One Piece: Davy Jones Is the Captain of the Flying Dutchman

It depends on what you think In the early stage, follow the main plot, hone your writing skills, and polish your ideas After that, I feel that I can still follow the war on the top and occupy the jib. As a base camp, it can still be moved. Moria can also try to absorb the crew If the crew potential has increased, it will not be so fast to become the imperial mate Take your time After all, we are not the Straw Hats. Try to write this book as reasonably as possible After that, you should slowly weaken the presence of your enhanced data version This sometimes feels more tearing and out of place The subject matter is quite attractive But I feel that if your foreshadowing is not handled well, it will be a big mess. Fishman Island will be an important direction for your book And you should also pay attention to Luffy Becoming a Yonko after a war is a bad choice, but the Shichibukai is a winning choice Superior, it is best to go directly to become a big pirate and collide with other Yonko Beat generals, three disasters, and the Shichibukai improve your reputation It is mainly training Regarding the strength of your subordinates, try not to meet Kaido and Big Mom officially The best time is the country of Wano. Use the power of the Straw Hat Boy to officially take over the territory and become the Four Emperors You can also use Moria as an introduction to join the country of Wano This time period is enough for you to write for a long time Then you can refer to the future plot to write

Protagonist

I couldn't watch it before it was released. The character of the protagonist has changed when he travels to the world of pirates. When he encounters a pirate ship at sea, the navy will immediately go up and kill them all. When he encounters someone who is somewhat famous in the original work, he will lick it, risk his life, and keep following the path of Luffy in the original work, but no one who is related to the original work dares to touch it. The Deserter King didn't dare to move no matter how provocative he was, and he was forced to go to Garp without an axe. The most disturbing thing was that the author himself forgot about it. Garp didn't catch up with the protagonist and arrived at Upside Down Mountain late. Co-authored by Kap Pu teleported over to capture Kebi, then teleported back to the Grand Line and started on his way again The protagonist was slapped in the face and didn't dare to say anything, and Hawkeye was also scared to ride on the face. Hawkeye finished cutting people and passing, and then left without worrying about anything. Before leaving, he gave up The protagonist acted as a nanny and sent the Luffys back to the ship. Why didn't he act as arrogant as a supporting character? Going to kill Aaron, someone on the way tried to kill the protagonist, but he didn't even let go of anyone, and then no one was left except Xiao Hachi. After leaving, I'll take some photos. Copying the meaningless and forced sensationalism The writing in Alabasta is also a mess. The first news report is that Garp can't beat the protagonist, and the second step is to forcefully arrange a sand crocodile to take advantage of the protagonist To sum up, it is purely fake and dog-licking. And write a b system to update an ability, repeat the water for a period, and then fight like the third child, teleporting crab claw tentacles

The protagonist is a person who goes around doing good things. He said how evil he was, and then he kept doing good things.

What the hell are you writing about, recruiting deserters? Do you dare to want something on the same level as TM Momonosuke and his son?

Why do you keep walking around in the flying group plot? So why not go watch anime?

Why did the author remove the captain's tentacles and crab claws? Now the captain's face has not changed except for the rest. It feels uninteresting.

How is this different from the original work? . . Just change the protagonist, change the younger brother, and solve the same incident. . .

The poison test is completed and it is found to be non-toxic/slightly toxic, visible and of good quality. The adventure of Captain Jones, no brainless plot of doting on a girl, decisive killing, 👍🏻

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