Reborn, I Refuse the Yandere Rich Girl

It feels like all the male characters in the author's works have Lu Mingfei hidden in their eyes 👻

All eyes, look at me! I have an announcement: the author is a woman, and she posts photos of herself in black stockings in the fan group every day. White stockings, flesh-colored stockings, fishnet stockings—she changes them all!

If a male protagonist like this can be reborn, then pigs can fly! He's not going to end up saying, "I want to give every girl a home," is he? He's another big-time playboy like Chen Hansheng. Author, please remember you're writing a modern-day rebirth story, not an ancient one where polygamy isn't practiced.

Personally, I hope the second female lead isn't the kind with stunning looks but also extreme poverty and low self-esteem. I've seen too many of those, and they're utterly unappealing. I feel the best female lead in urban romance novels is Mi Cai!

First of all, a harem novel shouldn't have a character like An Nuannuan. The author probably copied the popular character from Feng Daidai's novel, but have you considered that the original harem novel was changed to a single-female lead story because of Feng Daidai? Why? Because that kind of character is too perfect: beautiful, great figure, good family background, and devoted to the male lead.

Okay, okay, it's clear the author put a lot of effort into it; it's really well written. Although I don't know how it ends, a story of mutual redemption is what makes it so captivating, isn't it? Urban novels shouldn't be too formulaic. It's very well written, and I don't want to comment too much.

The characters are more three-dimensional, the exciting moments are more well-placed, the plot is richer, and the progression is more natural. It's quite touching to see the author's skill improve between the two books. Furthermore, the "flaws" of the previous book have been improved, although the previous book didn't really have any flaws.

After dating his girlfriend for so many years, and even getting married, is it really that easy to let go? And the fact that he developed different feelings for Nuannuan so soon after his rebirth makes the male lead seem a bit of a jerk, and it feels like a seamless transition (this is just my personal opinion, please don't criticize).

One template supports dozens of rebirth novels. Yao Mingyue's character is reasonably well-developed, a bit of a yandere. An Nuannuan, don't treat your readers like idiots. Being dull doesn't mean being stupid or easily fooled. It's obvious this character is trying to imitate Shen Youchu. But like Feng Nanshu, the female lead in another rebirth novel, Shen seems dull because of her inferiority complex. Other characters aren't written as stupid like in those two books.

It was well-written, but I'm tired of reading it now; it's too sentimental.