Secret Dice

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Articles about hiding one's strength are no longer popular these days. They are all cliche. No one will question how much ability one can show! Whether it is the strongest brain or others, does anyone question the performance of those non-human beings? Are all geniuses suppressed? ? ? ?

This is a long-lost trivia post. I mainly write about small details that are not mentioned in the main text and have little impact on the plot. I will update them as I think of them. Please don't interfere.

Author, think about it for yourself, every time the protagonist has to have blood to pass, and the teammates have not shown any effect. In the chaos mission without the protagonist's participation, these people must die in batches? After all, these people are of a very high level and have a lot of experience. Compared with the protagonist, they feel like they have just entered the novice village.

Why don't you just delete the love line? It's written like a retard

Is there Shen Nong? In the end, the Tomb King and Ling Xin won't get together, right? Let the summoned creature with feelings go to his face to fall in love with the heroine. Isn't this ntr? The one who gets along with the heroine to increase progress is basically the Tomb King, and the hero even encourages him to chase her? Could Xue Lingxin be the heroine? In this way, does the heroine like the protagonist or the Tomb King?

The first three chapters made me feel that the logic is confusing. The protagonist is a pure loser with a low IQ and a bit of a dog. Can't we have a normal start? Do we have to create the image of a mentally retarded loser to attract readers?

Hey, actually I have always been curious about whether the moral quality of all high school classmates is as low as in the novel? Or is it just because I'm just lucky? (Every time I see the protagonist's high school classmates in novels with all kinds of low qualities and moral scum, it's strange. In reality, they dare to mock other orphans in all kinds of ways, and it's all together? At least I haven't seen this kind of thing around me since I was a child.)

Shennong came, Shennong died, was this written by a primary school student? Chapter 3: The poison is gone and I say goodbye.

Don't you know the taboos of writing a book now? Have you been hiding your identity?

I have been a bookworm for more than ten years and I can't stand it. It's a boring setting and a boring plot. Rather than saying that the protagonist has cheats, it's better to say that the cheats can help you depending on your mood and give you a lot of restrictions.

Let me tell you, after reading this first chapter, I will stop reading. You said that you have to do it whether you succeed or fail in the dice roll, and doing it determines the result, so what is the use of dice? If you delete the dice, it will not affect reading this book.

I have endured the turtle soup, I have endured the dungeon puzzle solving, and I have endured the delay in reaching the Peiyuan realm. I never thought that going to the martial arts world would not be a heroic act, but a waste of many chapters to do autopsy there? ? ? And there are all kinds of embarrassing hidden identities. I really don't know the meaning of the protagonist hiding his identity.

Do you think the comments are a bitch? He summons his own objects to have sex with the heroine, and the heroine is still happy?

Can you write more about dice. . . Isn't this the characteristic of Ankewen? It went so well. Being stabbed in the back by the dice girl is the real flavor of this article!

The biggest shortcoming of this book is that the protagonist is too important. Why do you say that? Because in the dungeon world, I feel that every world and every mission that appears cannot be completed without the protagonist. However, before the protagonist participates in the mission, those people have successfully completed the mission and are also the best. Why can't the protagonist complete the mission after participating in it? Only the protagonist can complete it, they have no role at all. Maybe the only function is to witness how awesome the protagonist is, shout 666 to the protagonist, the protagonist is responsible for random killings, and they are responsible for the quack. Also, the author is not a full-time author, so the updates will be a bit slow, one piece a day, but it should not be eunuch. If it is unfinished, it may not be finished. Regarding the creation of female characters, I feel that the author only wrote about a single female protagonist, but he deliberately described the protagonist as having zero emotional intelligence. There were various misunderstandings. Anyway, he just didn't think that the female protagonist liked him, and then the female protagonist was also a tsundere and she liked him silently. Help He has more than 500 pictures, but he has not had close contact yet, and he cannot show off his strength in the real world. He has been hiding his clumsiness, pretending to be a smart person with brains in front of others, but a person without fighting ability. He uses another identity when downloading a copy, and then There were some supporting actresses who saved her because of another identity, and everyone clearly had feelings for him, but in the end they still had no contact with the true identity of the protagonist, and there was no advancement. They just wrote about it, but did not describe it later. I don't know what the purpose of writing these supporting actresses was? It feels like a single female protagonist has to write these supporting female characters again, which feels a bit unclear. That's all the shortcomings I feel right now.

Not to mention pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, the author has already tagged it and there is no need to criticize it. But pressing the realm is a poisonous point for me. I wrote more than 100 chapters from the seventh to eighth levels of Guben, and there must be 8-9 after that, then Peiyuan's 7-8-9 and then Ningxin. . . Then from the appearance of the heroine to the seventh floor of the foundation, she did not help the male protagonist, and did not enhance the relationship between the male and female protagonists. The only thing she could do was to promote the plot. The female protagonist was tainted and then said that Lao Deng had a way to solve it, which was a foreshadowing for the future. Then why not design it as a protagonist brother? Currently, this female subject seems average to me.

Change the dice to something else! It's too inconsistent. If the author wants to succeed, he will succeed, but if he doesn't want to, he will succeed. Apart from the word count, I actually like reading this kind of book, but this system is quite failed. If the protagonist is a good person, it is better to give him a lucky value. For example, the lucky value in the past 19 years has accumulated 10,000 points. If he encounters such a thing, he needs to consume how many points. It is directly clear at a glance. Use them to create plots and continue to accumulate, or give several copies to continue accumulating! Let's do this. There were a total of five opportunities, and four failed. Adding in the mental activities, who of you can just draw dozens of pictures to play with, what's the point?

The review is that it is recommended not to watch it, there are too many poisonous points: Holy Mother, the brain circuit is abnormal, the character is not clear, and the realm is suppressed

When will that Ling Xin die? Doesn't this author think that writing such female characters in this era will attract fans? Disgusting or not?

I can't complain about this, this is the real Holy Mother. To be honest, I thought it was 2014. After all, it is very rare now for the protagonist to rush forward to save a stranger despite knowing that the power gap is too big. Unlike the Virgin bitch in the apocalyptic novel, this is the real Holy Mother, but I can only say that it is not suitable for the current starting point. The current mainstream is that the protagonist must be neither righteous nor evil, and murder training will definitely not work, but this kind of rescue with little hope... I can only say that the protagonist has died long ago.

I hope everyone will comment more, collect more, and give more opinions!

I wrote more than 10 chapters last month, and only two chapters this month. If you continue like this, you won't be able to write it well, and we won't be able to read it well.

Brothers, I remember before the Spring Festival, didn't it say it would be finished soon? What's the situation now? Is it going to end?😰

Author, please update soon.

If the update is not timely, I will give you 7 monthly tickets to refresh yourself.

What's the matter? No updates during the May Day holiday 😰

Now that you've become feathers, why don't you stop engaging in dog fights? Why are the noodles getting less and less?

You write so well, why don't you update it? ! !

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