values. It cannot be said that the protagonist, as someone who dares to stand up and expose corruption, will accept teacher-student love, a form of love that is extremely unfair to students, right? Wouldn't this violate the protagonist's own moral values? You can't say that it doesn't matter because the protagonist dares to love and hate, right? Three is between the three female characters... It is difficult to imagine how they can identify with the other two. In this situation where all the female characters know each other and have distinct personalities, it is difficult to imagine a situation in which they would agree with the concept of "let's all be teachers' wives together" in their minds. Because no matter what, as long as the harem is achieved, the protagonist's love will be shared. Can the three female characters accept this? Can you accept the original complete love being divided into one third? If accepted, will the personality and emotions of the female character be eliminated? Seeing now, when I think that the three female characters will be relieved, relieved of their own love, relieved of the incomplete love they receive, relieved of accepting the other two, I feel depressed in my heart. Alas... I am embarrassed to write this because my own personality may not be suitable for reading this kind of article. If the tone set by the author at the beginning was not so serious or the background was not modern, my mood when reading this article might be different. Farewell, if you feel the same way as me after reading this comment, and if you read the rest of the review, please poke me and directly spoil me. I can't stand it anymore, but I want to know how it will develop next. I wish you all a good mood.
It was pretty good up to about 150 chapters, but later on the emotional line was handled a bit too fast, causing the main character to super evolve from wood to Ito tree.
Let's mark the point. After chapter 180, I really can't stand it anymore. It feels like cheating. Although Lord Bai Hua is also working hard, the male protagonist is gradually turning into a scumbag.
The plots after release are not as good as the free chapters.
Personally, I feel that there are two completely different works before and after it is released. .
I don't understand why the male protagonist calls the female protagonist Yatou. According to Japanese custom, she should be called Miss xx. Calling her Yatou is not only inconsistent with Japanese language habits, but also gives people the feeling of relying on one's elders. Old age is not something to be proud of.
Although it is said to be a harem novel, it is filled with a lot of ambiguous terms between girls. Has the harem novel evolved into this model now?
My name is Yang Aoi Chitose. I thought that when I grew up, I would live a happy life with my dear brother. If my brother hadn't personally admitted that he had secretly had sex with Jiuka Yue more than fifty times, I would have almost believed it.
This setting of ex-girlfriend is really annoying
Appeared out of nowhere, moistened.
In fact, if you want to write about the love between an uncle and a girl, but you are afraid of getting too old, you might as well write about reincarnation, and then you are unwilling to accept your younger self when you are in the uncle stage. The heroines did not understand why he was contradictory at the beginning and explored it. Well, I feel that this is not a long-term main plot, and it can only be a contradiction point. Emmm, when it comes to this book, I feel that the back is more natural than the back of the previous one, and the front of the previous book is more interesting than the front of this one 🙂.
Qianqianzi is the best author in my opinion.
The two bonus chapters are great. He basically described everything you want. It's great, great, but it's so hard to watch🙈
Two thousand words warning: Discussion of the inevitability of Akai Muzi joining Daou, and discussion and questions about the emotions between Muzi and Itsuki.
First use the monthly ticket to save your life, and then stack up: The author was so busy taking the postgraduate entrance exams at the end of the semester recently that I picked up this work that I automatically subscribed to for nearly 200 chapters because of the pressure; reading is not for nitpicking, but for decompression. If there are any mistakes in interpretation, please criticize and correct them; if there is any discussion and exchange, please comment one or two, and I will reply if I have time (it may take a long time!) I wish you all satisfactory results in the final level 6! Spoiler alert! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Let's get to the point: First of all, it is the proof that Muzi became a part of the harem. It can be concluded from two angles: First, the "drama" in recent chapters has increased a lot, and it can definitely have its place; first of all, the author of this book is sure to be the harem after it is put on the shelves. Palace, and secondly, Chichiko also emphasized that there will not be too many ambiguous plots (pure and late-doge) for the supporting characters. On the contrary, now there are memories and mutual support. Muzi is an adult playing straight ball again, and has the background of Love Is Eternal. It is only a matter of time to take down Asashi, who is soft in body, willing to hug (ballroom dancing) and willing to touch, but only has a hard mouth. Once the mood of the atmosphere arrives, everything will fall into place; unless I want the winner to take all with the advantage of 3 million vs. 800,000, There will be no way to die Secondly, in terms of the configuration of the harem members, Muzi is the "big house" and plays an indispensable role in regulating the atmosphere. May I ask what kind of person in the emperor's palace can get the chief approval of a concubine? Mu Ziyi should meet several points of his needs: unshakable status (appointed ex-girlfriend, first love Bai Yueguang), greatest contribution (the only one who can be of great help in work and life), approval from the parents (the dean matches up), tolerance/no objection to opening a harem (feeling guilty after dumping Shu, helping to conceal the night attack). In short, without Muzi as an example, the three of them can only continue to compete and grind in pain. If there is no huge external pressure, it is impossible to give up the take-all, and then it will be uncomfortable for any sad tree to be reluctant to part. The above two points are enough to prove that Muzi is behind The necessity of the palace, and the emotional history of the male protagonist has been completely determined. No other person with the ability to take everything can replace Muzi's position (unless the professor wins the resurrection match? How ridiculous). In summary, unless it is unfinished, it is certain that Muzi will join the team. So the atmosphere has reached this point, why not just give in (persuad to surrender)~ Now I need to give you some advice: Can you fully understand and get a complete logic about the emotional process of Shu and Muzi? First of all, we need to create a character portrayal for both parties in this discussion, Shu (from high school to working abroad) and Muzi (from high school to going abroad to work in his hometown). In short, it is a set of images. Templating a new character and substituting it into a similar image that you are familiar with can help you quickly grasp the thoughts of the new character (this is also a commonly used method for my high school Chinese reading, and it is effective in personal testing). A brief introduction to my personal opinion: It is very clear about Shu. After all, "Love Letter" is deeply rooted in people's hearts, and the story takes place in Otaru. The young Fujii Shu in it has become the template image of youth crush, and it can even be said that it has been separated into a concept. Therefore, at least in the relationship between the two, Shu's image in high school should be like Shao's. The young "Fujii Tree" is generally an image of a person who is independent-minded, talented, and good in the eyes of his sweetheart. This can also explain why Muzi feels ashamed of himself, wants to move forward with all his strength, but abruptly distances himself and breaks up (even if I don't agree with it); based on this, what kind of image should the returned Muzi be? The author doesn't know and experience many emotions, and I have watched less of them in recent years. But to describe the image of Muzi who has returned, my first impression is: Makima (personal opinion, don't be too angry qaq). There are three reasons: he tried his best to climb out of the small town and ran to the United States alone, even if he didn't hesitate to kill his first love first, and he was able to go back and pursue unremittingly. It's really cool; just like Makima has never faced Denci (to save his life, it's a bit absolute) ) and always pursues the chainsaw man. Some of the qualities that Muzi acquired in a detached concept (this is one of the top ten heartbroken men in Japan) have always existed in Shu. Since the resignation at the beginning of the article, he has not asked Shu for too many elements of a relationship between male and female friends. After all, the palace has different desires; the article may have intentionally omitted or described the small town atmosphere too well. If a secondary teacher in a middle school repeatedly expresses his love for a regular teacher and is rejected repeatedly, and the scene occurs in front of department students, colleagues or even more, the impact will actually be so great that it can lead to conversation or even dismissal. This kind of behavior has a "crazy" feeling that is familiar to me. In short, the current tree is Fujii tree who strives to get ahead on his own and implements the justice of youth, while Muzi is a frustrated Makima who is attracted and almost only cares about the quality of tree youth. Let's use this template to start pushing, then why would "Machima" take the initiative to teach "Fujii tree" social dance to support another competitor? This plot actually appeared in the previous book, but the author handled it very well and did not raise any doubts in my mind (at most, he predicted that the future would be messy and messy, and I would start to have a stomachache). However, the reasons I found were not very realistic: for example, "Machima" wanted to please competitors, "Machima" wanted to pay for status, "Machima" just wanted to get close to the tree, etc., Which were all wrong. So, the image I inserted is incorrect? Do you have a better template that can connect all logic and explain all behaviors? The second part is about the reason why Muzi suddenly threw away the tree. Judging from my short-term memory of nearly two hundred chapters from the day before yesterday to just now, Muzi did not directly give the answer. He kept it secret and worried me. If I did not read carefully and missed it or there is something at the back, please try to take a screenshot or quote and mark the chapter position to clear up my doubts. Thank you for your advice! ! Because today is the last carnival. After taking the CET-6 exam, I have to go through the finals again. This is my only regret! A brief explanation of the reason why the author is curious: Because of a similar unfortunate experience, the author and Shu were depressed for a long time, and Shu's situation was even more serious: the first girlfriend had always been in a good relationship, and as a result we got to know each other and worked together, but the girlfriend was blocked as soon as she went abroad and posted the words "Break Up". Depression is inevitable. As a person who can sense the emotions of others, Shu's inner activities will only become more intense and extreme (the following is the author's presupposition): Why did we break up as soon as we went abroad, without any explanation, am I a partner or a pedal? Accompanying me to play musical instruments by the river every day makes progress. Are you accompanying me or using me? Am I a part of your future, a component of your future happiness; or am I abandoned in the dust with the backward Otaru, just a speck of the past? Drinking to drown his sorrows. Since Shu has gone through a period of depression and alcoholism, he will inevitably ask himself these questions repeatedly and think to extremes. The tree's attitude of being able to step out and be almost indifferent also shows its detached nature, which is as pure as the Holy Spirit; but I am still stuck in the same place, and I really want to know why! ! Brother, do you understand? Please explain it more clearly! ! These are my two explanations and two questions. Please clarify and communicate with me. Thank you all for seeing this. I wish you all can face any relationship with a clear conscience! !
The last book I read, "Twins of a Thousand Thousand Sons," was the first romance novel I read. Before I read online, I spent many years reading various fantasy and cultivation novels. It cannot be said that there is no love content in it. I can only say that it is easy to guess the process, so my perception of the love content is relatively bland. After that, the daily guide recommended the twins (I don't know how, could it be that I read a lot of system books at that time?). I thought the setting was interesting. After reading it, I found that it was very suitable to my appetite. Using the vocabulary I learned from reading now is "distortion, gravity, and Shura field", plus the Japanese gave me a two-dimensional filter, this love light novel turned out to be damn enjoyable😋. The twisted and complicated heavy relationship is addictive. It's too bad that when I read light novels, I always look for those with the Shura Field tag. (Unforgivable, Chichiko! 😡. Jpg) It seems that this time there should be no complicated life background. There probably won't be the same dilemma relationship revealed in the early and middle stages of Nanamitsuki (right?), But Chitose obviously has a femininity attribute, and there may be a similar plot to the Nanamitsuki Fireworks Festival. 🤔But as a high-quality teacher, the protagonist's ability to clear the battlefield must be ten or even nine times better than A Le! If there is wine today, you will be drunk now. Professional readers must dare to make judgments! Even if a third heroine is added, it will definitely not be as twisted as the original! 🍾🥂🎉🎊 (You won't get stabbed in the back, right?)
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How is this book?🤔
Does Muzi count as the heroine?
I feel that Muzi's ending is not very good, and his status is basically the same as that of the three little ones. But to be honest, I feel that this ending is not suitable for Muzi's role in the previous plot. It just gives me the feeling of "the female partner has become the heroine!"
I've seen Chapter 165, and I want to ask Muzi what's the end?
Please improve it ~ I like this book very much, please give it a thumbs up to the author
This book gives me a feeling of Kawabata Yasunari Snow Country, but it is more readable than Snow Country. Snow Country is considered a prose, but it is a novel that makes people more eager to read. Come on, look forward to the follow-up. The recommended monthly vote has been voted, please add more~