From Prisoner to Si Chen

Is it considered grass jelly? This is a book that even the author thinks has not been written well. If you only read the last 150 chapters, this book can be considered a masterpiece. If you work harder in the later period, you should be able to achieve it, right?                                                                                  In fact, what really persuaded everyone to quit is that the protagonist group of Novice Village was almost wiped out. It was really a bit poisonous, causing everyone to abandon the book, and the heroine has been hiding as a sleeping beauty. She only appeared in a dozen chapters, and two rich women appeared in the back. Her role in the movie has almost surpassed that of the heroine. Who is the heroine? The one where the author marked the heroine in the character column. Later, the big cat with residual health was killed. The author should write more interactions. The setting is not too novel, I can only say that each setting is well-reasoned and can barely justify itself. Now the male protagonist Golden Finger Banlan can actually have abilities similar to the original quality, adding points, integrating skills, only one of the functions, and modifying the timeline. Recently, it seems to have really appeared in the past history, although there is a big hand of the director. Now you know what Runyue Sichen is, right? As for whether there will be any poison in the back? It varies from person to person. The author should be honest.

The front looks a little familiar. When I see Yue Zhuo and Bremen, I go. It's really a world of fear and hunger. This is great too! The writing is very good, the plot is compact, the behavioral logic is also good, and everything is fun and online. Looking forward to putting it on the shelves, support genuine products

After reading Volume 2, what I want to say is that it is very well written, better than most Western fantasy books. Come on, author.

Chapter 307 contains a lot of information. Through passerby A's narration, I seem to have captured a bit of the author's thoughts. Director February Sichen, he is the reflection of the eighth art film art. The protagonist's player path is a representative of the game we call the Ninth Art. Of course, the game here is not the play behavior commonly known as games that has been common in living things since ancient times, but a type of play created by technological progress that has a self-consistent world view, rules, settings, characters, stories and other elements to build a stage for players to star in. In other words, Si Sui's world is a collection of main concepts, while Si Chen is a collection of a series of branch concepts. The birth of new Sichen is destined to involve the birth of new concepts. This process is important and difficult, because it is difficult to imagine the birth of a new concept, just as it is difficult for us to imagine what the tenth art or the eleventh art will be, which will expand the boundaries of human thinking in this world. According to this basic statement, Si Chen, who was born in the past hundred years, is all like this. Crane King is a further evolution of resistance and change, that is, a revolution with a theoretical basis. The torrent simply symbolizes the endless industry. But obviously these concepts are included in movement and change. Similarly, the White Dove Tower is a poem, the director is a movie, painting, dance, etc. These sub-concepts can all be included in a symbol of Si Sui, and this is the Miss Tears mentioned in the latest chapter. The director told the protagonist to be careful about art. It is true that Si Sui such as Baige Tower can be classified as art, but he seems to have left out the Si Sui of Miss Antei. As we mentioned before, the introduction of new concepts symbolizes the expansion of human thinking, and this is extremely difficult. But outsiders from this world can easily use similar knowledge from other worlds to create new concepts, and use this as a basis to seize Si Chen's authority. But Sichen's position is limited, and such cheating behavior is not recognized by the world, so they are considered pests by the world! But if you think about it carefully, the four great ministers are the world itself. Are they really unable to stop all this? Just imagine, the increase in concepts symbolizes the increase in diversity, which is naturally equivalent to the enhancement of the world's heritage. And how can we promote the increase of new concepts faster? I have a guess: all this is planned. The world allows outsiders to enter, prompting the generation of new concepts, thereby allowing itself to grow rapidly. At this time, someone has to ask: Will the world itself not suffer? After all, Si Chen has real authority. If all of them are controlled by outsiders, wouldn't it mean that the host and the guest will change positions in the end? I think this is the point. The director asked the protagonist to be careful about art, which is probably because he asked the protagonist to be careful about Miss Si Sui's Tears, who symbolizes art, that is, the world itself. The world is likely to take the initiative to clean up Si Chen's position, which is why, as a collection of concepts, Si Chen should have existed forever, but until the past few hundred years, there were still free positions for new Si Chen to climb. This is why the director helps the protagonist overtly and covertly. He wants to quickly bring in a new helper to counter the possible liquidation.

Although the protagonist's condition for escaping reincarnation is to obtain love, the author's emotional writing is really messy, which creates a very bad reading experience for the later plot. And it turned out that it didn't meet my expectations. The protagonist's ability is that of a player, and it turned out to be the second game. The killing and killing in the early stage is quite fun, the logic is also very smooth, the emotional aspect is a bit abrupt, and there is nothing else.

There's nothing to say about the plot, but can we not have every friendly female be interested in the male protagonist? It's really………

Not to mention many advantages, the character creation, rhythm, and world view are all impressive. Let's just talk about the shortcomings: the arrangement of the plot is a bit deliberate, and the baggage does not give people a sense of surprise. Instead, it makes people feel that the author of the book has dehumanized the characters. For example, when the old housekeeper came to recognize his relatives, he didn't say that he only wanted to live? The protagonist believes it just by looking at the photo and doesn't let the familiar read the memory? Even just seeing this, I can guess that the eldest son of the protagonist went back to sacrifice, right? If we use this trope to say that both of them are pretending to be stupid, I can only say that it's not pretending, it's really stupid.

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Edited by Si Chen: O,? , Also known as Snowy Owl, and also known as Guilan Iros Time in charge: leap month Origin and approach: (questionable item) Followers: stork, oystercatcher, sea owl, sparrow I, director: Time in charge: February Essence and path: The Sword of the Forge Great achievements: "Moonlight Village", "Black Lake", "Hammer of Justice", "The Great Plague", "The Encounter between Sichen and the Four Apostles" and other real films Followers : David Norman (director) Clos Melanie (photographer) Hera Nibal (recording assistant) Status of Si Chen: Suspected to be extant Si Chen II, Pearl, also known as the Moon God, and another name called Ivan is passed down to the world Time in charge: Winter Symbol: God of change and death, god of winter and earth Behavior: Often responds to human sacrifices, moody Great achievements: Tribute wolf (return gift after sacrifice) The blade is the sacrifice, and the blood is the sacrifice. The moonlight is like silver, the eyes are born from the headless cavity, looking up at the deep mourning, but there is no response Si Sui Relationship: Together with Scar's father, Fan Mu, and An Lei, they form the "Four Si Sui" and rank fourth Si Sui Si Sui's status: The old god, suspected to have died III, Ms. Snow White, also known as the goddess of salt and justice Time in charge: September Essence and path: the scepter of the furnace Symbol: salt and justice Symbol: Libra Si Chen status: roughly the existing Si Chen, and has the status of a righteous god IV, Fanmu: Time in charge: Xia Symbol: multiplication, the god of summer and water Si Sui relationship: with Scar Father, An Tear, and Pearl form the "Four Si Sui" and is the second Si Sui Symbol: Vertical oval intersects with horizontal line Religious group Weaving: Golden Branch of Dawn Si Sui Status: Old God, suspected to have died V, Twin Kite Time in charge: May Origin and Path: Theosophical Pentacle Symbol: God of Listening and Witness Symbol: Two different winged kites constructed of emerald green, coral red, lavender purple, lake blue, and golden yellow Religious organization: Church of the Atonement, active in the rich area Status of Si Chen: The existing Si Chen, the righteous god VI, God, also known as the god of heaven, sees the light at noon, the god of hope and order, and is also known as Omer. Time in charge: July Essence and path: Holy Grail Symbol: The sun at noon, hope and order Great deeds: Seizing the authority of the Fire Sword Road from Si Sui Religion Organization: Church of Hope, the most mainstream faith in the Bremen Empire Si Chen's status: Si Chen is still alive, the righteous god VII, Sulfur Company Time in charge: Unknown Symbol: Sulfur Great achievements: The elixir of the Black Lake and the aberration incident in the military camp Si Chen's status: Suspected to be Si Chen, the evil god (If there are any errors or omissions, please correct them) VIII. Father Scar Time in charge: Spring Symbol: God of spring and fire, god of wounds and blood Great deeds: The eldest son's food-sharing ceremony Si Sui relationship: Forming the "Four Si Sui" with Fan Mu, An Lei, and Pearl and ranking first Symbol: A strong, headless male Religious organization: The Cult of Heavenly Evil Si Sui status: Old God IX, An Lei Executive Time in charge: Autumn Symbol: God of Autumn and Wind Relationship with Si Sui: Forming the "Four Si Sui" with Scar Father, Fan Mu, and Pearl and ranking third Status of Si Sui: Old God , Blind General Time in charge: November Essence and Path: XII, Torrent Time in charge: January Essence and Path: The Crucible Pentacle or the Holy Grail XIII, The White Dove Poet Time in charge: October Essence and Path: The Crucible Pentacle or the Holy Grail XIV, Lady Ya Time in charge: June

It's all about this virtue. The first three chapters were said to be merged into two chapters, but now it's one chapter. It's all caused by too many monthly votes. Who will work when the landlord has a surplus of food? Only those who can't get rid of the problem will work hard, so everyone should stop voting and let the landlord work harder. 🙂

The purpose of this post is to record individuals, families or organizations that have delved into the mysterious field I Sade Balbina First meeting one by one Identity: University scholar, spiritualist, great magician Rank: fifth level of the Pentacle Pathway Secret Box Affiliated organization: Spirit Secret Society Great achievements: Author of "Heavenly Palace Documents" and "Secret Records of Iron" Introduction: The character placed at the beginning of the volume for some reason Current situation Identity: "Evil God" Introduction: He was rejected Enter the crime evidence exhibition room and prepare for his unwritten book ll Lewis Family Members: The head of the family, Leighton Lewis and other members Introduction: A mysterious family in decline, but the current head of the family seems to have found a way to return it to the "upper class" Key a. Leighton Lewis Identity: Noble, head of the Lewis family Rank: Heraldic pole magician, sorcerer Final chapter: Killed by a child influenced by the devil III Marvie Martier Identity: Folklorist Introduction: A traveler who mistakenly enters Yuezhuo Village, looking for a mystical scholar of the Mystic Society. She seems to know a lot of occult knowledge, and she even knows something about the secret history before the dawn IV Para Celsus Identity: Army physician Great scholar, alchemist Affiliated organization: Healing Knights Great achievements: Proposed "Theory of Miasma", "Mystical Dressing" and "Theory of Four Humors", among which "Theory of Four Humors" provided the theoretical basis for "White Cross Exercise". He is also the author of "Secrets of the Earthly World" Introduction: A master of mysticism who was active more than three hundred years ago, the proposer and founder of many important theories V Spirit Society Members: They are all scholars proficient in magic and ritual Purpose: to explore the true meaning of the soul Introduction: Hundreds A mysterious organization that has existed for many years, it is said that some magic books and knowledge have leaked out since then VI Healing Knights Members: Deputy Leader Agni Baldwin and other members Active time: early 17th century, retired after the war Inheritance: "White Cross Exercise" and related secret medicines Great achievements: played a key role in the "Battle of Rongsa" Introduction: Their reputation once shocked the continent, but now they have disappeared VII Record Club Members: (branch initiator) storks, sparrows, seagulls, oystercatchers, snowy owls, (white pigeons) Tower Undercover) Wood Pigeon Purpose: To explore the secrets of real film Introduction: Those who are named after birds will eventually fly into the spiritual secrets VIII Rembrandt Eddy Birth and death years: 1820-1884 Identity: Alchemist, hermit Rank: Long-timer The fourth level of the Crucible Star Coin Path "Whispering" Great achievements: Development around the Black Lake Introduction: A spiritual mystic who pursues the original level and the taboo of alchemy. He thought he could do more for his hometown, before he was hypnotized by himself... Mr. Path to the Divine Scepter Great Achievements: Author of "Iron Thorn Meditation Method" Introduction: Master of Occultism who is familiar with Ms. Balbina and Mr. Celsus XI White Dove Tower Purpose: Betrayal, supremacy of lies, deception of the world Ladder, stealing fame to help make waves XII "Windmill Cat" Pal Solomon Identity: Traveling Businessman Belief: Suspected to believe in the Brimstone God Introduction: He is an honest businessman, but only the wise or arrogant will be willing to be repeat customers.

(This post is intended to sort out the power system and status system) I. Fighter of the Bremen Empire Apprentice: Instructor: Pass the military test, have a certification, and can serve as a local military instructor Heraldry: One in ten thousand, can calmly stand up to the siege of ten strong men. Qualified to have a heraldry that symbolizes oneself Master: rare, fighting skills have reached their peak and are difficult to predict, and will be respected even in the upper class society of the imperial capital II, White Cross Body Building Technique Mucus: Strength increases with the strength, until it is comparable to large beasts, punching power can reach 2,000 pounds Yellow bile: Improves endurance, indirectly improves flexibility, flexibility and speed. Can race with a good horse for ten minutes under a weight of 60 pounds Blood: Improve hematopoietic ability, recovery and recovery speed. Broken bones can heal within two weeks Black bile: Improves mental strength and will. At this time, the practitioner can even break the city alone with the appropriate equipment Attached skills: a. Kicking skills: kicking to burst out with extreme speed and force (can be learned when there is yellow bile) b. Bathing in blood c. Skull melting III, 🔥Road of the Fire Sword Level 1 to 3 Mystic Level 4 to 6 Kusei: Has a lifespan of at least 150 years Level 7 to 8 Transformer Level 9 Apostle Level 10 Si Chen IV, Forge Sword Path Corresponds to Si Chen: February Director First Level: Kingdom Second Level: Actor V, Forge Scepter Path Corresponds to Si Chen: September Snow White First Level: Kingdom Second Level: Merchant Third Level: Fourth Level: Judge Can list crimes to judge the enemy (At this time, the attack on this person is strengthened), and set rules in a small area, but it cannot directly give punishments such as death penalty VI, Crucible Star Coin Path First Level: Kingdom Second Level: Third Level: Fourth Price: Whispering Already possesses powerful multi-object hypnosis ability, and can make illusions materialize in the hypnotized person VII, Crucible Holy Grail Path Level 1: Kingdom Level 2: Level 3: Level 4: Clay Sculpture Masters good knowledge of alchemy and is good at casting VIII, the path of the divine sword Corresponds to Si Chen: First level: Kingdom Second level: Clown IX, path of the divine scepter Corresponds to Si Chen: August Our Lady of Sorrow First level: Kingdom Second level: Prisoner X, Path of the divine pentacle Corresponds to Si Chen: May Twin Kite Level 1: Kingdom Level 2: Reporter Level 3: Level 4: Level 5: Secret Box Can seal and use secrets XI, path to the Holy Grail Corresponds to Si Chen: July Noon Dawn Level 1: Kingdom Level 2: Priest XII, Path of the Body Sword Corresponds to Si Chen: November Blind General Level 1: Kingdom Level 2: Warrior XIII, Sorcerer: One who signs a contract with the devil, sells his soul to the devil Sorcerer: One who makes a reverse contract with the devil, captures the devil

It's not that I don't accept the death of a character, but the scrawled death of a character who has devoted a lot of pen and ink is very difficult to understand. No matter what the reason is, I can understand the author's decision to leave the character. I even respect that he simply doesn't want to write about this character, but this is too hasty, and it makes people wonder if the author wants to run away with the bucket.

The new book issue is very important, it determines the fate of a book. I beg you to read it. You only need to stay on the latest chapter for 20 seconds. Thank you.

Seeing that it is full of slots now, first of all, the part about the two and five young pigeons is a bit far-fetched. It feels like the hard circle at the back. The biggest problem is the part of dividing the loot. Both people know that it is a mysterious inheritance. Why does the protagonist pretend to share all the good things with a bunch of bad things? Did you say nothing when someone helped you do business and made a fortune? And in the beginning of the war, the members of the assembly were so thoughtful and then it just went straight without anything happening? It seems that you just set up a bunch of things and then it crashed, so you just stopped writing them. Internet articles don't necessarily have to be intellectually subdued. You can write them without being pretentious and slap in the face. There's no need to ruin the story for the sake of fun.

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Just keep dying, upgrading the dead, changing places to die, going to different places to die of different people, those with names will die after 100 chapters, those without names will die when they meet, the background board in the early stage, the information in the middle stage, and the dead people in the later stage. There are now more than 500 pictures, and I have read more than 300, which is considered to be the middle stage. I feel that the author has always regarded the dead as a kind of transition that binds events to events. Events transition quickly, and the characters are not yet fleshed out. It is very painful to watch the protagonist die, but I have no real feeling. I can't remember their names 😥

You wrote Pig's Feet too arrogantly and domineeringly! They are also beginning to downplay the golden finger. You know whether you recognize it or not. The plot is not very rounded either. The cult is written as rubbish on the pig's feet side. Even in this worldview, it appears to be very strong. Think about it for yourself. These problems all started to appear in the second volume. The strength of the first volume improved quickly and did not go deep into the other side of the world, so even if it provokes the enemy's calculations, it can still be withstood. The second volume seems to be bad. Pig's feet are so evil. The cult can't get rid of pig's feet once, but it can't be done two or three times? Pig's feet don't improve your strength much.

No, the main character is a monk, so why are so many girls interested in him? Does it highlight that the main character has no women in his heart?

When outsiders look at the projector, what does the picture look like? A group of people enter, and who is the protagonist of the screen?

It's a pity that a very good book and interesting story turned out to be weak in the later stages. It was really exciting and interesting in the early stage, but ended hastily due to the author's own reasons, and even the fighting scenes seemed wilted in the later stage. But at least there are no eunuchs. From this point of view, the outline of this book is quite important. It is not advisable to write now and find out now, the author bacteria. Summed up as a good book worth reading.

To be honest, I abandoned this book after more than 200 chapters, but it was not because of the story, but because of Goldfinger. Wanzi made the existence of Goldfinger too prominent. I have read many times and was dissatisfied with the plot where Goldfinger suddenly comes out to solve the problem when it encounters it. So even though there are still some books I have ordered but haven't read yet, I still chose to give them up. I hope Wanzi can think about it. If there is a cheat in the next book, he can grasp the existence of the cheat and not make it too prominent. Readers can understand that small openings do not mean opening up, but they cannot just use their golden fingers to tide over the difficulties when encountering bigger problems. Wouldn't it be better if you develop the plot for a while and use the strength of the protagonist, some adventures, and the author's right to interpret the setting to solve this problem? On a minor note, I hope that if Maruko Shita wants to write about such a setting in Prisoners, he can explain it more clearly in the text. It is better to be criticized in one or two sentences than to have a vague setting that triggers debate among readers.

Seeing that 44% are still at level 2, I can't imagine how fast the pace will be later 🙂

I thought the previous chapter was good, so I already subscribed to all subsequent chapters. Unexpectedly, I saw this sudden attack. It's not that you can't kill people, but the person you left behind is not that good either. Hearing this, what annoys you the most is 1. The butler who serves three generations of nobles is looking for the protagonist's enemy. When he says he is looking for someone, he doesn't say what he is looking for. He just says that the police will find the money and find him. He does not say whether he is going to die or live. It's also a bit... The old butler of the Earl's family took out the photo and asked the baron. When I was looking for someone, I felt something was wrong, (it felt a bit like a car accident and abortion in a youth drama with a concussion) 2. Kill everyone and leave the sparrow. First of all, I feel that the character of the sparrow is not well created. It is really better to keep the seagull. It is really not possible, and the male one is OK, You can be kind, but you are no longer kind. You know that there is danger, your friends are worried, and you know that you can't do anything very important. All you can do are things that anyone can do, without any technical content, and you can't use your own advantages. But you still want to go at the beginning, which is somewhat unreasonable. What you are most afraid of is the series of problems that come out of the sparrow, and then the protagonist solves them one by one.

Great, just like this one with rich and complete settings, it looks really cool

Although the author's emotional line is not very good, especially the plot of slicing one person at a time, I like the author's settings and story lines very much, including foreshadowing and turning points. The setting of the ability will make people shine, "This ability can be used like this". In addition, the author's description of big scenes needs to be improved. It can be seen from the back that he is catching up with the progress, and the plot is advancing very quickly.

In fact, in this book, I prefer to start with the experience in each movie and then gradually become stronger. I don't really like the latter one that explodes from the air. I subscribed to 409 and only saw 408. I was originally planning to raise Yang Yang, but I suddenly found that I didn't like this kind of fighting.

The author said that you need an epic feeling My understanding is that it is difficult for you to become a world champion using a plug-in I can do it But from another perspective, it is how I cross the sky and sea to break through the security checks in the city Use a plug-in to win the championship in the world championship This epic feeling comes up The summary is that there are too many golden fingers and emotional lines that I can't understand But overall it's pretty good

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It has been sitting on the bookshelf gathering dust for more than half a year, with less than 300 chapters updated, so that's okay, right?