Please Call Me Huanxian

The current progress is very comfortable to read.

The early stage was good, the ordinary life of cultivating immortals, although it was not too exciting, but it was okay, this is how cultivating immortals should be (personal opinion). In the later stage of the interface war, the upgrades were like rockets, which were somewhat separated from the early stage. This is not to say that there cannot be a war, but it is not handled well. It is too routine and cool, and has no own characteristics. Now I can't stand it anymore

To be honest, when I heard those discussion posts about whether there were female protagonists or not, I suddenly didn't want to read them anymore. For those who are discussing whether there is a female protagonist or not, why not write a book of your own? It feels even more disgusting to force the plot to go this way🤮🤮

I hope there won't be a female protagonist 😆😆😆. Women in books are always long-winded, and then keep getting into trouble and dragging them down, or getting emotionally involved with the male protagonist and male partner. Of course, I don't rule out books with strong women, but I personally prefer clean and neat things. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

Seriously. What the author wrote is pretty good. However, I'm tired of watching this cliche plot of starting from the bottom and working your way up step by step, and climbing up. It's so damn outdated. Anyway, I only lasted a dozen chapters. Maybe that veteran was laying the groundwork. The protagonist will suddenly become very strong in the future, but what does that have to do with me? The pace of your writing is too slow

This book is good and has a fairy-like flavor. There is no plot of bitterness, hatred and constant killing all day long.

The front is really attractive, but the back is a good Taoist friend who is described as a pet and gets annoyed when he sees the young master.

Overall, it's okay. I suggest you continue reading it. However, in some places, in order to promote the plot, you have to be prudent and don't be greedy.

It's not that readers don't like the female protagonist, but they don't like the male protagonist licking the female protagonist. Let alone licking the female protagonist, even if you have a male partner who keeps the male protagonist licking the female protagonist, readers won't want to read it. What most readers want is a green leaf character that can roll as far as it can when used or not. After all, most readers don't want a leech on themselves when they are involved in the plot. So the author! Don't write a leech character on the protagonist's growth journey. This is an online novel that earns fast food money and does not require your devotion to the Holy Mother spirit and the so-called self-movation. Understand?

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The author's writing is good, but people couldn't stand the previous book. It's not that the author's writing is not good, it just makes it look like a donkey practicing Taoism. A large section of the book is about a donkey practicing Taoism, almost like the protagonist becoming a Taoist monk. I really can't stand it. I hope this book will not go astray and write less nonsense plots, otherwise it will be a waste of writing!

If you can write clearly, it is recommended to have a Taoist companion to help each other. To practice Taoism is not to be a monk, nor to be a eunuch, nor to be ruthless and merciless. It is following one's heart, doing things spontaneously, doing nothing and doing nothing, doing something and not doing anything. It's normal to have Taoist couples! ! ! !

It is recommended not to expand the whole world so quickly, and the level of obtaining the ability to fly is too low. It doesn't feel good to have monks who can fly everywhere. Also, don't organize so many trading rallies, and have fewer monks. Make the cultivation of immortals a bit mysterious, otherwise it will feel that it is too simple. If you become a monk and become a dog, you will lose the immortality. Generally speaking, This book is considered a good novel during this period. There are also conflicts that are a bit too deliberate. People everywhere want to rob the protagonist of his treasure. If you really don't know how to create conflicts, just create conflicts between paths, schools, territory and resources, dynasties, good and evil, and races. Don't always encounter villains who want to rob the protagonist and be too deliberate.

. This book has the same shortcomings as all online books. The early writing is very exciting and attracts people to subscribe. In the mid-term, I couldn't hold it back any longer. The plot content begins to become patterned. In the later stage, you change maps, fight monsters, and use treasures to upgrade. Already collapsed. When I read this, I already had reading fatigue. I think this is also the reason for most online eunuchs. On the one hand, it is to earn a constant amount of words. On the one hand, there is the loss of a large number of readers.

The plot is well written, but the fights are so embarrassing to watch. Those who didn't know better thought it was a martial arts novel, and the fights are not even as exciting as a martial arts novel. The article you wrote about cultivating immortals, what about the monks' fighting methods? The writing of Fighting Techniques is really unsatisfactory. If you really can't write it, just read other authors' books. In this regard, I recommend Dao Zhengfeng.

The author's writing style is good, but I really can't get the feeling of cultivating immortality made by Qin Dynasty. The fundamental reason why the Qin system can operate is to maintain stability with high pressure. Once it cannot be suppressed, vassal towns will be divided and all heroes will rise together. However, in the world of Xianxia, ​​there is an army of one person, how to suppress it? Why should immortal cultivators act like dogs to the emperor? So this set actually doesn't work at all. It may still be feasible to implement enfeoffments like the feudalism of the Western Zhou Dynasty. If you are strong, others will recognize you as the boss. You must establish a system of counties and counties and centralize power. Only a strong dependency system like Shinto is possible.

It started very well, so why did it feel like it was weak and fell into a rut before it was handed in? Is it my illusion🤔

The writing is good, but the protagonist encounters too many chores. The plot is necessary, but there can't be so many things every day. The protagonist has just started to practice, so he should have a few days to practice after each incident.

Change the author's profile! There is a woman who walks in the world and has a big stone broken in her chest. I have been reading books for 30 years, and I have never seen a woman break a big stone. Why does she have so much flesh?

Fortunately, there is a limited exemption. After reading a few chapters, I realized that I am a petty bourgeoisie. Forget about the money wasted on previous subscriptions.

I feel like this book has been on the limited edition three times this year.

As someone who subscribes to every chapter, After Ascension is quite disappointing. The so-called ascension is just changing the map. The cultivation level and mana will not change. The mana will fade in the first year. Then I begged to join another sect, but the other party looked down on me and made difficult conditions, so I took the initiative to give the other party secrets and still accepted the difficult conditions. Is it really necessary to join this sect? Is it necessary to be so humble? The plot that can obviously make readers happy has to be frustrating. . .

This is the first time I've seen a protagonist whose upgrade speed is not as fast as that of a supporting character. Even if it's not as fast as one, it's not as good as anything else.

What exactly is the protagonist Goldfinger? After reading it for a long time, it had nothing to do with illusions. I thought it was some kind of compilation of goose illusions or something.

Give the author 8 monthly passes! Express your support for the author who keeps updating!

Your name is Huanxian. Is the dragon you have called Huanxian😏

Not included in the boutique? It's pretty well written.

The book is good, but the taste is too bland

This book is not as good as the previous one

Is there a female protagonist? If so, don't waste your time reading it.