I Became the King of Villains in the Game

The ten-year Shennong is here! First of all, this is a very good book. Even though the first half is average at the beginning, the author gets better and better as time goes on. The world view, plot, character description, especially the plot, are very well laid out. At first I thought it was going to be a "best friend" plot, but the author He has made a breakthrough on top of this. As long as everyone calms down and continues reading, the whole thing will be completely new. After one year of writing the book, the author can say that he has made a huge breakthrough. The author's book has the shadow of best friends and gay friends, but he has also blazed his own path. It is definitely a masterpiece that you can buy with confidence. Strength > Achievements (I think it has something to do with the title of the book. The name attracted readers to see the protagonist as the villain. In fact, I did the same at first, but after patiently looking at it, I found that although the protagonist is not the villain, I was disappointed, but if it is well written, it can be ignored.) No But before you read the book, let me give you a warning. For example, the players in this book mainly play a role in promoting the plot and acting as tools for the protagonist. They are not described as much as "the boss behind the scenes" or "the game is too real", but more towards the "basic leak" in the latter part. The players are weak and there are not so many descriptions. The focus is still on our protagonist. Of course, it is also because the author's plot development is very imaginative. If you want to ensure your senses, it is best to turn off the comments and read it. It will be better if there are no spoilers. Finally, regarding the plot, I hope you will not spoil it in the comment area. The plot can be said to be the highlight of this book, leaving suspense for readers who will come later! Comprehensive evaluation: I am Apple's starting point (no discount), I will order all. The full score is 95 out of 100 All the monthly tickets are given to the author, come on!

I would like to ask why there are so many similarities between the whole novel and The Super Mechanic, the character setting, the plot and the story development. You travel to a similar game, rescue and recruit the protagonist of the game, and become the leader of the game player's camp. The incomprehensible development of the protagonist is also realized by the copy and paste function of the system. When you see the progress of the main line, you completely plagiarized the Super Mechanic. Until now, you have not found your own creative innovation. Please, writing novels is a bit of independent innovation. Not to mention the background of the story, isn't the Cthulhu style of the background also borrowed from "Lord of Mysteries"? ? ? And besides the so-called high-ranking saint of destiny manipulating the protagonist, is there any ups and downs in the storyline?

The first few chapters create a horror atmosphere with a modern Western-style background, but it becomes weaker and weaker as you go later, and it feels a little different.

How to say it? The subject matter is novel, but the more I read it, the more confusing it becomes, and I can't stand it anymore; {"TopicId":"776819114126802944","TopicName":"Praise this novel"} I hope the author will work harder to make the overall idea of ​​​​the novel clearer.

It's really good to read. The plot of the novel is really eye-catching. Especially when the sequence is promoted, there is a sense of excitement just like the protagonist. In addition to the general plot, other characters are also well portrayed. For example, Jiao Yang, he is perfect. It perfectly interprets his character. I am a sunny and cheerful boy. It is a pity that he died, but fortunately he was resurrected by Jack in a different way. In fact, if this book was written in more detail and updated faster, I think it would be like a god, just like covering the sky.

I like it very much, cheers for the author🤭

Personally, I think this book is the best novel I have read in recent times. It is well written and the content is also very good. Those who like it will like it, but those who don't will find fault with it. Support the author and keep up the good work.

By the end of this book, my impression of this book was no worse than that of The Super Mechanic or My Best Friend, and in some places it was even better. It's not perfect in some places, but overall it's definitely on the level of fairy grass. It's the first book to be written like this. I hope the author will keep up the good work! ! ! ! 😍😍😍

Tell me how you feel about this book. First of all, let's set the tone. So far, this is a very attractive book. Among online articles, it is more attractive than most books. About the protagonist, his character is very lovable, not so bitter and bitter, nor is he pretentious and inappropriately funny. The protagonist is a very intelligent ordinary person, so far. Don't act impulsively, consider the consequences, and make decisions before taking action. The first few chapters of escaping from prison can be said to have clearly reflected the image of the protagonist. In the following text, the protagonist is not impatient and has brains, and the supporting characters are not too smart. In general, regardless of the protagonist or supporting characters, I feel that they are real people, not just words for the author to dress up. In terms of the world view, the overall view is based on the Lord of Mysteries, but it is not copied blindly, and there are many innovations. But the overall writing is still very old (currently). Although it is old-fashioned, it is wonderfully written. As for the fairyland where the protagonist has a chance, that part made me feel very similar to the wizard's journey. It's not the plot, it's the feeling created by the blending of atmosphere, illusion and reality. It gives people a dreamy, floating and weightless feeling. The world currently constructed by the author gives people authenticity. There is no ethereal feeling. The description of this world in all aspects and details, although only a few simple strokes, has produced a wonderful effect. The world built by the author has become fuller and has gained weight, which is rare. I discovered this book yesterday and read it overnight. It is indeed very good. I have been reading books since 2008 and I have some suggestions for the author to refer to. 1: The current psychological description of the protagonist is a bit too much, especially the system prompt in the early stage, saying that the Red Apple Church's favorability towards the protagonist has declined, and the protagonist is dismissive. It is enough to write this kind of thing once or twice. I have been saying it before, which is a bit redundant. Similar problems exist in cities, and I hope they can be improved. 2: Regarding the name of the protagonist, in the context of this book, I personally think the Chinese name is very dramatic. My acceptance of the name Jack is higher than that of Chen Lun. 3: In the latest updated chapters, the protagonist asks the player to do something. He wore a trick to hide his identity. When he saw that the players didn't recognize him, he showed his face to the players to let them know. Finally, he disguised his face again. Although there is nothing wrong with the logic. But I always feel that this behavior is inconsistent with the protagonist's personality. How can I put it, it's just a feeling. Let me give you an analogy, in Sword III. I don't think it's okay if Jingtian does this, but it doesn't feel right if Xu Changqing does it. 4: Players have appeared for a long time. Although it is only a closed beta, it seems that the participation rate is not high now. I know it may be due to the strength and the number of people, but as one of the cool points of the whole book, it is time to release the player's power. You can refer to the mechanic's book. 5: The correlation between the different levels of each sequence does not seem to be strong. For example, in the path of destiny, 9 is a beast tamer, and 8 becomes a fortune teller. Isn't this span too big? There are other ways to do it. The above are all minor details, and the flaws do not hide the flaws. The most important point is, judging from the current description. The number of extraordinary people is not large, and the social hierarchy is relatively stable. If a large number of players enter after the public beta, and extraordinary people appear in large numbers at this time, the level of this world will be unstable. I hope the author will take this into consideration and make some restrictions. Last point, what does the advancement of strength look like? Judging from the current protagonist and other extraordinary people who have come into contact, advancement is not easy. Why do they keep saying that someone who is very weak now can become a boss with huge power in one or two years? What causes them to grow so fast? Is it external objects or their own rapid level improvement? Overall, I spent two hours watching the latest chapter last night. Very exciting!

Summary the names of the sequences that appear in the book Destiny Faction Sequence 9 Beast Tamer log in in in in forth in in me the name of the sequence in which it may appear, ‖Chapter 100 Sequence 7 Magician ‖Chapter 100 Sequence 5 Sequence 4 Sequence 3 Sequence 2 Sequence 1 Sequence 0 Natural Faction Sequence 9 Savage  Chapter 58 Sequence 8 Therapist   Chapter 134 Sequence 7 Ranger   Chapter 185 ——Branch Plague Doctor around through in the 187th chapter handling in the 187th chapter Around 187 Magic Faction Sequence 9 Scholar      Chapter 129  Sequence 8  Sequence 7  Sequence 6  Sequence 5 Sequence 4  Sequence 3  Sequence 2  Sequence 1  Sequence 0 Mr. Jing Yao    Chapter 148  Deep Sea Faction Sequence 9                ‖ 8             ‖ 7 6                ‖ 5 4 3 2 1 0             ‖ 9             ‖ 8          ‖ 7          ‖ 6 5 4 Sequence 3 Sequence 2 Sequence 1 Sequence 0 Clay Wench over through Assassin                                                                                                                                                                                            ‖Chapter 14 Sequence 8 Gourmet ‖Chapter 67 Sequence 7 Ghoul Chapter 67 Sequence 6 Sequence 5 Sequence 4 Sin-Eater edited forth in in Sequence 7 Ghoul ‖ Chapter 14 Sequence 1 Sequence 0          ‖ 9                 ‖ 8 7              ‖ 6                ‖Chapter 86 Sequence 5 Sequence 4 Sequence 3 Sequence 2 Sequence 1 Sequence 0 The Brilliant Queen ‖Chapter 148 Moon Faction Sequence 9 Psychic Medium ‖Chapter 46 Sequence 8 Executioner ‖Chapter 170 Sequence 7 Requiem Master ‖Chapter 102 Sequence 6 Sequence 5 Black Knight ‖Chapter 152 Sequence 4 Sequence 3 Sequence 2 Sequence 1 Sequence 0 Mother-in-law Moon ‖Chapter 66 Sun Faction Sequence 9 Believer ‖Chapter 129 Sequence 8 Craftsman ‖ ‖Chapter 97 Sequence 7 Ascetic ‖Chapter 101 Sequence 6 Sequence 5 Sequence 4 Sequence 3 Sequence 2 Sequence 1 Sequence 0 Liefu Chapter 148

Floyd

Chen Lun🤨

The painting in Chapter 120 of "Amber" is an excerpt from Finnish photographer Juha Arvid Helminen's work The Invisible Empire, which can be literally translated as "The Invisible Empire" (for translation, please refer to "The Invisible Man"). Considering that the word invisible originated from the Latin root visibilis (visible) in the 12th to 14th centuries, this root comes from the English and French visioun (existence/visual) formed by the Proto-Indo-European *weid (know/see). Adding the negative affix in- can mean "non-existence", which is extended to "pretend not to exist" - that is, "silent", so it can be translated as "Silent Empire" or "Silent Empire". As soon as I saw it, I thought it tasted really right. The two were very similar in image and core. Juha Arvid Helminen wrote in a note for the series: In 2006 I witnessed the so called Smash ASEM "riot". There I personally saw the dark side of the Finnish police. How young men hid behind their uniforms and hoods and anonymously committed misconduct. Later I witnessed the reluctance of the justice system to punish those in uniforms. Uniforms create unity and through them we can separate a soldier from a civilian. We do something that is really bad. We wear clothes described by religion, profession, political thoughts and tradition to communicate and represent authority, where we belong and how we see the world. Often this hides our true persona and creates walls between ourselves and between the people that we meet. The characters in my works are the prisoners of these traditions and walls that we've created for ourselves. How close can we, the viewers, get to the characters that have so much of their personality taken away from? I translated a few more important sentences, "We use the uniforms of religion, profession, political party or tradition to convey information and symbolize authority - where we belong and how we view the world. We hide under these masks and erect the high wall in the heart." The photographer wants to satirize the darkness of this identity politics, which also corresponds to the ugly behavior of Roderick, the asylum commissioner, who hides under the official uniform and pretends to be benevolent, bullies the weak and fears the strong, and attempts to deceive the world and steal his reputation. {"TopicId":"597004991063982080","TopicName":"Weekly fan submissions"}

First of all, my comments are completely logical. If you think what I said is wrong, please use your logic. If there are not too many poisonous points, I will read it bit by bit Chapter 72 is the most poisonous place so far. Other places are fine. In order to forcefully promote the development of the plot, the author broke his own logic setting and asked Kang to rescue two trapped players when he returned to the lower city. The player was trapped by the guards. Kang took out 2 gold lists and gave them to the guards without saying anything, causing himself to get into trouble. 1. Kang is a native of Xiacheng District. Doesn't she know what Xiacheng District is like? 2. Use 2 Gold Lists to save two passers-by who have never met and have nothing to do with each other. I don't know which family's eldest daughter I think she is. 3. In terms of setting, she has no ability, and the protagonist almost gives her all the money. Why does she dare to step forward and cause trouble? 4. Assuming that the above three points are true, how can her character survive to grow up in the lower city set by the author?

The book is quite good. It's just that the author deliberately suppressed the protagonist's fighting ability. Killing 2 players will give you 1 attribute point. The protagonist can kill but doesn't kill and lets his subordinates do the killing. Obviously the highest attribute is only a few dozen points, but I just don't take the attribute

On the one hand, I feel that the protagonist's fire resistance and poison resistance are outrageous, but on the other hand, I think of Tang San's grass, ice and fire resistance, and I feel that the fire resistance and poison resistance are acceptable. It all depends on comparison. In addition, it was outrageous that I only learned three skills in the year before the public beta. During the public beta, a few players found two wooden houses in a few minutes. I don't know how to describe it. You also know that the wooden houses contain your advanced knowledge, but you can't find it without players, right? Say it's easy to find. You haven't made any breakthroughs in a year. Say it's hard to find. Why do players find it so easily?

Floyd

In the early stage, the selling point of creating a sense of crisis through a plot similar to that of a mechanic really attracted many readers. However, after players entered the game in the mid-term, they felt that the author had not grasped the situation well. The protagonist seemed to be behind the scenes and was too separated from the previous plot. If the player group portraits and the protagonist as the main point of view to unfold the plot were not grasped well, it would be really unattractive.

500 Points... Has the author been exposed by a black man? Don't scold me, I spent 500 points, I am a newbie, I just want to complain about the highest fan value requirement I have seen so far

It's too early to describe the boss who writes his destiny. It won't matter if you don't write this character or even describe it later. You set up such an exaggerated boss when the protagonist is just starting out, and it can even determine the protagonist's fate. Doesn't this make readers feel despair? The author writes the book from God's perspective and feels that it is very profound and can enrich the world. But the reader is the protagonist, so why do you want to give the reader a Truman world?

The towers are as high as the ground, but the world knows that the carrot pills are short!

It is too friendly to players, and the knowledge gained by risking one's life along the way is put on the shelf for people to buy at will.

After reading 350 chapters of this book, I felt that in one sentence, it was selling dog meat at the expense of sheep. Of course, the quality of the dog meat was pretty good, so I could keep reading. First of all, this book is said to be a game, and there are players, but there is basically no realistic plot, and the strength of the players has no meaning at all. The only function is to gather wool for the protagonist, which is dispensable. There is also the villain BOSS under him, who is actually just a handyman. The protagonist has surpassed the level and become the incarnation of the Saint Killer. His subordinates are only sequence 7, and they need the help of the protagonist to upgrade. There is also a setting in which the protagonist travels back in time and is still a part of the plot, but in most cases the protagonist does not show a prophetic reaction. Essentially, this book is a Lord of Mysteries novel. The author tried to incorporate other elements but the actual effect was not very good. Of course, if you simply regard it as a Western fantasy, it is still a good novel.

Extraordinary Law 1 (remaining): Extraordinary characteristics of adjacent sequence pathways have a tendency to aggregate. (The sun and the moon are adjacent, and nature and destiny are adjacent.) Those who advance to sequence 4 and above can be promoted by devouring each other and changing the sequence path. Extraordinary Law 2 (remaining): Extraordinary characteristics will not decrease but increase, and will only be transferred from one carrier to another. Extraordinary Law 3 (remaining): No leaves in the world are exactly the same, nor do they have exactly the same characteristics. The quantity of extraordinary properties is asymmetrical, and so is the quality. （）                       9-      9-    9- 8-     8-  8- 7-     7-  Sequence 7-Assassin Branch-Plague Doctor Sequence 6-Trapeze Sequence 6-Berry Picker Sequence 6-? ?                          - 5-？ ? Sequence 5-? ? Sequence 5-Encoffiant Master Branch-Disaster Master (Seven Great Gods) Sun Sect Deep Sea Sect Magic Sect Sequence 9-Believer Sequence 9-Sailor Sequence 9-Scholar Sequence 8-Craftsman Sequence 8-Navigator Sequence 8-? ? Sequence 7-Ascetic Monk Sequence 7-? ? Sequence 7-? ? Sect of Stars Sect of Flesh and Sect Sequence 9-Hunter Sequence 9-Butcher Sequence 9-Grave Robber Sequence 8-? ? Sequence 8-Gourmet Sequence 8-Historian Sequence 7-Heart Thief Sequence 7-Ghoul Sequence 7-Alchemist Sequence 6-Witch Sequence 6-? ? Sequence 6-? ? Sequence 5-? ? Sequence 5-? ? Sequence 5-? ? Sequence 4-? ? Sequence 4-Sin Eater Sequence 4-? ? Moon Sect Sequence 9-Psychic Medium Sequence 8-Executioner Sequence 7-Requiem Master Sequence 6-? ? Sequence 5-Black Knight

The protagonist is really reckless. He is only cautious at the beginning, but later in the plot, he is very reckless. To be honest, the protagonist is more like a reckless man. There is no tendency or description of destiny, and there is no philosophical understanding. There is only an introduction to skills, and it is a version that is automatically released when a thought occurs. Moreover, the skills used after arriving at the fortune teller are modified reconnaissance and various reckless skills. The name fortune teller is completely inappropriate. And the animal trainer's ability to imitate animals has nothing to do with the feeling of animal taming. It is better to replace it with a druid. The intelligence attribute is also very strange. The effect is to give a bonus to skills. If it is a skill related to scientific research and technology, this attribute bonus is very suitable, but for skills related to mystery, it is better to write it directly as a mystery attribute. The logic of various details has been bothering me. Other comments on the conflict between the mysterious atmosphere and the player atmosphere have been written, so I won't repeat them. In addition, according to the author's naming method, the path of destiny will not be the path of the circus, right?

I can't help but talk about this When I first wrote this book, I followed up to chapter 200. After I read it until it was finished, I came back to read it. I found that I had forgotten the previous plot, so I started reading it again. After reading more than 200 chapters, I don't think there is much problem. The setting is interesting, but maybe I got tired and stopped reading. A few months or a year later, I suddenly remembered that this book was a Western fantasy theme that I was interested in, so I picked it up and read it again, and then put it down again after seeing more than 200 chapters... And so it continues in an infinite loop until now. So it feels weird()

The author's writing is good, and the story structure and logic are very reasonable. It is a rare good novel. I highly recommend it. I give this book my monthly vote and recommendation. Looking forward to the author's next work

Up to the 500th chapter, Howard's character is a huge failure. The author shaped him into a completely irresistible villain, and the protagonist has been played as a clown by his character, and there is no possibility of threatening Howard. The only time Howard was injured was by an angel. It was natural and had nothing to do with the protagonist. Don't tell me there is any reversal later. Even if there is a reversal, it cannot cover up the gap in power created by the author in the previous five hundred chapters, and there is not enough foreshadowing to show its weaknesses. Not to mention that around the 470th chapter, a sequence three can stir up high-ranking figures in the orthodox sects and even angels without suffering backlash. This is not how Ins Zangwill copied it. Don't tell me that it's for the sake of plot and foreshadowing. If it's not presented well, it's just bad. Everyone is here to see a fun story, not to see the fate of a weak-minded protagonist being manipulated for hundreds of chapters without any solution. Why are you so frustrated writing this? If the author likes it, it doesn't mean the readers like it.

I just made a full reservation yesterday and got a rebate today

Howard's character is so disgusting, you'd better add some torture to his death.