Refining Qi Starts from Repairing the Panel

Can any book lover tell me how much it will cost to read this book?

Come on

The author is actually very good at writing, but the reason why he is not popular is because he always writes things that are beyond the protagonist's ability. What happens is always N levels beyond the protagonist, and the protagonist is not qualified to watch. It is strange that this is popular.

The overall writing is good, but the map is too large and seriously inconsistent with the protagonist's level. Phantom Sect, Holy Land, Immortal Alliance, Immortal King. The boss gets bigger and bigger, and in the blink of an eye, the protagonist is still an ant. It's all about upgrading and changing maps. If you become invincible on one map, you can write some exciting plots. Change the map again. What's the point of always changing maps without upgrading? It feels a bit abusive.

The background design and plot are very good, but the levels where big events happen every time are too far away from the protagonist. For example, it is as if the protagonist is still in the realm of gods, and a world war has occurred. A bunch of Mahayana are fighting for their own purposes. The protagonist can only watch from the side, and is not even qualified to watch. He can only fight from various directions after the fact. Listen to what happened, but the protagonist entered the eyes of the high-level officials too early, and had no control over his own destiny and life. They could kill the protagonist casually without the help of the most powerful men. This is very frustrating. If the protagonist is developed earlier and participates in the development of major events, the overall impression can be better.

Reading other novels: "Can this be tolerated?" Read this novel: "Is there such a big hatred"?

If you can write, tell everyone as soon as possible. If you can't, tell everyone early. One chapter will be added in a few days. Who the hell will be watching over you every day?

I think the writing in the beginning is very good, but in the end, the practice is all about serving oneself at the expense of heaven and energy conservation. Isn't there a transcendent process of feeding back to the world? Or is it that in the end of practice, you can't make something out of nothing, reduce and seek emptiness? I hope that practice will not always be about seeking from the outside, but can have a process of seeking inward. Of course, this is just a suggestion of mine. The author can take it as a reference.

Very good, people are full now, which path does the author take? A giant of immortality or a humane dragon court? For the sake of a small selfishness at the bottom, I hope the author will take the humanistic path to gather people, and lead the rise of martial arts to overthrow those high-ranking immortal worms. Life is already so difficult. If you read a novel and it turns out to be just a bunch of super worms in the immortal world, no matter how great and upright it is, it really won't make you feel good. It's better to kill all living beings and create a bright and prosperous world.

1 Taixuan Holy Land has been closed for ten thousand years. Since there is no one left as an elder, there will be no disciples for ten thousand years. How did this elder come to be? 2 The protagonist relies entirely on his peers to support him, and he feels like he is just wandering around casually. If he encounters a problem that cannot be solved, God must have a helping hand.

Everything else is good, except that the female protagonist is boring. The female protagonist has no independent personality of her own. She cultivates everything for the male protagonist. Such novels about immortality cannot be about husband and wife. They should be about lovers. They must have independent personalities. Both parties should know each other and become a Taoist couple in order to pursue the Tao.

The story is well written, but the protagonist has been running for his life and watching. With such talent and golden fingers, it feels really difficult to survive in this world.

It's really good, but the details can still be improved. The death of Xiao Shangpin's spiritual root is too sloppy. No matter how much attention was paid to the foreshadowing, there was no one to protect it.

Water reaches the sky? The layout is smaller! One clone fills the world with water! Guess how many clones there are! !

I have updated to the latest chapters, and here are my thoughts after reading the last 10 chapters. To be honest, I have been reading all your previous chapters carefully. The last ten chapters, I have almost skipped them one by one. Anyway, the more I read, the more upset I feel. Everyone is reading books. Just for fun, you said that you made the plot faster, which is a good thing, but your current chapter content is really not very good after reading it. The reason is that you made the leaders and representatives of the various forces too far apart from the protagonist. In fact, it doesn't matter if you make the story too far apart. I wrote about some things and battles about fighting against foreign orthodoxy. After so many chapters of the protagonist, I hesitated about the reason for the disparity in strength. There was no sense of participation or presence at all. The local representative high-level officials themselves could no longer bear it, and their hips were strained. You suppressed the protagonist for so long. It's really uncomfortable to read like this. To put it simply, the enemy's strength is too different from that of the protagonist, and you write these battle scenes. As a result, the protagonist goes to hide and seek when something happens, and lets the people in the territory guard the Cangyun Realm. In the end, they are also manipulated. This kind of reader is very depressing, the protagonist's sense of existence is not revealed at all, and the local forces are completely unable to resist. Therefore, the author, please stop suppressing the protagonist. If you don't like the protagonist being suppressed all the time when reading a book, you just have to endure it. Hey, if we continue, I really can't get the interest to follow up on the order anymore.

Among the new books this year, I feel it ranks first, and the plot and main line feel good. Why is the characterization so poor? The Song family, the court, the Holy Land, the sect, there are so many people present now, but no one can stand. It's not brilliant, even vague, just like the Song sisters. Later you have to think about whether they are cultivating immortals or practicing martial arts. The characters are completely blurred. Four old Yinbi appeared in the sect's holy land, but they can't tell who is who. For example, the one that Zhu Xian is most unhappy with is Baguio. Without early shaping, who cares? For several senior officials of Qingyun Sect, after reading the book, the image of this person will appear in their mind, Cangsong, Tian Buyi, Shuiyue, Daoxuan. There is currently no one in this book. Commander Suzaku is described the most, but it is too thin. How could such a simple person survive the previous 50 years and still be involved in officialdom. My favorite is Song Yun, but the image description is also lacking. I only know that he is an ordinary and pitiful person. Without good character creation, the copyright may not be sold. I hope to see this story on TV one day.

The protagonist looks like a Taoist master who came down to experience the tribulation

Qi training, immortality, martial arts, incense, isn't it a bit too complicated?

This book can open up the situation in just a few dozen chapters, and the world construction is huge and spectacular, unlike some authors who can't get out of Novice Village with a million words.

Open a harem, write more emotional dramas, and have more sex

The closer to the end, the easier it is to procrastinate, a common problem in novels on the Internet

I can only say that the details are well sketched, and the setting is obviously carefully considered by the author. The main fault lies in the control of the plot rhythm. The plot is too long, which is exciting and exciting. It is indeed obvious that the author wants to slowly spread the world view, so he has to create a climax of the plot to feel refreshed. This requirement is really difficult for the author, because generally the author is pushed by the plot and writes wherever he goes. I can only say come on.

Can I add more updates? You can also add more essence

Chu Zheng was too lonely. Regardless of his past life or this life, he always practiced alone. He basically had no relatives or friends. Even when he married Song Ningxue, the two of them didn't stay together for long.

Add some finesse

Can this be considered be? I don't understand it very clearly. It seems to be the ending but not completely.

Is there a division of cultivation realms? Why is it so messy?

Will Song Lingqing marry the protagonist later?

Congratulations on the completion. I wish the next one will be better.

This novel is lighthearted in the early stages and heavy in the later stages.