Return to Tang: The Struggle for All Under Heaven

The taste is very strange. This kind of writing style, which is similar to Jin Yong's novels and Western movies that highlight the tough guy style of personal heroes, should not be written in history. This kind of writing the story from a lot of troubles and twists, and suddenly writing strange characters such as thirteen mothers, Taoist priests, Buddhist disciples, etc. In a long time is all the way of a Jianghu Western movie. Author, I can seriously advise that historical novels don't care about character creation, not even the protagonist. What is important in historical novels is knowing the general trend of history and the difficulty of understanding it in advance. What is important is the program, organizational spirit and striving for supremacy. Continue to advance this suspenseful adventure story template and write about the characters. In the later stage, it will take a lot of trouble to appear procrastinating and petty, and it will be a pity to abandon it if it is tasteless. But if you don't write like this, then those who are initially attracted by your twists and turns of the story and the characters of strange people will think that you have changed. Your writing style may seem smooth and expressive, but it may not necessarily bring you a big market, because the public of historical novels is not this kind of person. It's the category above. These are some hidden dangers and shortcomings that I have discovered that may exist in the author's writing, and I hope the author will think about them.

The writing style is good and the subject matter is good, but the perspective of the plot is too petty and the narrative is too protracted. I can only say that it has a strange smell.

Are you planning to take root in Central Asia? The religious language and folk customs, not to mention the inconvenience of transportation and information transmission caused by the barren land, are not easy to deal with.

To be honest, most people don't know about this period of history or have only heard of it! So, author, if you want to achieve results, you should hurry up and finish writing the plot before the rebellion. Stop ink.

To be fair, if we were limited to the corner of Guasha and did not import Han people from Guanzhong, it would be difficult to do better than the Guiyi Army. After all, even if Guasha plus the Han people in Khotan were in the Western Regions, they would only be one-sixth to one-sixth of the Uighur Dangxiang and other barbarians.

Pugu Qingmu, invade and delete

I changed my name, but I think Dunhuang still sounds better.

Although the western subject matter is not as wide as the historical audience, the western writing written by the author is still considered one of the best. It is better than living half-dead here 😭😭😭. (I really love reading Western novels written by the author)

Generally speaking, you can still read it in Shuhuang. Originally, I looked ecstatic at the beginning, but after the main plot of the protagonist was introduced later, how should I say, start high and go low, no matter how well the opening is rendered, how humble the protagonist will be at the beginning. I'm really unhappy. There must be a lot of people who feel the same way as me.

I don't know whether I'm reading a martial arts novel or a historical novel. The feeling of separation is too strong.