My Practice Narration Is Weird

I'll go. . . Only then did I see that it was a book I invested in? This book is well written and has great potential. My book list has not been updated for a long time. This book deserves to be on the list Come on, author, I have already invested in it

I feel that the author is very capable, and it doesn't seem like there are only these two books. The setting ideas and characters are well written, but in my personal opinion, the plot is relatively mediocre.

The writing is good, but the update is too slow. Ten chapters a day, one chapter has 100,000 words This is not too much to ask, right?

It's quite interesting. It's an abnormal system. It always encourages pigs to follow cool writing routines, dress up, and become evil. It just doesn't teach good things. Fortunately, the protagonist has a correct outlook on life. I really hope that such interesting novels will continue to have a positive outlook on things. It's nice to have a kinder protagonist... Don't let temporary pleasure sway your own views.

I think the reason for this rhythm is that Luo Qinghan ate too lightly. For a character like Luo Qinghan, if she wants to be accepted by readers, she must be embarrassed. The harder she talks at the beginning, the more fierce the ridicule, and the harder she is slapped in the face by the protagonist in the end, which can bring satisfaction to readers. But so far, I feel that the direct slap or punishment this character received from the protagonist is relatively too light, and the feedback received by readers cannot meet the author's expected effect Personally, my opinion of this character has declined.

Even the universe can be destroyed, what else can't be destroyed? Not to mention just weird! ! ! It is said that what cannot be destroyed is just that the power level and dimension are not enough: Can the law of cause and effect weapon destroy the weird? Can the weirdness be eliminated by erasing it from the long river of time? Can weirdness be eliminated by dismantling, tampering with, and plundering the rules formed by weirdness? ! We cannot eliminate weirdness from the material level and energy level, so we must eliminate weirdness from the rule level and conceptual level, and even eliminate weirdness from its origin. I despise the setting that mysterious recovery cannot eliminate ghosts

By chapter 30 or 40, I was completely persuaded to quit. It was too random, smelly, and long, and the protagonist's temperament changed drastically (￣ェ￣;). This way of writing was too toxic for me and I couldn't persist.

The fusion is weird, but it doesn't fall into the cliche. The foreshadowing is far-reaching, and every plot conflict has a weird impact. The chaotic description without any pretense is weird. Closed loop of time and logic In the early stage, the protagonist fell into the eyes of a certain big shot and was trained for a reason. Don't quit just because the protagonist is inexplicably helped and trained by a certain big shot. The secret will be revealed at the end of the first big map. Form a closed loop of time and logic. The plot is clever and interesting. It is a rare book of fairy grass. Before reading, please understand some of the poisonous points. If you can accept it, it is worth reading. It is a well-conceived fairy tale. 1 The protagonist is a double-standard dog who joins forces with his master to rob the Taoist door that will help but not harm the protagonist. Then they would pretend to be orderly, chivalrous and righteous, and accuse others of taking advantage of others. Only the state officials were allowed to set fires, but the people were not allowed to light lamps. (Others give money, but the victim cannot keep the medicine, and cannot return to the safe zone alive without being robbed) 2 The author carries private goods, but because of what the protagonist does to enjoy cheats, he still has to escape from others on the moral high ground 3 A little poison in the early stage, the immortal will collapse and go crazy because of the old age and death of the people around him. 4 The author wants to talk about big principles in a didactic way. But it failed to get to the point, and it seemed that the protagonist was untenable. Every major plot has a section.

After watching eight hours a day, wouldn't he... Not play games for a while?

The chapters about the Lu family were a bit uncomfortable to read and made me have a bad impression of the protagonist. The sudden pursuit of righteousness is very different from the evil protagonist in the previous article. Whether it was the last speech in the Quiet Realm, it was still in the Lu family. It's not that this kind of heroic feeling is not good, but it is not well created and feels very stiff. The protagonist seems to have suddenly changed his personality and become full of justice. Personally, I feel that the author's shortcomings are also in this aspect. Among the characters who appear, whether it is Lu Qingshan or Bai Lu, they don't feel particularly three-dimensional (not like living people but labeled NPCs). In other words, it is very fragmented. The feeling of being divided per capita. What attracts me most about this book is the various settings and stories. But this is just the skeleton. The contradictory three-dimensional image that human nature grows under this situation is the flesh and blood. Only represents my personal opinion. If what I say is wrong, please feel free to comment.

To be honest, it's well written, and it's not as frustrating as others have said. I feel that I enjoyed reading it. I still recommend reading it yourself. It's very well written.

Suddenly I found a book that automatically subscribed, so I came back and took a look. The writing was a bit immature, there was no hard copy, and I guess there was no outline at the end. It was just about letting yourself go. No wonder it's always been level 1.

This book is okay, but the grades are a bit low now. The number of words is too low to get out of the circle of lv1, but it will probably be difficult for beginners to read. It's a bit contradictory to read. I'm writing about group portraits and having a harem at the same time. I'm talking about general principles at one time and abstraction at the other. It's not like a white text or a divine text. It's a bit awkward to be stuck in the middle. The characters are actually well-established. The reverse and funny elements actually ruin the character. The setting of the protagonist also makes the protagonist unable to stand up. I would say that Master Lu is better at standing up. Master Lu actually handles it very well. There are few clones that can have such a strong setting that does not destroy the character. As for the plot, which is a bit weak, the long and continuous plot is a little better. The subsequent conflicts are quite inexplicable, and the plot also revolves around a strange thing one by one, which feels like an infinite script. There are a bit too many stitches, which is not a joke, but the borrowed parts such as settings are a bit obvious. I can only say that the integration is not good and the price has dropped a bit. Actually, this is a good book for fun, but I still read it with contradictions. I'm not sure about the point of separation. It may be that the fight was bloody and life-threatening, or it may be that the world view seems complex but a bit empty, or it may be that the author's understanding of the small insights mixed in is not deep and unsystematic. But I'm pretty sure I don't really like harems. But the real problem is that this book is probably quite difficult for beginners to read. Actually, it's pretty good. There aren't many good books out there now.

I don't like plots where the main character goes crazy. The feeling of "selflessness" is no different from going crazy.

In the later period, the combat power is a bit sluggish, inexplicable (copying), like bugs, each one is worth 7 or 8, and it is said that there is no solution to the weirdness regardless of the level. There is no lower limit for copying than these, ghost gate, cause and effect, coffin board, eyes are all stronger together, and you can still cash in if you can't win. It is too outrageous to fight against ten outside the top ten. The protagonists, Qinghan and Caiwei, add up to two fives and one six, and a total of 10 or so can't beat a six. Do you think so? At the same time, the side effect is that you lose a life, but this life can be used repeatedly. It is almost the same as Lao Lu's operation. It is a bit inferior to Lao Lu. Someone who is not in the top ten invincible can still be at level 6. It is too wrong that Lao Lu only sent it to level 6. Actually, it doesn't matter. The key is that the protagonist ate so many turtles and finally killed her, but in the end, he gained nothing. It was uncomfortable and aggrieved 😒. It feels like it's too much to forcefully break the logic in order to shape the plot, especially the curse that kills the protagonist and seriously injures him + after using it once to copy it, nothing happened. He will kill anyone he meets. With such strength, he can kill the protagonist directly, so why bother to change it?

I specially sent 2 cents to criticize the author's setting and why it was posted on a male channel but not a female channel. Give me your account and I'll post the female videos

I really didn't expect that it was Luo Yue who succeeded first 🙂

The more I look at Luo Qinghan, the more annoyed I am with this character. It doesn't make sense that there is no limit to not being cut in half.

Why do you always play in a self-inflicted style, sometimes dead and sometimes alive? Anyway, there is no tailwind. You are either getting beaten or on the way to get beaten.

My life is shortened. In fact, the author is weird. I got garbled characters

Saw 16 photos in Volume 2 , after the protagonist kills the prefect, he recognizes Lu Qingshan as his master in public (I don't understand why he has to say it in public, can't he ventilate it first and then kill him? To be honest, the protagonist performs magic in public and then recognizes his master, in fact, he should be recognized, but the author (Jianzhi does not write), and said the words that anyone can be killed (after Lu Qingshan said this, and then the master left on the way, the protagonist was hunted to that city, I was really speechless, who can't talk nonsense?). Then the two high-level scholars left on the way to Fancheng, and were then chased and besieged by the sect. On the day they arrived in the city, they were spied on and cursed, and died without narration (as written in the original text of the author). After discovering that the prefect of this city is a pig demon and is planning to provoke a war between the demon and the sect, he prepares to leave. That's about it. It's so damn wise.

I looked at the results. Why? I recently read several new books. Except for "Who Made Him Cultivation to Immortality", I gave up halfway through (two of them were cut by the author). This is the only one that makes me want to keep reading. I don't want to compare with the Twelve Heavenly Kings, but the quality is very good, but the results just can't go up, and I can't figure it out...

This is the first completed narration book 😅😅😅 Someone wrote it in front and it always got cut.

I kept on keeping on, but I didn't expect that the ending of the last hundred or so chapters was so bad. Deal with it

The writing is quite good. I have a monthly pass, but can I experience the extra finesse😰

I just want to ask, when will this extra episode be released?

Can be refined 😌

The writing is pretty good, and it can be considered a unique track. At least this is the first narration flow I've seen. There are more writing methods like this nowadays.

I feel it's quite good. I've finished reading the whole book. I'm looking forward to the next book. Good luck, author.

I would like to ask, does the author have any other books?