My Life Simulator Suggested I Restart

This world view setting, ability setting, and several dungeons are really good, but the biggest poisonous point is the zero-growth protagonist. Please replace the squad leader with the protagonist. This is the first time I have seen a protagonist who is still as stupid as ever after entering the dungeon with high intensity and experiencing a big event. It was not that poisonous before. Yun Zhongjun's original version was also okay. The snake is really starting to completely venom. Let's not talk about how a Ba Snake can have a back-and-forth fight with Prince Dong. Let's just say that this simulation suddenly opened up a parallel universe. This setting is very abrupt. There is no foreshadowing. If you can't control the writing, don't open too many things. Then the emotional line has always been a poisonous point. It has a strong second taste. There are only two characters in the book. One squad leader is a slightly more fleshed-out character, and the others are all label-based creations. Even the squad leader can completely replace the protagonist. I think some people say that the protagonist looks like 486. Maybe the author also wants to write in this direction. But the growth of 486 is visible to the naked eye. The more you write the protagonist, the more vicious you are. I sincerely suggest that you rewrite it and be the squad leader. This protagonist, so far, the entire plot feels so fragmented and inconsistent. I feel that someone has changed the writing recently. It's the first time I read a book and I was addicted to write so much content. I really feel like it was a waste of my points, time, and monthly tickets. To summarize the book on the day of posting, I recommend going to the female channel to write. The big female protagonist + stupid male protagonist are so typical.

The writing is very good, especially the emotional line with Su Wanqing. It is so touching to fall in love and kill each other and finally come together 😭

The toxicity is too strong. Apart from other aspects, I just can't stand the character of the protagonist. In just 20 chapters, I saw: the giant baby time traveler who is 18+18 years old but has almost no ability to think; the super non-stick pan that I hate you is your fault and it is your fault that you hate me; are you interested in me by being so close to me? It's all because you're so beautiful that I couldn't help but kiss you. He's a scary, dazzling and depressive man who's still thinking with his small head even though there's a zombie crisis. To be honest, you are so cute that you kiss one parent abruptly and blame her, then go back and make love to the other one, and then it turns black and you are so mad that you hate her so much, I really want to put it on a little

I really don't want to say it so harshly, but the portrayal of this protagonist is a bit... Disgusting. Even if it is about a loser, at least he has a decent character. The dialogue is like a child playing house when he is graduating from high school. What is this guy doing who kills zombies and kisses others without warning? I really want to excuse him so that I can continue watching, but no matter how I look at him, he is sullen, timid and lustful, and he is a kind of sperm, and it is difficult to be honest and honest.

I'm dead from poison. There are still more than 20 chapters left, and I really can't read any more. I suspect that the author has no outline at all. The first few copies are OK and can be regarded as food, but they are meaningless without mentioning the main line. They are better than nothing. The author seems to want to do something different from others. Instead of reflecting the main line after the end of one copy, he has more subtitles. This copy then forms the main line, but unfortunately the author's writing skills are not enough, and then this copy is not clear, and the next copy comes one after another. In addition, the time of the main line is unclear. The whole process is that the copy is advancing at a high speed, and the main line is grinding. It is like a sea king with insufficient time management ability forcing his feet on N boats. The capsizing is inevitable.

I don't understand why the squad leader must be killed in the simulation. Isn't this a simulation? Why is the protagonist himself getting more and more angry as he plays in the simulation? The contents of Chapter 50 and Chapter 40 are in simulation. The squad leader is not a superpower. Even if he kills the protagonist, he will not become a superpower. It is better to just stay in the zombie school and learn how to become a superpower. The protagonist doesn't want to become a superpower, but thinks about the monitor's secret every day. Shouldn't you clear your copy first? Why did you kill the squad leader first at the start? Just because of your yandere label. At the beginning, it was said that the protagonist is a time traveler and he is disappointed that he is not a person with supernatural powers. He also read an undocumented hero comic book. Later, he said that the protagonist is not jealous of people with powers at all. You may not think so! This simulated protagonist can be simulated twice a day at home, and when he comes out after 10 years, he will be invincible. . . . . No matter how much simulation is written, reality does not promote it at all. This really creates a strong sense of fragmentation. It's all illusory. Nowadays, all simulation novels are mainly simulation and supplemented by reality. I haven't even left the house yet. I've already simulated it hundreds of times at home.

Based on my experience of being a book reader for more than ten years and reading through the author's two previous books, I swear that if the author can't hold back in the middle and later stages, and then comes up with some illusory big concepts of heaven, time, emperors, etc., This book will be a hit 👆🤓

The essence of the monitor is a little girl who needs affirmation and praise. As long as her needs are met, she can win over her. At worst, she can just coax her and say that in the future she sees, the monitor will also awaken into a powerful person with super powers, shining brightly and attracting everyone's attention. The jealousy now is not important at all. The monitor just needs to stabilize her mentality. I hope the author will be clear-headed. Everyone is here to read the story about the male protagonist's successful comeback and the three thousand beauties in his harem, rather than the whole story of killing the girl to prove it.

If you want to give the protagonist a cold and sultry label, you have to at least write it smartly. If you write it stupidly, you can still be in love anytime and anywhere.

Can the monitor clear his name? Just because she has a history of not being recognized? But this is not a reason to kill. It would be too funny if the protagonists took pity on the squad leader and then liked each other.

Isn't the protagonist a pure waste? Without the golden finger, I acted like a human being. I thought I was awake and saw everything. But when I had the golden finger, I was so horny that I lost my mind.

All information depends on death. If you are dead, you like to scream. After you scream, you will be careless and then die. It's a closed loop.

In the book review area, I saw many people saying that the author was always being encouraged to change his writing style. I thought it was nothing at first. He is such a big man, and he should know what to write in his mind. After reading these recent chapters, I really want to vent. The previous writing, especially the part where Xiao Su and Xiao Su sacrificed each other and suffered from each other was really well written. This time, the style of the simulated writing is not consistent, you know? This is what I wrote in the book review section recently. You wrote about dogs in the current world, and I won't find fault with you. You simulated the world. Why are you just messing around like this? It's normal to obtain information normally. If you deserve to die, why should you feel the pressure? In the last simulated world, it was okay to sacrifice each other. Is this because you are not willing to die for your sister? He also worshiped a bald donkey as his teacher, and then introduced some background of the world, ah, what skills did he learn? What's the use? Something that will be eliminated sooner or later. If you try to improve your combat power in this aspect, you will not only appear to be stingy, but you will also appear to be underwhelming in combat power and appear to be unlucky. Don't say that the suicide was stopped at that time. In this world of high martial arts, you can always die if you want. Don't say that the self-destruction was stopped. That's it. Then you just let blood. Can you let yourself die? The more you write, the more it becomes like a romance. Do you know? You betrayed your readers, you know that? Just like what I said to you above, don't take pressure and write your own story. Book lovers will read what they should read and leave if they don't. I have been raising it for more than two months. I originally planned to finish it all in one go. But now, you bring me a basin of shit. How do you want me to read it?

As a Shennong, I was attracted by Daily Poison Testing. After reading dozens of chapters, I found a lot of poison, and I almost died from the poison. I just gritted my teeth and kept reading because I thought the story was still interesting. Unexpectedly, it got better and better, and I watched 3 AM in one breath... It has been a long time since I was fascinated by a book. The twisted emotions of the male and female protagonists falling in love and killing each other are also my favorite. 😏 I estimate that the author should have hesitated to determine the protagonist's character and the direction of the plot after hundreds of chapters, so the gap between before and after is really big. It is recommended that you consider taking the time to re-optimize the plot in the first half, mainly the free part. Otherwise, even if some readers are attracted, not many will be able to endure the early poison and continue reading.

Rt, let me briefly talk about my thoughts First, as a simulation novel, this one is different from 99% of the simulation novels on the market. 99% Of the simulation novels on the market are text simulations. Just like playing a game, just choose the option. The protagonist is like a natural-born killer and can kill for the first time without changing his face. But when the protagonist in this book simulates it, he fights it himself, just like the infinite flow of copies. There is pain, there is wit fighting, and there is touch and feeling when killing. It will be disgusting to see the exposed esophagus and trachea in the cross section of the beheaded. The psychological description is very real and delicate. The death of the protagonist is extremely painful (being eaten alive). Overall, it is very real. It is a breath of fresh air at the starting point of the current homogenization of novels. I am looking forward to this book But there are some problems. The first is the setting of the protagonist. In his previous life, he was 18 years old, that is, a high school student. In this life, he is 14 years old. To put it bluntly, the protagonist is a pure child. This setting varies from person to person. It may not be very likable, and the protagonist's personality is also not likable To sum up, I personally think this book is a good book. It has written new ideas in the highly homogenized online articles, and the writing is very real and delicate. The descriptions of the first murder and being killed are quite good, but this book needs to be patiently read carefully. It is not suitable to read this book in a hurry I personally think that my evaluation is very objective

Basically, all simulator articles can only be viewed for free. Because this kind of book has a very huge problem, that is, it has written millions of words without pushing out the main plot. Only digging holes but not filling them, this book is particularly serious. Do you know why re0 keeps producing animations? It's because the novel or comic is lukewarm. That's why we need to keep producing animations to maintain popularity. The game of life doesn't need to be particularly rough, because the sales of other books have always been very good. You can only watch movies and novels for this kind of works. The more you watch them, the higher your blood pressure will be.

I don't understand how the protagonist can easily trust outsiders when he is so cautious about protecting his own family? The plot has become very strange since she gained superpowers. The four-year contract dragged on too long, right? The heroine actually gave birth to a child? Brother, you are simulating the birth of a child, and the sister movie is even more so. The sun is about to fall! You are going to kill your whole family! Why are you so unhurried and hastened to confess the situation to your sister! Simulation What are you afraid of?

In the past, I gave up after reading more than a hundred chapters. Now that I am re-reading, I can only say that it is only recommended for free reading. 1. The male protagonist has purely grown up. After experiencing so many events, his character is still the same as at the beginning, or even worse. 2. I felt something was wrong when I saw the inner demon following the simulation earlier. In the later stage, I was directly taken over by the inner demon. The inner demon also got involved with the heroine. If you like NTR, you can watch it. 3. It is suspected that the author has finished the AI ​​writing and refined it. The two descriptions of the same chapter are completely different. The first time is the previous abcd, and then it suddenly becomes an epic legend. There are a lot of detailed descriptions and it feels wrong. 4. The protagonist behaves in a confusing manner, serving purely to promote the plot. It is very blunt. He will directly die to save people who don't want to do it, without considering the feelings of the people around him.

I was speechless when my sister simulated this time. Damn it, 18 years in the past, the old man was scared to tears by the ghost story, and crawled into the arms of his older sister for protection. Is this what adult souls do? There must be at least a reasonable level before it is sensational. The story about the bond between brother and sister that you wrote will leave people speechless.

The protagonist has a problematic outlook on life and is stupid. Hopeless

This is the first time I've seen this kind of weird writing that uses childishness as a treasure, innocence as a feature, and vacillation as a pleasure. Of course, this may be considered food for those who have no meal replacement.

If you still feel that you are unjust, I will make it clear. If you change from squad leader to Zhao Hai, then you will know that it is cool.

Please wait and read this book later. I read it and it was a pity. Like chicken bones. The food tastes delicious, but damn, there isn't much meat. Feeling. The loopholes are huge. If you go back to those loopholes, you can still open them normally. If you can't ignore them, you'll feel awkward.

Falling in love and killing each other, twisted and sweet, sweet and twisted is the best The article has too many starting points and the heroine is very flat The author is special

If you read this as an anime, imagine it, it is very delicious. Although the taste is a bit like mustard and nepeta, it is very suitable for me. I am a ghost-brained and two-dimensional reader who has no brain at all. You say this is poisonous and that is poisonous, but I enjoyed watching it. If you imagine it as an anime, the male protagonist must be perfect? Male protagonists with flaws look delicious

The story written by the author is okay, but the character of the protagonist is too contradictory. He is sometimes a good guy, sometimes a virgin, and sometimes a normal person (the inner demon can barely be considered a normal person). During the simulation and reality, they are divided into two people. In reality, he is very anxious, and the whole family is going to be lost. In the simulation, he is not anxious and compassionate at all, and he still cares about whether he will hurt the good people on the other side during the war. Should you protect them? Is it still a question whether you can beat him or not? When I first simulated it, I said I would live well and find a way to save my family. After entering, I would look for death everywhere. If the author hadn't given me some advice, normal logic would have died so many times. It felt like the author had designed the outline before. However, when I was writing it, I felt that the protagonist was not fair enough, so I forcibly changed the outline. Now the whole thing is nondescript.

I have written dozens of pieces recently, which allowed me to see my previous level. Come on, write well, but there are too few updates.

The latest chapter is absolutely amazing😥

Scan the code and sit down for the next simulation. If you feel so disgusted again, get out of here.

It's so disgusting. Those poisonous spots in front are nothing. Later in the writing, I deliberately made the protagonist stupid, and then found an NPC to "scold" the protagonist to wake him up. After a few chapters, the protagonist had the same problem and became stupid again. It's purely intentional to make people disgusting. Every actor who passes by has to tell his life story😅. It's not good enough.