My Bishop Is Omnipotent

After reading the first chapter, I knew why it was not popular. The previous life was so heavy as an introduction. I thought I was reading traditional literature. The first chapter dissuaded many people.

I started reading this book two weeks before the limited exemption, and I ordered more than 200 chapters. In the last few days of the limited exemption, I have just started to catch up on the follow-up progress. I will add more later if I have any thoughts. First, the positioning of the book is a bit unclear. I don't know whether the focus is on emotional development, magic plot, or lord farming. It seems to be jumping sideways all the time. In the early stage, there was an inexplicable task of making cookies, and a long series of plots were used to describe the practice and impact of this. However, later on, it entered the aspects of learning magic and relationship development. The main plots of the two teachers and the ex-wife are in this area. During this period, there was also a cooking and some farming plots. After the early stage, procrastination is not a big problem. The relatively exciting plot of the Witch Cult, the little teacher, and saving the father are all here. After that, the progress progressed, the kingdom was invaded, and the sister was sent to the magic academy to be used as hostages. After that, it was a classic (or is it old-fashioned?) Performance and the story of saving the beauty. Then the princess fell in love. I thought it was like an ordinary magic academy, but later she suddenly said that she was poor because Hakiron could eat too much, and she switched to making porcelain and doing business. The key is that this is not your territory. When you do this, you don't feel the satisfaction of farming through your own planning and development. Second, the details are not appropriate, and some unnecessary parts are also written wildly, which is like using too much force, and there is no fun. The other time I watched it, I was constantly criticized for not having enough money to become an immortal. The plot was too slow to progress, but I didn't feel uncomfortable watching it, because even if I didn't have enough money, I could still have fun, and my imagination and complaints were very interesting. The book is about 170 chapters old and it's back to the same old problem as it was in the early days. It's okay to make some money by making porcelain. What's more difficult is that a lot of ink is spent describing this part. Am I here to watch the rebirth of me as a porcelain maker in Western Fantasy? I talked seriously about a lot of things related to making porcelain, and then about cooperation and opening a store to sell goods. I also wrote in detail about how big the sensation was and how big the impact was. I can only say that it is very difficult to comment. Farming articles are not meant to explain everything in detail, not to mention that your purpose is just to make money and it is not in your own territory. There is no need to write so much. Just mention it and pass it by. Such a long list makes people feel confused. My current overall evaluation is: the emotions are interesting, the plot is bland, farming is boring, it's not too tasteless, and it's a pity to abandon it. The author is not good at writing about farming, but he has an inexplicable persistence. The plot is not outstanding, it is quite satisfactory. In terms of pace, there is nothing to say except that the development is slow. It is watchable, but it is not outstanding enough, so it is a waste of time. Of course, there are advantages. The emotional description is relatively online, and the emotions expressed in the first chapter are very powerful. Although it is relatively heavy, the bottom layer is very solid and it is quite exciting. The emotions at the end are still interesting, but the performance is a bit lacking in comparison. There are some places where it is a little light and superficial. Maybe it is affected by the age setting and plot development? Those parts feel like a child saying "I like you" when playing house. They don't have that sincere feeling and lack enough weight. I hope the author can work harder in the future, and don't end up writing everything that comes to mind, and going through everything in the journal. (It's rare to have the time to write a review. I wrote 1,000 words after I finished it. Is it probably a long review? Because I pay more attention to the shortcomings when reading a book, so I mentioned more here. It feels like most readers are more easily persuaded by the shortcomings than attracted by the advantages, so they pay more attention to the shortcomings. The above evaluation is a personal experience and is for reference only by readers and authors)

It is recommended to change it to "My ex-wife and I time traveled, but in the harem"

Come back to Hokkaido and write about love, my most proud belief.

What the author is good at is probably the description of emotional lines, the kind of long-lasting, hazy, sour emotions. Now I feel a little anxious, such as Teacher Xueyan. This book is positioned as a farming novel, so take your time, maximize your strengths and avoid weaknesses, and insert more emotional threads. Non-professional, don't spray if you don't like it

You really need to change your name. It's not like a great god would be fooled by such a name now.

The pace is slow and not enjoyable. No matter how delicate the emotions are, it is undeniable that this is not a good commercial work and will always be a niche one. Anyway, I am a lay person and I can't stand it after reading more than ten chapters.

It's a failure to cross paths with your ex-wife and ex-girlfriend.

Can you really win your biological sister?😰😰

I have read all three books by the author, and this book is obviously not as good as the previous ones. Aside from the fact that the author is not very good at writing Western fantasy elements, the main line of the book is unclear, which is a big problem. Since the plot line must serve the emotional line, I sincerely hope that the author can solve the heart knot of a heroine in one go or the strategy is almost the same. Several times I felt that the teacher has already solved the problem in place, but after dozens of chapters, I still miss Xue Chen

Do these light novel authors like to write a Western fantasy to reward themselves?😅

Will the author return after writing the next book? In fact, what I like the most from my younger sister are the long emotional scenes and long dialogues written by the author. Although I understand that the author wants to break the circle, I feel that the advantage is not brought over from Niqing. The first hundred chapters are not very attractive to me, and the interaction with the heroine later on is better. Western Fantasy + Romance has a very good rhythm, like Be Allegiance to the Witch or Attack the Witch with All Your Power (although the reviews are mixed), please give it your best, author.

This book is really good. I hope it ends well. In some chapters of western fantasy, your descriptions are already comparable to top western fantasy novels. I read this book from this book. Maybe most of your previous fans are light novel romance readers and have very strict evaluations of this book, but you must remember your book As a style change, part of it has been elevated to a level that you don't realize it yourself. Sometimes authors need to stick to their own hearts to write popular works. Others' displeasure and suggestions can only be used as a reference. Don't forcefully change and twist things in your mind Come on, you will definitely be popular.

The polarization is very serious. Some people say that the first one is good, while others say that the first one is bad. The first one is indeed very well written, but the problem is that it does not match the subsequent plot at all, and the correlation is too poor. The ex-wife is portrayed so well in the beginning, and then the ex-wife is not mentioned at all in time travel, and a new heroine is created.

Why doesn't Xue Yan's character have stuck teeth?

To be honest, it doesn't matter if the author doesn't write like this full-time, but it's hard to stick to it if the full-time job is so slow 😐

Logically speaking, the author's writing style should not be like this. Alas, I have never written a novel, and I don't know what to do. I can only say, please go to the author, start a new book or continue writing, I will support you.

Newcomers can stick with it, there are flaws at the beginning but looking back, if you prefer "love harem" and "pure love" but don't want to watch stomachache, you can give it a try and it won't cost you any money now.

Actually, the original introduction was quite good.

Didn't I think I saw an update? Got cheated?

Why should we write the previous plot if Xue Yan is not the heroine?

Indeed, it is still enough, but I would like to ask, this is the latest chapter, who is the bishop, and which family is the bishop? What did you think of the title? ?

The emotional scenes between Tess and Shen En were well written😊

It really hit my strike zone perfectly, and the emotions are very detailed. However, I originally wanted to write a long-flowing article, but it was a little slow at the beginning and the data was not good. It was obviously rushed at the end. There were many female protagonists and the real character descriptions made me have to give up a lot of things. There was no ending for Xue Yan, no continuation of the Witch Cult, and a lot of foreshadowing. Some of the original ideas were not reflected, which is a pity

There are some flaws in the details, causing problems with the look and feel. Then there are some details about the male protagonist's relationship, as if he just fell in love. Didn't he explain at the beginning that he was divorced? In terms of characters, Tess and Xue Xi are well portrayed.

I really like the author's books, maybe it's because of my previous habit of writing about Riqing? I feel that the pace of the author's book is too slow in many places, although I quite enjoyed reading it. In this case, either the plot should be sped up a bit, or like the Eagle, it could be compensated with more updates. I don't know how to write novels, but I quite like reading western fantasy or lord novels. Basically, it's one adventure after another. . . In my personal opinion, the narrative pace of this book is too slow, but this is not a simple funny adventure or a pure love story with a western fantasy background like Su Qing

It is said that the next summer vacation starts, and the author has already released the first two chapters in the group

On the way to the Snow Burial Village, I met a little girl. The heroine gave her blood to drink (which gave her the ability to regenerate), but the village survived by sacrificing the meat of the determined ones. Then the little girl was selected and turned into a weird tree. Tess destroyed the village, made up a white lie, and all died. Disgusting

Is there any novel with a heroine similar to Xue tide? Please

I have been raising it for a long time. I want to ask if my sister has accepted it in the end.