A Roguelike Castlevania Starting in Fairy Tail

Investigation object: "Castlevania Starting from Fairy Tail" - Male Protagonist - [Endymion] Investigation Result: [Reincarnation] Judgment Basis: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, investigates the time-travel situation of the time-travelers The profession of recording and recording aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know in advance the time travel status of travelers in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with fast travel information query services If there are any mistakes, Wan Wang can correct me ——Feast of All Souls Zhenjun Stay on January 29, 2025

1. I can't understand what's so exciting about the possession setting. When the protagonist's strength is so low that he can beat the "boss", there's no fun feeling when he's possessed. As a means of sowing discord, it has no meaning to anyone. It is basically just used to convey information. However, there are many ways to convey information, and possession is a very unscrupulous practice. 2. Personnel management is too rigid. For example, Keith from the Nine Ghost Gate. If he is not allowed to use necromancy, what is the point of guarding the third floor? Fran Mars is not strong either. If you don't want to strengthen them, it's better to use them as neutral NPCs, such as Keith selling demon information and Felan selling demon props. 3. Some interesting mechanisms can be introduced, such as group climbing towers, double bosses, mechanical bosses, etc. 4. There is currently no black protagonist group, but I still want to remind the author. Most people who read Fairy Tail fics are Fairy Tail fans. Even if they like the villain, they don't completely hate the protagonist. Fairy Tail itself is a niche subject, and the villains of Fairy Tail are a niche within a niche.

When other people travel to the past, they either show off or ensure a harmonious plot. What is the protagonist's idea? It feels like he is a pervert in the past. I would say he is strong. His ability seems to be a torturing ability. I don't see any improvement in myself. I would say he is a fun person, but he is obviously not that good.

It's really good. Most of the book is a detailed retelling of the plot settings and interpersonal relationships of the original work. This is going to be a setting collection.

It's a bit too watery. I've only written half of it about Castlevania, including seven or eight chapters about possession. I can't see what the main character's purpose is. It seems like there's nothing more than upgrading Castlevania 😅

It feels like the setting of the protagonist's Castlevania was not explained clearly until Chapter 10. After being sucked into the Castlevania, you can directly possess him without any prerequisites. The energy used by the people inside will be absorbed. How do you recover after it is used up? Also, what effect does it have on enemies at the same level? You can't say that someone from the same city asked you to suck into the tower and directly GG. I feel that this is purely the ability to suck blood from your hands. You can only keep stacking the values. If the values ​​cannot be stacked, you have to GG.

Thirty chapters in and there is no main plot. I have no idea what the ultimate purpose of the protagonist's actions is.

It feels dry, with no content at all. The protagonist is just playing a baby game, and the specific abilities are vague.

I feel like the background design is good, but the content is too empty. I feel like it will be difficult to write after 100 chapters.

My personal feeling is. . . Castlevania is written too much, and the plot is not advanced at all.