Reborn, I Refuse the Yandere Rich Girl

It feels like Lu Mingfei is hidden in the eyes of the men in the author's works👻

Everyone looked at me, and I announced something. The author is a woman, and she posts black silk photos in the fan group every day. White silk, pork shreds, and fishing nets take turns to change

Such a male protagonist can be reborn and a sow can climb a tree. He will not say in the end that I want to give every girl a home. He is another big king after Chen Hansheng. Author, please remember that you are writing about rebirth in modern society, not about polygamy in ancient times.

Personally, I hope that the second heroine is not the one with good looks, extremely poor family and low self-esteem. I have seen too much of that and feel that she has no charm. I personally feel that the best heroine in urban novels is Mi Cai!

First of all, if you want to write a harem, you shouldn't have a character like An Nuannuan. The author probably looked at Feng Daidai's book and wanted to copy the popular character, but have you ever thought that the book that was originally going to be about the harem ended up being changed to a single female protagonist because of Feng Daidai. Why? Because this kind of character is so perfect, beautiful, with a good figure, good family conditions, and devoted to the male protagonist. If you put this kind of character in a harem, other female protagonists will be unable to resist. Readers who like her will think that the male protagonist is guilty of having a harem. Readers who want to see a harem will think that your harem is written like a single female protagonist. This brings another problem. An's character is too thin, and the interaction between the two is too bland. The article is not pleasant at first glance, but it will become boring after reading it. Anyway, no matter what happens, An Nuannuan wins in the end. But because she is too strong, the progress of other female protagonists cannot be pushed forward I don't know if the author is also aware of this problem and has a deus ex machina to add memories from before time travel to her. Let's put aside for the moment the unreasonable and outrageous aspects of this forced and unreasonable supplementary setting. Let's just say that this memory before time travel actually completely ruined the character of An Nuannuan. Why? Because this makes the stupidity that the author has been writing about in the early stage become a joke. They are not stupid, but Bai Lianhua is just pretending. The best hunters often appear disguised as prey. As for other little poisonous points, such as the plots of ancient urban novels such as inviting a rich girl to a meal of common people's delicacies and the rich girl is completely devoted to him, making Bai Fumei fall in love with me with a piece of cake, and other plots to reduce intelligence, they are all tolerable But An Nuannuan's character is the biggest flaw of this book.

Okay, okay, it can be seen that the author has put his heart into it, and the writing is really good. Although I don't know how it will end, the story of mutual redemption is very interesting, isn't it? The urban novel King's Way is probably not very good. It's very well written, so I don't want to comment in detail. I think it's a good thing to write about love and hate in novels like the emotional harem. Because it's too smooth, it won't have such a heavy impression. It's just right, tangled and complicated, but I also like this kind of human struggle. The pain of human nature is the main body of urban writing. Business writing is business writing, and harem writing is harem writing. Many people who write about cities are urban harem writings. The city is in the front and the harem is in the back. There are too few female characters. This is also the reason why harem writing was not good some time ago. If the writing has no characteristics, isn't it just pure love? Then why should I read your book? Wouldn't it be better to go to the moderator? I feel that the character design in the front is not very good, but if the character design is good, it will not be reversed. It is quite tangled. It would be better if the writing force in the front is not so heavy. It feels a bit like a fairy (not a fairy yet👍). Keep working hard. It is possible that some readers will find it good. This review is only to express my own opinion. If you think the book is good or not, I think you can click in and take a look. First of all, it is indeed not bad. It has logic, wisdom and no pressure. The difference is whether the setting of the heroine is acceptable. Good night, friends.

The characters are more three-dimensional and exciting, the plot is fuller, and the progression is more natural. It's also quite touching to be able to witness the improvement of the author's skills in the two books before and after. Moreover, the "toxic points" in the previous book have also been improved. Of course, there were no poisonous points in the previous book. I just feel that the author has thought and summarized the lessons learned from the previous book. For example, the controversy surrounding Xiaomi's "abandonment of her husband" in her previous life, this book makes it clear from the beginning that the feelings of the yandere heroine are unquestionable. For example, in the previous book, Xiaomi's mother is more beautiful and charming than Xiaomi, she is always 18 years old, and her husband and wife are in love. As a cool novel, you don't even know who the protagonist is. In this book, the father-in-law is simply arranged to leave readers and friends prematurely.

Is it so easy to let go of my girlfriend who I've been dating for so many years and is already married? And just a few days after rebirth, I have a different feeling towards Nuan Nuan. It seems that the male protagonist is a bit scumbag, and it feels like a seamless connection (personal feeling, don't criticize if you don't like it)

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One template supports dozens of reborn books. The character Yao Mingyue is portrayed as a reasonably yandere character. With the character An Nuannuan, please don't treat readers like Sabi. Being stupid is not a retard and easy to deceive. It is obvious that this character wants to imitate Shen Youchu. But it's the same as the heroine Feng Nanshu in another book called "Rebirth: Who's in Love?" Shen stared blankly because of his inferiority complex. ​Aren't these two books written by others as mentally retarded?