Fanxin Asked

. ? Two lifetimes and six hundred years of experience? To translate, doesn't it mean that losers don't go ashore and boast that they have 600 years of experience in not going ashore. ?

This book is very well written so far. There are not many books that I can read at the beginning. I gave up if I didn't see the paid chapters. I have been reading books for many years and it is very demanding. So far, the articles about cultivating immortals have not surpassed the ones about mortals cultivating immortals and passing on to the human world, while the ones about the immortal world are just average!

After rescuing people, you still have to do chores, but you still don't give food and medicine? Has this ungrateful martial arts school been destroyed by the protagonist?

I just like to see the flow of ordinary people, developing upward step by step. If you are not afraid of being slow, you are afraid of collapse. Too many novels develop too fast and then collapse later. Eating sugar cane in the front, eating poop in the back is extremely uncomfortable. The author grasped the plot well

I just have a question. With 600 years of experience in cultivating immortals in your previous life, you can't even create an innate skill? So what's the point of this immortal cultivation?

It's not like the mortal stream, but more like the martial arts stream, with a lot of bullshit and ruinous things.

Where did the vast secrets of the Immortal Way come from in six hundred years?

The author's writing skills and ability to write stories are a waste of writing about ordinary people on the streets. Without innovation, no matter how strong your basic skills are, it will be difficult to achieve results.

The two monthly passes at the beginning of this month are all given to you! Support the author! I'm also following Lao Yue's "Lamp on Mountains and Seas", but many people voted for Lao Yue, and this book is new, but the author writes it very well! Not white text, not verbose! I hope the author can keep writing well! 😁😁😁

The writing style of this book about cultivating immortals is good, the language is concise, the level setting of cultivating immortals is quite satisfactory, the sound and color of the fighting scenes are not bad, and the description of the psychological activities of the protagonist is okay. The shortcomings are: the description of the power of the cultivation techniques of each level of immortality is not adequate, the words and deeds are inconsistent with the status, the description of the psychological activities of the supporting characters is not rich enough, and the most annoying thing is that the names of the characters are too random, lack of deep meaning and are rubbish.

This book is really well written, and by previous standards, it is almost close to fairy grass. It's a pity that today's books are very particular about being particularly attractive, but this book doesn't have that.

This book is really good! I wonder why so few people subscribe?

Why are there so few comments? Doesn't anyone speak?

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The back of Huan Xian, including this one, is at the level of ordinary fantasy. The level of writing is indeed not as good as a panel certificate that lasts forever Come on!

Inexplicably, it is said that he has awakened in two lives. First of all, it reduces the protagonist's sense of crisis. Anyway, there is one, two, and maybe three. Then, what is the use of introducing the modern person in the second life? It will only make people feel meaningless, and it will be better if you are a modern person in the first life and a Jindan Zhenren in the second life.

It's a pity, I was still looking forward to the excitement of the upper world. It ended anticlimactically. .

Very well written! Delicate, clear and colorful stories

The author was pretty good at the beginning, but in the middle and late stages he started to lose his temper.

I was watching the Taoist Sutra chanter, and I was fascinated by it, so I came here to vote for you. Come on.

I've read Chapter 50, why do you feel it's different from the Taoist chanter Please call me Huanxian? This book feels a bit trivial.

From two chapters a day to one chapter a day, now I have to stop updating occasionally.

It's finished. It's a pity that the results are a bit poor. Otherwise, if I had continued writing, The Upper Realm would have been more exciting, and there would be no baggage in writing it.

😢 A very good book ended because of poor grades

A decent book, if you can read it, it can be regarded as solid food