My Junior Sister Is a Sword Fairy

First of all, I think the protagonist is good at dealing with people. He can cook, make money, and remember ancient poems. Bonus points. The plot is also smooth. It's pretty good Then I've read Chapter 38 now. I haven't read the rest yet. I'm here to talk about my feelings so far. One is that the protagonist doesn't keep silent when he gets into arguments with others. This point has been debated endlessly by book friends. Some say Bai Lian Flowers, there are also people who say they are good at handling people White Lotus is definitely not that good, but I really don't know how to deal with people. I offended a person with a bright future, and that person left without asking for anything. Will I be afraid of that person's revenge in the future? According to my thinking, I am a villain, and I am definitely afraid. I will either give gifts to eliminate disasters, or I will ask the killer organization in the world to get to know him. But the conflicted person did nothing but lamented, and the protagonist also did nothing but pretended. The protagonist actually let go of the bully that overwhelmed the protagonist's face. What can he say? The protagonist is very open-minded. But, but, open-minded? I'm really speechless. The protagonist is the one who wants to establish a sect. People are so offended. The protagonist doesn't use their resources? Is this the kind of precious rivers and lakes resources that are waiting to be forcibly bought and sold with money? Or when establishing a sect, destroy others and rob the entire sect? Is it possible that he relied on his own opportunities to gather the resources of all the disciples in the sect? To put it bluntly, I want to write about the magnanimous heroic demeanor, but I have not considered the responsibilities that the leader of a group has to bear. What should I do at this time? The answer is the system. Many book friends don't like system texts, not because system texts are necessarily not good-looking, but because the system will forcibly make up for problems that the author has not considered, which makes people look weird The second one is the skills obtained from the system. I don't know if it's because I can't read them at a glance or something. It seems to me that the protagonist directly uses the skills given by the system for actual combat without testing them himself? I was so smart before and suddenly my IQ dropped? Of course, if I missed it, I accept criticism and insults, so I'm sorry in advance The third one is perfume. If it's a modern perfume, it should contain alcohol. If it's an ancient perfume, it's toilet water distilled by alchemists from flowers and plants. Assuming it's a modern perfume, then alcohol should come before perfume. Why can't the protagonist make distilled wine? I'm not very professional and don't understand. I hope you can correct me. If it is the kind of perfume made by alchemists using flowers and plants, the insight of being born as a prince should not be too surprising before the protagonist explains it in detail, but that reaction. . . That's all my opinion. In fact, there is also a blunt and foreshadowing plot in Daozi, which is a bit uncomfortable but harmless. I stopped reading this book after reading Chapter 38, and there is no book poisoning. If you forcefully ignore this awkward feeling and stop thinking, it is good to read and pass the time. It is food and grass, but it is too far away from good grass. I hope the author will write better in the next book. I will slip away first and give you 3 recommendation votes before I leave. I hope I won't offend you

It's nothing like a fairy bar, but it's a martial arts bar where you make rice, salt, sauce, vinegar and tea every day. After a few days in the world, you quickly build a sect to tie yourself tightly. It's impossible to see what you want to write. If you want to write about a system, just write about it. There will also be some audiences. Those who don't like the system have already given up on the system when it appears. Those who like the system are angry when they see you not bubbling at all. . . I really admire you for being able to offend people on both sides.

The first two chapters were okay, but there were some minor logical problems. Then the lack of conflict in the follow-up led to the content being boring. The sect fight was so outrageous that it made no sense at all. There is also a need for improvement in the writing style, especially the description of fighting. If the description is too little and too simple, it will look very boring. The world view is not particularly good either. There are only a few realms in total. As a result, the protagonist is invincible when he appears. Even if he is invincible, there is still a system, which is meaningless. The junior sister can defeat everything. The worst is to run away if she can't beat him. In fact, it's better to raise the level or bury a foreshadowing of a higher level, such as someone who could cultivate immortality in the past, or simply lower the protagonist's level to around level 7. Don't make it so easy to upgrade, otherwise it won't be interesting. It's best to do something before going down the mountain at the beginning. In fact, the enemy has already targeted him. The master stayed behind to cut off the situation, and his whereabouts are definitely unknown anyway. The protagonist wants revenge. The enemy is directly the royal family of the country. The protagonist tries to escape capture and travels to other countries to join forces to take revenge. On the way, he is wanted across the country and meets some heroes. Anyway, the protagonist must be weak and climb up step by step, otherwise the beginning will be meaningless, and this kind of shaping is not very good for daily writing.

Stop scolding, stop scolding, you will be stupid if you scold the child again😓 If you have any problems, please point it out, the author will correct it But don't complain about the whole book after reading two chapters, at least read more, it's too miserable😵

After reading a lot of chapters, I really feel that it is average and low-level. Hmm, it is very low-level. The first point is that the levels are ambiguous. There is no clear level comparison between the protagonist and the junior sister, and there is no highlight of the gap between levels. You can say that the protagonist is strong. Everyone you meet is not lower than the protagonist, and they are not older than the protagonist. Call him weak, but he can challenge an entire sect alone. And there is almost no depiction of fighting. The second point is that the consciousness is vague. The description of the appearance of the characters and the environment is brief, and it can even be said that there is no more at all. The appearance is stunning, delicate, and handsome, and the environment is either gorgeous or dilapidated. The best one is magnificent. Fighting is just like a card game. I produce a first-grade one, and you produce a second-grade one, oh! I win, I produce a first-grade enchanted sword intent, and you produce a first-grade enchanted sword, oh! Won again. To be honest, I find it awkward 🙄 Third, the positioning is vague. What type of article is this? There are no girls, no adventures, no upgrades, and no pretentious slaps. These are all necessary for a good novel. The pros and cons depend on how you can write it more logically while controlling the plot structure. Daily? There is almost no description of life, and the relevant characters change too frequently. Martial arts group portrait? I feel like the author had this intention but the protagonist was portrayed alone, let alone a group portrait. The fourth is the characterization, which has no characteristics at all. Let's just say the protagonist who has the most characterizations. Let's not talk about the appearance. There is no personality. People have said that you can't let the tiger go back to the mountain. If you want your life, you can still walk away lightly. Admire, admire! The newly recruited junior sister was assassinated. I thought I was going to get a copy of the killer organization, but I didn't even mention it. I didn't look too far ahead to see if there were any arrangements. Also, I have been reading books for so many years. When people accept apprentices, they are just apprentices. This is to accept junior brothers and junior sisters. I don't understand why😣? Alas~, in short, there are still many poisonous points. Logically, even the theme buying points, the relationship between senior brothers and sisters are all very flawed, so I won't list them one by one. I have also written novels, and I know it is not easy to keep them updated every day. But now that I have written it and persisted, I hope the author can write better and better.

Poison, others have the intention to kill you. The villain made a bet and lost and dispersed to cultivate. It's better for you. You have become merciful and exempted the villain from the bet punishment. What kind of protagonist? It's disgusting.

People say that if you let the tiger go back to the mountain, there will be endless troubles. I made it clear that I was going to kill you, and then you didn't say anything and just left after winning?

I feel that the protagonist is quite miserable now. Once he goes to the Western Regions, his friends will become Buddhas in one thought; if he goes to the Five Poisons once, his friends will become saints in one thought; next time he will be a Taoist disciple and become a Taoist in one thought. The master who raised him for many years just wanted to make him a sword cauldron.

I feel bad. After reading so many comments, many of them criticize the author. I don't know why. Is it so bad? In my opinion, there may be some logic problems in the early stage of this book. The character description is not very good, but in the later stage it is okay. However, many people cannot see this and just make blind comments. What qualifications do you have to comment on the quality of a book? Now that I have seen the climax, I have read everything the author has updated. After waiting for seven days, the author will update a chapter. The thousands of words in my mind have no explanation. I only have one request, that I hope it will be updated soon. If others don't like it, it doesn't mean I don't like it. I hope the author can read my comments and comfort me.

The daily guide is full of crap, I'm done with it

The writing style is still good, but there is a reason why it is not popular, and the logic is completely clueless If you just see someone and accept him into the sect, you should accept him as a junior fellow apprentice, a direct disciple! ! ! I have never seen such a weird thing The most important point is that as a cheater, he has never been able to catch up with the wild junior sister. I am convinced.

The protagonist is too holy. Others want to kill you. The protagonist always forgives and lets you go. Is this still a martial arts arena? Even if you don't kill people, you still have to spend money to buy your life. In the end, the protagonist is a holy mother bitch.

It's so frustrating to watch! The male protagonist doesn't look like the male protagonist, and the female protagonist doesn't look like the female protagonist. It's really confusing to watch.

The idea is very good, but it's a pity that the author seems to be unsophisticated: the leader of the Diancang sect praised the golden body of Buddhism in front of Daozi just to set off the golden body of the protagonist? Do you have any objection, Daozi? ! I was told that I would only accept a disciple if I had the sense of spirit, but in the end, if I didn't have the sense of spirit, I would directly accept him as my disciple. Then in the future, the protagonist will take the lead in all the battles? There is no rule without rules There are many more, and the details are unreasonable, so I can't read them.

Didn't last until chapter 3. . . . Poisonous hair, this author's comment is very nice. Tell me what will be improved. Could it be that the 3 chapters I read have been improved?

You two are great!

......... To be honest, I can't watch it and it doesn't look good. The author wants to be a literary person but cannot afford to be a literary person. He wants to love himself without even trying to talk about it. He wants to show the martial arts friendship but doesn't know how to write a vulgar story. In a word, if you want to be a licking dog, you can't do it. If you lick it forcefully, it will make you feel disgusting.

Chapter 6: The old man wanted to kill the protagonist, but the protagonist just asked his junior sister to stop him and then left. Brother, they are going to kill you. You act like nothing has happened. Just read the comments here and see how many people are still interested in reading.

When I read Chapter 7, I couldn't bear it anymore. Don't tell me about worldly things, others will kill you. I can't stand it anyway

Isn't this pretty? Why is the comment section so violent? Has the up owner provoked someone powerful?

I really like this book. I was really disappointed after reading it. I hope the author can continue to write the story of Ye Wuyou and Lu Caiwei, really.

I finished reading it in February 23. In recent years, there are very few novels that I can read from the beginning to the end.

After reading it, there is no poison or knife. The author was scolded quite unfairly.

You blindly recruit disciples. You say you can just accept them yourself, but you actually recruit disciples on behalf of your master and become junior brothers and junior sisters. The key is talent, isn't that enough? Why are direct disciples so worthless? Do you still want to rebuild the mountain gate?

I feel that there is only one beggar. You are just a beggar. If other beggars don't save me, I feel that male beggars don't save female beggars. This is a common problem in novels or the male protagonist is a beggar.

Is the protagonist a bitter melon? He keeps smiling bitterly

Yue is so frustrated. From the beginning, what kind of luck-sucking bull demon did Master B tie up? I have to find a way to remove it for the two of them. It poisoned me to death.

The book written by the author is very good, but the updates are a bit slow.

It is September 19, 2021. Is the author still insisting on writing?

Just write about *Lake? Don't fight or kill, always handle with care!