My Cultivation Plot Has Gone Off Track

It's difficult to evaluate the various behaviors of the protagonist. The Su family has never harmed the protagonist, and there is obviously a better way to complete the task. However, the Su family was harmed to the point of ruining the whole family. The protagonist in this fast-traveling novel is definitely a villain who was liquidated by the fast-traveling mission.

The ideas are clear and nonsensical, as if they were written by a drunk alien.

Look at the picture I posted The fourth picture was written. The protagonist knew from the beginning that he had traveled through time and was not playing a game Please Don't say this in this chapter, [note that the protagonist still thinks he is playing a game]

It's strange, the cause of all the downfall of the Su family is caused by the male protagonist. If you stand by and watch, I can understand the character design. I can also accept the evil male protagonist. After all, he has done so many immoral things before, but he deliberately caused the trouble. Now he comes out to be a hero, kidnapping the eldest lady, causing negative publicity, and then blowing up the enshrined person to you, and trapping the person in the wind abyss (life and death unknown), leading to The Su family is about to be attacked. The Su family didn't provoke you at the beginning. So far, I think it's okay. It's not like I haven't seen the villain protagonist before, but now he appears as a hero, and there is no system reward. I can only understand it as doing whatever he wants, which gives me a sanctimonious feeling. But now he has been doing things according to the system tasks, and there is no sense of arbitrary character. In summary, the character is not established well, and his behavior is conflicting.

After reading a few chapters, it was really uncomfortable to read, "Why do you use the mentality of playing games and using the people inside as NPCs" as a shield? To put it bluntly, he is bad, stupid, and self-righteous, and keeps doing evil things. He is purely a villain who kills without blinking an eye. If you are evil to the end, you can be evil so generously that there is nothing to say, and you can be evil happily, and you have to do a system task, as if you have no choice, and you are both responsible and independent. Isn't this just disgusting? If you want to be evil, just be direct. In the world of immortality, the law of the jungle is the law of the jungle. If I do something evil, what do you do to me? If you can, kill me. That's fine. You have to do something disgusting.

In the early days, the writing style was okay, nonsensical, but now it's getting more and more disgusting, it's really disgusting, it's shit and piss.

How should I put it? The protagonist is mentally ill and can be illogical, but the supporting characters are not. I feel that the logic of your supporting characters is also a mystery. I feel like they are a bunch of zzs.

A slave to the system, nothing interesting to watch

What can I say about this book? In the first few chapters, the protagonist looks like a normal person, passing tasks through novel methods, but later on, the protagonist feels like a psychotic Long Aotian.

is some of the best in this batch of potential new books