I Really Don't Know How to Cultivate Immortality!

After reading Chapter 139, I feel that the professionalism is still strong, but when I encounter trouble, I write dozens of chapters. There is no way to deal with it, and it is too procrastinating and neat. I'm sorry for being such a big cheat. If it's just because you're young and haven't grown up, why go out and hang out? They say it's time travel, they say they have brains, but it turns out that they know something is wrong, and there is a problem, should they be tricked or not, and they still think there is a reversal? If you don't have the ability to show your holiness in front of others, don't pretend to be confident.

Promoting the plot depends entirely on accidents and abnormal events. There is no preparation before events occur. Every time I fight, I lose miserably. I feel that the protagonist has no subjective initiative. According to normal people, I have a cheat and I have been defeated so many times. I have to be more prepared next time. I really don't know what to say when I win miserably every time and recuperate every time. It feels like a novel ten years ago.

What do I see in these tens of thousands of words? Professional Taoist knowledge, not what is written in a novel. There are too many novels on the market at present, which can only be novels, rather than works based on Taoism. Although this novel is a time-travel novel, it shows what a professional Taoist novel is. Novels should not be science fiction. Although they are all fantasy, rationality and evidence are the basis for a foothold. I can't wait for the complete version. Please hurry up and update it.

It's well written, but I have a few comments. I think the author doesn't have the experience to describe the feelings of middle-aged and elderly people, so don't write about time travel. You can just write about time travel in high school or college. You set it up and write the protagonist who is confused and has no opinion. He doesn't have the sense of superiority of a time traveler as a later person. He has no direction. That is to say, after reading it, there is no image of the protagonist in his mind. It's very funny when you write like this. After reading it, I really didn't feel the presence of the protagonist. The influence of the protagonist is not vivid at all. You write that the family loves each other, but at the same time, you don't care about the thief in the house. You know that the banquet will change, but you don't prepare anything. When you use it, you regret not preparing the talisman, and you don't prepare any means afterward. At the same time, you say that there are many demons in this world and you should be more careful. It feels like the protagonist knows that he is the protagonist. If anything happens, the author will arrange it and he is confident. There is no sense of crisis at all.

Author, I can see that you have strong professional knowledge but not much social experience, so can you stop conceiving suspense plots? Author, if you don't have enough brains, stop writing. It makes me uncomfortable.

The author writes the spiritual part very well, with many details. But the suspense part is really poor. It belongs to the kind of person who keeps dying and the protagonist gradually understands the situation. There is no sense of investigation and efforts to solve the problem at all. It all feels like something is going to happen, and then something really happens.

The writing is okay, but I don't know how to shake people up with the stupid protagonist. The protagonist is a close disciple who has inherited the mantle of Zhenren and yet he doesn't waver? What path have you cultivated? What teacher did you follow? What kind of dharma lineage do you follow? Bah, give up. There are too many things to do and you still feel aggrieved, and you are done with your recklessness. The struggle between good and evil will last a lifetime. The ancestor protects you. If you are afraid of it, it will be over.

I've had a bad feeling since the little girl thief came out. Have you seen the later part? Could you please tell me if I can watch the later part?

Most of the protagonists are suffering from Alzheimer's disease (I can't imagine this, and I can't imagine that. Being bombarded by the big information in this world, it's really hard to accept. It's better to be a local from the beginning, and don't travel through time). Apart from being inconsistent with the intelligence mentioned at the beginning, it is very readable to ignore this point.

This is not right, that is not right, there are so many things that are wrong 😒

It's a pity that this book started with a god, but ended up going back to the mountain instead of directly changing scenes a few years later, resulting in a lousy rhythm.           ，， Not many people at Qidian have written about this time period well, and even those who have written well can only do so every day 404

Can the author say something about the female thief who is the heroine? I don't really like this role. If so, I'll quit as soon as possible!

The protagonist is too young, why not practice cultivation quietly in the mountains? If the protagonist is not strong enough, the protagonist will go down the mountain and be beaten every day. It is really uncomfortable to watch! It would be more reasonable to at least send a few older senior brothers to follow! Is it fun to abuse your master? If you keep writing like this, I won't subscribe to follow up!

There is absolutely nothing to say about the author's writing style. But I really don't understand why the protagonist is made to look like a fool. The part about the wallet being stolen made me want to give up the book. Can anyone tell me what happened to the female thief?

Is there a female protagonist? If there is a female protagonist, is it a single female protagonist? I hope it will be a single female protagonist, or no female protagonist. After all, the protagonist is a Taoist priest, so there should be more Taoist plots and more content about purity and inaction. The best thing is to travel down the mountain and focus on catching monsters, killing them randomly, and not writing about love. That would be great.

I felt a little awkward in the later stage, but the writing style and various knowledge base were all fine. The main reason is that, regardless of the title, Goldfinger tends to be a refreshing novel, but a few plots gave me the feeling that it was a traditional fantasy work that was exhausted, accidents happened frequently, and the dust was almost settled in the end, but there was still a yellow bird. Then the protagonist can only rely on people to save him. In fact, this kind of plot only happens once. It needs to be upgraded to some extent in the future, and Goldfinger also needs to be upgraded to some extent. In fact, it is completely OK to write traditional fairy tales based on the author's skills. Embarrassingly, from the book title introduction to the Golden Finger and the historical background, I feel that this is a table-topper. However, the recent plot gives me the feeling that it is a traditional spiritual fantasy novel covered with cool writing.

It's too busy. The protagonist is really too busy. Events come one after another. It makes me feel a little suffocated! It's better to have more developmental plots and daily routines, the child is only 12 years old!

What the hell is on the list now? It took me a long time to find something to watch, but there were too few.

Isn't the author really a Taoist priest? Why do I feel that his description of Taoism is so real, and his drawing of talismans is also very skillful. After reading this book, I feel like I can become a heavenly master myself. Can the author reveal his identity?

It's really good, and I have quite a lot of knowledge about Taoism. As for whether it can restore the feeling of rituals and Taoism in the zombie series, I haven't seen anyone write about it, including the fans. That kind of rituals and Taoism was my early impression of cultivating immortals before I came into contact with the novels about cultivating immortals. It was very attractive. Gravity, the feeling of fighting against each other in the air, the mysterious Taoist method with its own logical closed loop, and then there is the sense of security brought by the step-by-step preparation of various props and rituals in the ghost's territory, and the excitement of fighting against each other with monsters, looking for each other's weaknesses, and each other's moves. It is a pity that the current Taoist novels, including zombie fan fiction, are no different from cultivating immortals after writing. One move of palm thunder, one fireball technique, simple and direct violence, no meaning. It feels no different from using a gun, it is just a matter of pulling the trigger.

I came here after seeing someone recommend it. The writing is really good, and the pacing is also good. It would be more enjoyable if the protagonist's combat power could be improved faster. After all, if you are abused in the early stage, it will easily arouse readers' disgust. Overall, this article is okay, especially the writing must be praised.

Don't be too detailed about handprints, otherwise I will think you are just trying to make up the word count. If you really want to write, you can write a separate chapter dedicated to teaching people about handprints. I just want to say that not many people will read it if it is too detailed.

It's a pity that the author didn't write down the reason why there was a sudden break in the eunuch at the end. I was still very optimistic about this book at that time, and I have kept it in my collection until now. I am reluctant to clear it out today.

It is a high-quality seedling of Xianxia novels. There are not many Xianxia novels available now. The opening scene is very exaggerated. The writing style of this book is much more stable. It basically tells everything that can and cannot be said about Taoism. A lot of Taoist knowledge feels like it is real. Is the update a bit slow?

Write more, love to read, don't collapse, look like a great god

Blessings depend on disasters, and misfortunes depend on blessings. There will be another day to catch up. Come on! I hope the quality and quantity of the book can be preserved. I wish you to take off on the spot and become a god with a book. I still have the monthly ticket, but I can't vote because I don't have enough fan points. The more you subscribe, the faster the fan value will increase, and the more monthly votes you can cast. (Devil Whispers: Want more monthly passes? 😜)

Come on, author, don't be a eunuch. The other new book I read is already a eunuch. You must not be a eunuch, otherwise I feel that I will lose interest in the new book. As long as the author writes it, I will order it.

Write quickly! ! ! ! ! This is enough for anyone to see! ! ! ! ! !

Judging from the writing, this style of writing does not look like that of a newcomer. I suspect it is a new vest created by an old author. The writing style is really good. Although the setting is not too novel, the writing style is good, and the setting is cool. If it is updated continuously, it will become a masterpiece.

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