At the Same Time, I Can Travel Across All Realms and Become a God All by Myself!

Why are there so few after a long time? Isn't it updated twice a day?

It was okay in the beginning, but it was really disgusting when I got Tsunade's underwear in the lottery. If the author couldn't find anything to write about, you don't have to write it. If you don't know how to do emotional scenes, don't force it into it. It was really disgusting. I would like to ask if there are any similar plots in the future?

Weasel and Shisui are not so easy to convince. You must know that their brain circuits are far different from normal people.

In fact, there is no need to set this 500 to speak. People don't want to read your discussion at all.

Seeing Byakuya from other worlds go on an adventure with Naruto Byakuya for the so-called Susanata Buddha, and then Naruto Byakuya actually directly changes his code of conduct. It feels very abrupt and changes the plot of genocide. In addition to the fact that the biggest obstacle to Konoha's top brass is Obito and Black Zetsu, let's take a look at White Zetsu's talent skill of disguise. Uchiha Shisui and Uchiha Itachi were beaten to the point of doubt when they were dealing with a spy from the Hyuga branch (I remember there was a patient in the family who had no money to treat the disease and could only sell information in exchange for money). In that battle, the two of them could be said to have lost their morale. They found that the power of the Sharingan was so weak that they could not resist Konoha in Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon.

The protagonist wants to get the Jade of Four Souls, but it turns out that both humans and demons know the news that the protagonist is coming. It's so poisonous to disgust people, right? It is said that I have been looking for the Four Souls Jade for a long time. I know where the Four Souls Jade is but I am unwilling to destroy it immediately. When I decide to go after a long talk, both people and monsters know that the protagonist is coming. It is so funny.

Uchiha Itachi and Shisui cannot be persuaded. They must destroy Konoha after defecting.

Just read two and eat them💩. If you don't know how to write about women, don't write about them. Just treat them as vases. You won't think that the plots you stuffed are very good.

So far, everything has been ordered before July 15th. It was okay at first, but the more I write, the more boring I am. I am not the only one who has this comment. Many readers said so. In fact, there are only a few main reasons. The first and most important point is that the author does not care about the number of words. No matter how poorly written it is. But a large amount can make you full. There are currently too few updates. However. Few updates can also make readers want to follow up. This is a good test of the author's writing skills. How to design a plot. Let the plot have its ups and downs. Even how to break the chapter requires in-depth research by the author himself. Now I feel like the author of this book has entered the stage of failure. I can't see the author trying hard to write well. Many authors say that books are difficult to write and their grades are not good. If you don't make progress yourself, why should you let readers consume? I digressed and continued to talk about writing this book. I don't know whether the author did it intentionally or not. The more I write now, the more I write. There are more and more forced explanations and self-talk. It's like others are pouring things into your brain all the time, preventing you from reading and understanding yourself. I don't want you to think it's typical, just listen to what I think. A good piece of work. They are all for future generations to comment on. If nothing happens, they always bring in private information to forcefully instill thoughts into people. Two plot characters have one sentence of dialogue and two pages of explanation. Explain two pages more in one sentence of dialogue. One chapter is a dozen pages. You taste it yourself. I don't know if the author meant it or not. The purpose is to produce poor grades just to show off the poor word count. If you are careless, you should work harder to improve yourself. Every time I write about a battle, I write about it in one stroke, not even a description. It's all self-talk and force-feeding to readers. It's weird that it's interesting to write like this. I say so much because I want the author to write well. Another 20 chapters have been decided and I still can't see the author getting better. I won't stay. Moistened directly. I spend money to read genuine novels. I just want to see something better and more enjoyable. Otherwise, why not watch pirated versions? If you want results, you have to work hard, write, plot, and have fantastic ideas. If you write well, your grades will be good. Readers are not blind. That's all. Don't blame me for speaking harshly. After all, I didn't spend money to study to suffer.

The author should hone his writing skills. I have only seen people who write more smoothly as they write, but I have never seen people who write more smoothly about Yola. How can your writing skills still deteriorate? It's outrageous.

I started writing more than 400 chapters about pirates, and now I have to write them for myself.

The most watery book I have ever seen has been removed from the bookshelf

After reading so many fics, the Itachi in this book is the most extreme. Just like the believer who got his head shot in "Zhou Chu's Three Evils", he is simply a Winter Soldier who has been completely brainwashed, and his thoughts have been taken away. Of course, it may be that the author deliberately made it fun and offended Itachi fans. I want to see what ending the author gives at the end.

What does the author want to do? When a pirate has 400 chapters, he said that there will be a decisive battle, but the result is 650 chapters and he is still beeping. I just ordered it all for 100 yuan. You just give me the history?

Don't hesitate, run! ! !

This book can only be read in the early stages. There is too much nonsense written in the back. Also, I often forget that there are explanations in the previous chapters and explain them again later. It highlights a point where I don't know what to do.

Can you stop worrying about your One Piece? I wrote more than 130 chapters when the Pirate King fell ill, and I'm still a pirate.

Tsunade died from poison caused by her underwear. It's too abstract. The author really didn't think it was humorous.

The rest of it is probably generated by AI, and I can't watch it anymore as I talk over and over again. It doesn't matter how exciting your writing is. Invincible traveling through various small worlds is enough for you to make a living, so you can't live up to your expectations. TM Liu Bowen writes like a mentally retarded person. People really laugh when they are speechless.

No, bro, the pirates are not over yet? Do you plan to write more than 100 chapters?

With all due respect, after the super-god aerospace civilization comes the god-making civilization. The protagonist killed Hua Ye and his accomplices without even a space battle. How can he rule an aerospace civilization so easily?

Why did you start writing this rubbish AI stuff again?

I just want to ask when will the fight start? Explaining this discussion and that one after another, the protagonist can obviously push through the scene, but you have been hard-pressed for nearly two hundred chapters...

Real ink, pure AI, a grinding one or two hundred chapters, nothing done, just pure water

What is written after Chapter 417? Just like a little friend writing a composition. Luo Li Ba Suo wrote 4 chapters about a one-sentence matter.

A pirate has written almost 200 pieces. You are really good at water. Don't you want to write others?

You can still read this book at the beginning, but it becomes more and more sloppy at the end. One chapter is full of nonsense. One sentence can express what the author has said over and over again, and the sentences are no longer coherent. I can't read this book from more than 400 One Pieces to now. It is full of nonsense and the plot is slow. Either it has been directly replaced by AI, or the author has completely messed up and lost face in order to make money. Hundreds of chapters have passed, and One Piece is not over yet.

I'm a little tired of reading. Nowadays, the protagonist is basically invincible, and a world ends too easily, which feels very watery. I want the author to arrange a new world so that the protagonist's abilities are not so invincible. And it feels like an infinite flow world similar to infinite horror can be added. Create infinity in the heavens. But it doesn't give the protagonist too much invincibility. This world can be written for a very long time

This is the coolest book I've ever read

It's okay in the early stage, but can the AI ​​write it in the later stage? 😒