Hunter: Tonight, Germain Joins the Hunt

Chapter 5: Let the protagonist go to the dark continent. You also gave me two reasons. 1 You want to see what the dark continent is like. 2 You want to see where your limits are as a human being. Also in Chapter 5, what did you write before? It was difficult to kill several demon wolves, he was still getting used to his body, and he was still a novice in fighting. Then you have to see where the limit is? Do you have any logic in this? You haven't learned to walk yet. Start running first. Try to see if you can run 100 meters in less than ten seconds? Chapter 6 You really just let the protagonist walk around and did nothing. I don't understand what Dark Continent One Minute Tour is trying to express. Combined with the subsequent plot of going to the Dark Continent more than once. Good guy, you are using the Dark Continent as your protagonist's resource library. Your one-minute plot of traveling in the Dark Continent was intended to convey that the Dark Continent is not very dangerous to your protagonist. So the two reasons you gave for going to the Dark Continent are sheer nonsense. They were made up casually and have no logic at all. As a fan novel, the largest fan group is the fans of the original work. The Dark Continent is the most dangerous place set in the original work. As a result, when you come up, the settings of the original work are smashed to pieces. A protagonist who has not yet adapted to his body and is still a novice in combat dares to enter the dark continent without any reason. Originally, the fan group that should be attracted the most, but you screened out this group of people when you came up. I can only say that you, the author, are really awesome.

I've read it, I don't like it, and the protagonist isn't that great. Chapter 6 goes straight to the Dark Continent. The protagonist knows that the Dark Continent is extremely dangerous, so he doesn't have the courage to go there. Then he stayed safe for 60 seconds and came back alive. It was such a vicious mess.

It is extremely bland, the plot has no ups and downs, and even the description of the fight is unexpectedly watery, and every step is too coincidental. Moreover, the protagonist attacks people very lightly, but is extremely willing to die. Shit, Kuku might as well run to the Dark Continent. The Dark Continent is also full of weaklings, without anything outstanding, and nothing happens to a loser who comes and goes a few times. Overall, it doesn't have any appeal, and I can't stand it anymore. I'd give it a 4 out of 10. After all, although the writing is bland and boring, there's nothing brainless about it, but there are still poisonous points. Just 4 points.

If you have read The Hunter, I suggest you not read this book.

The funniest thing is that the protagonist, a brigade-level master, seriously picks up corpses and collects tens of thousands of nuns, and robs tens of thousands of nuns in cash.

The author may not understand the full-time job well enough. It is a failure that the protagonist can go to the Dark Continent from the beginning. He describes the Dark Continent like the African grassland where there are dangers, but if you have a gun, there will be no danger. Then, in terms of characters, I don't know whether the author's writing is not good enough or he is deliberately all original characters. , But some of the original characters do not fit the setting, some of the descriptions are average or even inconsistent with the characters, and there are loopholes in some settings and plots. Maybe the writing is not enough. In fact, it might have been better if the original characters and the Dark Continent had not appeared so early when it was written.

Without the wolf, it's almost a family portrait

Logically speaking, the Dark Continent should be high-risk and high-return, but it turned out to be low-risk and low-return. If the trip was just to sell materials and make some money, it would be better to go to the Meile Wetland. The protagonist clearly offended the Phantom Troupe and went to the World Tree without any cover-up. The protagonist either had confidence in his own strength or simply forgot about the Troupe. Before he went there, he had no idea that he would encounter Mo Laowu. As a result, Feitan and the two were forced into a desperate situation. The more you justified Feitan's strength, the more clown the protagonist became, pretending not to be able to win. If the three Phantom Troupes had come or if they hadn't met Mo Laowu by chance, the protagonist would have died long ago. The author did not give the protagonist a strength dice, but gave the protagonist a luck dice. If he was lucky, he would be able to save the protagonist.

Why would you go to the Dark Continent if you have the strength to fight several killers? What is the purpose? What means are there? I still don't understand my abilities. What should I do if I can't come back? Without any preparation, you just want to take a look at the Dark Continent, right? If you want to pretend to be B, don't look at your equipment. Others have three heads and six arms, while the protagonist only has one head and two arms.

This is a bit outrageous, that's not how the heads are given. At least you have to be prepared and go to the forbidden area with bare board.

The theme is very good, but the poison points are too strong 1. The exponentially increasing cooling time is just to sell millions of dollars? If you are short of money, just go to the Sky Arena 2. The protagonist is not short of money, why do you always have to sell things to get money 3 The Dark Continent can be visited by the protagonist with his strength? If you set up a different world, you can still go semi-infinite, is it not much better than the current Dark Continent? 4. The protagonist has no motivation to take risks and go to the Dark Continent.

Now that I see it, I feel that what I write about is no longer a full-time hunter. It basically has nothing to do with hunters except for the place names. It's directly the soul system, and it also has a world view and power system. Becoming narrow-minded and incompatible without realizing it. I don't know how I will write it later, but I personally feel that the charm of hunters is constantly diminishing on the original basis.

The most taboo thing about writing a fanfic is to change the base. Aren't you writing a fanfic to attract people who like the base of the story and come to read it? Because people who came in from the basic market saw the changes and found that there were changes, and most of them couldn't accept it. If you rely on traffic, don't challenge it. . . .

There are several poisonous points at the beginning: 1. First of all, I have never played Bloodborne, but the protagonist's ability is a bit outrageous. There is a chance to produce telekinesis products related to the target killed. So far, there are no negative effects. The principle is to use the so-called "resentment" after death. Let's not talk about whether this is reasonable or not, but this craft is a technique that even telepathy masters will lament. It's better, there are a lot of conditions for the mind-killing master to deal with resentment, and you have to worry about backlash. The protagonist can directly and unconditionally refine it into pure positive equipment. If it weren't for the "grudge" condition that only kills enemies with your own hands, I think all the mind-bending masters in the hunter would be declared unemployed 2. Visiting the Dark Continent, which can be called a forbidden land for humans, for an outing. You must know that if the ant king is placed in the dark continent, it will only be a moderately dangerous disaster at best. Who will give you the strength and courage to go to the dark continent to play? ? ? You must know that in addition to living things, there are a lot of unreasonable killing mechanisms in the Dark Continent. How can you survive when you hear a sound and die when you have no information? When encountering a viral disaster, do you plan to rely on commercially available antidotes to detoxify? Or simply bring it back to persecute humans? It's understandable for the first time, but is it a problem to go and waste your brain every few chapters? Is it really okay for the protagonist to be casual? ? ? 3. The mysterious affection between the protagonists. I used to kill people, set fire, and rob the auction items you wanted, but now I have traveled through time and want to be a good person, and Bisi Ji actually helped him. The reason is that it is different from what I imagined? ? ? I'm really curious as to how the others pursued them==

Whether the protagonist can beat you or not depends entirely on the author's words. The protagonist's experiences and gains are useless. He went to the Dark Continent four or five times and received various equipment and traits. Even if the two people in the brigade can force you to beat you, the development of the plot is illogical. I write whatever I think of and it belongs 😅

Otherwise, the author could just write a soul-based dungeon. Writing a full-time job is just disgusting. Should I leave it here to clear dungeons or go to the farmland? It's so easy.

When you see the protagonist selling the materials obtained from the Dark Continent for money, you can give up and beg for food with the golden rice bowl.

Protagonist

I don't understand, you're risking your life for something worth just one dollar? Is this setting tenable? No matter what aspect, it shouldn't be like this. It seems that everyone in Hunter is chasing power and money. In fact, no matter which character they are, they are constantly uniting knowledge and action with a strong will to chase their own great freedom. But I don't understand the setting of the protagonist. If it is for power, there is no need to go to the dark forest so early. The strongest people in mankind can hardly go to places where they can't walk. It's outrageous for you to risk your life with just a few dollars. There is no need to level up in this place...

Everyone is so cool. People write that Dark Continent is the most awesome one.

Not recommended for those who have high requirements on plot logic, not recommended for those who are sensitive to data, not recommended for full-time hunter fans, and recommended for soul-loving readers.

Saw Knife and Shotgun

Nanny

The technological development and rich material foundation of modern society allow some mentally handicapped people to survive well. A fan is a fan, and it is a very ridiculous behavior to randomly change the settings of the original work. Comparing Journey to the West and Dragon Ball with fan fiction is even more of a retarded behavior. You can send it to a retarded bar to laugh at it. Others are pretending to be retarded, but this person is really retarded. Dragon Ball originally only borrowed some of the character names, and was never a fan of Journey to the West. This is just like the book says 1+1=2, and the mentally retarded person says the first 1+1, so 1+1=7 is also correct.

If you are interested in this novel, please take the time to read it during the new book period (that is, the first month after the book is released). Reading it will help the novel get recommended by the website. Thank you! The novel contains some Bloodborne and Dark Dungeon elements, but it is mainly based on the world view of the Hunter. It has been modified to have a single female protagonist and less emotional drama. The current plan is to complete the work in the middle and later stages.

If you want to get into the trap, read this first

I voted, don't write it as invincible flow

It looks good, but the Dark Continent part feels boring and unexciting. The human world is very good.

The setting is very novel and reasonable, but the combat power increases too quickly, the plot is too tight, the later stage is a bit watery, and then suddenly the finale 😰 is full of ups and downs, but it is still a novel worth reading.

I haven't watched the anime, but it doesn't affect my viewing. It's good to watch. By the way, what does the character profile core mean? Is it the name of the team?